Name: _______Lauren Perez____________________________ Date: _____9/14/21____________

Working with Peer Feedback

Directions: In the space provided below respond to these questions.
What are the three things you’ll change based upon your peers’ responses? Why will you change each one?
1. My overall structure, they liked how it was but personally I know there needs to be adjustments.

2. My Research Question, they liked where I was going, but it needed more. The question wasn’t supported
enough.

3. Get rid of unnecessary information, because I had mentioned BMI is involved in police academies, military,
firefighter academies, etc. they thought it would be best to focus on the experiment.

What are three things you’ll keep despite your peers’ responses? Why will you keep each one?
1. I am debating whether to keep how BMI is used in police academies, military, firefighter academies, etc. because
it could help my research question.

2. They suggested that the beginning statement in methods should be reworded, but I think it is best to leave it there
because it fits the section.

3. They have also suggested how the ending statement of my method section should be reworded as well, but I think
it will be best to leave it because it also helps the section.

What work do you have left to do after today to successfully complete the project?

1. Work on my Methods/Experiment

2.Work on my Results

3. Work on my Discussion

4. Work on my citations

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