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Family Affair - Outline
Family Affair - Outline
1. Jamal Origins
Jamal is a second year high school student with an affinity for breaking the rules and getting
things done his own way. Even so, Jamal is loved and respected in his school and community
for always giving his all, excelling and looking out for those around him.
One day, a shooting happens in his neighborhood and his school is put on lock down. The
students are instructed to stay in their classrooms until further notice but Jamal opposes and
decides to leave. Jamal convinces his reluctant friend Shawn to leave too, and the pair manage
to sneak through the school and get to their bikes outside. The two boys ride through their
neighborhood and talk to the local shop owners and others from the community. We can see
that the kids are well beloved in the community, and the adults warn the boys to go inside and
avoid the trouble on the streets.
The boys continue riding toward their homes, when suddenly a group of men running from
police hit the corner. The boys try to speed away, but the thugs catch them and take their bikes.
The men ride off and the boys go to start walking again but before they get far, the police
chasing the thugs pull up on them and tell them to freeze. The boys attempt to tell the cops
about their bikes, but he aggressively orders them to get on the ground and shut up. The boys
reluctantly comply, and they are searched by the officer.
The officer finishes the search and the boys get up. The officer tries to comfort the boys
afterward but they just turn and walk away disheartened. The boys walk in silence until Shawn
suddenly gets excited and runs toward a window. Jamal walks over to him to see what the
excitement is all about, and Shawn points to one of the TVs in the video. The TV is playing a
news report about a random person seen popping up downtown, stopping crimes. Shawn is in
awe of the story and the hero, but Jamal brushes it off and is unimpressed. Shawn is confused,
but Jamal tells him it’s because he performs his heroics in the parts of the city with the least
need and most popularity. Jamal argues that if he was truly the hero everyone made him out to
be, he would fight for the people who really needed it. Shawn understands Jamal’s point, but he
still believes there's sometype of hope to be found in the hero. Jamal secretly hopes so too.
2. Andre’s Lesson
Jamal and Shawn finally arrive at Jamal’s house and they both sit on the porch exhausted. The
two are recapping the events of their travels, when Jamal’s Father Andre overhears and joins
the conversation. Andre interrogates the boys and while Jamal is quick witted and clever,
Shawn eventually gives up and tells Andre about the thugs and their bikes. Andre initially scolds
Jamal for lying and leaving school in a dangerous situation. He tells the boys that sometimes
people are cruel and the best way to get through life is to avoid those people and situations at
every cost. This discourages the boys even further and seeing this Andre instructs the boys to
get in the car so he can get their bikes back.
3. Tension with the Neighborhood Kids
Andre rides around the neighborhood with the boys until they notice the kids' bikes on a porch
with a group of guys. Andre pulls up to the house and Jamal urges him that they don’t need the
bikes back, but Andre is determined. Andre approaches the house and everyone on the porch is
on alert. Andre raises his hands and the gang leader stands up and commands everyone to
stand down. The gang leader approaches Andre and Andre informs him that he’s not there for
anything other than the boy's bikes. The gang leader seems sympathetic, but he tells Andre that
he doesn’t know anything about the bikes. Andre insists on inspecting the bikes and this causes
the gang to become on high alert. The gang leader gets closer to Andre and whispers that he
respects him as a father, but if he doesn’t leave he might be embarrassed in front of his son.
Andre considers and eventually turns around and walks away. The gang laughs and celebrates
and the gang leader doesn’t notice Andre’s clenched fist.
Andre returns to the car and the two boys are silent. The trio ride without talking for a while
until Jamal notices his father in a trance and breaks the silence. Jamal asks his father about the
bikes and Andre snaps out of his trance and tells the boys that they plan to bring the bikes back
tomorrow. Jamal notices Andre’s grip on the wheel and decides to cease with questions, but still
remains worried.
4. Reminiscing
The trio return to Jamal's house and head inside. Andre tells the boys to go play in the living
room while he goes upstairs. Jamal stops in an attempt to comfort Andre, but Andre insists that
he is fine and smiles at Jamal. Jamal finally gives in and joins Shawn in the other room. When
he does, Andre turns away too and his smile immediately shifts to a frown.
Andre walks in his room and closes the door. He checks out the windows and then closes all of
the blinds. Andre then goes to the closet and digs deep into the back. From the back of the
closet, he pulls out a locked box and removes a key from around his neck. He unlocks the box
and inside are pictures of he, Sasha, and Elijah at their base when they were younger. He looks
through old news articles and other memorabilia until he gets down to his combat suit. Elijah
picks it up and stares at it and then decides to try it on.
