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Assessment Summative: Summative: Summative:
and Fractured Fairy Tale Project Opinion writing piece Informational writing piece
Evaluation
Rubric Rubric Rubric
January
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Lesson #1 Lesson #2 Lesson #4 Lesson #4
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Lesson #5 (twin day) Lesson #7 Lesson #8
9:40 – 10:15 Lesson #6 9:40 – 10:15 10:30 – 11:00
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February
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Lesson #1 Lesson #2 HOG DAY) Lesson #4
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(VALENTINES 9:45 – 10:15 Lesson #11 Lesson #12
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PATRICKS
Lesson #3 Lesson #4 Lesson #5 Division PD Day
DAY)
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Lesson #11 Lesson #12 Lesson #13 Lesson #14
9:40 – 10:15 9:45 – 10:15 9:40 – 10:15 10:30 – 11:00
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April
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School PD Day
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Cross-curricular connections: During the time this unit takes place, students will be learning about
diverse perspectives in social studies. As students gain an understanding and appreciation for the diverse
perspectives and ideas of others, this will likely help them realize that everyone has differing opinions and
supporting reasons. This will be beneficial for both classes, for students will be able to identify that it is
okay and appropriate for others to share contrasting opinions. As students learn how to opinion write, they
will also have opportunities to listen to opinions that may not match their own, but are just as unique and
important as their own.
GLO 1: students will listen, speak, read, write, view and represent to explore thoughts, ideas,
feelings and experiences
GLO 4: students will speak, read, write, view and represent to enhance the clarity and artistry of
communication
EVALUATION TOOL
OPINION WRITING PIECE
Your opinion matters! Your opinion piece must include the following:
Write with a
particular audience Unclear of targeted Knows their targeted Knows their targeted Knows their targeted
in mind audience. Language audience. Uses language audience. audience.
(3.1.2, 3.4.1) used does not match the that generally holds the Uses language Uses language in a skill
intended audience attention of their intended effectively to manner that engages the
member’s needs. audience. interest their intended audience.
intended audience.
Uses little to no Uses commas, end Uses commas, end Uses commas, end
Use proper commas, end punctuation, apostrophe punctuation, punctuation, apostrophe
capitalization and punctuation, apostrophe and quotation marks in a apostrophe and and quotation marks in
punctuation (4.2.11) and quotation marks. straightforward manner quotation marks a skillful manner to
that generally holds the effectively to engage the audience.
attention of the audience. interest the audience.
Teacher Feedback:
ASSESSMENT OVEVIEW
Learning Outcomes
Reflection Journal & Interview
Title Worksheets
Opinion Writing Piece
Formative
Purpose /
Formative
Summative
Task
Process
Competencies
Growth / Process
Development
Product Process
Product
Performance Task
Quiz / Test
Modality Write
Write Write Write
Do Say Say
Do
Say
Assessor
Self Teacher Teacher Self
Peer Teacher
Teacher
Device
Anchor / Sample /
Exemplar Worksheets
Anecdotal Notes Observation Rubric
Checklist / Rating Scale
Conversation / Q & A
Discussion Checklist
Heuristic
Rubric
Other
Audienc
Individual
e Individual
Individual
Teacher Teacher
Individual Classroom
Class / School
Community / Online
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Groupings of Learner Outcomes Learning Objectives
LESSON OVERVIEW
Lesson #1 of 12 First day introduction
Lesson #1 (Monday) time: 1.35 minutes.
Outcome(s) TBA
Assessment TBA
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Learning Activity(s) Icebreaker activity: candy-game get to know you (w/ smarties)
Students fill out get to know me with their smarties.
Share a few with the class.
Materials and Resources Bring hard paper for students to write their names on to put on their desk for the first
week.
Smarties.
Print off “get to know me” sheet.
Group activity: come up with 1-2 reasons (cut out one of the opinions from the concept
map)
End of class (have throughout unit) – add into teacher box – an opinion (an issue that is
important to them) that needs to be addressed.
Reflection journal: in your own words, what is an opinion. Describe an opinion you
have. What are the reasons for your opinion?
Learning Activity(s) Introduce OREO writing and organizing our thoughts – do exemplar together.
- Discuss what Alex did well and what he could have done better to share his
opinion.
- Introduce audience. Who was his audience?
Activity on audience.
Watch video: How to Write for Your Audience- Writing Video For Kids - YouTube
Provide exemplar opinion topic. Go over as a class, picking different audience members.
- Discuss how it changed with different audience members.
Practice: pick a topic to write on for students. Have students practice with their
organization sheets by writing their opinion and their reasons.
Have students practice different writing styles for 2 different audience members (e.g.
classmate vs. teacher).
