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Cae Proposal
Cae Proposal
PROPOSAL STRUCTURE
Introduction
Current Situation
Suggestions
Final Recommendations
►INTRODUCTION
The aims of this proposal are to...
This proposal evaluates....
This proposal is intended to present the...
►Main Paragraphs:
►start each paragraph with one of the following:
One idea put forward is to organise/hold.....
Another suggestion is to organise/hold......
A third idea is to organise/hold.....
►Then give a brief description of the event; highlight its strengths then its
weaknesses.
This has certain advantages/strengths such as.........
However, one possible drawback/disadvantage could be..........
►Making recommendations:
I strongly recommend/suggest buying new chairs so that students are more comfortable.
I recommend/suggest that we buy new chairs so that students are more comfortable.
It would (not) be advisable / practical to…
Perhaps the most effective way to.....
With regard to…, the general view seems to be…
►Use a gerund
Buying new chairs would be a great way to increase students’ comfort.
Investing in new chairs would lead to an increase in student comfort.
►Use a passive
New chairs should be bought so that students are more comfortable.
It is believed/obvious that investing in new chairs would lead to an increase in student
comfort.
►Effect of changes
Installing new chairs would lead to/give rise to…
Building a new common room would provide students with a place to unwind.
Improving the metro service would enable more residents to use public transport.
Investing in… would undoubtedly have a positive effect on…
Refurbishing the library would be extremely beneficial for the whole school.
Having more… would do wonders for the school’s reputation in the local area.
A report: A proposal:
Written to someone with authority (e.g. Written to someone who needs to make a
manager, boss, director, public official, etc.) or decision usually which involves spending or
peer (e.g. colleague, associate, classmate, etc.) investing money (e.g. a client or customer, a
committee, someone responsible for finances
within company or organization, etc.)
Formal in register : impersonal, objective, Usually formal in register, but could also be
avoids personal opinion and emotion. Uses the semi-formal when addressed to a committee of
passive form. peers
Writer uses language related with expressing Writer uses language in such a way that he is
opinion, listing reasons, making persuasive, besides listing reasons and making
recommendations suggestions
Written to people who can take action or affect Written to someone whose decision will
outcome directly benefit the writer in some way (e.g.
writer is a salesperson)or a group writer
belongs to (e.g. a local amateur athletic team
that needs support)
Has headings Has headings.
The general purpose of a report is to identify a The general purpose of a proposal is to
specific problem, explain it objectively and indentify a particular need, explain it and
recommend action that will lead to a solution. recommend how this need can best be met.