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Essay 3 With Comments
Essay 3 With Comments
Jessica Rodrigues
April 6, 2011
English 102
Professor Williams
The goal of the Safety Escort Service is a free way to provide students of all ages, with or
without cars, transportation everyday of the week from 7pm to 3am. In the beginning of the
school year, a Bridgewater State University student was seriously injured after a motor vehicle
struck her at 6pm while walking across the street. It is the goal of BSU to keep their students
safe in school and safety makes achieving that objective easier. This objective is met because
they are able to provide such a secure and useful service to their students.
Many students depend on the safety van to get them from Point A to Point B during
different days of the week and various weather climates. I have witnessed Safety being elbow
to elbow, with students and their tightly sealed water bottles in hand, and smelt students who
have reeked of marijuana on Thursday nights. There is a wide range of diversity among the
students who utilize the escort program; some with leg injuries, some who have smelled really
bad, and some who were blatantly rude to the drivers because they were showing off in front
of their friends. Many students riding on safety talk in hushed tones about private matters
about who they just got back from seeing, where they are going to party next and how they are
going to get their friend who is too intoxicated to walk on their own into their residence hall.
One night while I was observing in a Safety van the driver went to Tower Lot to pick up
students, one in particular who boarded was a tall, thin, male carry something wrapped in
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aluminum foil and smelled quite terribly. As he boarded he stated his destination of Shae/Durg
and the ride over was silent, you couldn’t even hear someone breathe. After two drop-offs at
Pope and Scott Hall the driver’s friend, who rode in the passenger’s seat, mumbled “thank god”
and let out a deep breath. Both of them laughed it off innocently and the driver jokingly asked if
he can “kick people off for smelling”. The driver also mentioned how he does not enjoy when
women wear too much perfume as the smell lingers in the van and becomes unbearable.
During my observations I befriended a few of the drivers who were open and welcoming
of my purpose in sitting along for the ride. This allowed me the chance to talk with them and
hear of experiences on safety as a driver from a different view point. Many of the drivers listen
to the radio or their own iPod because sometimes the sound of a person’s voice bothers them
as well as their personal conversations. Many times students will request to put on a certain
music station and if the driver is nice enough they will, but most often since the driver is stuck
driving between the hours of 7pm and 3am with a quick bathroom or 20 minute break in
Recently I had the opportunity to speak with a safety dispatcher at the location of the
BSU Police Department. Isabel, an active BSU student, was very welcoming to the idea of my
interviewing her and observing safety. I first began with asking her how long she has been with
the Safety Escort Program and found out that she has been working with safety for 7 semesters
and received the job as an owed favor from a Lieutenant to her older sister after her wallet was
lost and never found. Initially, Isabel began employment at Parking Services but when Safety
needed her help her temporary switch transformed into a permanent position. She then
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informed me that she enjoys working as a dispatcher when people are kind in requesting safety
and as a driver when other students compliment her on doing a great job because it makes her
feel like her role in Safety is important and that she matters. However, some days she feels as if
her place working for Safety goes unappreciated when students call and hang up, call
repeatedly because they are impatient, and call to complain that “safety is taking too long”. She
also noted that such occurrences are most common on the busiest nights of the week which
she explained were Thursday, Fridays and Sundays due to off campus parties, students coming
from bars, and the need to get to and from the Tower Parking Lot. She states that on busy
nights she can “barely put down the phone for a second before it rings again, and it could go on
for more than a minute”. Isabel, then took me into the responsibilities needed to ensure that
safety is running smoothly which includes answering the escort’s phone line, completing the
safety escort dispatching log and the daily ridership counts. I asked Isabel about her views
regarding Safety’s hours of operation and its usage by students. She stated “It really bothers me
when I see people using the escort service out of laziness”, because she understands how busy
they are and feels that in most cases if people were to walk to their destination they may
already be there if they were not waiting for a van to pick them. She also believes the proper
way to use the assistance of the safety van is when students are carrying boxes or bags, are
physically injured, or the weather conditions inhibits the students ability to get around campus
safely. I asked Isabel to take me through a memorable experience on a night she was working,
she began to explain an instance where a student once seated himself in the passenger’s seat,
which she feels is always uncomfortable for her, started talking to her as if they had been long
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time friends and in addition, went as far as asking her for her cell phone number to go out
sometime.
