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English 102 Essay 3
English 102 Essay 3
English 102 Essay 3
English 102
April 6, 2011
There are tractors and trucks, skid steers and log splitters rushing up the long dirt drive
way to different paddocks. Today is the day everyone from the barn is required to show up and
help rebuild the barn fences. I fit my car in the only open space to park. I am immediately
greeted my four huge dogs. I spot Jen giving out directions to some boarders. She must be very
happy her dad sells all this lumber. All of the horses are locked in their stalls. I feel bad because
it is so nice out. Jen introduces me to all the men working on the equipment. I say hi and try to
remember all their names. Soon I learn that they are all her brothers. I walk around to see who is
there. I spot Jen’s daughter and another little girl from the barn playing in the ring. It makes me
smile because I remember being that young and having the same passion for horses that they
One of the boarders that I did not get to know yet was walking around aimlessly with a
hammer. Jen redirected her to the muddy paddock. I watched as she sunk in her English riding
boots, cursing that she just bought them. She walks over to someone working on the fence and
starts to complain saying she does not know why she has to be here. Her father pays to keep her
horse here and she should have to partake in repairing fences. I find Hoss, the owner of the
Frisian stallion. I finally get to talk one on one about his plans for Elvis. He tells me that Elvis is
behaving so much better now that he gets out every day in the round pen. I smile and tell him
that’s really great and just from the small amount of time I have been coming to the barn I have
seem a drastic improvement of his ground manners. I make a point to also point out how great
his feet look. “They do, don’t they. Well for another year or so he will be barefoot and then he
will go to shoes. I mean, I want to make sure he has the best of the best. My dad was a mounted
police officer and his horses were always shoed. They have been forever.” Elvis will start next
year (he will begin the processes of being able to ride and taking the bit, the metal instrument
used to steer most horse). He’s a little over two years old and his bones are not done growing,
starting to ride to early can lead to serious health issues regarding bones and joints. A lot of race
horses have such problems. Today is really busy but I get to see everyone at the barn at once and
Bri and Lindsey are working together on taking all the electric fencing down. They are
always together at the barn; I have never once seen them apart, except when one is riding. They
got their shared horse Busta off the race track last year. He just was not what the owners wanted.
A thoroughbred, like Busta, is used for racing. Most do not make up the time needed to race.
They put a lot of work into him in the past year. Lindsey said it’s really hard to go to school so
far away and only get to see him on the weekends. Bri just smiles. She says she goes to school
locally and visits him every day before work even if it is to just give him an apple. They tell me
he has on metal shoes because their vet advised them to leave them on when they asked if he
could go barefoot.
As I continue walking around I see Jens daughter, Kay. Kay’s friend runs up to me very
enthusiastically, saying that they get to ride later when the fences are finished. They bring me
over to a very older looking small pony. Kay tells me Dusty is going to be one hundred and sixty
seven tomorrow and she is very excited to make her a cake! I do not even have to ask any
questions because she is talking so fast and indulging in her whole five year life stories. She has
been riding since the day her mom let her come out of her tummy. Last year she needed help
riding Dusty, “mommy would have to hold the long rope so Dusty wouldn’t run me into the
street but now I don’t need help, I am five”. She gives Dusty a pat just as fast as she was talking
I ran into a boarder I only had met only once when she made clear by her facial
expressions she did not want to me bother her. I saw her struggling to get her paint gelding to
walk past all the commotion of the bob cats. He was rearing up and she was trying to pull him
back down. Not only is she not doing the correct thing she could get hurt. I walk over and ask if
she wants help. She hands me the lead rope and tells me that she doubts I could if she could not.
I imagined she would think that in her head but I wasn’t really expecting her to say it out loud.
When her horse reared up again I stepped to the side of him and pulled his head to the side that
way he lost his balance and had to come back down. I made him do a circles giving me my space
but also to distract him from the bob cat and he simply walked right by. I hand the lead rope back
to her and tell her I had work with a horse that rears and tries to strike out. As I walking away
she introduces herself as Jill and asked me more about the horse I work with.
