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La Belle Dame sans Merci

“La Belle Dame sans Merci,” written in 1819 and


published the next year in a form slightly different
John Keats
from the one here, depicts a knight-at-arms who
has been seduced and abandoned by a capricious 1819
fairy. Told in the form of a dialogue, the poem re-
counts the experience of loving dangerously and
fully, of remaining loyal to that love despite warn-
ings to the contrary, and of suffering the living
death of one who has glimpsed immortality. At the
beginning and end of the poem, the knight remains
on “a cold hill’s side,” a world devoid of happiness
or beauty, waiting for his love to return. Some read-
ers maintain that the poem is really about Keats’s
confused feelings for Fanny Brawne, his fiancée,
to whom Keats could not commit fully. Others
claim the story is symbolic of the plight of the artist,
who, having “fallen in love” with beauty, can never
fully accept the mundane. Either way, the conclu-
sion is the same: however self-destructive intense
love may be, the lover has little choice in the mat-
ter. Further, the more one entertains feelings of
beauty and love, the more desolate and more
painful the world becomes.

Author Biography
Born in 1795, Keats, the son of a stablekeeper, was
raised in Moorfields, London, and attended the
Clarke School in Enfield. After Keats’s mother’s
death in 1810, Richard Abbey took care of Keats

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Poem Text
O what can ail thee, knight-at-arms,
Alone and palely loitering?
The sedge has wither’d from the lake,
And no birds sing.
O what can ail thee, knight-at-arms, 5

So haggard and so woebegone?


The squirrel’s granary is full,
And the harvest’s done.
I see a lily on thy brow
With anguish moist and fever dew; 10
And on thy cheek a fading rose
Fast withereth too.
I met a lady in the meads,
Full beautiful—a faery’s child,
Her hair was long, her foot was light, 15
And her eyes were wild.
I made a garland for her head,
And bracelets too, and fragrant zone;
She look’d at me as she did love,
And made sweet moan. 20

I set her on my pacing steed


And nothing else saw all day long,
John Keats For sidelong would she bend, and sing
A faery’s song.
She found me roots of relish sweet, 25

And honey wild, and manna dew,


And sure in language strange she said—
“I love thee true.”
and his three younger siblings. Although Keats was
She took me to her elfin grot,
apprenticed to an apothecary (pharmacist), he soon And there she wept, and sigh’d full sore; 30
realized that writing was his true talent, and he de- And there I shut her wild wild eyes
cided to become a poet. Forced to hide his ambi- With kisses four.
tion from Abbey, who would not have sanctioned And there she lullèd me asleep,
it, Keats instead entered Guy’s and St. Thomas’s And there I dream’d—Ah! woe betide!
Hospitals in London, becoming an apothecary in The latest dream I ever dream’d 35

1816 and continuing his studies to become a sur- On the cold hill’s side.
geon. When he reached the age of twenty-one, I saw pale kings and princes too,
Keats was free of Abbey’s jurisdiction. Supported Pale warriors, death-pale were they all;
They cried—“La Belle Dame sans Merci
by his small inheritance, he devoted himself to writ-
Thee hath in thrall!” 40
ing. Keats also began associating with artists and
I saw their starv’d lips in the gloam,
writers, among them Leigh Hunt, who published
With horrid warning gapèd wide,
Keats’s first poems in his journal, the Examiner. And I awoke and found me here,
But, within a few years, the poet experienced the On the cold hill’s side.
first symptoms of tuberculosis, the disease that had And this is why I sojourn here, 45
killed his mother and brother. He continued writ- Alone and palely loitering,
ing and reading the great works of literature. He Though the sedge is wither’d from the lake,
also fell in love with Fanny Brawne, a neighbor’s And no birds sing.
daughter, though his poor health and financial dif-
ficulties made marriage impossible. He published
a final work, Lamia, Isabella, The Eve of St. Agnes, Poem Summary
and Other Poems, which included his famous odes
and the unfinished narrative, Hyperion: A Frag- Lines 1–12
ment. Keats traveled to Italy in 1820 in an effort to The ballad consists of two parts of dialogue,
improve his health but died in Rome the following each uninterrupted by the other and each un-
year at the age of 26. couched by the normal story-telling mechanisms

