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Hidlaw: A Film Adaptation of Edith Tiempo'S Bonsai
Hidlaw: A Film Adaptation of Edith Tiempo'S Bonsai
A FILM ADAPTATION
OF EDITH TIEMPO’S BONSAI
BY: EJAY D. VILLAVER
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
DEDICATED TO:
GONZALONIAN PRODUCTIONS;
I’VE HATED THIS STORY,
AND I’VE LOVED IT,
AND I HOPE I MADE IT RIGHT.
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
CAST OF CHARACTERS
(IN ORDER OF APPEARANCE)
STEPHEN DEGUZMAN & ALEXANDRA LARRAGA as COUPLE
#1
MERYL EVANGELISTA & YDIANNE LOPEZ as COUPLE #2
ANNE DIMPLE DELA TORRE as HOST
FAITH DAAL as LAW REPRESENTATIVE
ADOLFO VEN ADOLFO as HIMSELF
SHANNEN ELSBBETH ESMERO as HERSELF
EUNICE as SHANNEN’S BOSS
MAUREEN QUIJADA as ADOLF’S EX
CHEN KAQUILALA as ADOLF’S MOTHER
DIRECTORS
ADA ANGELA MERCADO
YUWAN PRESBITERO
EDITOR
ADA ANGELA MERCADO
CAMERA MEN
EJAY VILLAVER
DEBBIE CANOY
ADOLF (V.O):
Majority sa mga tao dito sa mundo
ay naghahanap ng kapartner sa
buhay.
And when we fall in love. We fall
into different categories. Tulad ng
isang toxic na relasyon. Mga
relasyon
na pilit na pinagpatuloy kahit
nakakasama na.
ADOLF (V.O):
May mga taong takot na mag commit.
Pero sa dinami-daming klase ng
relasyon, ours is my favorite.
Ako si ADOLF at siya si SHANNEN
at ito ang aming storya.
HOST:
The last question…
HOST (CONTINUED):
(Coughs)
What genre does Shakespeare’s
Romeo and Juliet belong?
LAW REPRESENTATIVE:
(Confident)
It belongs to romance.
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ADOLF:
Umhh Actually, it’s a
tragedy.
ADOLF (CONTINUED):
The play ended with both of the
main characters dead. Ergo, not
a romance, but a tragedy.
HOST:
Ladies and Gentleman, we have a
winner.
HOST (O.S):
(Nervous)
I’m sorry, the decision has been
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
HOST (CONTINUED):
If you have any problems with
the results, unfortunately there
is nothing we can do with that.
The host gave Shannen a smug look and
she rolled her eyes to clap back. She
then turned to where the DEEP LAUGH is
coming from. To her shock it came from
Adolf. They looked at each other’s eyes
and he gave her an annoying grin —one
that Adolf used to mock. She took a
glimpse of her wrist watch and then to
her classmate at her left.
SHANNEN:
You know what? I got to go.
EUNICE:
(Without looking at her)
Late ka na naman. Ika-ilang late
mo na ‘to?
SHANNEN:
Intrams po kasi namin.
(She fixes her bun and kneeled
down to water the plants)
Promise po hindi na mauulit.
EUNICE:
O sha sige, maiwan muna kita jan.
ADOLF:
(Clears throat)
First of all, hindi kita pinahiya.
You did a great job doing that to
yourself. Second, we deserve that
win. We won fair and square.
SHANNEN:
Did you though? ‘Yan ang problema
sa bansa natin eh. We have a
different perception on what’s
fair and what’s not. Kaya nga I
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ADOLF:
Does going to a party and then
get married the next day, love?
Libog lang ‘yun.
SHANNEN:
(She snapped)
Para sa’yo. In earth, that’s what
we call love at first sight.
ADOLF:
(He scoffs)
I see. You’re a hopeless romantic.
Mga taong naniniwala sa true love
pero wala namang jowa.
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ADOLF:
Too bad, babalik at babalik ako
every weekend so you’re stuck with
me. Whether you like it or not.
ADOLF:
Are you ok?
SHANNEN (V.O):
I have to admit, he’s very
charming. Kaso lang ang pangit
ng ugali.
