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problem should be mentioned. An email giving advice should contain suggestions
introduced with appropriate language.
When we write an informal email giving advice, we divide it into three parts:
Introduction
Paragraph 1 - reason(s) for writing
Main Body
Paragraphs 2-4 - description of problem(s)
Conclusion
I'm sorry to hear you're having problems and of course I'd be happy to help.
I just got your email and I think I can help you ...
Main Body
Giving advice
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If I were you I would ... Have you tried …?
The best advice I can give you is ... One thing you could/should/have to do
is …
What you should do is ...
If I was/were in your place, I’d …
I really think you need to/must/should
If that happened to me ...
How about …?
In that case ...
It is usually a good idea to ...
If I had that problem, I’d …
My suggestion/advice is (to) ...
You’d better …
Why don’t you …?
Have you thought about …?
You could try …
Expected results
Closing remarks
I trust you will accept this advice... Hope this has helped...
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How are you and your family? It seems a long time since I last opening
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Sorry to hear that your parents don't let you go out with your exspressing
friends. I understand you so don’t give up. Maybe you could try to support
reach a compromise with them .
I think you can do your homework at the weekend then you'll have giving some
more free time after school or you can do homework after school, then advice
your weekends will be free. But in my opinion, the best option is to do
only important for your future job subjects. Then you'll be successful
and have more free time, because you will study less subjects. Your
parents will be sure about your future.
I hope things are getting easier now and you’ll find time to drop expressing
me a line with your news about your free time with your friends. hope
Bye 4 now. Hope this has helped. Let me know what happens. closing
remarks
Yours, Alla Written by Alla Kuz’ko sign off
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An informal email giving an eyewitness account
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An informal email giving an eyewitness account can be sent to a friend. The
details of the place and events should be mentioned and introduced with appropriate
language.
When we write an informal email giving an eyewitness account, we divide it
into three parts:
Introduction
Paragraph 1 - reason(s) for writing
Main Body
Paragraphs 2-4 - description of the eyewitness events, place and feelings
Conclusion
Useful Phrases
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How are things (with you)?
How's it going
I hope you’re fine.
I hope you and your family are well.
Just thought I’d drop you a line.
Main Body
Setting the scene
We were walking along the road/ in the city centre/ on a busy/quiet street/on the
outskirts
Events
Suddenly, I saw a car/ a lorry swerve/skid across the road.
The driver turned left/overtook us/drove through a red light.
Minutes later, the car crashed into/collided with
I called the police/an ambulance
Feelings
We felt so relieved/shocked/upset/happy
Closing remarks
Hope to hear from you soon.
Write back soon and tell me your news.
Make sure you write soon!
Keep in touch!
Drop me a line if you have time!
Take care of yourself!
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Dear Mark, greetings
Hi! How are you? I’m very shocked about this day. I’m writing to opening remarks
tell about a robbery in the supermarket.
It was early in the morning. I went to the shop to buy a cup of place and time
coffee because I was too sleepy. All money was in the cash register. I
think the robbers chose that time deliberately. When I was waiting in
a queue, the robbers broke into the store.
You won’t believe. They had the guns and wore the black masks. details of the
They told us to lay down and shut up. To tell the truth, I was shocked. event
Then they demanded all the money which was in the cash register.
The cashier started to put money into the robbers' bag. All this time
they threatened us with guns. Then they took the bag and got away.
When they escaped I felt puzzled and scared. I did not know what I feelings
should do. The cashier called the police and then I went to work. All
day I was disorganized.
What do you think about it? Please write me as soon as possible. closing remarks
Sorry, but I need to go.
Best wishes, Written by Sasha Storchak sign off
Sasha
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A semi-formal thanking letter
We write semi-formal letters to people that we do not know very well. They are
usually more polite than informal letters and are written in a neutral style. It is
important, when writing this type of letter, to make sure that our writing is neither too
Introduction
Paragraph 1 - reason(s) for writing
Main Body
Paragraphs 2-4 – thanking for hospitality and explaining what the benefit was
Conclusion
Greeting: To the Editor /Dear Sir or Madam/Dear Mr.Brown
Para 1: Opening remarks
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Main Body
Closing remarks
(We) would be grateful if you could … ,
Thank you in anticipation for …
Please write back to inform me if
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
The sample of an informal email giving an eyewitness account.
