ENGLISH FOR ACADEMIC AND PROFESSIONAL PURPOSES

Applied Subject

Class No.: _____ Date: September 30, 2021

Name: Princess Xyra T. Mallari Module 3 – Short Film Critique
Grade and Section: 11- HUMSS,St.Anthony DePadua Teacher: Sir Lyndon Fabia

IMPORTANT REMINDER: DO NOT FORGET TO UNDERLINE YOUR THESIS STATEMENT FOR IT TOBE
CONSIDERED AS YOUR QUIZ.

WHAT MAKES ESPS A COMMUNITY

A Concept Paper

Espiritu Santo Parochial School. Large schools and Thousands of students are studying, many
memories where the events will not be forgotten. A school where students and
administrators get into trouble. But how can students and administrators strengthen their
communities? Is it normal for students to collide and compete instead of helping? So students
and administrators need to understand each other so that they can build their community.

EPS is a school where many students study from different parts of the Philippines.
Administrators manage the school so that there are good plans for the students and for the
school and Next are the teachers because they are the ones who teach the students good
manners and the good influences it can have on the students. Finally, it is the community of
students who are the ones who try to reach their dreams and they do not compete with
others, they are the students who help. This is the way for them to see themselves able to
finish school. ESPS is a good place or school because it makes other students feel closer to
Christ.
RUBRIC FOR THE THESIS STATEMENT
ASSIGNE
DESIGNATED
CRITERIA INDICATOR/S D
POINTS
POINTS
The finished and final thesis statement clearly gives
Content the readers a complete and concise overview of 8
what the discussion is about.
The finished and final thesis statement follows the
prescribed format which consists of a stand, three
Structure 6
reasons and an acknowledgement. All parts of a
thesis statement are present.
Grammar There are no lapses or errors in grammar and that
and the thesis statement is meticulously constructed 6
Mechanics with careful control of the language.
TOTAL 20

RUBRIC FOR THE CONCEPT PAPER

DESIGNATED ASSIGNED
CRITERIA INDICATOR/S POINTS
POINTS
Essay provides a clear and well-defined extended
Definition definition; provides examples based on the 8
writer’s mentioned criteria. 
Developme The essay thoroughly explains the concept
nt/ through examples and evidence that brings a 6
Support well-developed essay. 
Grammar There are errors in grammar and that the thesis
and statement is meticulously constructed with careful 3
Mechanics control of the language.
Ideas in the essay are expressed in a well-
Structure 3
organized manner.
TOTAL 20