ADOLF:
(Focused on her leg)
Stay still.
(Adolf then wrapped her leg
with a bandage)
That’s going to be fine. You’re
lucky the wound wasn’t that deep.
SHANNEN:
(She looked away)
Salamat.
ADOLF:
Take the day off.
(Referring to her leg)
Dapat pinapahinga mo muna ‘yan.
SHANNEN:
What’s the bonsai for?
SHANNEN (CONTINUED):
Hey, if bibili ka ng bonsai every
week I can just deliver it to you.
(She raised both of her hands)
Free of charge. Just put your
number…
(She hands her phone)
here.
ADOLF:
Just a warning. If you send that
first text there’s no going back.
(He hands the phone back)
‘Wag kang ma fall sa akin. Hindi
ako marunong sumalo.
SHANNEN:
(Hands on her hips)
Oh please. Kung makapagsalita
ka akala mo hindi nagmahal.
ADOLF:
I don’t believe in love.
SHANNEN:
It’s not a religion. It exist
kahit naniniwala ka or hindi.
ADOLF:
Talaga ba? Can you prove it?
SHANNEN:
Love songs, poetry… marriage.
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ADOLF:
(Thumbs down with a FART
NOISE)
Everything you just said are
just words on paper. They don’t
mean anything.
SHANNEN:
But you know these authors feel
something right? Hindi sila
makakagawa nito for nothing.
ADOLF:
Chemicals? You can search it
online if gusto mo.
SHANNEN:
Ang manhid mo!
ADOLF:
(He corrects her)
Just facts.
SHANNEN:
It’s the end of the week. Where could we meet up?
Adolf smiles
ADOLF:
So you took the challenge. Don’t forget, I warned you.
SHANNEN:
As if. You’re the last person I want to be with.
She lied.
ADOLF:
How’s your leg by the way?
SHANNEN:
It’s strong enough para sipain ‘yang mukha mo.
ADOLF:
Ang harsh naman. Pwede bang mag meet tayo
sa SM?
SHANNEN:
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ADOLF:
Sounds great. It’s a date then.
SHANNEN:
A what now!?
MONTAGE:
- EXT. CAR –DAY –MOVING. Adolf’s
driving
- EXT. JEEP –DAY. Shannen hugging a
couple of bonsai.
- INT. RESTAURANT –DAY. Adolf
patiently waiting for Shannen.
Tried to play games to entertain
himself.
- INT. IN FRONT OF A LONG LINE IN THE
ELEVATOR –DAY. Shannen arrived at
the SM mall however she refused to
wait on the line and take the
stairs instead.
- INT. RESTAURANT –DAY.
Adolf stood up. He started to get
worried, so he calls Shannen.
- INT. STAIRS WITH A SIGN THAT SAYS
3RD FLOOR. She struggles to climb
the stairs for the plant is very
heavy and her leg hasn’t fully
recovered.
- INT. IN FRONT OF THE RESTAURANT –
DAY.
Shannen wouldn’t pick up, so he
tried texting her instead.
ADOLF:
Where are you?
ADOLF:
Hoy, okay ka lang?
SHANNEN:
(Takes a long breath)
Oh yan 200.
ADOLF:
(Hesitant)
Kumain ka na ba?
SHANNEN (V.O):
(She smiles)
Suss, Pa fall.
CUT TO: RESTAURANT
ADOLF:
(Groans)
Oh no! I’m right.
(Gesturing to the notebook)
I was right. You’re a poet.
SHANNEN:
What’s wrong with being a poet?
I’m sure you have something you
love—
ADOLF:
I told you, hindi ako naniniwala
sa love remember? Why do you want
to be a poet anyway?
SHANNEN:
Well, hindi lang sila poems.
They’re umh… song lyrics.
ADOLF:
A poet and a singer. Wow, you never
cease to amaze me. Pwede ko bang
marinig yung songs mo?
SHANNEN:
(Shy)
That’s the problem. I believe my
songs aren’t ready for the whole
world to hear.
ADOLF:
Believe in yourself. If hindi ka
magiging lawyer —which is
unlikely
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
SHANNEN:
(Amazed)
You really think so?