You have just returned from a youth summer camp. Write a letter to Mr. Evans, you
camp leader, thanking him for his efforts. Mention about:
what activity you liked best
how the camp has improved you confidence
invite him for a meal with your family
I'm writing to you because I want to tell you how opening remarks
much I enjoyed your summer camp. So, I enjoyed it
really much.
To tell the truth, I liked our trip to the rock near the activity you liked
river most. It is really great that we could climb it best
using rock climbing equipment. It was very fun for me
to gain new experience. I want to express my gratitude
to you for all your efforts. You are a very experienced
camp leader and I want to go to this camp next year.
This camp was so much good that I learned to climb. how the camp has
Seriously, I haven't done this before, and I suceeded. improved you
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You are very experienced and responsible so I want invitation for a
to invite you for my family dinner. We)would be meal
grateful if you could come for dinner tomorrow, 25th of
January in our house at six o'clock. We will be waiting
for you. Our house is located at 221B Baker Street.
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A formal email of complaint
While writing a formal email of complaint you should focus on the most important
facts. Don't give unnecessary information. Complaint emails are usually addressed to
the customer service department. Use passives to be less direct and more formal,
When we write a formal email of complaint, we divide it into three parts:
Introduction
Paragraph 1 - reason(s) for writing, the place and time of the event
Main Body
Paragraphs 2-3 –complaints with justifications and examples
Paragraph 4- action to be taken
Conclusion
Greeting: /Dear Sir or Madam/Dear Mr.Brown
Para 1: Opening remarks
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Main Body
MAIN COMPLAINT
I would like you to look into this matter, and let me know your decision.
I hope that this matter can be resolved…
I would like a full or partial refund as soon as possible.
We must insist on an immediate replacement/full refund.
I would be thankful / grateful if you… this week,
I will have no choice but to cancel my order.
Closing remarks
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience .
I look forward to you explanation.
The sample of a formal email of complaint
You recently bought a mobile phone and were dissatisfied with the product and the customer
service. Write a formal email of complaint to the manager of the shop :
give the reason why you are dissatisfied with your phone
describe the problem with the customer service
ask for refund
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Dear Mrs. Halamaha, greetings
I am writting to to express my dissatisfaction with the the reason of
phone that I bought in your shop three days ago. dissatisfaction
To be honest, this phone was not very cheap. Firstly it did the problem with
not turn on right away. Secondly a charge to the phone and the the customer
headphones immediately broked down. Thirdly it does not hold service
the charge as long as I need. To make matters worse, there
were cracks on the screen. It puzzled me.
Then I turned to the customer service in the shop but they asking for refund
told me that they could not give me my money back.That is why I
am writting to you. I would be very grateful if you would help
me. I hope that this matter can be resolved. I would like a full
refund as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest closing remarks
convenience .
Yours sincerely, sign off
Solomiya Yurchyshyn
give the reason why you are dissatisfied with your phone
describe the problem with the customer service
ask for refund
3.You recently attended a rock concert and were dissatisfied with the performance. Write a formal
email to the concert hall manager. In your letter:
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A for-and-against essay
A "for and against" essay is a formal piece of writing in which a topic is
considered from opposing points of view. You should present both sides in a fair way
by discussing them objectively and in equal detail. When we write a for-and-
against essay, we divide it into three parts:
Introduction
Main Body
Paragraphs 2-3 – arguments for and against with examples/justifications
Conclusion
Para 1: introduce topic
Para 2: arguments for and examples/justifications
Para 3 : arguments against and examples/justifications
Para 4: summarise points, state your opinion
Useful Phrases
Main Body
List and add points
In the first place Finally
To begin with In addition
Firstly Also
Secondly Furthermore
List advantages List disadvantages
The first /main advantage of…. The first/ main
disadvantage/drawback of….