Andre stares at himself in the mirror, noticing his increased size, and then suddenly Sasha
walks in and panics. She closes the door quickly and inquires why Andre opened the box. Andre
retells the story of the neighborhood kids and how powerless he felt not being able to get the
boys bikes back. He also talks to Sasha about the run in that the boys had with the cops and
how there’s no true justice in their part of town. After going back and forth with Sasha, Andre
concedes that he just wants to get the boys bike back. Sasha sympathizes with him, and tells
him she’s onboard with him going to retrieve the boys bikes but she’s going with him.
5. Taking Action/Spotted
The neighborhood kids return to the porch with the bikes. They get comfortable, unbenounced
to them Sasha is monitoring them from afar. She reads out the targets and their locations and
tells Andre to be careful. The neighborhood kids continue to conversate among themselves and
then suddenly the lights go out. The group starts to panic so they decide to use their phones for
light. When they turn them on though, they see Eli. The group goes after Eli, but he makes quick
work of them using a combination of Sense Distortion, Michelle’s guide and his combat skills.
Andre grabs the bikes and the couple heads home proud of their work. As they make their leave
though, it’s revealed that they are being surveilled by a mysterious figure.
Falling Out
Eli is startled when he sees Jamal and almost drops the ice cream, but Eli uses his extremely
fast reflexes to catch it. Jamal is impressed but he reveals he saw Eli stop for Ice Cream and he
got the one that Eliza prefers. Jamal is amazed to find out that his uncle is a superhero. That
amazement quickly turns into anger when he realizes that the hero is from his neighborhood but
never did anything to clean it up like he was doing with the suburb. Jamal claims that if Eli was
there, his parents might not have been killed that night. This throws Eli into a rage so he grabs a
bottle of alcohol and storms off
Steak-out 2 - Downtown
The scene cuts to an area downtown. The streets are alive with people. Eli and Jamal show up
and begin moving through the crowd. They navigate through the street and Jamal begins to get
caught up in the hype and music. Eli smacks him in the back of the head and brings him back to
reality. “Ow! Yo, what’s up?” Jamal proclaimed. “You said you wanted a steak out. We’re not
here to turn up. You need to focus.” Eli says. “Focus on what? There’s like 1000 people out
here. Are we supposed to focus on everyone?” Jamal asks. Eli looks around and spots a
suspicious looking character. “Naw, just the ones that stick out.” Eli makes his way to the other
side of the party and Jamal stays and watches. As Eli gets close, the suspicious looking
character slides a pill into a drink at the bar. As the character goes to exchange the drink with a
girl at the bar Eli pretends to try to slide through, creating confusion and swapping the drinks.
As he gets back to Jamal the suspicious character begins to pass out and the girl flees. “See
what I mean. Once you’re locked in. Once your main focus is protecting people. You won’t miss”
Eli says and then returns to the crowd.
Practicing Focus - Jamal locks in
Jamal takes a deep breath and then dive into the crowd. At first he is disoriented by the crowd
but then he begins to lock in, stops thinking about himself, and begins to separate everyone
individually. With this new sight, he first notices a low level pervert grabbing the butts of the
women in the circle. He comes out of his trance by grabbing the man's hand and telling him to
be better. The man acknowledges and Jamal lets him go. Jamal looks around with the new sight
and sees Eli, fresh from solving another issue, give him the thumbs up. This motivates Jamal
and he heads out. The two blend in perfectly, solving issues from club to club bar to bar. Jamal
is on a roll when his individual senses notices a gorgeous woman vying for his attention.
Eli vs Michelle #1
Eli chases the two women through the crowded downtown area and they end up running to the
city’s abandoned brothel. The Shadow woman instructs the drunk woman to get lost so she
takes advantage of the commotion and sneaks away. Eli sees this but decides to keep his focus
on the Shadow woman. As Eli gains access to the building, he’s unable to find the shadow
woman. As he looks around, the suspense begins to grow and then the Shadow woman
reappears. Eli and The Shadow woman begin fighting and Eli realizes her hand to hand combat
skills are far beyond average. Eli has to give his all for the first time in a long time but he’s able
to gain the edge. Once it looks like the shadow woman is defeated, the lights go off. The
emergency lights kick in and the shadow figure is gone. Eli looks around disoriented, and then
suddenly he’s hit. He attempts to swing back at the attacker but he misses. He goes to settle
himself but before he can get settled, he’s hit again. Eli stumbles in the dark for a while before
taking a second to calm himself. He fine tunes into all of his senses and when the next attack
comes, he’s able to catch it. Eli manages to stop the attack but before he’s able to counter
attack, he’s hit again.
Eli is exhausted and is running out of options. A woman’s voice pieces the dark “Aww poor
little Eli. Where’s the rest of the team? You’ve never been that great on your own you know.” “I
don’t know an Eli. And I am my team. I’m more than enough for you.” Eli yells into the wind.”
