Task1

b- introduction 1

a-introduction 2

Introduction 1: sentence 1. Background information sentences: 2, 3, 4. Thesis statement: 5,6.

Introduction2: sentence 1. Background information statement:2,3,4,5. Thesis statement:6.

4. necessary: B,D. optional: A,C

Task 2
1

Introduction 1: B

introduction2:A

A more balanced argument: A

Point by point essay structure: B

Convincing arguments: B

Structure B

Task 3
1

Against: 1,2,3,5,7.

For:4,6

1,2,3,5.

Task 4
Perspectives: business, social life, law, commerce.
Definition of cybercrime: crime that can be committed by using the internet.

Examples of threats: identity theft, hacking computers.

Supporting evidence/ statistics: in the UK cyber-attacks are estimated to be costing businesses 10 Billion
a year, whilst in US 33 Billion a year.

Task 5
1
1. identity crimes, cyber-bulling
2. That all crimes are significant and should be treated seriously whether online or ‘real world.’
3. The growth of internet-related crime.

1. These crimes

2. These worrying developments

3. Such criminal activity

4. Challenge 5 significant

6. These crimes are

Task 6
Introduction 3

1. An interesting contextualizing sentence – sentence 1

2. Background information – not included

3. A definition of key terms – sentence 2

4. Further information – sentences 3, 4, 5

5. A clear thesis statement – sentence 6