John, one of the few certified drivers of the large bus, has been with the Safety Escort
service for two semesters. I got to know that he is a geography major which heightened my
curiosity as to why, out of all the job opportunities on campus, he chose to drive safety. I was
surprised at his response of “I’ve always wanted to work for safety, since I was a freshman, I
just thought it was the coolest job ever, plus I’m a night person so the hours are really easy for
me”. As John was driving to pick up at the location of East hall, my question pertaining to what
he thinks about safety was temporarily interrupted. He slowed down and jerked the steering
wheel to the left to avoid the “Yield for pedestrians” sign in the middle of the road, he said “I
hate those things, they are so annoying because they always move out of place when people hit
them, like look right there” and he pointed to yet another sign, which was dented and hanging
lopsided. I thought it was funny because those signs are not something the smaller passenger
van drivers have to worry about. Reverting back to my question, John said he feels that the
Safety Escort at BSU is important in keeping students safe “especially girls because they should
not have to walk alone at night, it is not safe for anyone to walk in the dark by themselves”. He
added that one night in particular, to this day, stands out to him because a sober, female
passenger chatted him up and said “you’re the bestest safety driver ever!” and asked him for
his phone number. I asked him what he would do in the event that a drunk student boarded
safety and he said it is part of his job to radio dispatch and ask for a health and safety check
using a code word because even thought the student is not in a dorm or building, they are
required to follow school policies regarding suspicious behavior. He also said that he would not
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want to have to clean up puke even though it is easier on the bus which has a water hose for
that particular purpose. As we were driving back to the west side of campus and passing Burrill
Ave, I was curious to know why the BSU shuttles were permitted to drive down that road but
Safety were not. He answered my question, the same question many passengers of safety have,
with “at night when safety runs, there were a lot of people running everywhere, and they used
to dodge in front of Safety vans randomly, from what other Safety Escort drivers have told me”.
There were also complaints made by residents of Bridgewater and it becomes a liability issue
As we were driving by the set of lights on Summer Street I noticed that John turned on
his hazard lights when another Safety van drove by, even though we were not stopping for a
pick up. Before I could ask him why he did that, he told me “turning on our lights is our way of
saying ‘Hi’ to each other since its dark and we can’t see when the other person waves”.
I recently interviewed a female friend whose view on safety is that “They take you
everywhere and back”. She told me she boarded safety around 2:50am after a night out and
“everyone was intoxicated. Safety was so packed we had to lap up, because no other van
wanted to come”. Normally safety is prohibited from driving if it has reached capacity because
it is a safety concern if passengers are not able to buckle-up if they choose. However, since it
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was close to 3am the other vans were headed back to park for the night and end their shift. She
enjoys using safety because she knows she will get home safely no matter how long it takes, it
-Headed Home-
After several rides using the BSU Safety Escort and interviews with students and
employees it can be assumed that many students find it beneficial. During the nighttime,
popular weekdays and poor weather conditions the BSU Safety Escort achieves its goal in
providing students with a safe and free way of traveling across campus. When students need a
It seems to me that you are working on an overall structure for the whole project here. Many
of the sections, including the conclusion needs more details, but I know you have that
information from your second essay. I think this organization works for the final project, now
Annotated Bibliography
“Bridgewater State University Safety Escort Service.” Bridgew.edu. Bridgewater State University,
10 October 2010. Web 6 April 2011.
This source is very reliable in stating how the free transportation works, who benefits, and what
the rules and guidelines are. This source is the source I will compare and contrast my other
sources with. This fits into my research because there is no other kind of source that knows
more about this specific schools safety escort service than the school itself.
“Eagle Transportation, Boston College Police Department”. www.bc.edu. Boston College. March
2011. Web 6 April 2011.
This source is very reliable in stating how the free transportation works, who benefits, and what
the rules and guidelines are. I will use this source to compare to and contrast with my first
source. This fits into my research because there is no other kind of source that knows more
about this specific schools safety escort service than the school website itself.
“Getting There...From Here, Your School. Traveling on the Consortium Shuttle”. Worcester:
Colleges of Worcester Consortium, 2010. Web. 6 Apr. 2011.
This source is very reliable in stating how the free transportation works, who benefits, and what
the rules and guidelines are. I will use this source to compare to and contrast with my first
source. This fits into my research because there is no other kind of source that knows more
about this specific schools safety escort service than the school website itself.
This source is very reliable in stating how the free transportation works, who benefits, and what
the rules and guidelines are. I will use this source to compare to and contrast with my first
source. This fits into my research because there is no other kind of source that knows more
about this specific schools safety escort service than the school website itself.
“Shuttle & Escorts.” www.wsc.ma.edu. Westfield State University. 2011. Web 6 April 2011.
This source is very reliable in stating how the free transportation works, who benefits, and what
the rules and guidelines are. I will use this source to compare to and contrast with my first
source. This fits into my research because there is no other kind of source that knows more
about this specific schools safety escort service than the school website itself.
All your sources are cited properly in MLA. The annotations, although basic do give some
sense of the context and relevance. If you find that comparing Saftey with that at local
schools is useful in your project than you should. If not then don’t.