“Haha that’s a cute way to say that you don’t have one anymore. Me though, I believe in
strength in unity.” As the Shadow figure speaks, many shadows begin to appear in the dark.
“We're still jumping people?” Eli jokes. “Family protects each other. No matter what, and no
matter from who.” The Shadow Says. “A lesson you’re about to learn the hard way.” As the
shadow says this, the rest of the figures ready themselves for the next attack.
Tension Back at The House - Jamal heads back to his old neighborhood
Eli is focused on figuring out more about the group so he ignores Jamal. Jamal demands to be
included but Eli refuses. Jamal becomes visibly distraught but Eli ignores it cause Jamal to leave
the house
Revelations with Shawn - Jamal’s trip back to the neighborhood gives him new
perspective
Jamal decides to go back to his old neighborhood to clear his mind. He meets up with Shawn
and they begin to walk and catch up. Shawn is still geeked on the hero, especially after his
encounter with him but Jamal deflects away from the subject. Shawn voices how he wishes he
would return due to the spike in gun violence in the neighborhood. Jamal inquires and Shawn
comments on how recently a lot of the lower level gangsters in the neighborhood have become
armed and started to become more emboldened. As the two talk, they come across an incident
between two rival gangs. One group approaches the home of another and demands that a
woman comes with them. The group gets into a stand off and winds up pulling large amounts of
weaponry on each other. The scene escalates until the woman finally stops them and agrees to
leave. Jamal notices that she is the same woman who distracted him in the club. Jamal and
Shawn turn back and head home and Jamal tells Shawn to stay safe.
Back at Eli’s - Jamal and Eli talk about Jamal’s recent discovery
Jamal returns home to Eli. The two talk for a brief moment and Eli apologies for including
Jamal in his dangerous life. Jamal tries to tell Eli his new information but Eli is too busy trying to
be responsible to hear him. Jamal continues trying to talk to Eli, but they’re interrupted when Eli
gets a phone call. Eli answers the phone and it’s Officer Rodriguez. Eli tries to get away for the
call but Jamal follows and listens in. Officer Hernandez warns Eli that the Chief of police is
mobilizing a force for something. Hernandez adds that he’s keeping lowkey but it definitely
seems big. Eli hangs up and Jamal tells him all of the information he figured out back in his
neighborhood. Jamal believes that the group of women are attempting to use the gang fight as a
distraction to pull police from something bigger. Eli ponders the information and realizes that
Jamal is right and the group of mystery women plan to rob the gala downtown.
Together - The pair decides to trust each other in order to save an art gala
After the realization, Eli gets prepared to go. Jamal follows him and asks him where he is
going. Eli tells him since the police can handle the gang fight, he’s going to secure the jewels.
Jamal protests, telling Eli that with the new weapons popping up, a gang war could result in an
all out blood bath. Jamal tells Eli that he’s more needed back in the neighborhood and that he
can handle the gala himself. Eli protests but Jamal reminds him of the deal they made to have
each other back and help anyone who needs it. Eli thinks it over and then he nods to Jamal.
And it begins - Michelle puts her plan in motion and it begins according to plan
Back at her hideout, Michelle and the girl are getting prepared for the heist. Michelle picks up
her phone and sends a text and then tells the team to get ready.
Back in Jamal’s neighborhood, a woman lying in bed gets a text from Michelle. She reads the
text, calls a number, and puts the phone on speaker. The woman turns over and cuddles up to
Gang Leader #1 and then Gang Leader #2 answers phone. When Gang Leader #2 answers the
phone, he overhears a conversation between the woman and Gang Leader #1 that leaves him
infuriated. Gang Leader #2 along with a few friends decide to find the couple.
Michelle’s plan unfolds - Eli gets the call over the scanner time to act
Back downtown, Gang Leader #2 pulls up with his group of friends. They’re hesitant but
eventually they decide to go in. The group throws on masks and bursts into the house. They
move room to room until the finally find Gang Leader #1 and they surround him. As they stare
him down, he begs for his life and they begin to consider but the woman hears from the
bathroom and walks out naked exasperating the situation.
The scene cuts to the gala and everyone is arriving. Michelle walks the red carpet in a
beautiful red dress. When she walks in she appears to be inspecting the art but she’s actually
marking her targets.
Jamal arrives at the gala - begins scanning the room
Jamal arrives at the gala and checks in with Eli. Eli is riding his bike down to Jamal’s
neighborhood when he gets Jamal’s call. Eli reminds Jamal to stay vigilant and be safe and
Jamal tells him to do the same.
Art gala in trouble - Michelle and her girls make their move. Jamal intervenes
At the same time back at the gala, the host finally takes the stand. The host greets the
audience, speaks on the gala's purpose, and introduces the grand finale piece. Jamal sees this,
looks around and sees Michelle and a group of women talking. Jamal goes to alert Eli, but Eli is
busy fighting off cops. Jamal contemplates for a second, takes a deep breath, and focuses.