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Media
Adaptations
• A reading of “La Belle Dame sans Merci” is Gielgud, Richard Burton, James Mason, and
available on a compact disc called Conversation Boris Karloff.
Pieces, released in 2001 by Folkways Records.
• Sir Ralph Richardson reads “La Belle Dame
This recording was originally released in 1964 sans Merci” on a 1996 Caedmon audiocassette
in LP format by Folkways. release called The Poetry of Keats.
• A compact disc named Songs, released in 2001 • HighBridge Co. of St. Paul, Minnesota, includes
on the Hyperion label, has a version of “La Belle “La Belle Dame sans Merci” on John Keats,
Dame sans Merci” set to music and sung by Sir Poet, a reading of Keats’s poems by Douglas
Charles Villiers Stanford. Hodge. It was released on audiocassette in 1996
• Lexington Records released a recording of as part of the HighBridge Classics series.
Theodore Marcuse reading “La Belle Dame sans • Listen Library Inc. included “La Belle Dame
Merci” along with others by the same author on sans Merci” on its 1989 audiocassette The Es-
an LP called The Poetry of Keats and Shelley, sential Keats. Poems for this recording were se-
produced in 1950. lected and read by poet Philip Levine.
• The 1996 two-cassette set The Caedmon Col- • A 1963 LP recording from Spoken Arts Records
lection of English Poetry features various poetic entitled Robert Donat Reads Favorite Poems at
masterpieces, including “La Belle Dame sans Home includes the famous actor’s rendition of
Merci,” read by famous actors such as Sir John “La Belle Dame sans Merci.”

for identifying speakers (“I said,” “he said,” etc.). Yet, this seems little consolation to the knight the
Because of this, the identity of the first speaker, speaker describes. He is “alone and palely loiter-
whose part is completed in the first twelve lines, ing,” “so haggard and so woebegone.” His pallor
remains cryptic. Though he (or, it could equally be is described metaphorically in terms of a “lily” on
argued, she) reveals the identity of the other (the his brow and a “fading rose” on his cheek. Further,
“knight-at-arms”), the first speaker says nothing, at he appears physically ill, “moist” from the “fever”
least directly, about himself. He does, however, of some “anguish.” Though through these obser-
give plenty of information about the situation of the vations the speaker has already foreshadowed the
poem. The time is late autumn, the annual grasses reasons for the knight’s grim condition, the form’s
having already “wither’d” and the birds having de- rhetoric demands the question be asked: “O what
parted on their winter migration. The place, one can can ail thee?” A knowledge of chivalric lore should
infer, is not always as forbidding as it seems to be prompt the correct guess. Of a knight’s three pro-
now—its desolation is simply due to the time of found allegiances—to his God, his lord, and his
year. There has been a “harvest,” but it has ended. lady—only the last would be described in terms of
There is latent life present around the two charac- lily-pallor and a faded rose.
ters: “the squirrel’s granary is full.” Therefore, if
the setting symbolizes the knight’s emotional des- Lines 13–24
olation, one must understand it as a function of an The story’s twist occurs in the first stanza of
individualized circumstance: of a very specific but the knight’s speech. Though a “lady” was bound to
not necessarily permanent condition. Come spring, figure into the poem, that she is a “faery’s child”
after all, the cycle of the harvest will begin again. changes the expectations of the tale’s outcome and

