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Qualities of Good Writing: Imran Chaudary
Qualities of Good Writing: Imran Chaudary
Qualities of Good Writing: Imran Chaudary
Lecture 5
Imran Chaudary
Qualities of Good Writing:
CONCISENESS
1. Eliminate wordy expressions.
2. Include only relevant statements.
3. Avoid Unnecessary Repetition
Qualities of Good Writing: CONCISENESS
1. Eliminate wordy expressions
Before:
She bought chairs that are of executive type.
After:
She bought executive-type desks.
Before
There are four rules that should be observed:
After:
Four rules should be observed:
Before:
The full details of the news can be found on page 2.
After:
The full details of the news is on page 2.
Qualities of Good Writing: CONCISENESS
2. Include only relevant statements.
Stick to the purpose of the message.
Prune irrelevant words and rambling sentences.
Omit information obvious to the reader, or don’t repeat
unnecessarily.
Avoid long introductions, unnecessary explanations, excessive
adjectives and prepositions, pompous words, gushy politeness.
Get to the important point tactfully and concisely.
Before:
The writer hereby wishes to extend his gratitude and appreciation
towards all those who offered unselfish assistance in his work. (wordy)
After:
I appreciate everybody’s un-conditional help in my work.
Qualities of Good Writing: CONCISENESS
2. Include only relevant statements.
Before:
One of the primary aims of the extremely new master’s degree
program, which will offer an innovative curriculum not now available
to the area’s population, will be to draw them back into post-
graduate education to improve their communication skills. (40
words)
After:
A primary aim of the new master’s degree program, which will
offer a curriculum currently available to area residents, is to
improve communication skills. (24 words)
Qualities of Good Writing: CONCISENESS
3. Avoid Unnecessary Repetition
Use short name after the long one.
Use pronouns and initials after long names.
Cut out needless repetition.
Before:
Be sure to emphasize the important essentials.
After:
Be sure to emphasize the essentials.
Before:
We need to reach a group consensus.
After:
We need to reach a consensus.
Qualities of Good Writing:
CONCRETENESS
1. Use specific facts and figures.
2. Put action in your verbs.
3. Choose vivid, image-building words.
Qualities of Good Writing: CONCRETENESS
1. Use specific facts and figures
Specific: The Government decided … vs. The decision was made by the …
Personal: You will note … vs. It will be noted that …
Concise: Figures show … vs. It is shown by the figures …
Emphatic: The child ran a mile. vs. A mile was run by the child.
Qualities of Good Writing: CONCRETENESS
3. Choose vivid, image-building words
Before: There are a great many solder joints in the space craft, and each
must have just the right amount of solder.
After: The space craft has 2.5 million solder joints. If an extra drop of
solder had been left on these joints, the excess weight would have
been equivalent to the payload of the vehicle.
Before: The Metropolitan State will play a box and chaser defence against
City College.
After: The Metropolitan State will play a box and chaser defence
against City College. In this defence, four men will play a zone – they
will cover a specific area of the floor, rather than guarding a particular
man – while the fifth player will guard, or chase, City College’s star no
matter where he goes.
Before: The camera has a system that gives you good pictures.
After: The Nikon camera has a UNIQUELY precise metering system that
assures you PROPERLY exposed, true-colour picture.
Qualities of Good Writing:
COHERENCE
1. Use parallel structures.
2. Use transitions correctly
3. Sufficient Paragraphing
Qualities of Good Writing: COHERENCE
Some examples
Before: It took some time to choose the team. Then we developed a plan and then
finally the decision was made. All of this took six month.
After: Choosing the team, developing a plan and making the decision took us
six months. Or
To choose the team, to develop a plan and to make the decision took us six
months.
Before: The book you ordered is out of print. We are returning your check. You may
wish to contact a book search service for assistance.
After: The book you ordered is out of print. Therefore, we are returning your
check. However, You may wish to contact a book search service for
assistance. OR
The book you ordered is out of print; therefore, we are returning your check;
however, you may wish to contact a book search service for assistance.
Qualities of Good Writing:
CORRECTNESS
1. Use the right level of language.
2. Check accuracy of facts, figures and words.
3. Maintain acceptable writing mechanics.
4. Choose non-discriminatory expressions.
Qualities of Good Writing:
COMPLETENESS
1. Try to answer all of the prompts/aspects.
2. Check 5 W’s and 1 H.
Qualities of Good Writing