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ENGL 102 Essay 2 Assignment
ENGL 102 Essay 2 Assignment
ENGL 102 Essay 2 Assignment
ENGL 102
The Negative Effect of Racism on Identity in “Tell Me What You Think of Me” by
Alexandra Chang’s short story “Tell Me What You Think of Me” and Ta-Nehisi Coates’
essay “Letter To My Son” both reflect on the role of racism in identity, the first through the
fictional experiences of a Chinese narrator and the second through the reality of being Black in
America. In both cases, the narrators’ accounts of their experiences demonstrate how racism
affects their sense of self in relation to how they perceive themselves and how they are perceived
by others. In this essay, I will discuss how the identities of minorities are shaped by the social
norms in a dominant White culture by examining the emotional response that the narrators have
to racism, the narrators’ sense of belonging in their ethnic groups and how they feel they are
perceived by others, as well as the effect of racism on individual identity in order to better
understand racism’s detrimental effect on not only the minorities, but society as a whole. The
narrators’ experiences with racism demonstrate its negative effect on individual and group
identity, and considering current events where race continues to play a large role in the type of
treatment that is received, the need for society to be more accepting and inclusive is emphasized.
Chang’s narrator and Coates have differing emotional responses when they encounter
racism, largely due to their understanding of what position their racial group occupies in the
social hierarchy. The former’s uncertainty about her position in society is evident in her
conflicted feelings about her supposedly good deed, whereas Coates’ awareness of America’s
greatness being at the expense of lowly Blacks results in him feeling angered by the poor
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treatment of Black people. The narrator’s confusion arises from the discrepancy between the
identity that the white woman assigned to her by smiling at her instead of angrily dismissing her
as one of the “coloreds” (Chang 5) and her personal identification with the shunned Pakistanis as
an “us” (Chang 6), a member of a minority group. The narrator originally concludes that helping
the fallen white woman “felt right” (Chang 4), but later feels like she “did something terrible, or
at least something not right” (Chang 9) by continuing to help the woman after her racist
behaviour towards the couple but not her. In contrast, Coates is aware of the low ranking of
Black people in the social hierarchy and is frustrated that police are “endowed with the authority
to destroy [Black bodies]” (84) with little repercussion because “[t]he law did not protect [Black
people]” (85). This brutality perpetuates the American legacy which “aspires to the shackling of
black bodies” (Coates 84) because being “white ‘mattered’” (Coates 87) the most. These
emotional reactions to racism in Chang’s fictional story and Coates' lived experience
demonstrate how being identified as part of certain races within the racial hierarchy can affect
Chang and Coates’ stories demonstrate how racism and its accompanying preconceived
notions affect the treatment of minority groups as well as its members’ sense of belonging in
society. Both texts demonstrate the importance of feeling solidarity with others, group identity,
and how it shapes the way the world perceives an individual as well as how they perceive the
world. The racist woman’s hierarchy of race and presumption that the South Asian community
was solely responsible as the coloreds “taking over the neighborhood” (Chang 5) results in
rudeness towards the couple, but not the narrator. However, the narrator’s solidarity with the
Pakistani couple, reflected in her prediction that they were thinking “you’re like us” (Chang 6),
contradicts the identity the woman assigns her as not one of the coloreds and causes a conflict in
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who the narrator believes she is. The woman’s refusal to correctly acknowledge the narrator’s
racial identity causes her to wonder “how had [the White woman] not seen [her]?” (Chang 9) and
prompts the narrator’s internal declaration of the Chinese as “[her] people” (Chang 9) which
demonstrates the significant role the group racial identity plays in determining individual
identity. Coates describes how White society displaying power “direct[ly] (lynching) and …
“insidious[ly] (redlining)” (88) had reduced Black people to inferior race that were unworthy
“the same respect as those that built the West” (88). Coates’ realization that “some of these
straight-haired people with blue eyes have been ‘black’” (88), despite White America being a
devastating conqueror, implies that being Black was more than just a skin color, but a culture.
This is supported by his declaration that “[Black people] made [them]selves into a people”
(Coates 88), noting that this solidarity borne against fighting White dominance created a group
identity that played a vital role in his identity as a Black person. Chang and Coates both suggest
that while racism may incorrectly presume identity, having a sense of belonging to a larger group
The two texts demonstrate how the coping mechanisms that individuals employ to deal
with racism can negatively affect individual identity. Chang’s narrator and Coates both alter
small aspects of their behaviours, and ultimately their identities, to better assimilate into Western
society and prevent others from perceiving them negatively. The narrator’s palpable relief when
the couple offers to help the struggling narrator with the woman has her admitting that although
she “[doesn’t] believe in God, in that moment [she] did” (Chang 5). The narrator’s brief change
in belief demonstrates her willingness to alter a fundamental part of herself to fix the
cumbersome situation of “two pathetic, stranded people” (Chang 4) occupying the sidewalk so
others are more comfortable. When reflecting on the woman’s reaction to the Pakistani couple,
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the narrator acknowledges that “these small moments [of microaggression] … chang[ed] the way
[she] behaved in the world” (Chang 8), thus demonstrating the harmful effect of altering identity
to make oneself more acceptable in accordance with White standards. Similarly, Coates practiced
“a culture concerned chiefly with securing the body” (86) through his conscious, careful
behaviour in “[t]he streets [which] transform[ed] every ordinary day into a series of trick
questions” (86). His deliberate actions emulated acceptable behaviours that would placate a
White society that brought upon “a beat-down, a shooting, or a pregnancy” (Coates 86) to Black
people in the streets and increase his chance of survival long enough to escape to a world “where
children did not regularly fear for their bodies” (Coates 85). Chang’s narrator and Coates both
alter their actions and beliefs to gain acceptance into the dominant White culture. However, their
individual identity.
The experiences of Chang’s narrator and Coates demonstrate the detrimental effect of
racism on their emotional wellbeing, group identity and individual identity. Unfortunately, these
occurrences have been a stark reality for Asians in light of the COVID-19 pandemic with the
New York Police Department reporting that anti-Asian hate crimes increased by 361% since
2020 (Yam) and a national online survey of US residents revealing that more than 40% of
participants were likely to engage in at least one discriminatory behaiour toward people of
Asians (Dhanani and Franz 747). Katherine Chan, a Vancouverite author, blogger and writer for
CBC, recounts her experience with an elderly couple who avoided her and her son on a walk
during the pandemic where she felt ashamed of her Asian heritage because of its negative
association with the virus and felt the need to “change [her] appearance, dye [her] hair, blend in,
[and] wear clothes that would make [her] look more white” (Chan). This reaction of forgoing
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aspects of one’s identity in favour of assimilating into the dominant White culture in society to
avoid further racism is damaging because it can negatively affect one’s sense of self. Racism has
also been proven to have a negative impact on mental health with Hwang and Goto discovering
that perceived racial discrimination was associated with outcomes such as “higher psychological
distress, suicidal ideation, state anxiety, trait anxiety, and depression” (326). Failure to eradicate
racism not only detrimentally affects minorities who bear the brunt of the emotional and physical
abuse, but also society as a whole by sending the message that certain races hold supremacy and
they will not be held accountable for their actions. Given the detrimental effects of racism on
identity and wellbeing, there is a clear need for society to be more accepting and inclusive
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