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causes readers to reinterpret the nature of the lieve it is a representation of the perils of earthly
knight’s desolation. Literature and myth are filled love—whose desire and randomness can seem to
with examples of humans who fall in love with have the qualities of fairy-love—others maintain
gods, and with little exception, such relationships Keats is really talking about the poet’s infatuation
bode disastrously for the mortal party. Particularly with immortal concepts such as beauty. In either
in that area of mythology dealing with fairies or case, the lover—whether of another human or of
fairy-like creatures, humans who become enamored some aesthetic concept—has little choice in the
of fairies, elves, pixies, and the like generally suf- matter. To him, the experience of love is all-
fer extreme emotional consequences once their af- encompassing, transcendent and, at least briefly,
fairs with the capricious beings have ended. Having immortal. How many lovers, after all, have behaved
loved an immortal, these hapless humans discover rashly, even self-destructively, in the belief that
that mere mortal beauty—which can include not their love took precedence over the normal modes
only human lovers but also life itself—will no of conduct. In addition, how many disappointed
longer do. Based on thse conventions, readers un- lovers carry with them the belief that they can never
derstand immediately that this is the knight’s fate, love the same way again? Still, new lovers proceed
and through his descriptions of his fairy-love’s despite the warnings of previously disillusioned
beauty, readers see the caprice that brings on his lovers. So, the knight proceeds into the fairy-cave,
doom. In keeping with fairies’ quick and unpre- where, he says, “I shut her wild wild eyes”—the
dictable behavior, “her foot was light.” Her long repetition suggesting a euphemism for sex —“with
hair suggests the sensual nature of such creatures, kisses four.” In a poem devoid of many particulars,
who in lore are given to continual pleasures, and the number of kisses seems overly specific. Though
“her eyes were wild.” The knight confesses he was there are many numerological interpretations of this
taken in by his lady’s fairy-penchant for “seeming:” detail, one simple explanation for the knight’s
She looked at him “as she did love.” In the terms specificity may suffice: it is the last thing he re-
of chivalric belief-systems, earthly love is a mor- members. Moreover, it is his last act before the dis-
tally serious concept: it is at once an all-consuming illusionment and perhaps his last pure act. After the
renunciation of and at the same time the earthly kisses, he is “lulled” to sleep, has his final dream,
manifestation of heavenly love. As such, it is con- and awakes “on the cold hill’s side.”
sidered by the knight to be eternal. Yet for the lady,
who as a fairy has no such ideas about heaven or Lines 37–48
about chivalry, love is a purely earthly proposition. In his dream, the knight is warned by previous
To her, it is merely an expression of her fairy- lovers to beware “La Belle Dame sans Merci”— the
embodiment of nature, which begins and ends with lovely lady without pity. They come to him from the
the erotic. Thus, she makes a “sweet moan,” which land of death, for once they have glimpsed immor-
readers have no reason to believe is falsely manu- tality, all life seems a walking death to them. There
factured. Thus, as well, she responds favorably to are “pale kings and princes,” “pale warriors”—all
his gifts, which all represent natural or sensual plea- heroic characters whose romantic spirit led to their
sure: a “garland,” “bracelets,” a “fragrant zone.” Her demise. Yet, the knight cannot head their warnings.
hold over the knight becomes complete when she He too is a hero, and in the romantic tradition, a hero
sings to him her “faery’s song,” the type known to is often someone who cannot learn from his mis-
hopelessly enchant mortals’ souls. takes. Regardless, he has already experienced a
heightened state from which he cannot return to any
Lines 25–36 previous existence. When he awakens on the hill-
The lady’s gifts to the knight represent her side, he can only “loiter,” waiting for the experience
closeness to nature: she is able to find him “roots to return. After his fairy-romance, the world is pale
of relish sweet,” “honey wild and manna dew.” She and devoid of charm, yet to the poem’s initial
professes to him, “I love thee true.” But, she does speaker the knight’s vigil, however inevitable, seems
so in a “language strange” whose words may (and, to be pointless and grim. The poem concludes with
it turns out, do) not hold the same meanings as the a recollection of the first stanza: “though the sedge
knight’s. Still, the knight believes because, in the is wither’d from the lake / And no birds sing.” This
truest fashion of the romantic sensibility, he wants not only frames the poem; it also confirms that the
and needs to believe. At this point, readers might knight agrees with the first speaker’s assessment of
examine the various allegorical meanings readers the setting. At the same time, the knight cannot agree
have attached to the knight’s story. While some be- with the speaker’s implication that no human ought

