Task 5.

Write the body paragrah(s) of your own argumentative text, then analyze it
(them) into its (their) stages

Name : Rasmika

Std. No : 1906102020008

Students should not be permitted to use cell phones during school hours because it can
cause distraction to other students and students will use the smarphone to cheat on tests
or exams. A whopping 35% of teens admit to using their smartphones to to cheat on
exams or tests, according to a Pew Research Center study and 65% of the same surveyed
students also stated they have seen others use their phones to cheat in school. With all the
new smartphone that have Internet access, it is easy enough to simply Google for an
answer. Can you imagine if students doing cheat on exam? It will bring some effects for
student itself and school, such as lack of confidence, course failure, suspension and
ruined academic integrity. From different perspective, some argue that the use of
smartphone in learning process should be allowed because sometimes smartphone can
help the learning process. It is because smartphones offer an opportunity to keep in touch
with teaching and learning process even when the students are not in school area
anymore. It offers students to continue learning their topic or material given by teacher
anytime and anywhere. However, it’s very unlikely if we keep allowing students to bring
smartphone in school. Some people might argue that cellphone should be allowed in the
classroom since they help students and teacher in learning process. One can acknowledge this
idea, but every student is always under the care of his/her teacher whenever they are in school or
any institution. Since the risk of allowing the students using their smartphone in school are high,
banning smartphone in school should be welcomed.

The stages:

Topic sentence Students should not be permitted to use cell phones

 during school hours because it can cause distraction to
other students and students will use the smarphone to
cheat on tests or exams.
Details (evidence) A whopping 35% of teens admit to using their
smartphones to to cheat on exams or tests, according to a
Pew Research Center study and 65% of the same
surveyed students also stated they have seen others use
their phones to cheat in school.
Commentary With all the new smartphone that have Internet access, it
is easy enough to simply Google for an answer. Can you
imagine if students doing cheat on exam? It will bring
some effects for student itself and school, such as lack of
confidence, course failure, suspension and ruined
academic integrity.
Counter-argument From different perspective, some argue that the use of
(opposing side) smartphone in learning process should be allowed
because sometimes smartphone can help the learning
process. It is because smartphones offer an opportunity to
keep in touch with teaching and learning process even
when the students are not in school area anymore. It
offers students to continue learning their topic or material
given by teacher anytime and anywhere.

Rebuttal However, it’s very unlikely if we keep allowing students

to bring smartphone in school. Some people might argue
that cellphone should be allowed in the classroom since they
help students and teacher in learning process. One can
acknowledge this idea, but every student is always under the
care of his/her teacher whenever they are in school or any
institution. Since the risk of allowing the students using their
smartphone in school are high, banning smartphone in school
should be welcomed.