Create together: assessment line “what makes for a good/bad opinion writing”
Materials and Resources I wanna Iguana book.
Worksheet
Computer
Smartboard
Printed out version of assessing opinion writing.
Outcome(s) 3.1 plan and focus: focus attention – identify facts and opinions, main ideas and details in oral,
print and other media texts
Assessment Worksheet
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber: Harry potter would you rather (https://minds-in-bloom.com/harry-potter-
would-you-rather-questions/)
Activity: facts vs. opinions read out loud (students for e.g., stand for opinion read out
loud, and sit for facts).
Activity and discuss: Bad vs good opinion (The Complete Guide to Opinion Writing for
Students and Teachers | Literacy Ideas) (Opinion Writing - Weak vs Strong Opinions -
Google Slides - YouTube)
- Worksheet: give weaker opinions and have students make it a stronger opinion.
- Go over as a class beforehand.
Outcome(s) 4.3 attend to conventions – attend to capitalization and punctuation: identify commas, end
punctuation, apostrophe and quotation marks when reading, and use them to assist comprehension.
Assessment Observation
Worksheet
Discussion
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber: class room activity: TEAM SOUR OR TEAM SWEET
https://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/Team-Sour-vs-Team-Sweet-An-Opinion-Writing-
Activity-2470679?st=e13045d5a278f3671a3bab0161701717
Outcome(s) 3.4 share and review: share ideas and information – organize and share ideas and information on
topics to engage familiar audiences
3.1 plan and focus: focus attention – focus topics appropriately for particular audiences.
Assessment Reflection journal
Worksheet
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Observation
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber: would you rathers (https://conversationstartersworld.com/would-you-rather-
questions/
Reflection journal
Materials and Resources Duck! Rabbit! Book
Duck! Rabbit! Worksheet
Organization and planning sheet.
Rough draft sheets.
Outcome(s) 4.2 attend to conventions: attend to grammar and usage: identify a variety of sentence types
(simple and compound sentence) and use in own writing (grade 3-4)
4.2 attend to conventions: attend to grammar and usage: distinguish between complete and
incomplete sentences (grade 3)
Assessment Reflection journal
Worksheet
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber: DOG VS CAT. https://www.teacherspayteachers.com/Product/Dog-vs-Cat-
Opinion-Writing-Prompt-and-Activity-3873519?st=e13045d5a278f3671a3bab0161701717
- Work on commas, end punctuation, apostrophe and quotation marks. (show good an dbad
examplars – go over together as a class)
Reflection journal:
Outcome(s) TBA.
Assessment
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber: PEN TALKS: Pen Talks-a partner activity to help students state their opinions and
give reasons (https://www.teachwriting.org/blog/2019/2/21/4-ways-to-get-your-students-ready-for-opinion-
writing)
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After read aloud, pass out large construction paper (groups of 2 and 2 pens). One student
writes first – write down their favorite part of the story or which character they liked the
best
Partner one then responds with another reason, etc. partners practice stating opinion and
sharing reasons for their opinions without realizing
Opinion writing begin activity: pick your own topic and write an opinion piece.
- Planning portion.
Outcome(s) TBA.
Assessment
observation
Learning Activity(s) Work on opinion writing piece.
- Rough draft and revision.
Outcome(s) TBA.
Assessment
Project piece.
Learning Activity(s) Share opinions with the class.
Cultural considerations: There exists a great opportunity to learn and appreciate diverse cultures when
reading fractured fairy tales. Many traditional fairy tales have been altered to represent another cultural
perspective. Students will be provided ample opportunities to explore various fractured fairy tales. For
example, students will not only read the traditional westernized Cinderella, but will look at fractured fairy
tales that is enriched with, for example, African and Chinese culture. By identifying similarities and
unique differences within these fractured fairy tales, students will be able to gain a deepened appreciation
for diversity.
Cross-curricular connections: The unit’s final project, creating a fractured fairy tale with an Albertan
twist, is connected to social studies. In social studies, students will be learning about Albertan history
through the stories of diverse communities. Students will tie their understanding of Albertan history and
fractured fairy tales to create their own unique fairy tale about Alberta. This is meant to bring history to
life. By reading and reflecting upon others stories, students are able to appreciate the unique voices and
perspectives of diverse communities whilst gaining an understanding of their impact on Alberta today.
Furtherly, by creating their own stories, students can personally identify their identity as an Albertan
through creating history through their own lens.
Prior knowledge: Students will be expected to have a basic understanding of the writing process, being:
prewriting, drafts, revising and editing. However, rather than leaving students on their own to participate
in this process, it will be discussed and reviewed to help students create their best version of their story.
