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(03-08) Writing 3 - Contrasting
(03-08) Writing 3 - Contrasting
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Some young people look forward to a year of travelling, a 'gap year'; before they begin
work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons. For others this is an
expensive waste of time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a new trend that many youngsters want to take a gap year to travel before going to work or
study. While some people say it is a waste of money, I believe that pursuing a gap year provides
worthwhile benefits to students.
On one hand, there are two reasons why young people should not travel in gap year. Firstly,
students may get in debt because of traveling. Transportation and accommodation expenses
require a huge amount of money which could be a burden to travelers and might drive them
deeper into debt. Secondly, the gappers might lose the motivation to maintain formal education
or daily job. In fact, after a long time of break, the gappers might find hard to readapt to the
normal routine, especially the impractical theories in classes or the repetitive tasks in office jobs.
Such challenges could let these people disoriented in their life.
On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students to take a break. To begin with,
the invaluable benefit of taking gap year is independence. Most of youngsters are lack of financial
self-control and decision-making skills because of living with parents. Therefore, a sufficient
break time could be a need for them to gain more confidence and grow up as mature adults.
Furthermore, travelers can gain more actual knowledge than they do in any classes. Spending
some time in a country while working is a great opportunity for the youth to increase naturally the
working experience and learn new languages. Such vital skills can be an important advantage in a
more international oriented economy.
In conclusion, the matter of whether students should take taking a deferred year is subjected
to receive different views. from people, in In my opinion, young people should step out of
comfort zone and challenges themselves to find their true passions.
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