(Turned sad)
But I have to be practical. Or
else, I’d be broke.
ADOLF:
(Raised his cup to Shannen)
Broke with money, but rich in
words.
ADOLF (CONTINUED):
Hey, I’m really happy we’re
having lunch together. I believe
that we started off on the wrong
foot. That’s why I called you here.
To start again, with you. Hi I’m
Adolf.
SHANNEN:
Wait, so let me get this straight.
You planned to lure me in here
to eat with you? Not creepy at
all, Adolf. Not at all.
ADOLF:
(Playful)
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SHANNEN:
Oh umhh—Okay… Hi I’m Shannen nice
to meet you.
MONTAGE:
INT. ARCADE -AFTERNOON
Both of them are having fun playing
basketball. The games’ in progress.
Points has been scored, strategy and
teamwork is shown. They win. They’re
full of glee that they hugged each
other.
SHANNEN:
(She closed her eyes and feel
as the wind brushed her face)
It’s so nice up here.
ADOLF:
(Looking at her)
Yes, ang ganda ng view.
SHANNEN:
(She looked up)
Salamat. How about you? Hindi
ka ba giniginaw?
ADOLF:
Okay lang.
SHANNEN:
No, really. It’s like negative 40
degrees dito. Tabihan mo ako.
SHANNEN:
(She stared at him)
You know for a very egotistic na
lalaki, you’re very… sweet. I
misjudged you Adolf Ven Adolfo.
He looks away.
ADOLF:
You’re cool too.
SHANNEN:
“You’re cool too” yung totoo
may kaluluwa ka ba?
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ADOLF:
I don’t believe there are such
thing as a souls.
SHANNEN:
So no fate, no destiny, no
meant-to-be’s for you?
ADOLF:
No, at least not anymore.
SHANNEN:
(Intrigued)
Why, what happened?
ADOLF:
She cares too much what other
people thinks.
MAUREEN (O.S):
Adolf, stay there! I told you it
would be better for us if
maghiwalay na tayo.
ADOLF:
I disagree.
MAUREEN:
Great. Disagreeing is what we do
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
MAUREEN:
(Voice breaks)
Adolf, tigilan na natin ‘tong
kagaguhang ‘to. You’re being crazy.
That’s more than crazy I don’t
think there’s even a word for what
that is.
ADOLF:
Actually there’s a word for that,
its love. If you’re looking for
a word that means caring about
someone no matter how much it hurts
you, it’s love. And when you love
someone, you don’t stop —ever. Even
when people roll their eyes on you
or- or call you crazy. Even then —
especially then. You —you just
don’t give up because If I do. That
wouldn’t be love. That’s why I’m
fighting for you. I’m fighting for
us
SHANNEN:
So biktima ka rin huh? Biktima
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ADOLF:
Ano bang nangyari sa’yo?
SHANNEN:
(She shrugs)
Napagod akong mahalin siya.
Napagod ako sa paligsahang hindi
ko alam kung ba’t ako nasali.
He kept comparing me to his past
relationship. I’m just tired of
loving him while not being me, you
know? I just don’t know how to
keep up the act.
ADOLF:
So you realized that you have
so much love to give and you’re
giving it to someone who treats
you like shit?
ADOLF (CONTINUED):
I can relate. ‘Yan ang problema
sa’kin, I always search endless
love,
from places where it never begins.
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
SHANNEN:
Love is not love if it’s not
requited, right?
ADOLF:
Naks, naman lakas maka emote neto.
SHANNEN:
Ikaw kaya… pero yung totoo did you
love her?
ADOLF:
Define pag-ibig? Lust? Attraction?
Attachment? It doesn’t matter.
It’s just orchestrated by chemicals
in the brain. As a nursing student,
I know these facts cold. Knowing
them helped me get over her
betrayal. I believe that love are
just chemicals and coincidences.
But why does sometimes it feels
like so much more.
SHANNEN:
Why do we feel like this? We’re
good people right? Kajowa-jowa
naman tayo. Why does good people
always fall to the wrong person?