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How can Fractured Fairy Tales help bring the story of Alberta to life?
GLO 2: students will listen, speak, read, write, view and represent to comprehend and respond
personally and critically to oral, print and other media texts
GLO 5: students will speak, read, write, view and represent to respect, support and collaborate
with others.
Identify/summarize the main events/ideas in oral, print and other media texts; explain their
causes and describe how they influence subsequent events (grade 3-4)
2.3 understand forms, elements and techniques: understand techniques and elements
Include events (connections among them), setting and characters when summarizing or
retelling oral, print or other media texts (grade 3-4)
Describe the main characters in terms of who they are, their actions in the story and their
relations with other characters (grade 3)
5.1 respect and strengthen community: appreciate diversity
Describe similarities and differences between personal experiences and experiences of
people or characters from various cultures portrayed in oral, print and other media texts
(grade 3-4).
5.1 respect others and strengthen the community: relate texts to culture
identify and discuss similar ideas or topics within stories (discuss main characters, plots,
setting and illustrations) from oral, print and other media texts from diverse cultures and
communities (grade 3-4).
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History lives through the stories of others. Stories bring history to life and help us connect
to our past, helping us forge our unique identities. For your project, you will create a fairy
tale that includes the following parts:
Off the courageous students went, to write epic fairy tales about Alberta so that others too
could understand and appreciate what it means to be Albertan! Their incredible stories
will be passed on, to others who explore the Coalhurst Elementary Library. Let’s bring
Albertan history to life!
criteria
Identify Alberta’s
cultural evolution
(Social 4.2.2,
4.2.1.1, 4.2.1.2)
(ELA 5.1.1, 5.1.3)
4.S.2
Teacher Feedback:
LESSON OVERVIEW
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Choose a book and share your favorite part & summarize the book: (use in later classes)
1. traditional Rapunzel
2. traditional Red riding hood
3. traditional Jack and the beanstalk
4. traditional Humpty Dumpty
5. traditional three little pigs
6. traditional snow white and the seven dwarfs
7. traditional princess and the pea
8. traditional goldilocks and the three bears
9. traditional Hansel and Gretel
10. traditional peter pan
11. traditional beauty and the beast
12. traditional the little mermaid
13. traditional Thumbelina
14. traditional puss n boots
15. traditional alladin
Finish: Choose a book and share your favorite part & summarize the book
Illustrate and share.
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Outcome(s) 2.3.3 (include events, setting, and characters when summarizing or retelling texts)
2.3.4 (describe main characters in terms of who they are, their actions in the story, and their
relations with other characters)
Assessment Worksheet
Observation
Learning Activity(s) QUESTION: What is a fractured fairy tale.
Activity on: characters, setting problem and solution (same story as last class). Discussion
and worksheet.
- Copy of COMPLETEFracturedFairyTaleWritingUnit.pdf
Choices:
1. The Orphan: A Cinderella Story from Greece by Anthony Manna and
Christodoula Mitakidou
2. Yeh-Shen by Ai-Ling Louie
3. Mufaro’s Beautiful Daughter: An African Tale by John Steptoe
4. Cinderella Skeleton by Robert D. San Souci
5. Bigfoot Cinderella by Tony Johnston
6. Dinorella by Pamela Duncan Edwards
7. Prince Cinders by Babette Cole
Materials and Resources Books: (if not available, find read alouds online).
The Rough-Face Girl by Rafe Martin
The Orphan: A Cinderella Story from Greece by Anthony Manna and Christodoula
Mitakidou
Yeh-Shen by Ai-Ling Louie
Mufaro’s Beautiful Daughter: An African Tale by John Steptoe
Cinderella Skeleton by Robert D. San Souci
Bigfoot Cinderella by Tony Johnston
Dinorella by Pamela Duncan Edwards
Prince Cinders by Babette Cole
worksheet
pencils.
Lesson #4 of 18
Outcome(s) 2.3.3 include events, settings and characters when summarizing or retelling text
Assessment Worksheet
observation
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber: story practice – roll a story (Roll a Story DIGITAL Writing Activity |
The Techie Teacher® )
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My fractured fairy tale story map and flow chart (CINDERELLA) – worksheet
Go over example together first.
Copy of COMPLETEFracturedFairyTaleWritingUnit.pdf
CINDERELLAFRACTUREDFAIRYTALEGRAPHICORGANIZERLUCYCALKINS-
1.pdf
Outcome(s) 4.2.1.2
4.2.2.3
Assessment Explanatory story
Observation & Discussion.
Learning Activity(s) Explanation why explanatory story and not “legends”.
Activity: students work on creating their own story explaining why things are
how they are.
Provide exemplar: why the cat chirps (show video of cat chirping)
Which story do you like better?