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to remain in such a godforsaken place. For the


knight, who has glimpsed the immortal and will
probably never do so again, any other place would
seem equally desolate. Topics for
Further
Themes Study
• Find a contemporary song you think has the
Unrequited Love same message as Keats’s poem. Compare the
With its forlorn, heartbroken narrator suffer-
song with the poem to comment on the ways
ing the pangs of embarrassment, “La Belle Dame
people of the nineteenth century and the twenty-
sans Merci” appears to tell readers about the uni-
first century view love.
versal situation known as unrequited love. While
love felt equally by two parties is a celebrated event • Research why it is significant that Keats wrote
in stories and song, unrequited love occurs when the title of his poem in French. Based on your
the love felt by one person is much stronger than research, do you think the French title has the
that felt by the person who is loved. The root “re- same significance now that it would have had
quite” comes from “to repay,” which indicates a when Keats were living? Why or why not?
balance that one expects in a love relationship and
• Write a sequel to this poem, explaining what will
the sense of unfairness when one person “pays”
happen when the spring comes again. Will the
love out but is not paid back.
lover return to the knight? If not, will he con-
In the poem the knight’s disappointment would tinue waiting, or will his attention fade as the
be less severe if he did not believe from the be- seasons change?
ginning of their affair that the fairy child loved him
in equal measure. As it is, she appears to fall in • Keats used a supernatural setting to explain his
love with the knight just as he is falling for her. idea of romance. Find a folk story from a non-
The look she gives him in line 19 and her “sweet European culture that involves lovers in a super-
moan” in line 20 might be read as signs of her love, natural setting and explain what the supernatural
and the presents she gives him are further proof elements tell you about each culture.
they are equally balanced in their feelings for one
another. She even takes him back to her home, her
“elfin grot,” and makes him feel comfortable. It
would be natural for him to assume she is as in-
terested as he is in continuing their budding ro- Nature
mance when he awakes. The love story told in this poem is framed
It is unclear whether the knight’s intense feel- within images of nature. The lady with whom the
ing when he finds his lady gone is caused primarily knight falls in love is described as the child of a
by the loss of the woman herself. It could be that he fairy. Fairy stories often stem from rural folklore
is suffering from the disappointing conclusion that traditions. The lady is described as having “wild”
she never really loved him as much as he thought eyes and as living in a cave on a hill side. When
she did. By the end of the poem he clearly feels they are together, the knight and the lady give each
alone, but he does not show any anger toward her. other presents made from flowers, roots, honey, and
The only clues the poem gives about whether or not dew. After the knight awakens to find the lady
the lady may have felt love for the knight come from gone, the world is described as one from which life
the spectral images who visit the knight in his dream has receded, using images associated with nature’s
and tell him the lady is pitiless, that she has no mercy. death each winter: the squirrels have stored their
The presence of these dream images may be ex- provisions for the long dead months, the grass in
plained psychologically, as if the knight subcon- the lake has withered, and the birds have quit
sciously knew the lady had left him, and his mind singing. The only signs of living nature after the
had already started shifting the blame toward her. lady disappears are the fading ones on the knight’s
The dream might just be his rationalization, a way face. The “lily” that the poem’s other speaker sees
of making her out to be evil in order to cope with on the knight’s brow is a sign he once was blessed
the pain of learning his love is unrequited. with the delicate beauty of a flower, although lilies

