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by Nica de los Santos

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3,923 768 42 3 min 4 sec 5 min 54 sec
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26 114 59 55
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This text scores better than 26%

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Writing Issues
59 Correctness
26 Misspelled words
3 Improper formatting
5 Incorrect verb forms
12 Determiner use (a/an/the/this, etc.)
6 Comma misuse within clauses
3 Wrong or missing prepositions
1 Faulty subject-verb agreement
2 Commonly confused words

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1 Misuse of modi ers

2 Clarity
2 Wordy sentences

Unique Words 27%

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Rare Words 17%

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Word Length 3.8

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Sentence Length 18.3

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Tristan Marasigan
Ms, Nica Delos Santos
21st Century
09-19-19
My Career plan
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I am greatest of all time in PBA history and now I lived in toronto canada. I am
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so grateful to achieved my dream. My lifestyle is full of happines and love. Now
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I am 50 years old, i want to share my dream and to how I achieved it. Goal is
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important and challenging to me. Life is not forever but is a big oppurtunity to
living in this world that having a dream. All people having a mission/goal and my
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goal is to be a pba player. When i was 7 years old I started playing basketball
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and when i was 12 years old my decision for my life is to be a pba player. When i
was high school my sport is soccer it is helped me to be strong. I always playing
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basketball to improve my skills. I am not great but I have con dence in my own
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playing. As a athlete we can relate training, discipline and commitment to reach
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goal as a team at times with great pain and effort. When i was 13-17 I belong to
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the barangay league but I experience not belong in every game because of my
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skills is not enough. I am four years belong to my team but when during the
game I can’t play, I always sitting in every game I felt so sad in this happening
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for four years league. But I never give up to reach my goal i always playing
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basketball because i want to be a pba player. After I graduate in senior high
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school I had desire to study in LPU and to be a varsity player in this school.
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When I was a rst year college I can try out to be part of basketball varsity but
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did not enough my skills and body, height to become a varsity. In this failure it

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made me more con dent. I joined in mav’s basketball training to improve my
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skills and body but I do not forget my studies. After class in school I always
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going to mavs basketball to training. Two years later in training I became a
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strong player but did not greatest player. I am already to try out again in LPU.
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The result of my effort is been succes and I am be part of basketball varsity in
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LPU. I am 3rd year college to became a basketball varsity in LPU. I experience
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work hard training about basketball faster dribbling, faster pass, jogging ,
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footwork, defense,offense and more con dent for my self, never nervous during
the game, discipline, teamwork and I learned all these. This is helping to
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improve my playing. In rst season of my career in ncaa I experience did not
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play during the game because of my teammate is better than me. I want to give
up to play basketball because I can do that everything to be great but I am still
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not enough to be a great player. But god is always there for me he did’nt let me
give up my goal and I continue again my goal with god. Since my decision for my
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life is to be a pba player I always wish for god to achieved my dream. When I
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was 4th year college I am varsity again. I keep learning and playing. In this
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season of ncaa I am shine and became great player in these season. I achieved
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win championship and mvp award I became a famous basketball player in
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philippine because of these season .I am grateful to be part of LPU varsity and
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in this happening it is my last playing in team of LPU because I graduate in this
school after these happening I became a pba draft in 2025. I am 1st pick draft
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in pba sign in barangay ginebra san miguel it is the most happiest for my life
because my dream is I achieved it. I am 22 years old to be part of pba player I
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play in barangay ginebra team after 15 years in playing in the pba my award is 8
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mvp’s 10 win championship and most 3 point shooter in pba history and
greatest pba history. When I am 38 years I retired in pba. I am happy to play in
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pba and having a award and off course to achieved my dream. I will never forget

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this moment in the pba. I can only say that those who have dream do not give
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up and have con dence in your own talent and reach your goals.

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1. toronto → Toronto Misspelled Words Correctness

2. canada → Canada Misspelled Words Correctness

3. achieved → achieve Incorrect Verb Forms Correctness

4. happines → happiness Misspelled Words Correctness

5. i →I Misspelled Words Correctness

6. The goal Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

7. oppurtunity → opportunity Misspelled Words Correctness

8. pba → PBA Misspelled Words Correctness

9. i →I Misspelled Words Correctness

10. i →I Misspelled Words Correctness

11. pba → PBA Misspelled Words Correctness

12. i →I Misspelled Words Correctness

13. own Wordy Sentences Clarity

14. a athlete → an athlete Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

15. athlete, Comma Misuse within Clauses Correctness

16. , and Comma Misuse within Clauses Correctness

17. the goal, or a goal Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

18. i →I Misspelled Words Correctness

19. of Wrong or Missing Prepositions Correctness

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20. is → are Faulty Subject-Verb Agreement Correctness

21. i →I Misspelled Words Correctness

22. i →I Misspelled Words Correctness

23. pba → PBA Misspelled Words Correctness

24. the desire Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

25. rst year → rst-year Misspelled Words Correctness

26. rst year → rst-year Misspelled Words Correctness

27. In this → This Wrong or Missing Prepositions Correctness

28. failure, Comma Misuse within Clauses Correctness

29. mav's → man's Misspelled Words Correctness

30. school, Comma Misuse within Clauses Correctness

31. mavs → Mavs Misspelled Words Correctness

32. training, Comma Misuse within Clauses Correctness

33. already → all ready Commonly Confused Words Correctness

34. succes → success Misspelled Words Correctness

35. am be → am Incorrect Verb Forms Correctness

36. 3rd year → 3rd-year Misspelled Words Correctness

37. became → become Incorrect Verb Forms Correctness

38. jogging , → jogging, Improper Formatting Correctness

39. , offense Improper Formatting Correctness

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40. the rst Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

41. ncaa, Comma Misuse within Clauses Correctness

42. of Wrong or Missing Prepositions Correctness

43. god → God Misspelled Words Correctness

44. did'nt → didn't Misspelled Words Correctness

45. achieved → achieve Incorrect Verb Forms Correctness

46. 4th year → 4th-year Misspelled Words Correctness

47. a great Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

48. these season → this season, Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

these seasons etc.)

49. mvp → MVP Misspelled Words Correctness

50. these season → this season, Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

these seasons etc.)

51. .I Improper Formatting Correctness

52. a team, or the team Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

53. miguel → Miguel Misspelled Words Correctness

54. most Misuse of Modi ers Correctness

55. the barangay Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

56. mvp's → MVP's Misspelled Words Correctness

57. a award → an award Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

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etc.)

58. off → of Commonly Confused Words Correctness

59. achieved → achieve Incorrect Verb Forms Correctness

60. a dream Determiner Use (a/an/the/this, Correctness

etc.)

61. own Wordy Sentences Clarity

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