1) Merely give facts – short and sweet
2) Create an explanatory story (fun)
Explain the power of story-telling (memorable).
Sharing of stories.
Materials and Resources Worksheet.
Exemplar explanatory story.
Outcome(s) 2.2.4 connect own experiences with the experiences of individuals portrayed in texts
2.2.5 connect portrayals of characters or situations in texts to personal or classroom experiences
2.2.6 summarize the main ideas of texts
Assessment Worksheet
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Connect character to your own experiences.
Read together: Three Ninja Pigs - by Corey Rosen Schwartz
Discuss: connections to our own life
Question: was there ever a time you weren’t prepared enough?
Worksheet: three little ninja pigs and me.
Create your own ninja pig (Three Ninja Pigs Craft For Kids - I Heart Crafty Things)
Outcome(s)
Assessment Worksheet
observation
Learning Activity(s) Introduce performance task project
Begin working on Albertan FFT (prewrite worksheet – organize ideas).
Worksheet: FracturedFairyTaleGraphicOrganizers-1 (1).pdf & Copy of
COMPLETEFracturedFairyTaleWritingUnit.pdf
Show example: Three Little Pigs – Three Little Sharks. Display on smartboard.
Copy of COMPLETEFracturedFairyTaleWritingUnit.pdf
Outcome(s) 5.1.1 Describe similarities and differences between personal experiences and experiences of
people or characters from various cultures portrayed in oral, print and other media texts
Assessment Worksheet
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Cultural focus: similarities and differences to me.
Talisha Snow White: And Her Little Munchkins by: Aphrodyi Antoine
- WORKSHEET
Outcome(s) 5.1.3 Identify and discuss similar ideas or topics within stories (discuss main characters, plots,
setting and illustrations) from oral, print and other media texts from diverse cultures and
communities
Assessment Worksheet
observation
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber:
Outcome(s) 2.3.3 include events, settings and characters when summarizing or retelling text
2.3.4 describe main characters in terms of who they are, their actions and their relations to other
characters/
Assessment Observation
worksheet
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber:
Start working on a draft: choose characters. Begin writing information about them
(organization chart)
Worksheet: my character
Materials and Resources
Outcome(s) 2.2
2,3
Assessment Worksheet
Observation
Learning Activity(s) CHANGE THE SETTING: fractured fairy tale vs. original
The Three Little Aliens and the Big Bad Robot: by: Margaret McNamara
Hansel and Gretel by Rachel Isadora
Outcome(s) 2.2
2,3
Assessment Worksheet
Observation
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Outcome(s)
Assessment Worksheet
Observation
Learning Activity(s) work on writing a rough draft.
Go over editing
Show example: Three Little Pigs – Three Little Sharks. Display on smartboard.
Copy of COMPLETEFracturedFairyTaleWritingUnit.pdf
Outcome(s) TBA.
Assessment Observation
Checklist?
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber:
Outcome(s) TBA.
Assessment Observation
Checklist?
Learning Activity(s) Attention grabber: Story Telling Practice: “spin a story” (Spin-A-Story - Narrative
Writing Prompts and Writing Plan Template (teacherspayteachers.com)
Outcome(s) TBA.
Assessment
Project piece – story.
Learning Activity(s)
Reader’s circle
To ensure students are able to understand the various steps of organizing, researching and writing
informational pieces, lessons will either incorporate mentor texts or teacher writing examples that are
meant to help scaffold students learning and understanding. As a new teacher to all things pertaining to
English Language Arts, many of the ideas and activities displayed throughout this unit has been created by
educator, “The Literacy Loft – Jessica Meyer”. Her unit on informational writing is meant to guide both
teacher and students towards developing a meaningful and authentic experience as to how they can share
information in a meaningful and effective manner. When Jessica’s unit ideas and resources are
implemented, it will be addressed within the lesson to avoid copyright infringements. We are thankful to
educators who provide authentic, flexible activities and lessons that can help create inspired lessons.
As writers, students will work throughout the unit with partners and groups in brainstorming and
discussion opportunities to help students brainstorm effectively in order to come up with ideas and
solutions.
Research will be done both physically and digitally. When researching online, internet safety will be
discussed and reiterated in order to protect students whilst teaching them how to properly use the internet
for research purposes.
At the end of the unit, students will have created an authentic, unique information piece on a topic of
interest that can be shared with others. Ultimately through this process of learning how to write an
informational piece, students become teachers, learning that they too can share facts and information with
others through writing.
