English A Literature

Mock Individual Oral Commentary

Name of the student: Advait Ganguly
Topic: Faustus as a Renaissance Man
Text: Dr. Faustus

Individual Oral Presentation (IOP) Feedback form

A: Knowledge & B: Presentation C: Language
understanding of How much attention has been  How clear and
the work(s) given to making the delivery appropriate is the
How much knowledge and effective and appropriate-ate to language?
understanding does the the presentation?  How well is the register
student show of the work(s) To what extent are strategies and style suited to the
used in the presentation? used to interest the audience (for choice of presentation?
example, audibility, eye contact, (“Register” refers, in
gesture, effective use of sup- this context, to the
porting material)? student’s use of
elements such as
PPT vocabulary, tone,
sentence structure and
terminology appropriate
to the presentation.)
COMMENTS COMMENTS COMMENTS
Started off with author’s Excessive factual detail on the Excessive commenting on the
biography. powerpoint. overall idea and surface analysis.
No comment on language
analysis. Direct and steady reading from a The student does not explore
No citations or quoting the sheet of paper. language to arrive to a conclusion
sources. in the argument.
Towards the last part the
focus is enhanced on the
topic but explores only the
historical and factual
connections between Faustus
and Renaissance.

 Presentation time :
 Discussion time :