Name:____Fok Tsz Hin_______ Class: 3_A__ ( 06 ) Date:____________________

Ying Wa College
2019-20 S3 English
Composition 4 – Writing a Product Feature Article
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[The best jacket you have ever seen!!]

Have you ever felt annoyed by the bulky traveling bag when you travel around? If

yes, then this is the product that you will definitely want. This jacket is multi-

functional so that it will benefit you very much. It has 25 features so it can solve a

lot of problems that you will potentially face when you go travelling. With this

jacket, your bulky travelling bag will now become a small, convenient bag. Now,

may I introduce the main features of this jacket to you.

To begin with, it has features which can keep your body warm. For instance, it has

a hand warming pocket which not only can you use to store things, but also you can

put your hands in it when you feel cold so as to keep your hand warm. It also has a

blanket which you can cover yourself when you go to sleep or feel cold. It also has

gloves in case the hand warming pocket is not enough for you. Therefore, you don’t

need to pack these things into your bag to make your bag so heavy.

Next, it has a lot of pockets for you to put things. It has a phone pocket, a passport

pocket, an airpod pocket, a secret pocket, a charger pocket etc. With these pockets,

the jacket is very convenient as you can carry all your things wherever you go. You

don’t even need a bag to pack things. Your things will be packed neatly as you

know what things should be put in what pocket.

 Last but not least, it has a lot of tools that can help you out. For example, it has a

telescopic pen, earplugs, neck pillow, footrest, bottle opener, eye mask etc. They

can solve a lot of problems you face, such as the eye mask and neck pillow can be

used to help you sleep better at night so that you will have enough energy to go

around the next day; the footrest can be used to make your legs feel better when

your legs are tired; you can use the earplugs when whenever you think the noise are

too loud for you.

This jacket is very useful as it has a lot of features that other jackets brands don’t

have. Not only can it be used for travelling, but also you can use it in daily lives.

You might be thinking, will it be heavy when it has a lot of functions? We have

tested it before and it only weight 100grams! Stop thinking and come and get it!

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