Cross-curricular connections: While this unit is occurring during students English Language Arts period,
students will also be learning connecting skills in social studies. In social studies, students will be
exploring and researching about influential Albertans: the unit is deeply engrossed in critical thinking and
research skills. It is my hopes that students can apply the research and critical thinking skills incorporated
into the social studies units additionally within this unit. Connections will be made at appropriate times for
students to recognize how critical thinking is an important aspect of writing.
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GLO 3: students will listen, speak, read, write, view and represent to manage ideas and
information
Recall important points, and make and revise predictions regarding upcoming information
(grade 4)
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information
Organize ideas and information, using a variety of strategies (using appropriate categories,
chronological order, cause and effect, or posing and answering questions) (grade 3-4)
Record ideas and information that are on topic (grade 4)
Organize oral, print, and other media texts into sections that relate to and develop the topi
(grade 4)
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: evaluate information
Determine if gathered information is sufficient to answer research questions (grade 3)
Examine gathered information to identify if more information is required; review new
understanding (grade 4)
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level
BEGINNING ACCEPTABLE PROFICIENT MASTERY
criteria
Use and citation of
resources Uses at least one resource Uses a variety of Uses a variety of
(3.2.1) Use of resources is that straightforwardly resources that resources that strongly
(3.1.4) nonexistent or supports the essay’s topic. logically support the support the essay’s
unrelative to essay’s essay’s topic. topic.
topics. Uses at least 1 citation
variation correctly. Uses at least 2 of the Uses all three citation
Uses no citations citation variations variations purposefully.
properly. effectively.
Gather and
Organize Organizes information Organizes information in a Organizes Organizes information
Information in a random manner simplistic manner information in a in a skillful manner
(3.3.1) logical manner
(3.3.2)
(3.3.3)
Review and revision Revises rough draft in a Revises rough draft in a Revises rough draft Revises rough draft in a
(3.2.5) noncoherent manner simplistic manner to in an effective purposeful manner to
(3.3.5) that does little to teach engage and teach readers. manner to engage engage and teach
and engage readers and teach readers. readers.
Teacher Feedback:
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LESSON OVERVIEW
Lesson #1 of 22 Write study a mentor text – writers study the characteristics of the type of writing they
will do.
Outcome(s) 3.1 plan and focus: plan to gather information – contribute ideas for developing and following a
class plan to access and father ideas and information
Assessment Writers journal
Observation
checklist
Learning Activity(s) Print out read aloud plans (for butterflies – kevin j. holmes)
Discussion – what did you notice
1. Read like a writer
2. Title and cover
3. Text features
4. Paragraphs
5. Introduction
6. Text structure
7. Transitions
8. Expert words
9. Teaching tone
10. Conclusion
11. Text organization
Outcome(s) 3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organization information – record ideas and information that are
on topic.
Assessment Writers journal
Observation
checklist
Learning Activity(s) Connection: explain that informational writers are teachers. We write in a way that shows
we are an expert on the topic. (e.g., topic, butterflies).
Model: use mentor text and PowerPoint to model strategies (e.g., point out how the writer
has given us real and true information to TEACHER us about the topic).
Independent practice: students will write an entry in their writing notebook about a topic
they know a lot about to practice using a teaching tone.
- Have students think about a topic they know a lot about (discuss as groups or as a
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Share: collect one+ student notebooks (ask for permission beforehand) to share a part of
their writing that is a good model of teaching tone strategy.
Materials and Resources Writer’s notebook
Mentor text: spiders (Seymour simon)
Teaching or not activity
PowerPoint: teaching tone
Teacher entry example (example topic: tactos)
Lesson #3 of 22 Writers get ideas by… (thinking about topics that interest them and “trying on” different
topics).
Outcome(s) 3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organization information – record ideas and information that are
on topic.
Assessment Writers journal
Observation
checklist
Learning Activity(s) Students choose a topic they care a lot about to become an expert on the topic. (if needed,
narrow down – e.g., social studies (Albertan history or science – simple machines).
Model: topic of choice – model how to make a list of topics you really care about (t-chart)
Mode: try on the topic – explain to students that thinking about what you would teach is
like trying on the topic. Just like you might try on a pair of shoes before you buy them –
you want to try on the topic to see if it fits right. By trying on the topic, you can figure out
how much you have to say about the topic as well as if you want to writer about the topic.
Model: try on the topic – teacher example – pick a list of related topics and show students
how you might try on the topic.
Questions for students to reflect on (put on board) (provide exemplar with teacher
example – good and bad).
1) What are topics that interest me?
2) How could I organize my writing
3) How will I group information into chunks (or chapters)
4) I cant writer every little thing about this topic – how will I focus my writing
Independent practice: students brainstorm topics and the sections they might teach.
Share: have students come back together with their partner and share what they came up
with. Model how you select on of your brainstormed topics and put a start next to it (star
stickers).
