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Final Draft English 2010 Information Effect Project 1
Final Draft English 2010 Information Effect Project 1
Final Draft English 2010 Information Effect Project 1
Kaylah Golder
English 2010
Beth Bailey
09/25/2021
In 2017 there was an estimate that 17.3 million adults had depression in the United
States. During the COVID-19 pandemic the United States economic recession affected a lot of
people negatively with stress and emotional ups and downs and this caused many people’s
mental health to increase. About 4 out of 10 adults reported symptoms of anxiety and
depression during the coronavirus. Several people lost jobs which caused a lot of financial
stress in adults, and young adults had closures of schools and also lost some income as well.
KFF article states that “a larger than average share of young adults (ages 18-24) report
symptoms of anxiety and/or depressive disorder.” This is a very young age that is being
affected. Many of the “essential workers” during COVID-19 were faced with contracted the
coronavirus along with other several other challenges such as loss in money, furloughed, and
had new requirements that had to be done in order for them to work. 42% of the essential
workers reported depression and anxiety and 22% of them had suicidal thoughts during the
pandemic.
amount they spent on their electronics by 44%. Everything was shut down and we could not see
family or friends. We had to communicate with everyone over text, social media, facetime,
phone calls etc. So did our electronics also cause people to become more depressed during this
time? In the article “Electronic media use and symptoms of depression among adolescents in
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Norway”, the Norwegian Social Research group did a study on 12,353 people in the ages of 15-
16 years old. Their odds of becoming more depressed because of social media and being on it
for more than 3 hours a day was much higher than those that were on social media less than 3
hours a day. When you are consumed on social media you are not being able to interact with
other people so you are not able to communicate with others and create friendships. The
conclusion of this study found out that the more you are on social media or games the higher
your chances are of becoming depressed. That is why adolescence during COVID-19 were very
depressed. They were on their electronics more and not able to go out and do fun activities
with friends. They were isolated at home having to do school work online, which caused many
teenagers to not interact with friends and teachers which is another factor to depression rates
soaring in adolescents.
Many people do not know how to help their feelings of depression but there are studies
being done to try and find ways to treat depression. Neuromodulation seems to be “emerging
gradually as a new therapeutic field in psychiatric treatment.” The Vagus nerve stimulation
(VNS), is a device that has proved efficacy with pharmaco-resistant epilepsy. VNS is a type of
approach and it is implanted and gives a pulse that is able to stimulate the vagal afferent fibers
in the neck and this allows the impulse to go to the brain stem and target the locus coeruleus
and dorsal raphe nucleus. Depression is common and is reoccurring to many people so this
treatment can have success and failures. With depression being connected to suicide, the
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treatments percentage of failing is about 20-40%. This is a lot of failures but with more studies
being done this could potentially be the cure for fixing severe depression in adults and young
adults. The VNS device has been studied for a long time, it was in Europe since 1994 and in the
US in 1997. Even if the VNS device hasn’t helped with depression, it has improved the mood of
the epilepsy patients, and they are in better control of their seizures. So the VNS device has at
1. The first image is the percentage of depression disorders in 2019 vs. 2021
2. The second image is the VNS device that get implanted to help give pulsed to the brain
Reflection:
I feel like my final draft ended up being really good. All of the feedback that I got from
everyone really helped me to know what I needed to fix. I added more photos to my essay so it
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could capture and help the reader to know what I was stating. I feel like my tone throughout
the whole essay is very mature. I am not downplaying depression and I am giving all of the facts
Works Cited
Authors:
Italiya, Yashvi (Links to an external site.) italiyayashvi@gmail.com
Nakhat, Preeti (Links to an external site.) preeti.nakhat@gmail.com
Almost Depression among Teens and Young Adults
https://libprox1.slcc.edu/login?url=https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?
direct=true&db=asn&AN=141184981&site=eds-live&scope=site
Authors:
Kleppang, Annette Løvheim1 (AUTHOR) annette.kleppang@inn.no
Steigen, Anne Mari2 (AUTHOR)
Ma, Li1,3 (AUTHOR)
Søberg Finbråten, Hanne2 (AUTHOR)
Hagquist, Curt1,4 (AUTHOR)
Title: Electronic media use and symptoms of depression among adolescents in Norway.
https://libprox1.slcc.edu/login?url=https://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?
direct=true&db=asn&AN=151270049&site=eds-live&scope=site
Author:
John P. O’Reardon, MD, Pilar Cristancho, MD, and Andrew D. Peshek, MD
Title: Vagus Nerve Stimulation (VNS) and Treatment of Depression: To the Brainstem and
Beyond
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2990624/
Authors:
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https://www.nimh.nih.gov/health/statistics/major-depression