Camp half-blood t-shirts

Okay, so, the first thing I’d like changed is the design of the Camp Half-Blood t-
shirts worn by Annabeth & Piper.

Do you think you can update the design to this:

The design inside this circle looks like this:

The design for

the Pegasus
doesn’t matter.
This text says: “Long Island
Sound, NY”

Overall design idea. Follow this pattern

This picture is only for reference – because

it shows the Greek letters/symbols & the
design inside the circle clearly.

Camp JUPITER t-shirts

Could you change the Camp-Jupiter designs on Frank & Hazel to this?
 The logo
You’ve already created a beautiful logo:

But would you please add this symbol of the bird on top, like shown?

JASON GRACE
His outfit

In the drawing you did for my friend,

he is already wearing an open
purple jacket. So you can put a half-
sleeved orange Camp Half-Blood T-
shirt underneath the purple jacket.

(In other words – just reverse the

colours shown in the picture!)
Can you make
Purple shirt, Orange jacket 
these lines
Orange shirt, purple jacket  straighter. There
should be a total
of 12 lines.
 LEO VALDEZ
His outfit

He can be wearing that extremely pale & faded creamish-brown work-shirt he always wears
over his orange camp shirt. Make it so that the top part orange Camp Half-Blood T-shirt is
visible where the collar is open (see second picture). Also include the 1) hammer 2)
Archimedes sphere & 3) change the colour of the tool-belt to a metallic golden.

Dark-
orange Orange shirt
stripes underneath

Welding
goggles

Change colour of Dark-brown

tool-belt to a trousers
metallic golden
(explained in
detail in the next
page)
And also, could you make his
Could you have only one of
skin-tone slightly darker? Darker
his hands in flames, while the
than Percy but much much lighter
other holds the Archimedes
than Hazel! For example Like this
sphere?
skin-tone? Also, can you include
the scars on his arms? That’d be “He stared at the face of the
so cool! sphere—seven rings, each
one covered with tiny Greek
letters, numbers, and zodiac
signs.” – book description

Here is a picture of the

sphere for your reference.
Just make the colours gold,
brown, silver and black You can also add some elements of the Archimedes
instead of just plain yellow! sphere Leo is holding in the second picture.
His tool-belt:

silvery-blue knobs/buttons

This is what I meant. Can you change the colour of the tool belt to that golden-metallic shade – and also,
could you add those little silvery-blue knobs/buttons as shown in the second picture?

Also, change the colour of his trousers to dark brown (as shown in picture above) to contrast the metallic
golden tool-belt.

AnnAbeth’s necklace
The main thing I’d like to change is her camp-necklace and make it accurate to the book-description. Her necklace has
9 beads, as well as her father’s college ring and a red coral pendant (that Percy gave her). Here is a description of each
of the beads and the other items:

Bead 1 – Thalia’s pine tree - Green with brown trunk; golden-yellow background)

Bead 2 – A centaur in a prom dress - Brown centaur in a pink prom dress; bluish-green background

Bead 3 – Greek trireme on fire – Brown hull and black on the top with orange flames around it; violet background

Father’s college ring

Bead 4 – An eye – With blue iris; green background

Bead 5 – A white pegasus; brownish-red background

Bead 6 – A turquoise trident; black background

Bead 7 – Golden fleece; blue background

Bead 8 – Labyrinth (Black coloured); golden-brown background

Bead 9 – Picture of empire State Building (silver-white) surrounded with Greek letters (silver) and lots of golden
sparkles/stars/shimmer (not shown in picture)

Red Coral pendant from Poseidon’s palace.

NOTE:

Of course, in order for these designs to be visible, the beads must be larger than you originally drew them – but don’t
make them too large!

Beads 1,2,3,4,5 (for bead 5, follow the pattern shown in the

bigger circle) Beads 5 (follow this pattern), 6 (replace with new
pattern), 7, 8, 9 (draw golden sparkles in bead 9)

Golden fleece

Red coral pendant

OR
 PERCY JACKSON
He’s perfect as he is – “shirtless” is the best look on him, LOL!

Can you change his eye-color to bright-dark

green? It looked bluish-green in the previous
one

The only think I can think of is his skin-tone. The

books describe him as having a Mediterranean
complexion. I found the following picture
which, I think, is the perfect skin tone for Percy
– just a little more tan, but not dark:

Percy’s jeans: Could you make them

ripped at the knees?

Also, could you make Percy’s belt a

Also, let’s take advantage of the fact
that Percy is shirtless to show his
battle wounds and scars. Here is a
reference.
different colour – to contrast the colour
of his jeans? And maybe make the belt a
little bigger and give it a shinier buckle?
Maybe golden or silver?

I think the scars on his body shows

that Percy’s been through a lot, and
has been a part of many battles.
Now, coming to his camp necklace: It’s the same as this:

Just replace the Fleece symbol on the second bead with this:

…..just like you did for Annabeth’s necklace. And add golden stars/sparkles in the last bead
(the one with the picture of the Empire State Building)

Of course, the size of the beads would have to be bigger than how you originally drew them to
show the little details!

One last thing: PERCY’S SWORD RIPTIDE: I really like how you made the sword more curved in
your DeviantArt drawing. Could you make it the same here? I have made a side-by-side
comparison below.

And also, the sword’s hilt has its name on it (see picture below). It would be a nice detail to
add. (Don’t worry about the colour, it’s fine as it is).
 Keep the designs as
it is. I love it!

Make it curved like

this one, and make
the sword slightly
longer

This hilt should have

the name of the sword
written here, like this

This trident shape is exactly

Make the colours what you originally drew for my
different, as shown here. friend. But could you change its
colour to silver, like shown
The main part of the here? Silver would be a nice
sword needs no change, contrast to the otherwise
as I mentioned. It will still golden sword
be golden.

But these parts – the hilt

and the handle?

Make the hilt goldenish-

yellow – a slightly
different colour than the
main part. And make the
handle brown.
 HAZEL Levesque
It’s mentioned in “The
Mark of Athena” that
Hazel always wears a
jacket over her shirt to
make sure that Frank’s
little piece of firewood
remains safe. So I found
this reference image –
could you put the jacket
on Hazel as shown?
Make it a shade of blue
that contrasts the purple
Camp-Jupiter shirt.

I also noticed that in your DeviantArt version of the artwork, you included Hazel’s spatha
strapped to her waist. Could you maybe also include that here?
 piper mclean
Similarly, could you put this exact kind of jacket
on Piper? Same pattern, buttoned up in one
place – so that it covers the Camp Half-Blood
logo on her shirt. Just make it red.

Just like with Hazel’s spatha, could you also

draw Piper’s cornucopia strapped to her waist
too? Below is a reference image. Just make the
cornucopia more stylish – add some little
designs to it. It was actually the horn of a river
god in the books, so maybe make it look like
really beautiful, decorative horn?

Jacket. Just make it dark

red/maroon to contrast the orange.

Cornucopia. Make it beautiful, stylish

and realistic like an animal’s horn