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Writers get ideas PowerPoint and notebook chart.
Writers get ideas graphic organizer
Writing an information text PowerPoint and Notebook charts.
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Star stickers.
Outcome(s) 3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize ideas and information, using a
variety of strategies
Assessment Writers journal
Observation
checklist
Learning Activity(s) Beforehand – plan how students will conduct research (provide appropriate books,
websites, articles, library support?).
Model: remind students how we thought about what we could teach about our topic
before. Now we are going to make sure we are clear on our sections so we can prepare for
any research needed.
Introduction to necessity of research: writers usually have questions they want to answer
about their topic of needed to confirm their knowledge before putting it out there as
factual information. Also when researching, you think often find other interesting
information you did not know – we are always learning!
Model how you think through questions and create a list of sections for your essay
thinking ques (on board)
1) What do I already know
2) What will I teach my readers
3) What would my sections or paragraphs be about
4) What else do I need to find out
Partner activity: think about 2 questions you are going to need to find out when you get
started on your research. After thinking, share your topic and these 2 questions with a
partner. Give me a silent thumbs up when you’ve got 2 questions.
After discussion: have students write their questions in their notebooks.
Outcome(s) 3.1plan and focus: plan to father information - Contribute ideas for developing and following a
class plan to access and gather ideas and information
3.2 select and process: use a variety of sources- Find/locate information to answer research
questions, using a variety of sources
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: evaluate information - Determine if gathered information is
sufficient to answer research question
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: evaluate information - Examine gathered information to identify
if more information is required; review new understanding (grade 4)
Assessment Writers journal
Observation
checklist
Learning Activity(s) Model research (the exact same way expected by students).
- Model how to do a google search.
Model organization: make a bulleted list to collect facts and interesting information you
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want to include in your essay. Later, organize and sort the information. On the left side of
your page, write down the source (book, or website) for when students later them how to
credit sources. (could also be done on google docs).
Discuss: students set up their notebooks before they begin research. Before going off,
students talk to their partner how they plan to collect information.
Independent practice: as students research, pull students one on one to help determine
what information is important rather than writing everything down.
Independent practice: as students continue researching, pull them one by one to help
determine what information is important rather than writing everything down.
If needed, coach students to look for patterns and BIG ideas beginning to think about how
they will group their information
- If possible, have this as their last day for research, otherwise they will continue
researching. Have students communicate if they need more research.
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Mentor text (e.g., butterflies by kevin j. holmes)
Outcome(s) 3.3. organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize ideas and information, using a
variety of strategies (using appropriate categories, chronological order, cause and effect, or posing
and answering questions) (grade 3-4)
3.3. organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Record ideas and information that are on
topic
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3.3. organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize oral, print, and other media
texts into sections that relate to and develop the topic
Assessment Checklist
Observation
Writers journal
Learning Activity(s) Connect: make a connection with students than when we are trying to clean our rooms, we
might group similar things together to make it easier to find things later on. When we do
this as a writer, it helps readers find and understand the information easier too
(if needed, give two exemplars (good and bad) of how you would organize your writing
into groups – which do the students prefer to read – why?)
Model: students physically sort your notes and evidence into groups of information
(bucketing)
Activity: label containers with big ideas or sections your text will be about. (have one
bucket titled irrelevant and one miscellaneous
Gather students together in a circle on the carpet – share your notebook with your notes.
Explain you have typed them up to physically sort them into big ideas of groups.
Explain to students you want your writing to be organized and have all the like things
together
You aren’t sure what your groups are yet, but you are going to figure out as you sort facts.
Turn the buckets around so students cant see the big categories yet.
Pull all the strips into a bucket and pull each one out and read one by one – let students
sort them into different buckets. After reading a few, begin to talk about how some of the
facts seem to be about the same thing.
When students begin to notice patterns, turn the buckets around to continue the sort.
Outcome(s) 3.3. organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Record ideas and information that are on
topic
Model: how you use your boxes and bullets to draft your first paragraph by turning them
into complete sentences.
The box is the amin ideas and the first sentence of your paragraph. Attach a transition
word and write the first sentence
Then move on to the first bullet. Show students how you have to add some words to turn it
into a complete sentence.
- Go over a few bullets as a class.
Activity: students rehearse with a partner how their first paragraph will go. Start with the
box and then move on to each bullet point, turning each point into a sentence.