After talking to Jill about what I did she finally opened up. As a kid she moved around a
lot and never made any real friends. She didn’t like sports. “My mom got really worried about
me so one day she drove me to a dressage barn in Pennsylvania and that’s where I started”. She
met her now husband while buying the horse Baby, that was rearing up. He was selling him
because he had adopted him from a rescue just to fatten him up and sell him. I smile and wait for
her to continue but she doesn’t. The little connection I had made by helping her with Baby had
left her memory and she looks aggravated to be talking with me. I thanked her for her time and
took me so long. She grew up riding and loving the sport. She competed since she was a young
girl, hunt seat and jumping. When the opportunity came along to build a barn behind her dad
house she jumped at the idea. The barn had started off as a full board facility (where the barn
manager takes full care of your horse). She told me she got her paint pony gelding Roper when
he was six months old. She started him and trained him into the jumper he is now, eight years
later. After she got pregnant with her daughter Kay she decided she wanted to do a co-op barn so
that she could be home with the baby and still keep her dream of having a barn. She was so
excited to have a daughter so that she could pass on the passion for horses. She tells me that at
times it can be difficult to run a business on your father’s property but she admits she would
never be able to have her barn without him. And she adds she would never be able to afford all
the lumber they are using today. Jen tells me her biggest pet peeve is when her boarders slack off
on their duties. They only have to do a shift two or three times a week and they have it pretty
easy. She adds that she hates when people run out of hay and not even asking use her hay to feed
the horses that do not have any. “I mean of course I do not want a horse to go a night without a
few flakes of hay but at least ask me first, you know”. I tell her I understood I used to be at a
barn that I literally had to only bring over enough food for the day because if I left my hay there
it would be gone much quicker. She rolls her eyes and says she cannot stand it! Her horse Roper
was left barefoot and never shod. He had nice feet as a baby. He was her first and only horse that
was barefoot. Now that Kay is in kindergarten she is excited to start working with Hoss’ horse
Elvis. She had loved starting Roper and wanted to start another project. She admits she never has
worked with a stallion but will not let that be an excuse to let him get away with anything. I
apologized for having to cut short but she needed to redirect her brother and boyfriend who were
enjoying their cold beer more than getting the posts in the ground. Before she left the tack room
she turned and told me if I wanted to talk to someone with a very different outlook on horses to
talk to Kandice. She points her out as the girl who had complained about having to help.
Kandice practically sprints over to me. She looked more excited to get away from the
fences than she is to talk to me. After only a few minutes of talking with her I realized what Jen
had meant about her having a different outlook. She spends five minutes dominating the
conversation complaining about why she was here. She tells me that she rides when she has the
time, and her dad pays for whatever she wants. I wear a forced smile as she tells me that she
want to get a Hoverian cross but she could not get one until she helped do the fences. I tell her
thank you for your time but I will be late to my client’s barn if I don’t leave right now. I wave
bye to Jen who gives me a “wasn’t I right” look. As I maneuvered my car around all the
equipment and piles of wood I realized my many assumptions where wrong about most of the
boarders. I was intrigued with Jen and her true knowledge of horses. After talking to with
Kandice I had instance flash backs of the prissy annoying girls that were at the barn were I
worked at when I was little. I decided I needed to stop assuming things about a person just by the
style that they ride because I liked and respected most of the people at MagicPenny.
Bibliography
The article by Emily Grimm is her interpretation of how to take care of horses.
I read through this article and really thought that I would be able to extract some of what
the author thought was the correct way to care for a horse. I Could compare it to not only
the way that Magic Penny Cared for their horses but how natural horsemanship
Kaplan-Leiserson, Eva. "Horse sense for leaders: in this leadership course, horses have the reins.
This article was more based on natural horsemanship. Much what I do with Moon and the
horses I work with. I thought I would be able to use this a a comparison to the previous
article. I could use this to also compare to how Magic Penny keeps their horses.
This is another great book about natural horsemanship. His book is more broken down
offer advise from many well know horse trainers, veterinarians and clinicians. This is
worldwide known horseman. I learned a lot from this book when I was starting a young
foal I worked with. I can tie this in my paper just by the way some of the boarders ride
Roberts, Monty. Shy Boy The Horse That Came in from the Wild. New York: HarperCollins,
2000. Print.
This book is about a man known as a horse whisperer who was able to join up with a wild
mustang using humane methods much different from the methods used at that time. He
has been to many clinics and has a world of knowledge he loves to get out to all different
types of people.
"The green guide for horse owners and riders; sustainable practices for horse care, stable
7 Apr. 2011.
This was another article that was written on how to take care of horses. I am not
completely sure how this will tie into my paper but it was worth having down as another
cite.
This article gives a clear and concise outline of the laws in Hanover on how to keep your
horse and the regulations you need to follow. This will be useful for me because Magic
Penny is a stable in Hanover. The barn needs to follow these rules and regulations.