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Twice Shy Annotations
Twice Shy Annotations
the title does not give direct context to the text, similar to midterm-break
Allusion: In the title, Heaney alludes to a well known saying, "Once bitten, twice shy", which illuminates
the essential message of the poem; the lovers have previously been hurt, which is why both are more
cautious and wary this time around.
A vacuum of need I
Collapsed each hunting heart J
But tremulously we held K
As hawk and prey apart, J internal rhyme
Preserved classic decorum, L
Deployed our talk with art. J
Heaney attaches a deeper meaning to the characters' relationship by repeatedly referring to them as
"hawk and prey" This seems like an unlikely comparison to make to lovers, but like the title, it reinforces
the mood of wariness and caution; neither is sure if the other is the hawk, and whether they are meant to
be the prey.
Our Juvenilia M - refers to an author's early works, given Heaney's own experience as a published author,
and I wonder if, given his lengthy career, he had experienced any regret over his earliest works because
they might reflect views he has since outgrown.
Had taught us both to wait, N
Not to publish feeling O
And regret it all too late - N internal rhyme
Mushroom loves already P
Had puffed and burst in hate. N
Rather than being bitter for their experiences, the characters seem more wise and display a hesitant yet
hopeful outlook.
Full stop at the end of each stanza? Why- finality in a scene, transition, takes a pause- nervousness, shift
in every stanza to mark the end of every event , character progression, setting
Death? Overcoming fear,
Bird imagery, swans
Animal imagery why? inevitable=human instinct=nature
Guiding Questions
1. Explore the importance of the repeated setting of the “embankment walk” in the poet’s work.
2. Discuss the use and importance of characterization in this poem.