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Essay 10
Essay 10
NO. 10 ESSAY
Last Sunday, when I was reading a book at home, suddenly there was a knock on the door.
I opened the door, feeling strange. Then, it was my girlfriend “Yui” that was standing in
front of the entrance. That day was my birthday. She embraced me as soon as she found
who I was. because of a happening, my heart almost stopped beating. However, I thought
that day was one of days which I will never forget in a life.
1st sentence:
Last Sunday, when I was reading a book at home, suddenly there was a
knock on the door.
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2nd sentence:
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I —> When I
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“ “ —> omit
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5th sentence:
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However, I thought that day was one of days which I will never forget
in a life.
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of —> of the
a —> my
Last Sunday, when I was reading a book at home, suddenly there was a
knock on the door. When I opened the door, I felt strange. Then, it was
my girlfriend Yui that was standing in front of the entrance. That day was
my birthday. She embraced me as soon as she saw me. Because of what
happened, my heart skipped a beat. I thought that day was one of the
days which I will never forget in my life.