One/another/an additional
advantage of….. One/another/an additional
disadvantage/drawback of…..
One point /argument in favour
of…. One point/argument against….
Introduce examples/justifications
for example to give an example
for instance therefore
for this reason as a result
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Show contrast Although
However On the other hand
Conclusion
Introduce a conclusion Express an opinion
In conclusion I believe
All in all I think
To sum up In my opinion
2.You teacher has asked you to write an essay presenting the pros and cons of students using the
Internet for educational purposes. Write you essay:
3.You teacher has asked you to write an essay presenting the pros and cons of teenagers owning
mobile phones. Write you essay:
4.You teacher has asked you to write an essay discussing the pros and cons of using public
transport. Write you essay:
5.You teacher has asked you to write an essay discussing the pros and cons of being a volunteer.
Write you essay:
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An opinion essay
An opinion essay is a formal piece of which presents the author’s point of view on
a particular subject supported by reasoning and examples.When we write an opinion
essay, we divide it into three parts:
Introduction
Paragraph 1 – introduction of the topic
Main Body
Paragraphs 2-3 – viewpoints(s)
Conclusion
Paragraph 4- your opinion
Useful Phrases
List points
In the first place Add points
In the second place In addition
To start with/To begin with Also
Firstly Furthermore
Secondly Moreover
Finally
Introduce examples/reasons and expand points
for example to give an example
for instance therefore
for this reason such as
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in particular since
because in other words
Conclusion
Introduce a conclusion
In conclusion To sum up
All in all Taking everything into account
Express an opinion
I believe To my mind
I think /feel that The way I see it
In my opinion/view As far as I concerned…
The sample of an opinion essay.
3.Your class has had a discussion about the following statement: More people should eat healthy
food and stop eating junk food. Write an essay giving your opinion on the topic:
Nowadays more and more people stop eating junk food. topic introduction
In my opinion all people should eat healthy food. I have got a
lot of friends who can not stop eating junk food, but they want
to. And I hope that everyone of us understands that it does
harm our health.
There are hundreds of reasons why should we stop eating the first point of
junk food. Firstly, nobody of us wants to look fat. That`s very view and reasons
bad if you like eating junk food because it can cause obesity /examples
and that is bad not only because you will look fat but also
obesity causes a lot of other problems. It can lead to the
problems with your stomach or something else. So you have to
think about it and it can be the motivation for you to stop eating
junk food.
2.Your class has had a discussion about the following statement: More people should stop buying
ready-made foods and prepare home-cooked meals instead. Write an essay giving your opinion on
the topic:
3.Your class has had a discussion about the following statement: More people should eat healthy
food and stop eating junk food. Write an essay giving your opinion on the topic:
4.Your class has had a discussion about the following statement: Should all children play team
sports? Write an essay giving your opinion on the topic:
5.Your class has had a discussion about the following statement: Should children study at school
for 12 years? Write an essay giving your opinion on the topic:
To make our piece of writing more interesting to the reader, we can use certain
techniques to start or end it such as:
Useful Phrases
Make suggestions
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Another solution…..
Give examples
Present results/concequences
This would….. The effect/consequence/result
of…..
Then….
…so that…
By doing this, you would…
….due to…
If…, the result would be…
…because…
As a result/ in this way,
Nowadays the citizens of our city, Lviv suffer long delays the problem
while driving around the city. The population has risen a lot and the cause
recently, and the road system of our city is not able to cope with
the greater number of cars. What can be done about this problem?
A useful suggestion would be to lower the cost of public first suggestion
transport. For example, bus and train tickets could be halved. As a and expected
result, more people would use public transport and there would be result
less traffic.
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Another way is to convince people to use bicycles to second
commute. For instance, we could create bicycles lanes in the city. suggestion and
As a result, cycling around the city would become much saver and expected result
more people would choose this means of transport instead of
driving a car.
The traffic problem in our city cannot be solved immediately. summarise
By doing things that encourage people to use other means of your opinion
transport there would be less traffic on the roads.
