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How to write papers for Elementary Educators

Matt Palmisano

Ferris State University


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Just like gender, race, nationality, political beliefs, and many, many other traits

define us as people and individuals, so to does language and dialect. For language, the

language you speak may determine where someone hails from, whereas a dialect of

that language makes humans even more individualized by narrowing the area down

even smaller. The words we choose to use in certain social situations help present to

the world who we are, and in that specific situation (or sometimes even all situations)

who we want to be and how we want to be heard. This fact of life ties in deeply with the

way certain occupations converse with fellow people of the same occupation. The

terminology, the formality or informality of speech, the personal or impersonal outlook

on certain hot topics, all of these and more help individualize occupations from one

another, sometimes to the point that people looking from outside the occupation hardly

recognize what is even being said. Elementary educators are their own unique beast

when it comes to this.

Elementary education journals are unique in how diverse each one can be

written. Sometimes an article is written to address a problem with the intended audience

being anyone willing to lend an ear, sometimes the article is about how integrating a

new practice can be beneficial to a classroom and the teacher, and sometimes, it is

simply a lesson plan for a very specific activity with the only supporting details being

what elements of educating are included and how fun the activity is.

A commonality of many education journals and articles is that there is always a

sample classroom that is closely examined throughout the entirety of the article. For
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example, in Suzan Spezzini’s article, many different children are identified to use as a

focal point for the crux of the issue;

“Chiwengo asked her 6th-grade teacher for a sheet of paper. Her penalty was

serving detention.Carlos told his 4th-grade classmates about going to the beach. A

repeat offender, he was sent to the principal's office. Mei responded by saying thanks.

This 8th-grader found herself awaiting a parent/teacher conference with the counselor.

Hamsa asked his kindergarten teacher about the vacuum cleaner. As punishment, he

was kept in from recess.

Why were these children punished? Because they had made pronunciation

errors. The teachers heard the children's accented pronunciation of appropriate

vocabulary (in bold) as inappropriate words.” (Spezzini, 2010).

Many times, writers in the field of education will be somewhat generous and offer

a helping hand in terms of comprehending what the main topic of their paper is. For

example, when one author wanted to compare student teacher self-efficacy and their

views on teaching, the author decided it would be a wise idea to remind readers what

the definition of self efficacy is;

“The concept of self-efficacy is within self-concept in terms of meaning. Self-

concept is the sum of one's self perception (Schunk, 2000: 344), the way the one's

perception of his own essence. In other words, it means the positive and negative

perception that one' has developed for his skills and other characteristics” (Cayci, 2011).
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Once the author clarified what the meaning of self efficacy was, he used it to his

advantage and used the wordplay to defend his point with phrases such as “In this

direction,” and “it could be said that” (Cayci, 2011).

In almost every article and journal in the history of the profession of teaching,

authors have always used as many sources as they can find, usually resulting in around

fifteen to twenty-five being the minimum number of sources for scholarly articles.

Sometimes in education journals the quoting is so extensive that almost every sentence

in the entire article is just a quote. For example, in the article The relationship between

the elementary teacher candidates' teacher efficacy and their attitudes towards the

profession of teaching, every single paragraph in the article ends with a list of multiple

sources, sometimes it would only list one source, other times it would list four to five.

One difference that was found when looking at multiple articles was the number

of pictures and charts found in each article. Some journals had generic pictures

included and nothing else, such as TOUCH, TALK, TEXT: Practices that support both

reading and science instruction ( Sarah J. Carrier, Grifenhagen, and Scharen, 2021).

Some articles had the best of both worlds, with both charts and images, such as

Engineering with Kindergartners: a fun winter activity that inspires an engineering

challenge, due to the nature of the journal, it discusses a winter activity and showcases

the results from a sample classroom as well as pictures of the sample classroom’s

students engaging in the engineering activity. And unfortunately for more casual readers

more often than not most education scholarly journals may include no charts or images,

and require the reader to mainly trust the sources cited rather than tables of raw data,

such as in the article Raising teacher salaries: the funds are there.
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Occasionally, education articles will begin with an abstract detailing how the

supporting evidence found within the article was discovered or where it was interpreted

from. The three examples found from my search were: Raising teacher salaries: the

funds are there, Physical education preservice teachers' conceptions of caring, The

relationship between the elementary teacher candidates' teacher efficacy and their

attitudes towards the profession of teaching. Most often, abstracts are used to describe

the experiment from which the data was collected, for example, in Physical education

preservice teachers' conceptions of caring, the abstract details how the data was

extracted like so;

“The purpose of this study was to examine prospective physical education

teachers' conceptions of caring during their student teaching experiences. This study

was conducted through a qualitative research design that included semi-structured

interviews, field observations, and document analysis. Four student teachers (1 male

and 3 females) from physical education teacher education (PETE) programs at two

universities participated in this study” (Okeson Lee, Revissa, 2008).

In conclusion, Educational journals are very similar to many different types of

other occupation journals due to the flexibility the occupation allows. Sometimes the

journal is simple, sometimes it is complex, sometimes it is over 5,000 words, sometimes

authors can get their point across in just over 1000. But one of the most important

commonalities that every education journal has is that is backed by many, many

different sources, and raw data.


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