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Research Essay Updated 2
Benjamin Schweinberg
Professor Cook
ENG 1201
27 October 2021
colleges?
Many students like me have an extremely hard decision to make in their senior year of
high school. All the different opportunities that other schools offer make it difficult to decide on
one school. When it comes down to it, what are the most important factors of colleges that help
everyone choose their dream school? Many say that it depends on an individual's importance but
is there a common factor that applies? The most important factor to be considered is a balance
between education and social life. Being mentally stable is an ability that students struggle with
Most colleges base their advertisements on three main things such as COA (Cost of
attendance), Rankings, Student Life. The 3 advertisements can be used by every single person
and their situation. COA aims more towards the parents because of the financials and Rankings
for anyone who cant come to see the campus such as foreign students wanting an American
education. Last is student life which appeals to the students to see what their life will be like for
the next 4 years or so. Colleges make it very easy to learn about their education and campus.
Most non-profit colleges want what’s best for you so they try to be as transparent as possible. I
have been to many colleges for official visits and every time I have gone they have said in some
sort of way, “Hopefully you will all find the right college for you”. Hearing this made me feel
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welcomed but not forced to go to the college I was visiting and reassured me that this doesn’t
have to be the college I go to but rather this helps me find the qualities I want in a college.
Some students don't have much choice or say especially if their tuition is being supported
by their parents. Most parents consider colleges based on the “value” of colleges for obvious
reasons, but a lot of students base it off of “Tangible” features (Rafi). The most common tangible
features include housing, food, and campus appearance. Most students don't take into
consideration the cost of tuition or even COA since most students have someone to help them
pay for college. Most tangible features make the college look nicer and overall more appealing to
the average student. This attribute makes students feel safe and also very clean. I know by my
experiences I don’t even go to unnamed grocery stores because of the fact they are extremely
outdated all the time and just don’t feel clean and the look of the building sets the setting for the
rest of your shopping trip. To put that into perspective for a student, that would make future
Lots of foreign students (Chinese for example) top decision-making factor is rankings.
Rankings make their college decision process a lot easier because they cannot afford to fly across
the world to visit these campuses to find all the different importances that the locals can see.
International students also don’t have in-state or out-of-state tuition so staying close to “home”
isn’t nearly as important to them as to American students. Foreign students also have more
scholarships available to them as foreign students studying in the United States are very minimal
so they are an extreme minority. Being a minority has its challenges like language barriers and
not having any friends to start with but also has its positives such as getting more scholarships,
aid, and extra help with starting out. This is why most universities that are well known have an
extremely diverse student population and a large percentage of foreign students looking to
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further their education in the states (Rafi). If universities could make a common way to look at
schools from the local’s standpoint and check all their boxes off without having to visit would be
great. We already have virtual visits but they always show you the best parts of campus and
never the others. If you could walk through the whole campus on your own kind of like how
google maps has a move-around view from the road I think that would give a more appealing
and enhanced “visit” for foreign students wanting to study in the United States.
Even if this technology was available Foreign Students still don’t get to find their perfect
college considering they miss out on one of the large parts of choosing a college, the Student
Life. One of the main reasons that they miss out on student life is that they can’t talk to the
students or tour guides in person. The in-person connection you build with someone teaches you
a lot about what their life has been like for the past few years living on campus. I know when
visiting a few colleges locally I saw the social scene in everyone at the college and nobody was
walking or talking together and that was a big difference. The social scene is very important to
me because of the obvious reasons for being left alone. With all the stress school puts on you,
you need friends to have your back and support you through the hard journey of college life.
Moving out of your home to a college dorm can be very difficult for some but moving to a
different country is extremely difficult. I could never imagine leaving my family, friends, and
home to go to a different country for education but sometimes it’s the only way if you want to
further yourself in a struggling country. Social life is very important to many college students
and can sometimes be difficult for others but without someone to support you, college can be
Rankings of schools are very important but for the average student in America rankings
don't stand out. Most students choose a list of priorities and most often you will hear the saying,
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“Choose the place that feels like home”. Now, most students want to try and get away from their
home life but this new feeling is something different. Going on a campus visit and getting that
feeling of excitement along with comfort and security is what everyone wants in their daily lives.
There are so many features to come with colleges that it feels overwhelming but this makes
every college different. Many students don’t know exactly what they want or like but alumni at
my school say, “Your mind will click when you find the one” (Neeley). Going on a college visit
lets you experience that effect of comfort and switch in your mind. College visits are the most
important part of your college application process and if you are considering a college and don’t
know exactly if you would enjoy it there, you should visit it (Shao)!
