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Eng 103 College Writing I Research Paper
Eng 103 College Writing I Research Paper
Cynthia Griffin
Dr.Lynch
December 6, 2020
From the beginning of time until now, the Earth has played a central role in our lives--it
has sustained us, provided for us, allowed us as humans to evolve far beyond our ancestors’
dreams. But this Earth, this beautiful planet, is dying--every day it moves closer to its end. The
temperatures are rising, the ozone layer is depleting, forests are being destroyed, many species
are on the brink of extinction, and the air pollution has increased dramatically in the past couple
of centuries alone. At the center of all of this havoc on the environment are world superpowers,
countries like China and the United States who have played a major part in the destruction of this
planet’s ecosystem through the use of fossil fuel and other hazardous methods of sustainability.
The U.S., having played a central role in both fossil fuel emission and the overall pollution of the
environment should accordingly be a leader in the development of clean and efficient energy
alternatives such as solar power, wind and water-powered technology, and biofuel.
The Earth is a planet capable of cultivating and housing millions of different species. One
of these species is Homo sapiens, better known as humans. Having been around for millions of
years, humans have had impacts on this planet’s ecosystem. Throughout the millenniums, mother
nature has provided us with all we need to survive: water, food, shelter, oxygen, sunlight, and so
much more. But we as a species have failed to provide the same care and nurturing that the Earth
has graciously gifted to us. We have decimated forests, killed thousands of species, depleted
resources, and polluted through the use of fossil fuel--we have destroyed many of the things we
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take for granted. Now it is our turn to repay her kindness, to make an effort to help restore the
forests, protect endangered species, and finally replace fossil fuel with a more sustainable
Renewable Energy Industry”, scientist Nurdaulet Kalassov and his colleagues--observing the
harmful environmental aspects of fossil fuel--explore the creation of biofuel using biotechnology
as a renewable alternative to fossil fuel. Realizing that fossil fuels are the main source of CO2
emission in the environment--with electricity alone being a third of the total emissions--and with
global warming becoming a more pertinent issue, Kalassov and many other scientists in the field
began exploring biofuel as an alternative energy source. While pointing out that these emissions
per-unit have gone down from the past, Professor B. Abdullah et al. noted that fossil fuels are
still responsible for 80% of the energy production in the world [Kalassov]. The authors’ main
point is the integration of a renewable energy source, like biofuel, as a way to be more energy
efficient and limit the overall use of fossil fuel in the world. Not only does Kalassov et al. point
out the harmful effects of fossil fuels--like petroleum, diesel, natural gas, and coal--but they also
establish the fact that since fossil fuels are not a renewable resource there is a limited supply that
will eventually have to be replaced with a new system of generating energy anyway. This is a
stark fact for even those not in support of the replacement of fossil fuels because it points out the
fact that whether or not we replace fossil fuels now or in the future, it will eventually be pertinent
The Intergovernmental Panel on Climate Change, the United Nations body for assessing
the science and technology related to climate change [ICCP], deemed CO2 as a pertinent cause
for global warming and prioritized the development of a more efficient and renewable energy
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researching alternative resources like biofuel as a replacement. The authors specifically mention
fossil fuels, both obtained through renewable material like agriculture, municipal and forestry
waste [Kalassov]. Their introduction all leads to one solution, the use of integrated membrane
bioreactors to solve the issue of efficiently producing these sustainable alternative fuels for the
economy as a way to limit the emission of greenhouse gases, one major part of a larger
There have been many different integrated membrane bioreactors that have been
fouling, high cost and energy usage, and concentration polarization [Kalassov]. Membrane
fouling refers to the decrease of a membrane’s ability to transfer materials due to particles being
deposited onto the membrane’s surface [Meng] and concentration polarization is the presence of
gradients at the membrane resulting from the membrane being able to transport certain species
membranes connected with a bioreactor allows the harnessing of this systems energy for fuel,
according to Katalin Belafi-Bako, being able to be used in both aerobic--in combination with
separation--systems [Kalassov]. Very porous and dense membranes are used in the production of
these alternative fuels--bioethanol, biodiesel, methane, and biohydrogen--because they make the
In the introduction to Steven Cohen’s article “What is Stopping the Renewable Energy
Transformation and What can the U.S. Government Do?”, he emphasizes America’s role in the
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pollution of a planet with a population of over 7 billion people and their responsibility as a nation
to lead the transition to a renewable-resource-based economy. The world's reliance on this one-
time use of fuel on a planet with a finite amount of resources and an exponentially growing
population makes the development and implementation of sustainable energy that much more
dire, so why has this transition not happened yet? Cohen points out three specific reasons for this
lack of transition: technologies that still need further development, improperly designed
infrastructure, and complicated political polarization that limits the country and the world's
ability to make the much needed transition. The author closes the introduction by emphasizing
the importance of policy making in the transition to a more sustainable energy-based economy,
saying that the role that politicians and the public opinion as a whole has on this transition is
immeasurable [Cohen].
