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Critical Reading – Summary-Response Essay

TEAM 4
RIZKI NAUFAL (119400009)
HERU HERMAWAN (119120023)
NANDINI ZAHRA RAHAYU (119160015)
GABRIEL MEHA (119170029)
JULIANTO MULDANI (119170029)
ILHAM RIZQI PRATAMA (119210037)
ELYSABET SITINJAK (119230016)
MUHAMMAD HAITZAM ASSYAKI (119300024)

THE IMPACTS OF INTERNET TO SOCIETY

The Internet is very important part of life a new generation in the society. Due to the new generation,
a new culture is building. The culture of selfies, propaganda, stress, comparison, depression is growing
faster online. Many people feel comfortable to share the point of views on the Internet but never implemented
that in their own life. On the internet, everyone is speaking but fewer people are listening and very few of
them are implementing the tips. It means 1 student and 1000 teachers. It’s reducing the analysis power of
people. And this is the biggest negative impact of the internet on society. Today, people don’t care about
their neighbors. They care about their online friends. It’s because societies are becoming comfortable. And
no one cares about the problems practically such as environmental changes. The Internet is becoming the
source of raising fund for a social cause. And in reality, only a few societies using that fund for the social and
environmental development.
The Internet is creating robotic societies. A society with hybrid skills doing like, comments but
doesn’t have feelings and own impact on his/her social shares.  This can be the negative impact of the
internet on society. The negative use of internet in society only possible then when people have lack of
knowledge, how to use? When to use? What to communicate and what not. And I thinks It’s really important
to guide kids, students, and teens from childhood about the disadvantages of internet.
The Internet is a network of online connected servers, desktop computers, laptop and mobile
phones. And societies are now inside this internet network. Everyone wants to get out from the internet to
able to spend some time with families, friends, and relatives with their moments. But most the of people are
addicted to the internet. And it’s losing the connection and bond of having a family, friends, and relatives.
Without the practical internet and computer knowledge, it’s tough to get even a computer operator job after
an MCA degree. That’s why schools around the world teaching students computer and internet skills. Even
they are using the computer and the internet to teach. The Internet is transforming the social transactions by
the use of the internet. Best wishes, happy birthday wishes or happy marriage anniversary to gift cards such
things are now sent by the using internet and this is nothing more than artificial care.
The Internet is also helping the politicians to infect the society by dividing the unity of people by
producing communalism and casteism material on the internet. Producers of communalism and casteism in
the society never develop the society. But they use it to get votes and favor of people in the election. All kind
societies, cultures are got affected around the globe by such kind of group of people on the internet. Society
is bound to support Individualism. Society is in the trap of dilemma on the internet.  Societies will be
becoming handicapped very soon if such political practices not ignored by people on the Internet and social
media.
Society is a group of cultures, objectives. humans, plants, animals, water, sun, everything that we
see and touch is the part of society. But do you think girls are safe, do you see development in natural
resources and most importantly do you care about plants, water, humanity. If not you then who will. You’re
the society, you’re the leader. But our society is living a digital life. Internet dazzled the eyes of society and in
between this it’s very tough to decide right and wrong on the internet. And now you can think, how worse can
be the disadvantages of the internet for the society.
There are so many inappropriate materials on social media sites and internet. Such material I don’t
think will be good for children, teenagers. There are so many hacking information and data on the internet.
Even children are hacking the websites today. Privacy and Internet security of the society are the biggest
concern for people very soon. There is nothing about privacy on the internet. It’s very tough even for the
government of various countries to protect user’s privacy. We’re using various apps in mobile and you know
that 90% of apps ask your permission or give access to use your photos, contacts and other data. You don’t
have other option to install the apps on the phone if you don’t want to do that. This is the biggest challenge
for the society to do mobile banking and cashless transactions. Because the data is compromised by such
companies and there is no guarantee that you’re safe or not. When government websites are hacked, when
big companies websites are hacked then what do you think your data and privacy is safe. Any apps can
influence to install in the mobile and you don’t have time to think what is behind the seen.
This is how privacy and security of people are comprised through the ithe nternet. It’s another
biggest and most trending disadvantage of the internet. It’s very easy for hackers to hack mobile, internet
banking and money wallets. Because you don’t have options, you see various eye-catching links on the
internet Facebook and Whatsapp etc.  Not all links you click and access the applications on the internet are
safe. When accounts of political parties are hacked then what do you think about the common people in the
society. So it’s very tough to be safe on the internet. But who care? No one has time, society is busy in the
religion controversies and superstition activities instead of cleaning dust from their goals and that is Human
Development and Environmental development.

(Vijay Kumar, 2016, http://www.klientsolutech.com)

Exercise for “THE IMPACTS OF INTERNET TO SOCIETY” :


Introduction
Vijay Kumar, The Impact of Internet to Society
“The Internet is very important part of life a new generation in the society.”
Opinion : “Today, people don’t care about their neighbors. They care about their online friends. It’s
because societies are becoming comfortable.”

Body
Major Point : “The culture of selfies, propaganda, stress, comparison, depression is growing faster
online. Many people feel comfortable to share the point of views on the Internet but never
implemented that in their own life.”
Topic Sentence : “this is the biggest negative impact of the internet on society.”
Proof : “The negative use of internet in society only possible then when people have lack of
knowledge, how to use? When to use? What to communicate and what not. And I thinks It’s really
important to guide kids, students, and teens from childhood about the disadvantages of internet.”
(Examples)
Suggestion : “And in reality, only a few societies using that fund for the social and
environmental development.”

Conclusion
So it’s very tough to be safe on the internet. But who care? No one has time, society is busy
in the religion controversies and superstition activities instead of cleaning dust from their goals
and that is Human Development and Environmental development.

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