Now you try
1.Write an essay for the school magazine suggesting ways how to solve the problem of graffiti in
your community :
2.Write an essay for the school magazine suggesting ways how to solve the problem of heavy
traffic in your city :
3.Write an essay for the school magazine suggestig ways how to solve the problem of using mobile
phones at school during the lessons :
4.Write an essay for the school magazine suggesting ways how to reduce litter in your city:
5.Write an essay for the school magazine suggesting ways how to solve the problem of litter in the
parks :
Main Body
When we write a formal letter of asking for information, we divide it into three
parts:
(i.e. say we are looking forward to hearing from the person, thank them in advance).
• no abbreviated forms
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• the closing remarks (Yours sincerely, / Yours faithfully, Mary Hill)
Formal letters begin with a) Dear Sir/Madam and end with Yours faithfully+ full
name or Dear NIr/Mrs+surname and end with Yours sincerely+ full name.
Useful Phrases:
Introduction:
Main body:
Conclusion:
• Thank you in advance. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
You have read an advertisement about an organized trip around Europe.You have to write a letter to
a travel agency to get some information about:
The list of countries included into the tour (What countries of European Union are
included into the tour? What famous cities will you visit? Will you visit any ancient
cities?)
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The sights (What sights will you visit? Will you visit any birthplaces of famous poets
or writers as you are interested in foreign literature? Will you have some time for
shopping?)
The meals (What meals does the price include? Will vegetarian dishes be available?)
The tour guides (Will the tour guides speak English? Will you have the only one tour
guide during the tour or will they change in each country?)
Dear Sir/Madam,
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1.You have read an advertisement about Bukovel' Winter Camp in a travel brochure You want to
send your two children to this camp. Write a letter to a travel agency to get some information about:
• how to get to Bukovel' from Lviv (Which means of transport are the cheapest? How much does it
take to get there?)
• what kinds of winter sports are available for children under twelve (Do the staff provide the
children with necessary equipment? Are there training sport classes for novices?)
• what qualifications team leaders and sport trainers have (Are the staff experienced?)
Write a letter at least 120-160 words. Do not write any dates and addresses. Start your letter with
Dear Sir or Madam,
2.You are a school-leaver. You want to join the tutorial course at Lviv Ivan Franko State University
which prepares the school-leaven for Evaluation Independent Testing. You have read an
advertisement in Postup. Write a letter to get some information about:
• what subjects are available (Are there Science classes or the humanity ones?)
• when classes take place (How many times a week are the classes available? What time do
they start?)
• how many people are included in the group (Is the number in groups kept to minimum?)
• how much this course cost (Are there any bargain prices?)
Write a letter at least 120-160 words. Do not write any dates and addresses. Start your letter
with Dear Sir or Madam,
3.You have read an advertisement about an organized trip around Europe in a travel brochure. Write
a letter to a travel agency to get some information about:
• the list of countries included into the tour (What countries of European Union are included into
the tour? What famous cities will you visit? Will you visit any Ancient cities?)
• the sights (What sights will you visit? Will you visit any birthplaces of famous poets or writes as
you are interested in foreign literature? Will you have some time for shopping?)
• the meals (What meals does the price include? Will vegetarian dishes be available?)
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• the tour guides (Will the tour guides speak English? Will you have the only one tour guide during
the tour or will they change in each country?)
Write a letter at least 120-160 words. Do not write any dates and addresses. Start your letter with
Dear Sir or Madam,
4.You have read an advertisement below and decided to join the party. Write a letter to get some
information about:
Be there or be square....
• the address of the Student's Union Building (How can you get there?)
• the variety of activities (Will there be any interesting quiz show? Will any games take place at the
party?)
• the admission (Is the admission free? Is it necessary to buy a ticket in advance? How much does
the ticket cost?)