Independent practice: students draft the first paragraph and possibly second. Remind them
they just did that with their partners
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Graphic organizer/plan
Planner to paragraphs PowerPoints
Mentor texts (e.g., spiders by Seymour Simon)
Outcome(s) 3.1 plan and focus: plan to father information - Contribute ideas for developing and following a
class plan to access and gather ideas and information (grade 3-4)
Assessment Writers journal
Observation
Checklist
Learning Activity(s) 3.3. organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Record ideas and information that are on
topic
Materials and Resources Model use your teacher model to review what a paragraph is and looks like.
- Explain purpose of why writers use paragraphs (shoe exemplar of what writing
would look and sound like without paragraphs).
- Explain chunking information to make it easier to think and process what is
written
- Paragraphs organize our writing
- Show a before and after of paragraphs – how does this help you as a reader? (type
up a mentor text without the paragraphs and then with paragraphs. How does this
help you as a reader?)
Model: with your own writing how you move from one paragraph to another, reminding
students how the information comes from your boxes and bullets.
Activity: students turn and talk to their partner about where they would create paragraphs
(use writing). Draw a line to show their thinking and separate paragraphs. Provide a copy
for all students so they can try this work.
Activity: have students work with a partner to share where they think they need to create
paragraphs. (option)
Outcome(s) 3.3. organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Record ideas and information that are
on topic
3.3. organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize oral, print, and other media
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Independent practice: students look for places in their writing to be sure they are citing
their evidence.
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Anchor charts (using text evidence, instead of says, what does the text say?
Outcome(s) 3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Review information to determine its usefulness in
answering research questions
3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Recall important points, and make and revise predictions
regarding upcoming information
Model using a nonfiction text (the life and times of the ant).
Tell them you have read many books about insects (ants). How can there be this many
books or texts about this topic If they are all about the same thing? Don’t they all say the
same thing? All the facts about ants?
Answer – you are right – NO. they are all written by different people and each have their
own voice and perspective on the topic.
Share with students why you love book the life and times of the ant
Activity: students share with partner places in their essay they can balance their facts with
voice.
Independent practice: students continue drafting, looking for places where their writing
just sounds like facts and then rewording to add in their voice.
Materials and Resources Writers notebook/draft essay
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Mentor text
Anchor chart: craft moves and elaboration strategies
Example text: the life and times of the ant (Charles micucci)
Outcome(s) 3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Review information to determine its usefulness in
answering research questions
3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Recall important points, and make and revise predictions
regarding upcoming information
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Connect: remind students about the difference about writing and teaching. A writer tone is
their attitude towards their topic; a teaching tone means we describe our topics, tell why it
is important, give the reader examples, etc. we are teaching our readers.
Model: use PP example to show how the writer gives a fact – then they writer teachers the
reader what the fact means.
Model: in your writing, where you used a teaching tone in your text or model how you
add it in to your writing.
Activity: students identify places in a mentor text where the author has used a teaching
tone.
Students identify places here they need to work on adding a teaching tone in their essay.
Share: popcorn share writing. Each person chooses one sentence from their essay where
they feel is an example of using a teaching tone in the text
(if someone is struggling, work with a partner or group to come up with some ideas
together).
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
NB chart: craft moves and elaboration strategies
PowerPoint
Mentor text (e.g., snakes! By time for kids or butterflies).
Outcome(s) 3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Review information to determine its usefulness in
answering research questions
3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Recall important points, and make and revise predictions
regarding upcoming information
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Model: explain that one way information writers can make their readers stop and pay
attention is by adding in figurative language.
Share example of alliteration from snakes by time for kids and the or a similar from the
same text (PowerPoint)
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Model adding figurative language to your own writing. Share places in your writing where
you have tried to sprinkle in figurative language
- Have students help you add figurative language to your writing
Activity: turn and talk to partner about places in their text where they could add figurative
language
Find other examples of figurative language in another mentor text
Independent practice: students continue drafting as they try out this work in their won
writing.
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Notebook chart: craft moves and elaboration strategies
PowerPoints (alliteration, use a simile, create an image)
Example text (snakes)
Outcome(s) 3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Review information to determine its usefulness in
answering research questions
3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Recall important points, and make and revise predictions
regarding upcoming information
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Model: model only one or two of the examples and teach students how to use the chart
(optional: try other strategies even though they aren’t explicitly taught – found on chart)
Activity: with partner, choose some of the craft moves you will try and find places where
it would be appropriate to add to their writing
Share: look for students who tried craft moves and share with class, with permission.
(could take picture and display on smartboard).
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Anchor chart: craft moves and elaboration strategies
PowerPoints: craft moves and elaboration strategies
Example text
Lesson #15 of 22 Writers use expert words. (if behind in work, this lesson can easily be taken out)
Outcome(s) 3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Review information to determine its usefulness in
answering research questions
3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Recall important points, and make and revise predictions
regarding upcoming information
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Model: show PowerPoint slides from text snakes – point out to students that when a writer
uses expert words, they often explain WHAT the word means or give context clues to the
word because their job is to teach the reader.
