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Unit 11 - Parallel Structure
Unit 11 - Parallel Structure
CHAPTER 11
THE PARALLEL STRUCTURES
A. PRE TEST
Direction: These questions are incomplete sentences. Beneath each sentence you will
see four words or phrases, marked (A), (B), (C), and (D).Choose the one word or phrase
that the best complete the sentence.
All of these sentences contain faulty parallelism. Although they are factually correct,
the construction is clunky and confusing. In the first example, three different verb forms
are used. In the second and third examples, the writer begins each sentence by using a
noun (coordination, jeans), but ends with a phrase (to have good eyesight, wearing a
suit). Now read the same three sentences that have correct parallelism.
Mr. Brown likes to go home early, but his wife prefers to stay
Clause Clause
late.
Errors in parallel structure can slip when we write word, phrase and sentences. It can
be happened with Correlative Conjunction (Paired Conjunctions) These are the major
correlative conjunctions such as:
Look at and study the following examples of using non- parallel structure and
parallel structure with gerund:
No Non-Parallel Structure Parallel Structure
1 Thinking and to run usually Thinking and running usually accompany
accompany one another as I exercise. one another as I exercise.
2 I hate talking and discussed with her. Shelly hates talking and discussing with
Brown
3 My brother enjoys weight lifting, to My brother enjoys weight lifting,
cycle and hiking. cycling and hiking.
A parallel structure that begins with clauses must keep on with clauses. Changing to
another pattern or changing the voice of the verb (from active to passive or vice versa)
will break the parallelism. Be consistent when introducing each clause.
Example:
Non-Parallel Structure Parallel Structure
I did not want to go to the dance I did not want to go to the dance
because I was worried that none of because I was worried that none of my
my friends would be there, of the friends would be there, that it would be
expense, and that I would miss my too expensive, and that I would miss
dog. my dog.
Note: This sentence does not use
‘that’ in all three parts so it is not
considered parallel.
Mr. Brown likes to go home early, but his wife prefers to stay
Clause CC Clause
late.
6 The coach told the players that they The coach told the players that they should
should get a lot of sleep, that they should get a lot of sleep, that they should not eat too
not eat too much, and to do some much, and that they should do some
warm-up exercises before the game. warm-up exercises before the game.
As the examples below show, a series whose components are not in parallel format sounds
awkward and may cause misunderstanding.
Examples:
No Non-Parallel Structure Parallel Structure
1 The tribes emphasized collective survival,
The tribes emphasized collective survival,
mutual aid, and being responsible for one
mutual aid, and responsibility for one
another.
another.
2 The frustrated customer wanted to The frustrated customer wanted to exchange the
exchange the article, to obtain a refund, or article, to obtain a refund, or to speak to the
she wanted to speak to the manager. manager.
The frustrated customer wanted to exchange the
article, obtain a refund, or speak to the manager.
D. POST TEST
Direction: From the four underlined words or phrases A, B, C, or D, identify the one that is not
correct, and correct it.
1. Ballpoint pens are less versatile but more population than fountain pens.
A B C D
2. Riddles vary greatly in both grammatical and phonology form.
A B C D
3. Blood pressure is measured by feeling the pulse and apply a force to the arm.
A B C D
4. The Moon has no atmosphere, no air, and no watery.
A B C D
5. The first matches were too hard to ignite, a mess, or too dangerously easy to ignite.
A B C D
6. A 1971 U.S. government policy not put warnings on cigarette packs but also banning
A B C
television advertising of cigarettes.
D
7. Demand, beauty, durability, rare, and perfection of cutting determine the value of a
A B C D
gemstone.
8. The Harvard Yard, which was Harvard’s original campus, is still a major attraction for both
A B C
students and visiting.
D
9. In 1862, the American Confederacy raised the Merrimack, renamed in the Virginia, covered
A B
it iron plates, and an outfit it with ten guns.
C D
10. The liquid crystals in a liquid crystal display (LCD) affect the polarized light so that it is
A B C
25. The sounds produced by bullfrogs and toads vary greatly because each species have its own
A B C
particular call.
D