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Table of Contents
Where to Find Example of Clever Headlines ........................................................................ 4
Use Power Words .................................................................................................................... 5
The Ideal Length...................................................................................................................... 6
Formats for Headlines ............................................................................................................. 6
Great Headlines That Led to Media Coverage ...................................................................... 7
How and When to Use Sub-Heads ......................................................................................... 8
Now, Start Writing................................................................................................................... 9
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Tips for Writing Eye-Catching Headlines
for Your News Releases and Articles
Special Report #39
An editor will toss the best news release right into the
newsroom wastebasket if the headline is flat, dull and
lifeless.
You can apply many of the tips you read here not only to
news releases but to headlines you are writing for
informational products such as special reports and audio
tapes, speeches and headlines posted at the top of pages
at your web site.
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In my media workshops, I suggest that people regularly
scan the headlines on the front of the major magazines
while they are waiting in line at the grocery store. Start
compiling a list of the ones that catch your attention.
Then when you need a headline for a how-to article you
are writing, or a speech you will deliver, simply remove
one or two words from the original headline and
substitute them with your own words. Here are some
examples of headlines that originally appeared in major
magazines. I’ve removed one word so that you substitute
your own:
Free
Best-Ever
New
Improved
More
Better
Powerful
Authentic
Simple
Easy
Incredible
Smart
Save
Win
Tame
Helping
Inspired
Unique
Genuine
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The Ideal Length
Some of the best headlines are the shortest, usually no
more than 7 words. You can create punch and pizzazz
with just a few words. Here are some examples:
Always in a Rush?
18 Time-Savers
Direct Quotes
Testimonial
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Great Headlines That Led to Media Coverage
For a book and web site on preventing baldness, Bev
Harris of Talion.com came up with this great headline
designed to get her client, Jonathon Phillips, booked on
radio talk shows so he could share his tips on treatments
for baldness. It landed 5 bookings in major markets in
Use the words just one day:
“You” and “Yours.”
They speak directly TOP TEN BALD GUYS WHO'D LOOK BETTER WITH
HAIR
to the reader.
For a story on office organizing products like in-boxes,
31-day bill organizers, leather-look file binders, Bev did
a news search to find articles about organizing and to
discover hooks that had worked elsewhere. “I discovered
a wonderful quote by a prominent reporter, and used a
quote for the headline:
HEADLINE:
" 'Death by clutter,' that's what my obituary will say,"
wrote Julie Tripp, of Newhouse News Service.
LEAD PARAGRAPH:
People often view their mess as failure. But being
disorganized is just a problem to be solved; it's not a
character flaw. And the professionals say it's not too hard
to get organized, with the right tools....
HEADLINE
Bizarre and entertaining TRUE TRAVEL STORIES
... and AIRLINE SECURITY
LEAD PARAGRAPH:
The author of the world's greatest repository of bad
travel experiences! - Roger Rapoport's humorous "bad
travel experience" books have hit an all-time sales record
as travelers relate to unusual and strange travel
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experiences. Guess what? Stories from your audience
may end up in the next book, about weird travel after
September 11! A fantastic guest, Roger Rapoport is a
long-time travel editor, formerly of the Oakland Tribune,
and has also written books about airline security. He can
do either humorous or serious talk segments. Rapoport
has traveled nonstop since Sept. 11 and can answer
questions on any aspect of today's travel experiences.
First, you can use them just below the main headline in a
news release—either in the same point size or a slightly
smaller point size—simply to give more information,
explain the “why” of the story, or answer a question you
posed in the main headline. Here’s an example:
New Baby?
Answers to Your Top Questions
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Even though you see exclamation marks used liberally in
the tabloids and on the covers of national magazines, it’s
best to refrain from using them with news releases and
how-to articles. A well-written headline makes its own
exclamation.
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verbs, more descriptive adjectives, or a clever turn of
phrase.
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