As the population of the planet continues to grow and societies reliance on energy to fuel
every aspect of their lives creates an enormous need for the creation of a sustainable and
renewable energy source that can help power the planet in the twenty-first century. Cohen
discusses one specific tactic used by climate change activists in the push to transition away from
fossil fuels, the use of taxes to raise the prices of fossil fuels as a way to deter the use of it by the
people. This plan, while seemingly good on paper, does not realistically deter many from the use
country like America where multiple companies can sell fossil fuels at different rates it is
difficult to have a forceful transition away from the use of fossil fuels, although it may be
possible in other countries like Russia or China. The two main tasks of America is to create this
transition to a renewable energy source while the consumption of energy throughout the country
(and the world) continues to grow and convince companies that have assets in the existing
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energy industry and are against the transition to start investing in renewable energy instead
[Cohen]. These are not simple tasks, they will require the full effort of the public and
On top of the effects that fossil fuel has on the environment--both in the underground
extraction process and the emissions of CO2 and other harmful gases--the fact that it is finite
means that even before fossil fuels run out completely, the limited supply of fossil fuels
combined with the added difficulty of extracting it will cause the expenses of it to be to great for
the general public to use anyway [Cohen]. With fossil fuels moving towards the more expensive
end of the industry market and countries all across the world--from America to China to India to
developing countries in Africa--having massive energy needs, the sooner we as a society move
off of fossil fuels, the better. The U.S. needs to take the lead in developing a “...cheaper, less
capital-intensive, more reliable, decentralized, and less polluting..”[Cohen] energy source than
fossil fuel. According to the US Department of Energy’s National Renewable Energy Laboratory
(NREL), every state in America is capable of having at least one form of renewable energy with
the potential of supplying all of the energy needed. In fact, the NREL found that renewable
energy had the potential to generate over 100 times the U.S. total energy consumption from 2011
[Cohen]. And this capacity is estimated to triple by 2035, being able to supply relatively one-
third of the total energy needed worldwide [Cohen]. With the help of effective public policy,
Cohen believes that renewable energy can be a cost-effective alternative to fossil fuels.
Admittedly, there are still some things that need to be considered before transitioning to
renewable energy. Cohen and others, including the National Research Council, are clear in that
they don’t believe the technology is quite where it needs to be yet. Breakthroughs in things like
nanotechnology can greatly increase the convenience of solar technology and large
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implementation of these technologies in the community can aid in its growth for personal use,
but we as a society are simply not there yet [Cohen]. In order for scientists to make these
advancements, they would need public support and huge investments--but these investments
would have enormous economic and environmental benefits for the future. Another thing Cohen
and the National Research Council brought to light is the need for better infrastructure and grid
author points out that simply focusing on the technology behind renewable energy--including
solar cells and biotechnology--is not enough, there needs to be a huge emphasis on infrastructure
that allows this sort of technology to be used on a large scale [Cohen]. Many private companies
own portions of the power grids, making it difficult to have one seamless flow of energy--
especially over long distances. The last aspect that Cohen rises as a barrier in the way of the
conversion to renewable energy is the huge sway the public and politics has on the issue.
Because sustainable energy technology is more complex and riskier for investors than traditional
energy investments like fossil fuel [Cohen]--the sway to renewable energy has been an arduous
process, one that is causing the environment more devastation every day. Overall, the switch to
renewable energy will not be an easy one; there will be many challenges that the public and
scientific community will have to face in order for a new energy system to gain its bearings. But
this struggle will be worth it, if not for the environmental benefit, then for the more reliable and
The next article I will be addressing is the article “CO2e emissions from HVAC
equipment and lifetime operation for common U.S. building tests” by Aik Jong Tan and Darin
W. Nutter, both members of the American Society of Heating, Refrigerating, and Air-
conditioning Engineers. In their paper, Jong and Nutter run multiple experiments to observe the
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amount of greenhouse gas emissions from the heating and cooling equipment of ten common
commercial building types. Past studies have been done on the greenhouse gas emissions not
only coming from fossil fuel-run electricity, but also from the material production (like steel,
wood, and concrete) and the construction process of these buildings--but none have been done
extensively into the heating and cooling equipment in the buildings, something that could be
disregarded in the public eye as something that contributes to air pollution. The authors used four
different sources as the main data points for this experiment, the DEO Commercial Building
Benchmark Model, 2002 RSMeans Mechanical Cost Data, DEO Net Zero Energy Commercial
Building Initiative Models, and Economic Input-Output Life Cycle Assessment Model. Tan and
Nutter observed that HVAC equipment was affected by multiple variables; the ones included in
the study involving “...local climate, building type, building size, HVAC equipment capacity,
According to ASHRAE, every part of the U.S. has been divided into 8 different climate
regions, each zone having moist, dry, and marine areas [Aik, Figure 1, pg.417]. These regions
are all connected through the three main energy grids in America, the Eastern Interconnection,
Western Interconnection, and Electric Reliability Council of Texas (ERCOT); the Eastern
Interconnection covering from the Atlantic cost to the eastern border of the Rocky Mountains,
the Western Interconnection covering most of the Rocky Mountains over to the Pacific Ocean,
and the ERCOT covering mainly Texas [Aik, Figure 2, pg.418]. All of these grids are overseen
by the North American Electrical Reliability Corporation (NERC) , its three main grids have
little to no connection with little to no energy transfer [Aik]. All of these complicated grids with
relatively independent systems makes the transfer of intercontinental energy that much more
challenging. This divided system of energy feeds into the greater emissions of greenhouse gases,
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a lot of energy being lost in these large grids during the transmission process. The three main
regions have different greenhouse gas emissions because they all vary in some of the factors
discussed earlier--including climate and geographical location. With over 70% of the U.S. total
energy per year being produced through fossil fuels--like coal and oil--and with the use of energy
and production of greenhouse gases through the extraction, transportation, processing, and
purification of these fossil fuels [Aik], it’s clear to the authors and many other professionals that
fossil fuel has devastating effects on the environment. The results of Tan and Nutter’s
experiment showed that the largest part of emissions was from the operation process behind the
electricity of HVAC equipment, having about an average of 54% emission. It was concluded that
“...the operation of HVAC generates the majority of GHG [(greenhouse gas)] emissions”(Aik,
pg.421). It was also observed that identical buildings in colder climates had higher emissions
from energy consumption than the same building in warmer climates. Although these different
factors, like temperature and location, can vary the emissions of greenhouse gases slightly there
is still a clear conclusion--that using fossil fuels as an energy source emits exponential amounts
of greenhouse gases into the atmosphere, severely damaging our environment in the process.
