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20 Client Attention Getting Facebook Messages Client Attention Getting Bonus
20 Client Attention Getting Facebook Messages Client Attention Getting Bonus
Facebook Messages
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Template 1:
In fact, I took the liberty to deeply analyze your social media business
page, and found out a couple of issues
that you might want to know about.
You can see all the problems in the deep analyze report
I’ve just made for your business here:
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 2:
I know this might come out of the blue, but I think we can help each
other out.
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I’m currently testing a new tool, and I managed to find a few alarming
metrics regarding your Business page.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 3:
Hi [Business Name]
I don’t want this to sound like I’m giving you advice on how to run your
business, but I have a few suggestions on improving the visibility of your
Facebook Page.
Go through the entire report and let me know if you need help fixing your
problems!
Let me know,
[Your Name]
Template 4:
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Hello [Business Name]
If you were wondering why most of your competitors appear above you, I
might have some answers.
Here are some problems that you should solve in order to rank higher:
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 5:
Hi [Business Name]
I don’t want this to sound like I’m giving you advice on how to run your
business, but I have a few suggestions on improving the visibility of your
Facebook Page.
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You can check it out here:
-- Your Funnel Link
Go through the entire report and let me know if you need help fixing your
problems!
Let me know,
[Your Name]
Template 6:
Hi [Business Name]
I hate to break the ice this way, but I think you have some underlying
problems with your Facebook page.
It’s nothing too severe, but it’s enough to keep you lagging behind your
direct competitors.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 7:
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I’m [YourName], lead social-media strategist at [Agency.Name].
Unfortunately for your business, your Facebook page does not appear in
the top 5 results when potential clients search for [BusinessNiche].
Care to know why your local competitors are ranked above you in
Facebook’s algorithm?
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 8:
Hi [Business Name]
I’m sure you’re busy running your business, but I really think this will
interest you.
You know how important social media is for a local business, right?
But do you know why your page has so little visibility on Facebook?
I’m a social media expert, and I compiled a report that shows you the
biggest weaknesses.
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If you think you need help, let me know!
Let me know,
[Your Name]
Template 9:
Our latest endeavour was to analyse your local landscape and see what
the most successful businesses are doing to stay on top of rankings .
Here are the things that are keeping you from more clients:
I hope you use our report to improve your social media presence.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 10:
Hi [Business Name]
But I think you’d want to see this. It’s important for your business...
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I’m currently playing with a new tool capable of pinpointing the reasons
why a business is not visible on social media. It does this by cross
checking them against the ranking factors that are currently relevant on
Facebook.
I used it on your Facebook just a few minutes ago. Would you like to
know what’s keeping you from generating more clients via Facebook?
If you need any help repairing those metrics that are below the
acceptable limit, let me know.
Let me know,
[Your Name]
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I then dug even deeper and used a collection of tools to figure out why
your visibility so low… Way to low considering how many likes your page
has.
I made a report to show you exactly what’s wrong with your Facebook
page:
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Let me know if you have any questions on the report!
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 12:
I know this message is a bit too direct, but I think you should see this
ASAP.
I made a report that shows you the biggest problems with your listing:
I’m sure the report will serve you well. If you have any questions let me
know.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 13:
Hi [Business Name]
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I don’t want to start out our relationship sounding like a wise-ass, but I
think you have some problems with your Facebook page.
Read it through and get back to me if you want to know how to improve
your metrics!
Let me know,
[Your Name]
Template 14:
We compiled a report that shows you exactly why your local competitors
are ahead.
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Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 15:
Hi [Business Name]
I’m not trying to tell you how to run your business, but I honestly think I
can help you with your social vizibility.
Read the report thoroughly and let me know if you have any questions.
Let me know,
[Your Name]
Template 16:
Hi [Business Name]
I know this is not the best way to start a conversation, but there’s no
good way of telling you this...
I was just looking at your Facebook page and I noticed something very
wrong with your Facebook Page...
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These shortcomings are probably the reason why your business is not
appearing in the top search results for [BusinessNiche].
Best regards,
[Your Name]
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I’m reaching out to you after my agency ran an ambitious case study,
looking at local businesses in your area.
I’m not trying to alarm you, but your Facebook business page is not
nearly as visible as you should be, given your like/share ration.
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Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 18:
Hi [Business Name]
Social media is very important for businesses nowadays, and your social
media game is below the local average.
Let me know,
[Your Name]
Template 19:
Our latest challenge was to analyse your local landscape and see what
the most successful local businesses in your area are doing to stay on
top of rankings .
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Unfortunately, your business is not among the top results when it comes
to the social media rankings...
Since I already have this data, I thought I’ll hand it over to you, so you
can improve your Facebook page.
Best regards,
[Your Name]
Template 20:
Hi [Business Name]
I just made it analyse your Facebook just a few minutes ago. Would you
like to know the results?
If you’re curious how well your business is doing, check the report below:
-- Your Funnel Link
Let me know,
[Your Name]
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