Write a letter at least 120-160 words. Do not write any dates and addresses. Start your letter with
Dear Sir or Madam,
5.You have read an advertisement about a vegetarian diet in Daily News. You are a bit overweight
and keen on losing some weight. You need more information about it. Write a letter to a medical
office to get some information about:
• the food you are allowed to eat (How many meals should you have a day? Should you only eat
fruits and vegetables? Are you allowed to eat any sweets? Can you eat after 6 p.m.? )
• the physical exercising (Do you have to take exercises? How often should you do them?)
• the dieticians (Are the dieticians experienced? Do they instruct their patients in Allowing the
diet?)
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• the effects of the diet (How much will it take to get slimmer? How many kilos can you lose per
month?)
Write a letter at least 120-160 words. Do not write any dates and addresses. Start your letter with
Dear Sir or Madam,
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The best students’ works
Hi, Jonathan!
How are you? Hope you’re fine. I’m writing to share my feelings and
experiences that I had a few hours ago. I still can't stand it, so I count on your
support.
So, it was a typical Sunday morning. I woke up with a great feeling inside
because it is a special day - my birthday. I have many friends and relatives, but this
day I decided to celebrate in the circle of the most important people. So we just
agreed to meet at my home, watch a movie, eat some delicious food and have fun.
In the morning I went to the local supermarket to buy some food for dinner. I
used to pick tomato sauce for pizza as there was a loud noise at the entrance to the
store. I immediately ran up and saw thousands of shards on the ground. Raising my
eyes, I realized that someone was breaking in. Outside my back came the cries of a
rude man's voice: "Give away all the money you have, or I will kill all the people
who are here!" No jokes, my heart stopped at that moment and I felt my soul and
consciousness slowly leave the body. Fortunately, the shop security guard crept up to
the man and handed him a gun with his words, "One extra movement and I'll kill
you!". Realizing that he would not be alive from there, the unknown threw his
weapon and money and quietly left the room.
After that, I stood still for several minutes, realizing what had happened. The
whole day flew by for me. Of course, we had a great time with our friends, but I
didn't tell them why I was so weird. It was a horrible experience that taught me a lot,
but I don't want to go through it again. But this day I’ll remember forever.
I hope at least your recent days have been wonderful! Can’t wait to get your
answer.
Best wishes,
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Solomiya (written by Solomia Voznyak)
Dear Mr.Evans,
Yours sincerely,
Vita Mostova
Hi Mary,
How are you? I hope you had a great day. Unluckily I can’t say it about myself. I
saw a horrible robbery.
After school I went to the supermarket to buy some bread, tomatoes and cheese.
Tomorrow is my sister’s birthday. I was choosing some cheese when a man came
into. At first, I didn't know that it was a robber. Suddenly he got a gun out of his
pocket and started shouting. All the people lay down on the floor and a girl at the
cash register started giving money to him. Luckily, no one was hurt. In a few minutes
the robber left the supermarket.
To tell the truth, It was really scary. I was frightened. For a minute I thought that he
wouldn’t leave us alive and we wouldn’t go back to our families.
But now everything is allright. I am sitting on my soft sofa and am writing to you. I
hope to see you soon. Please write me back.
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Yours,
Nadia. (written by Nadia Zinchuk)
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my consern about the extremely poor customer service
I received during a recent visit to your store.
YesterdayI bought a phone from your shop. However, as I later found out, the
device I bought had a few faults. Not only that, but it also seems to me that the phone
has already been used by someone for a long time.
When I contacted the customer service, I was told they were not able to help
me. I demand a full refund. I trust the matter will receive your immediate attention.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Karen Jefferson.
(written by Olena Senyshyn)
Dear Conrad,
Thank you for the letter. It was great to hear from you again after such a long time. I
really should have written sooner. I have been busy with my exams. I’ve heard that
your parents don’t let you hang out with your friends. I will help you.
In my opinion, you should suggest your mum your ideas how to reach acompromise.
Tell her if you have good marks you will hang out with me and your friends. I will
also help you with your school lessons. Let’s meet after school at my home and do
our homework.
Wait for your answer. If you you agree with me let me know. Hope to hear from
you soon.
Yours,
Yura
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