BIU2032

ENGLISH PROFICIENCY 3

LECTURER
CIK AMREET KAUR A/P JAGEER SINGH

TITLE
“DESCRIPTIVE ESSAY: MY DAD IS THE MOST INTERESTING PERSON”

NAMA SUZRIANAH AMPOM

NO MATRIK D20201094535
FAKULTI FAKULTI SAINS KEMANUSIAAN
EMEL D094535@SISWA.UPSI.EDU.MY
ESSAY OUTLINE

i) INTRODUCTION
- Topic : My dad is the most interesting person
: Everyone have their own opinion about whom they’re interested with.
: I find that, my dad is the most interesting person I’ve ever met.
- Thesis: Sharing about what did my dad do to make sure that I will grow up to
become a good person.

ii) BODY
Point 1
He always care about me.

Adjective can be used:

Time-Food-School Things.

Elaborations:
-He spend his time for me so that we can have a quality time together.
-He works hard so that our family will have a good and healthy food to eat.
-He always ask me about school to ensure that everything is good.

Point 2
He is good at making my family happy and feel safe.

Adjective can be used:

Surrounding

Elaborations:
-He always make sure that our surroundings is in a good condition.

Point 3
He is a loyal father to my mom.

Adjective can be use:

Love-Trust-Happy

Elaborations:
-My dad always make sure that he will never hurt mom.
-He always make himself avoid from things that can lead to a fight with mom.

iii) CONCLUSION
I love my dad so much- making our family feel safe whenever he is with us-will
make him proud someday.
 Every person in this world, will have their opinion about whom they interested with
either to an artist, an actor, a musician, sport player or even gamers. As for my opinion, I find
that, my dad are the most interesting person in my life. Yes, my dad was not an artist, but he
has make my life feel happy, he was not an actor, but he has taught me how to be a good person,
he is not a musician, but he makes me feel relaxed whenever he talked to me, he is not a sport
player, but he teach me how to keep my body in a good shape, and he is not even a gamers, but
he taught me how to be successful in life. So I’m am going to share a little bit about what makes
me think that my dad is the most interesting person.

First of all, my dad always care about me and our family. He is a person who always
spend his time with us after getting back from work. He doesn’t care about his tiredness after
working all day long. I still remember last time when he arrived at home on the evening, he ran
to me to hug me and said “Hello Suzy, I’m excited to get home because I’m missing my little
princess so much”. It may sounds simple, but it’s enough to make me feel so happy. After that,
he will go and hug the entire family and only then he went to the bathroom to take a bath.
Besides that, he always ensure that our family will have a nutritious food so our healthy are
always in good shape. He told us not to eat too much junk food because it doesn’t give us a
good nutrition for our body that will lead to diabetes if we took too much sweet in our food.
So, my dad start to buy a good food, such as vegetables, sandwiches, meat, and all of the food
that is good for our body. Not only that, he also guide us on keeping a healthy diet. Lastly, he
always ask me either I have enough school equipment such as, note book, text book, my school
uniform and many other things that related to school.

Another reason for me which make me think that my dad is a superhero is, he always
put his family at the first place. This is because, he will always make sure that our family happy
and feel safe. Before leaving the house for his duty, he will check around the house to ensure
that there is no harmful things after he leaves the house. I still remember last time, when my
dad found a big venomous snake inside the unused tires at the backyard of the house. He then
quickly grab the shovel and scare the snake away and then asked my brother to pull out the tire
and put them back in the garage. After a few day, he decided to clean the backyard with my
oldest brother. This is why I see my dad as the superhero for our family.

Last but not least, I see my dad as the most interesting person because of his loyalty to
mom. As we all know that a good family comes from two loving people which is the mother,
and the father. My dad really loves mom that he are willing to not to include himself too much
with his friends at night. This is because, he knows that mom wanted him to have enough rest
so he can work in a good condition for the next day. He’ll make sure that he do everything that
won’t hurt my mom’s feeling. Sometimes, both of them were misunderstanding but my dad
still manage to discuss the problem with my mom in a gentle way. He won’t talk too much and
give my mom space to explain what exactly mad her angry. From my perspective, I can clearly
see that my dad are in love with my mom and that makes me so happy with my dad. That’s
why I think that my dad is the most interesting person.

As a conclusion, I love my dad so much without any doubt because we all feel safe
whenever he is with us. I Promise to my dad that I will make him proud of me someday and I
promise that I will be a good person like him. As for me, no one can ever replace my dad in
my life.