Name: _____Lauren Perez__________________ Date: _____10/7/21______________________

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
1. One of my peers agreed on how it was starting to sound argumentative, which I will change because this essay it
mainly based off of analyzing.

2.One of them also said that towards the end of my introduction my sentence flow started to sound choppy, which I
agree because I did not have a general base idea of how I wanted to end my introduction.

3.They also said that I should add more information and scientific background on gender fluidity, and I agree because
I was mainly talking about how it is overlooked/discussed.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. Although one of them mentioned that I should add more information, I am not sure if I will because I don’t want to
overwhelm the introduction with too much information.

2. I had asked my peers if there was any unnecessary information dealing with my introduction and they no. I agree
and disagree because there are some unnecessary points.

3. One of my peers didn’t like my second sentence because it was starting to look argumentative although I think it
would benefit my introduction.

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. Rewrite my introduction

2. Make sure it doesn’t sound argumentative

3. Make sure my sources are going to benefit my topic on gender fluidity

4. Have my essay well organized

5. Have my essay be complete or close to completion

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