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Second Draft of The Script
Second Draft of The Script
FADE IN:
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INT. HALL – NIGHT – CONTINUOUS
MISA, who is wearing a black hoodie and black pants, exits a dark room
slowly and confidently into a hall that leads to the living room, while
holding a bloody knife. Everything but her face is showing. She is HUMMING
a creepy song.
Misa walks in the living room, only her bloodied and dirty boots are
showing. She is still HUMMING. Misa opens her bedroom door, which CREAKS.
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INT. BEDROOM – NIGHT – CONTINUOUS
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Misa turns on a lamp on her desk, in her unsettling yet spacious bedroom
then opens a drawer to remove a black notebook, while still HUMMING. The
pages are flipping as Misa opens the notebook. Misa starts crossing out a
name with a red pen from a list of 9 names, 3 of which are already crossed
out, in the notebook but stops midway when muffled SCREAMING erupts in the
background (from the dark room). Misa stops HUMMING and releases the pen
on the table roughly. Misa puts the notebook back in the drawer, then
shuts the drawer roughly making a loud THUD. Another muffled SCREAM erupts
at the same time she shuts the drawer.
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Misa is walking towards a hanger in the corner of the room. Misa removes a
red coat imitating the scarlet blood, hanging from the hanger. Misa puts
on the red coat. Misa removes the shiny shovel leaning on the wall.
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INT. HALL – NIGHT – CONTINUOUS
Misa walks back into the dark room slowly and confidently with the shovel.
The muffled SCREAMS as she enters the room. She keeps the door open.