Model: how you generate a short simple list of expert words that pertain to your topic.
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Model going back to your sources to identify words that may be domain specific vocab
words.
Activity: students talk to partner to identify words that are expert words to their topic.
Make a plan with their partner as to how they will incorporate these words so they can
teach readers the word meanings
Independent practice: students continue to revise essay, including expert words as well as
defining what the words mean or giving context clues to the word.
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Anchor chart: craft moves and elaboration strategies
PowerPoint: expert words
Example text (snakes)
Outcome(s) 3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Review information to determine its usefulness in
answering research questions
3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Recall important points, and make and revise predictions
regarding upcoming information
Assessment Checklist
Observation
Writers journal
Learning Activity(s) Model: explanation as to why writers use transition words.
Model with mentor text (butterflies)
Activity: students circle transition words they would like to try out. Look for places to add
them either to draft or boxes and bullets plan.
Independent practice: students draft, adding transition words to their draft sheet.
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Butterflies (kevin j. holmes)
Anchor chart: transition words
Outcome(s) 3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Review information to determine its usefulness in
answering research questions
3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Recall important points, and make and revise predictions
regarding upcoming information
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Model: use a mentor text to model 3 different introductions
Model: the introductory paragraph should also include a main idea statement for the whole
essay
PowerPoint: give students example of the full introductory paragraph
Activity: students take turns to talk to partner about which introduction they like best and
try saying them verbally to partner.
Students set up an introductions page in their notebook, giving each introduction a name.
Independent practice: students work to craft their introduction and select the best one to
add to their essay
Outcome(s) 3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Review information to determine its usefulness in
answering research questions
3.2 select and process: evaluate sources - Recall important points, and make and revise predictions
regarding upcoming information
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Model: remind students they may not be ready for this part, but when they get to the point
where they are ready to craft a conclusion, they will know what to do
On board and NB chart: conclusion should do 2-3 things
1) Give your reader a sense of closure
2) Restate the main idea
3) Call your reader to action (optional)
Activity: students look over conclusion NB chart and put a star (sticker) next to 2
conclusions they want to try. Have students turn and talk to partner about which they like
best and try saying them verbally to their partner.
Share: students share their conclusions with partner. Share a few with class?
Materials and Resources Writers notebook
Mentor text
Anchor chart: conclusions
Example texts
Star stickers
Lesson #19 of 22 Writers revise for text features. (may move to lesson #21)
Outcome(s) 3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize ideas and information, using a
variety of strategies
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Record ideas and information that are on
topic
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize oral, print, and other media
texts into sections that relate to and develop the topic
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Model: use a mentor text to model for students how writers use text features to help
readers better understand the information they are explaining.
Model for students how you reread your text looking for things that a text feature would
help.
Activity: have students use the text features chart to review the different types of text
features. With partner, turn and talk about what text features would be the most
appropriate of their topic and make a plan for their text feature they might use
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Independent practice: students continue drafting, adding text features to their text.
Share: share out some of the text features students have added
Materials and Resources Essay draft
Mentor text (e.g., snakes by time for kids)
Text features chart and PowerPoint.
Outcome(s) 3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize ideas and information, using a
variety of strategies
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Record ideas and information that are on
topic
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize oral, print, and other media
texts into sections that relate to and develop the topic
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s)
Model: model with your essay by adding extra words that are necessary or are repeated.
Explain that in the working world, editors will cut what is not necessary in articles, etc. we
need to do that work on our own (quality over quantity).
Have students reread their won writing, looking for words, phrases or sentences that could
be crossed out. (cross out – never erase)
Activity: students reread their won writing and look for words, phrases or sentences that
could be crossed out.
Independent practice: students continue drafting, looking for places they can eliminate
unnecessaries .
Materials and Resources Writers revise chart
Quality vs. quantity
Editing checklist (introduce)
Teacher model essay
Outcome(s) 3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize ideas and information, using a
variety of strategies
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Record ideas and information that are on
topic
3.3 organize, record and evaluate: organize information - Organize oral, print, and other media
texts into sections that relate to and develop the topic
Assessment Checklist
Writers journal
Observation
Learning Activity(s) Model: discuss the power of punctuation
Read a section of your own writing or one from a mentor text – take out all capitalization
and punctuation.
Read in a fast way without stopping for breaths or using any intonation.
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Activity: have students look through checklist to be sure they are clear on every point
Students giving their partner feedback on their writing or have students practice giving
feedback to you.
Peer editing review: students discuss where this is a do or don’t and explain why – work
with partners to review.