In chapter 4 of the book Hope for a Heated Planet: How Americans are Fighting Global
Warming and Building a Better Future, Robert K. Musil discusses the foundations of global
warming and the lengths scientists and environmentalists will have to go to in order to take on
carbon lobbies that are downplaying the harmful effects of fossil fuels and disregarding the need
to transfer to a more sustainable and renewable energy source. Just like Cohen, Musil
emphasizes the importance of politics in the role of the fight for sustainable energy and climate
change--claiming that in order for real change to be made the average citizen needs to get
involved and elect representatives that will support policies in favor of the environment. As
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Musil points out, “...how the dangers and solutions are defined and discussed shapes how the
problem is perceived”(Musil). The media and public opinions can greatly sway an issue in favor
of one side over the other, when carbon lobbies and environmentalists go head-to-head in the
public eye it becomes a messy and uncivilized fight as opposed to a civilized discussion about
the change this planet needs. Musil does also discuss the failure on the side of environmentalists,
pointing out their aggressive and ill-prepared “solutions” to climate change--many environmental
groups trying to implement completely new infrastructure instead of working with systems
already put in place. The author emphasizes all the good that these systems have already done
“...for human health, community well-being, moral values, national security, and positive, far-
reaching energy solutions”(Musil), claiming that we as a community should not simply throw
away these systems completely, but rather implement changes to these pre-existing systems to
help the environment more. Now although many environmentalists might argue that this is not
good enough action, people must realize that change cannot happen overnight--it cannot be
forced on society, it takes hard work and consistency. And no system is perfect--although some
may be more flawed than others--so instead of proclaiming the current one as insufferable, we as
a community should work together to salvage the good parts of this system to build upon and
change the bad parts to better fit this twenty first century world.
In Plato’s Allegory of the Cave, he describes the suffocating darkness of those who are
ignorant along with the struggle they must go through in order to emerge from the cave and
a challenge than simply staying ignorant--it is necessary for the development and success of
man. Many argue that we shouldn’t switch over to more sustainable energy sources because they
are unreliable. Others argue that fossil fuels work already so what’s the point of switching --
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especially because we don’t know what effects such a change will have on the economy, on the
job market, and on society as a whole. But just like those ignorant men down in that cave, only
by making that choice to emerge out into the light, and by seeing the truth no matter how much it
blinded them, they were able to learn and progress more. Couldn’t we do the same with energy
resources? We don’t know if biofuel will work better than fossil fuels, we don’t know exactly
what effect it will have on the economy or job market, we don’t know what the future may look
like, but we won’t know unless we’re willing to take the leap and try. How do you think fossil
fuels were discovered and harnessed in the first place? Because someone chose to take the leap
and experiment--to innovate. And in doing so they ended up creating the most widely used
energy source ever. So who is to say that we as a species can’t continue to progress? Maybe
wind or water power, solar energy, or biofuel can be our next fossil fuel. We are always evolving
as a species, and we want to make sure that as our kids, grandkids and great-grandkids grow up
on this planet that it will be capable of providing the same nurturing as it has for eons.
scarce resources to wildfires to habitats being destroyed--there has always been a problem that
needed to be addressed. And through all of these times, humans have come together as a
community to solve these problems because they recognized that they not only affected
themselves, but their friends, family, and neighbors too. There are some issues that people face
that can be of no concern to others, people in starving parts of the world don’t affect well-to-do
people living in Manhattan, but the environment affects every living creature on this planet from
the biggest elephant to the smallest microbacteria. From the sun that we see, to the water we
drink, to the very air that we breathe, all of it is affected by pollution from fossil fuel. There is no
telling what the future might bring, but as someone who is planning on having a long life full of
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loved ones, I hope there is still a planet left for them once I’m gone. We only get one Earth, I
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