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Untitled: General Metrics
Untitled: General Metrics
Untitled: General Metrics
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by Su Deng
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Being able to work as a team is one of the essential qualities for a person to
learn. I didn't participate in much teamwork. But I took part in a few groups
when I was in high school. Let's me share such one experience when I had to
work in a team. I vividly remember it. Back in grade-10, two of my friend and I
were chosen to do a presentation. The teacher didn't give the topic; we could
share anything. We decided to collect lists of student results of primary to
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make it visualizing. It was essential to making it on time and managed our duty.
So we decided to have a meeting to determine who would do what. My duty was
to turn the raw list into data visualization in Excel. It took me two days to nish
creating beautiful dashboards so that it would be interesting. Then I gave them
to my friends to prepare in PowerPoint. We discussed what kind of design we
would like. It was great. We saw eye to eye on our project and even couraged
each other. We rehearsed for three days and we tried our best to do everything.
Finally, my friends presented the report to the audience. I was so happy
because I realized our teacher said it was helpful. The teacher could decide
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which subject should be improved depending on the students' results. ggg