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● After Bastian gives the Childlike Empress her new name, Moon Child, she disappears
○ Transition sentence from the previous paragraph and introduces the new topic
● The AURYN is a powerful object in Bastian’s hands, since it fulfills any wishes that
Bastian has, while unknowingly, taking away memories of his original life.
any wishes that Bastian has, while taking away memories of his original life.
● At first, Bastian uses the AURYN for reasons that he deems “good” but with time, the
power of AURYN causes him to go out of control and use it for more selfish reasons.
● In the beginning, Bastian has good intentions and says, “Here's my wish: That you shall
fall asleep. That when you wake up, you shall crawl out of your skins and turn into
bright-colored butterflies. That you shall be lighthearted and happy" (Ende 291).
named Acharis which Bastian encounters. In the beginning, Bastian has good
intentions and says, “Here's my wish: That you shall fall asleep. That when you
wake up, you shall crawl out of your skins and turn into bright-colored butterflies.
when he is being crowned emperor, “Every single delegate, when his turn came, had to
bow down before the throne, touch the ground three times with his forehead, kiss
● Ende creates a contrast in Bastian’s personality using these events to show how too much
power can end up being destructive. Originally Bastian would use his wishes on actions
that he deems helpful to others, such as turning the Acharis, the Everlasting Weepers into
the Shlamoofs, the Everlasting Laughers, since he saw how miserable they were in their
bodies. However as time went on, he starts to use his wishes for his own gain and
pleasure where he made citizens of Fantastica kiss his foot to prove their loyalty to him
show how too much power can end up being destructive. Originally Bastian
would use his wishes on actions that he deems helpful to others, such as turning
the Acharis, the Everlasting Weepers into the Shlamoofs, the Everlasting
Laughers, since he saw how miserable they were in their bodies. However as time
went on, he starts to use his wishes for his own gain and pleasure.
● Furthermore, Bastian becomes paranoid and loses trust in Atreyu as the power gets to his
head when Atreyu was actually trying to save him. Bastian says, “I didn't ask for your
opinion. You make me sick with your lecturing. And now you question my victory and
ridicule my magnanimity … Shut up and leave me be! … I'm sick of you!” (Ende 331).
● Up until this point, Atreyu was someone that Bastian considered his friend and someone
he could confide in, but with the excess of power Bastian has, he ends up disrespecting
○ Revision: Up until this point, Atreyu was someone that Bastian considered his
friend and someone he could confide in, but with the excess of power Bastian has,
in this situation as she has turned Bastian against one of his closest friends, which
furthers her agenda of turning him into an empty shell. Without a friendly advisor,
Xayide seizes the opportunity to convince Bastian to use his wishes for trivial
● Due to the excess of power, Bastian ends up losing parts of himself—his memories—to
character development, Ende teaches readers that too much power, such as having
unlimited wishes, can get to one’s head and change them into becoming selfish and
ignorant.
○ Wrap up paragraph
○ Revision: (Add to the end) With great power, Bastian also received great strength