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Andrew Winscher - College Application Essay Final Draft
Andrew Winscher - College Application Essay Final Draft
Andy Winscher
Practical Writing
Mrs. Gagne
6 December 2021
Unwind
Imagine a society where it is legal to cut up the so-called “troubled teens'' into millions of
pieces just because their parents think they are going to be trouble in the future. In the book
series Unwind it is referred to as “unwinding” and is a very controversial topic in their society.
There are also people they refer to as tithes who are people that have been selected to be
unwound since birth. When you are unwound every body part and organ is cut up and sold at
auctions to the more fortunate. The storyline follows people from both sides of Unwinding and
how one side is working to eliminate it and the other is trying to make it even more common.
This story follows a few main characters Connor, Risa, and Lev. It also incorporates a
few other characters throughout the story who have a big impact on the final outcome. It starts
with the main character, Connor, who figured out that his parents were going to sign an Unwind
order over a fight he got into with his father. He decides to test his luck and become AWOL and
gain support in his fight against unwinding. Risa, who had lived in a state home had also ran
away once she discovered she was going to be unwound and ended up forming a friendship with
Connor. Finally Lev who was a tithe on his way to be unwound when Connor and Risa caused a
traffic stop and took Lev from the vehicle in order to save him from unwinding. After we are
introduced to the main characters we follow their life and the courageous acts to try and end the
This book immediately caught my attention because of all the action that was going on in
the story. You could never set the book down without wanting to figure out what was going to
happen next and the steps the main characters were going to take in order to stop the killing of
teens. The author did a great job on moving from character to character and keeping what was
going on with everyone fresh in the readers minds. The author definitely gained my respect and
A way this could be brought up in our society is people wanting to do something for
troubled teenagers to try and make the world a better place. This could be a problem because you
wouldn’t give children second chances in life and the ability to change who they are. A lot of
kids are brought up into bad households and don’t know much different than to act up all the
time. However these children can always turn their life around once they are introduced to the
real world.
In conclusion this was a very good book and I would definitely recommend it to anyone
who enjoys books that have a lot of action and always keeps you on your toes and ready to read
more. It was perfect for me after struggling to find a book that I could actually read and enjoy.