ADOLF:
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SHANNEN:
So kasalanan ko pa kung bakit
nagkakaganito ako ngayon?
ADOLF:
Medyo, but always remember this…
ADOLF (CONTINUED):
You matter and you’re worth it.
Find
someone who understands this.
SHANNEN:
(She shakes her head)
I think I’m done searching. I have
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
SHANNEN (V.O):
That was one of the best thing that
happened to me: you, coming to my
life.
I should’ve known that it was too
good
to be true. I should’ve enjoyed it
while it lasted.
MONTAGE:
- Shannen haven’t heard from Adolf
for almost a week. He gave her
nothing, no calls, no text, no
reason to stay.
<END MONTAGE>
ADOLF:
Shannen, I’m so—
SHANNEN:
(Sobbing)
I let down my defenses on you.
You’ve made me think that you’re
different. I was hoping that for
once that my story —no,
our story wouldn’t end in a
trajedy. Pero who am I kidding?
I don’t deserve true love.
Hindi ko deserve sumaya. Magsalita
ka Adolf!
SHANNEN (CONTINUED):
(Angry)
Masaya ka na? ‘Yan ka naman ‘di ba?
Pa fall? Pinaniwala mo ‘ko sa mga
pangako mo.
(Pity)
May nasabi ba ako? Gusto mo ba
akong umalis? Yung totoo minahal mo
ba
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ADOLF:
I could never do that to you.
Forget what I said about love and
chemicals, what I feel for you is
beyond that. I love you, Shan. It’s
just my mom—
SHANNEN:
(Shocked)
Your mom? What happened to your
mom?
SHANNEN:
(She refers to the plants)
All of these, para sa kaniya?
Adolf nodded.
SHANNEN (CONTINUED):
Akala ko para sa girlfriend mo
‘to?
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ADOLF:
(refers to his mom)
It was para sa babaeng
pinakamamahal ko. Bonsai is her
favorite tree.
ADOLF’S MOTHER:
Lagi mong tatandaan anak, ang
kahalagahan ng isang bonsai. Itong
simpleng halaman na’to ay
nagsisimbolo sa tunay na pag-ibig.
(referring to the bonsai)
Love is flexible and foldable. Ikaw
ang nagmamay ari ng puso mo. Para
hindi masaktan, magmahal ng sapat.
Walang labis, walang kulang. Ikaw
lang ang makakapagsabi kung sino
ang
nagpapatibok ng puso mo at kanino
ka susugal-
ADOLF:
(Smiling)
Kaya ang bonsai at pagmamahal
should
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
SHANNEN:
Are you waiting for a round of
applause? Or-
ADOLF:
Oh, I’m waiting for something
alright.
And it’s not for an applause.
ADOLF:
Hi ma. It’s been 4 years.
Hanggang ngayon hindi parin ako
nakakapaniwalang wala ka na. At
tsaka
ma, may good news ako sa’yo
(He looks at Shannen)
Engaged na po kami.
SHANNEN:
Promise po aalagaan ko ‘tong
singsing na’to at aalagaan ko at
mamahalin ang anak niyo.
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ADOLF:
Pangako, mamahalin namin ang isa’t
isa…
SHANNEN:
(She looked at him)
…gaya ng pagmamahal na ibinigay sa
isang bonsai.
ADOLF (V.O):
“All that I love, I fold over
once.
And once again, and keep in a box.”
When we fall in love hindi natin
masusukat kung sapat ba o kulang
ang ating pagmamahal. To tell you
honestly, it doesn’t matter. Loving
someone less would only hurt your
chances of finding your soul mate.
Yung feeling na you give everything
HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
ROLL CREDITS
<END>
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I appeal to you therefore, brothers, by the mercies of God, to present your
bodies as a living sacrifice, holy and acceptable to God, which is your spiritual
worship. Do not be conformed to this world, but be transformed by the renewal
of your mind, that by testing you may discern what is the will of God, what is
good and acceptable and perfect. -Romans 12:1
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HIDLAW: SHORT FILM
REFERENCE:
The phrase “We accept the love we think we deserve” is a quote from
Stephen Chbosky’s The Perks of Being a Wallflower— a coming of age
novel.