Some believe that Quality and Reputation of schools are very important in the decision
process of choosing a school and can be many leading factors of a decision between two similar
schools. A lot of students chose or are nudged to go to certain colleges because of their family
history. Although you can get more scholarships if you had a family member go to the same
school that’s not always why they go through. Growing up you watch the colleges football
games, basketball games, etc. You build a relationship with the school and you don’t even notice
it. Sometimes you even go to their games and those are some of the childhood memories you
never forgot. Having fun experiences there with your family can sometimes force your mind to
tell you that you have to go to that college because of that reason in particular. Your family
builds that reputation for you. The quality of the school is a very broad topic and can be
determined by every single thing the college does and offers. It’s the overall look and review of
the campus which you can assess by taking a visit and only a visit because every college is
different for everyone. Just like one student could say New York University is so dirty and trashy
but another student finds it as a treasure and how beautiful the city life is.
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According to the US Board of Education in a recent poll, they have found out that the 3
study, and Job placement (US Board of Education). While these are very important and are a part
of your academic experiences I’m very surprised by the results. Simply this chart is a small ratio
of students and should have been changed by a multiplier of 10 in student poll size. For instance,
this study isn’t accurate with the small amount of data collected between students and colleges
but knowing the US Board of Education this information should have been accurate. As you age
through high school students come to a realization that they are getting older and older and time
is flying by. Taking that this study is from a group of 9th Graders (Freshman) they haven’t been
able to consider this “social” aspect of schools. With seniors at my school, most have stated that
they want a school that has a very good balance of education and social life around campus. This
balance lets you live out your college experience while being able to get the very specific
Job placement after college is extremely important considering how much you are
investing in order to possibly get a well and high-paying job after graduation. Investments can be
worth it if you take the right steps and invest in certain areas. While you invest almost 100k
dollars and 4 years of your life to further your education job placement is very important. Job
placement is a new advertisement that colleges have started to adapt considering it is very
important. To introduce students into the workforce most larger universities have started doing
co-ops for some of their majors like engineering. This helps get internships and work experience
on your resume so that when the time comes to get a full-time job in the workforce you have the
experience you need to succeed in your desired field. All of my local colleges have taken in co-
ops and they have largely spread from the Cincinnati, OH metropolis area. As stated by the
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National Center for Educational Statistics, the employment rate was highest for 25 - 34 year-olds
with a bachelor’s degree or higher coming in at 87%. The employment rate for those with some
college at 80% was higher than those who had completed just high school at 74%, which was
higher than those who never completed high school 57% ”(NCES). This says that if you go to
college you are more likely to find a job by 13% if you attend college. This is most likely caused
by the experience you receive in college in your desired field. This helps you network and build
connections with businesses that help you into the workforce so that you have experience.
Having experience is another type of education, its field education. Having experience is
something that employers look for because they don’t want to take the time to train you. Having
this training makes you a valuable asset meaning companies want you which helps you have
Cost of Attendance, Every single topic I researched always came back to money and the
cost of college. The cost of attending a public college is extremely expensive even after aid. This
is hard for every student in America to go to college because of the financial setback it has. Most
of the loans you will have to take out get placed on the parents of the student which makes it
difficult for individuals who grew up in a low-income house to go to college. The cost at every
institution is different for everyone. They give out aid for different reasons and maybe one
college fits your situation more making you receive more aid to go to that institution. Boiling
down to it whatever institution that you get more funding to go to that meets your criteria is
normally the place students end up going. Student debt is a serious issue that the whole country
suffers from. Education Data Initiative states, 43.2 million students are in debt around an average
of $39,351 each (Hanson). Almost every student in America has this same amount of debt just
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from school and it becomes a very large part of everyone’s life. This makes it very clear that the
biggest part of college is how much it truly costs to attend a public university.
For me, taking college visits has been an extremely helpful source for my research in
choosing the right college. For me, I have used all 3 common advertisements to see what the
school’s interest is in, if it’s standing out in the rankings or if it is a college that wants to further
your life and your education. Finding your place mostly means where you fit in and what type of
activities and programs you can get involved in. Getting to learn about all these different clubs
and activities they have up-close lets you learn so much more about what you want and where
you can have all of those things. Now, most colleges all have the same clubs that you can get
involved in its cool to see the community that runs these clubs and organizations so that you can
look out for who you will be possibly hanging out with or studying with in the future. College is
most important for school but you can get an education everywhere just with a different logo on
it. A logo of Harvard or Brown would look a whole lot better but most public universities don’t
make a difference if you go to the University of Cincinnati or The Ohio State. You will be at
school for around 4 years, that’s a lot of time to be stressed out about homework or exams
without having some social life. What means most for me is finding a place where I feel at home
and safe. There can be tangible features that deter or push someone to go to that college but
everyone is different in their own ways and one college may feel like home to one person but not
to the next.
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