LYCEUM OF THE PHILIPPINES UNIVERSITY

Muralla St, Intramuros, Manila, 1002 Metro Manila

College of International Tourism and Hospitality Management

ACTION TAKEN ON PANELIST’S RECOMMENDATIONS

Name of Candidates :

Adviser : Miss Jannin Arnaldo

Thesis Title :
Panelist :

Corrections/
Recommendations
1. Instead of “in terms of” better
use level of under
2. Insert in the statistical
treatment the tool that was
used in table 4,5,6,7 in the
result.
Appropriate discussion was also
3. Replace the word
“competencies” in the title
with the word “Level of
Awareness”.
4. “Climate” double check the
statement in the background
of the study and support with
review background/rrl
5. SOP2: remove the critical
incident
6. Check your whole paper. It
must have consistency from
Action Taken Page
“In terms of” was replaced or 9
changed by the suggested
phrase (level of under”
Tables 4,5,6,7 were corrected 47 - 53
according to the variables
stated in the SOP and
questionnaire. Appropriate
statistical treatment was
followed as it was already
indicated under methodology.
provided.
The term “competencies” was all throughout
replaced by “level of the parts where
awareness” the term
“competencies”
was used.
provided an explanation why 5
Philippines is experiencing
climate change
The variable “critical incident” 9
was already removed.
consistency was already entire paper
observed by checking the
 chap 1 to 5. correlation of each data
7. Support the chapter 4 with All discussions were supported
RRL by RRL as part of supporting or
correlating data
8. Check the grammar and Grammar and sentence
sentence construction. constructions were checked.
9. Focus on the issues Issues of the study were given
emphasis accordingly. RRL was
enriched and improved