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In this lesson plan, adaptable for grades 3-12, students explore BrainPOP features and resources to learn about active and passive voice, and the differences
between the tone and focus of each. They will use what they learn to identify active and passive voice in different types of writing and discuss how voice makes
writing effective.
Students will:
2. Use the Make-a-Map tool to identify examples from the movie of active and passive voice.
Materials:
Class sets of Active & Passive Voice activity and Sentence Diagram graphic organizer (or individual computer access for students to type their responses on
the online form)
Preparation:
Preview the movie Active & Passive Voice to plan for any adaptations.
Preview thePreview the Activity and Graphic Organizer to plan for any adaptations and print them out if students will be working offline.
Lesson Procedure:
1. Bounce a ball on the floor. Then ask students to describe what happened. Tell them to start the sentence with your name (e.g., “Ms. Jones bounced a ball.”).
Write the sentence on the board. Then have students identify the subject (Ms. Jones) and the verb (bounced). Now, bounce the ball again, but this time, ask
students to describe what happened starting with “The ball…”. Students should say, “The ball was bounced by Ms. Jones.” Write this sentence on the board
and ask them to identify the subject in this sentence (the ball) and the verb (was bounced).
2. Guide students to compare and contrast the two sentences. Ask them which the think is active and which is passive. Confirm that they understand that the
first sentence is in the active voice because the subject, the teacher, actively bounced the ball. Contrast this with the second sentence, which is in the passive
voice because the subject (the ball) is NOT actively doing anything. Instead something is happening to it by someone else.
3. Show the movie Active & Passive Voice on the whiteboard to the whole class once through without pausing.
4. Next, have students open the Make-a-Map feature from within the movie. As they watch, instruct them to create a chart, such as a t-chart, in the Make-a-Map
canvas to identify sentences from the movie as active or passive. Suggest that they pause the movie as they take notes and remind point out that they can
incorporate clips from the movie into their charts if they prefer this to typing the sentences. When they are done, have students share their charts with each
other.
5. Invite students to apply what they’ve learned by completing the Active & Passive Voice activity in which they label sentences as active or passive and then
rewrite them in the opposite voice. Then have them rewrite well known sayings in the Sentence Diagram graphic organizer. If you have limited access to
computers or other devices, you may distribute these activities for students to do offline.
Extension Activities:
Encourage students to find examples of active and passive voice in different types of publications, such as newspapers, magazines, web sites, text books, novels,
non fiction, etc. Have them compare and contrast their findings. What types of texts did they encounter more active voice? In which did they find more passive voice?
Have them brainstorm why this might be.
I began class with a simple question: would you rather watch Lebron James play basketball or some fat slob in row C eat popcorn? Other than the two unintelligent
Kobe Bryant fans, the class shouted, "Lebron James! He’s the best! Who wants to watch some fat guy eat popcorn?"
My eyes enlarged and I shot fire out of them: one flame for each student. The classroom burned as I unleashed my demoniacal revenge for being peppered with
essays full of passive sentences, the writing equivalent of the popcorn eater in the third row, when I could have been reading essays with active voice, the writing
equivalent of Lebron James.
If I ever teach again, I’m going to explain the difference between active and passive voice before my students write their essays and I turn them into ashes with fiery
darts.
Just in case you’re interested in hiring a writing teacher, here’s what I came up with:
Active voice is the voice used to indicate that the subject of the sentence is performing the action or causing the action. Passive voice is the voice used when the
subject is the recipient of the action. Strong writing uses active voice. Passive voice should only be used in the following instances:
When intentionally hiding the subject of the sentence. For example, a politician might say, "Mistakes were made."
When intentionally truing to minimize the guilt of the subject. For example, a cheating husband might respond, "Adultery was committed by me."
When passive voice better emphasizes the main point of the passage. For example, Children were harmed by unlicensed bus drivers.
Active vs. Passive Voice in Student Writing
Knowing when to use active and passive voice does not mean students will use it correctly. Show them. Instruct them to copy the following in their notebooks. If they
still don’t improve their use of passive and active voice, have them make phylacteries.
If the subject receives the action or is not doing the action, the voice is passive.
Passive voice is usually wordier.
If the subject performs the action, the voice is active.
Active voice is preferred because it is direct and concise.
Active voice is the equivalent of watching Lebron James.
Passive voice is the equivalent of watching corn grow.
Active voice creates interest.
Passive voice creates boredom, world hunger, and depletes the ozone layer (OK, I made the last two up).
Passive voice contains a lot of to be verbs.
For additional suggestions on writing in the active voice, follow the link. For additional suggestions on personal voice in writing, follow this link.
Procedures
Instruct students to copy in their notebooks the differences between passive and active voice. Provide examples.
If revising an essay, pair students.
Instruct them to read their rough drafts and circle passive voice constructions.
Instruct each pair to exchange rough drafts and identify passive voice constructions in their partner’s writing.
Rewrite paragraphs in active voice.
Share revisions with the class.
Motivate students with a paragraph challenge.
Click on the Using Strong Verbs lesson or Eliminate To Be Verbs lesson at the bottom of this article for suggestions.
If these suggestions don’t work, try my shooting flames from your eyes trick explained above and imagine LeBron James in the NBA Finals.