Michelle whispers to one of the women and the woman walks towards one of the back doors.
Jamal sees this and begins tracking the woman without drawing suspense.
Eli gets the upper hand - hearing of Jamal’s situation, Eli acts aggressively to get past
the police.
Back in the neighborhood, the police are using their cars to illuminate the streets. They’re
looking around and waiting for Eli who is hidden, contemplating what to do next. He looks
around at his surroundings and notices a leaking fire hydrant and begins to contemplate a plan.
Unavoidable
At the gala, the woman who snuck off arrives at the breaker for the building. She checks her
watch and begins to count down. Michelle and the second woman check their watches then
Michelle looks around concerned. The second woman asks her what’s up but she says nothing
and gives the first woman the signal. At the breaker, the woman flips the electric and all of the
power goes out in the building. Michelle and the second woman duck behind the bar during the
commotion and lose their dresses revealing stealth clothes underneath. They put on their night
vision goggles and see security attempting to position themselves to protect the items. Michelle
and the first woman are able to slip past the security and get a few items. Back downstairs,
Jamal realizes what’s happening and tries to call Eli. They get in contact and Eli tells Jamal not
to act but after he insteads decides to trust him and tells him to act. Jamal jumps into action and
turns all the lights back on. Michelle reacts quickly and snatches her goggles off, but the other
woman is blinded by the light. Security orders Michelle to freeze. Downstairs, the woman sees
Jamal at the switch and goes to turn it back off.
Jamal Rising
Back at the gala, Jamal is fighting the woman sent to shut down the breaker. He tries not to be
too violent but the woman takes advantage of that and manages to shut the power off again.
With this opening, Michelle escapes security and is able to disarm and subdue the security
guards. She helps the other woman to her feet and decides to grab the grand finale item and
get out while they can. Jamal continues to fight the woman, but realizes that he can’t hold back
anymore. Jamal uses pieces of his suit to distract and confuse the woman and eventually takes
her down, revealing his own stealth suit.
After his fight, Jamal hits the lights again revealing Michelle and the woman making their
getaway. Jamal pops back upstairs and security instructs him which way the women went and
Jamal runs after them. Michelle and her team run through a construction site that’s been
arranged for their escape but Jamal is right behind them. Jamal checks in with Eli and Eli
informs him that everything is okay in his neighborhood and that he is on his way back. Jamal is
relieved and continues after the group. Michelle sees Jamal following persistently and tells one
of her squadmates to blow the cave. The woman is hesitant, but works up the nerve to blow the
cave, causing it to collapse behind them. Jamal notices and panics but focuses on Michelle and
manages to maneuver through the debris and stay on them.
Surrounded
Michelle and her squad hop on bikes and get ready to pull off but when they turn their
headlights on, Officer Hernandez is already waiting there. Michelle looks back and Jamal
emerges from the cave.
Michelle’s team begins to panic and Michelle tells them to keep calm and go to plan B.
Suddenly, the lights go out in the room and shadows begin to appear. Jamal and Hernandez
ready themselves and attempt to fight off the women but they're overwhelmed and forced
together in the center. As the fight reaches a climax, Eli bursts through a window joining Jamal
and Hernandez and allowing light into the room. The three begin to fight together and begin
pushing the women back. Michelle begins to panic until her first in command convinces her that
it's best for the group if she escapes and continues fighting. After contemplating for a second,
Michelle reluctantly agrees. Her first in command launches a distraction, and Michelle uses it to
get loose. Eli goes to take care of the first in command but Jamal and Hernandez tell him they
can handle it and Eli runs after Michelle.
Final Fight
As the fight reaches a climax, Eli bursts through a window joining Jamal and Hernandez and
allowing light into the room. The three begin to fight together and begin pushing the women
back. Michelle begins to panic until her first in command convinces her that it's best for the
group if she escapes and continues fighting. After contemplating for a second, Michelle
reluctantly agrees. Her first in command launches a distraction, and Michelle uses it to get
loose. Eli goes to take care of the first in command but Jamal and Hernandez tell him they can
handle it and Eli runs after Michelle.
Aftermath
The next day, Eli and Jamal both sleep in and wake up exhausted. When the pair awaken,
they watch the news and see the stories of the Art museum and they both grin at a job well
done. Eli tells Jamal how proud he is and how proud his parents would be of him . The pair hug
and part ways. Jamal leaves for school and Eli watches him leave. When he’s gone, Eli looks
under his bed and reveals Andre and Sasha’s memory chest. He pulls out the picture of
Himself, Andre, and Sasha and then unfolds the last corner to reveal Michelle.