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are associated with death. The rose color in his courage, the mysterious, and the supernatural.
cheek is another sign he has been touched by Though the ballad is generally rich in musical qual-
beauty, but it, like the rest of nature, is “fading.” ities such as rhythm and repetition, it often portrays
both characters and events in highly dramatic but
Despair simplistic terms.
Despair is the state of having lost all hope, of Additional characteristics of the typical ballad
finding oneself unable to believe life will ever be include a set rhyme scheme and alternating line
good again. The knight in “La Belle Dame sans lengths. Formally, the ballad stanza is a quatrain,
Merci” falls into despair when he learns a rela- or a group of four lines, in which the first and third
tionship that seemed to be just starting has abruptly lines contain four stressed syllables while the sec-
ended. His situation is clear from the very first line, ond and fourth lines contain three stressed sylla-
when a stranger finds him out in the forest and can bles. “La Belle Dame sans Merci” consists of
tell just by looking at him that something is gravely twelve such stanzas, with a slight variation: the last
wrong. The stranger sees how pale he is and, notic- line of each stanza contains only two stressed syl-
ing he has chosen to live by a dead, frozen lake, lables, creating a dramatic suspension between
wants to know what ails him, by which he means stanzas. Aside from this, the quatrains exhibit the
what has made the knight so sick in spirit. typical ballad stanza pattern of rhyme: the second
In the middle stanzas of the poem, the knight and fourth lines are set in perfect end rhyme with
describes the romance, which meant more to him one another, giving the poem the musical sound
than anything that happened before it or since. The most ballads feature.
brief romance ended with the lady lulling him to
sleep. Readers can assume that, comfortable and
happy beside her, he expected their love to con-
tinue and even to grow when he awoke. Historical Context
In the real (as opposed to magical) world, the
knight’s despair would take time to develop, be- Romanticism
cause he would not know for sure that the woman John Keats is considered one of the central fig-
he loved was gone forever. In the magical world of ures in the English romantic movement. Romanti-
this poem, though, he is visited in his sleep by pale cism was a philosophical and artistic ideal that
figures of noble men who describe the woman as spread across Western civilization in the late eigh-
merciless. When he wakes to find her gone, he read- teenth and early nineteenth century. It sprang from
ily believes her absence confirms the damning the ideas of French writer Jean Jacques Rousseau
things the figures said about her. The poem does and German writer Johann Wolfgang von Goethe.
not have the knight looking for his lady or trying Rousseau, a major figure in the Enlightenment,
to find out why she has left; he is as certain she wrote eloquently and convincingly about theories
had no intention of staying with him just as surely of social equality. At the time, most governments
as he knows he loves her. There is no hope they were arranged in a system that divided the oppor-
will be reunited, and therefore there is no hope that tunities for social success available to commoners
he can ever be happy again. His life is doomed to from those available to people considered to be of
despair. noble birth. Rousseau’s writings presented society
as a corruption of humanity’s natural state. His
theory that every citizen participates in society will-
ingly, as part of an implied “social contract,” cre-
ated a cult of individual freedom that celebrated the
Style human spirit and led to the French Revolution in
“La Belle Dame sans Merci” is a ballad, an old 1789. The Revolution’s ten-year struggle to over-
form of verse adapted for singing or recitation. The throw the monarchy and the nobles was one of the
ballad form originated in the days when most po- most direct influences on the romantic movement.
etry was memorized rather than written, and the Goethe was trained as a lawyer, but he became
typical subject matter of the ballad reflects a folk a celebrated poet, playwright, and novelist. In 1775
sensibility. Ballads are usually narrative, or story- he, along with German philosopher Johann Got-
telling, poems, and early ballads often addressed tfriend von Herder and historian Justus Möser, pub-
themes important to common people: love, lished a collection of essays called Of German Art

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Compare
&
Contrast
• 1819: America is a small, new country with only making it one of the most powerful countries in
twenty-two states. The nation battled Great the world.
Britain for its freedom in the American Revo-
Today: The Royal Navy is thirteenth largest
lution from 1776 to 1783, and fought them again
for maritime rights in the War of 1812, which fleet in the world and second largest in Europe
lasted until 1815. (after Greece).

Today: America is an economic superpower, • 1819: Ordinary people rely on poetry to convey
and Great Britain is one of its closest allies. physical experiences.

• 1819: The entire population of England is Today: Technological advances in photogra-


around 21 million, leaving much open, unpop- phy, sound recording, and computer-generated
ulated land. virtual reality make it possible to give people
experiences without using words.
Today: The population of England is around 46
million. With about 917 people per square mile, • 1819: Vast areas of the globe, such as the two
it is one of the most densely populated countries poles, have not yet been explored.
in the world.
Today: Any areas not currently populated are
• 1819: England has the world’s greatest navy, monitored from the ground and from space.

and Style. Their theories about art’s relation to tra- cism of Goethe, and the emphasis on nature of
ditional folktales and about the place of love and Wordsworth and Coleridge. In addition, Keats, By-
longing in art later evolved into romanticism. ron, and Shelley lived lives of freedom dedicated
Many literary critics consider the formal start to the pursuit of love and adventure, a lifestyle of-
of romanticism to be the 1800 publication of Lyri- ten associated with romantic poets in general.
cal Ballads, a collection of poems by William
Wordsworth and Samuel Taylor Coleridge. In the Chivalry
preface to that book, the two poets spelled out the The fact that the character in “La Belle Dame
principles of romantic thought. They emphasized sans Merci” is a knight is no coincidence. One of
the importance of feelings and emotion over intel- the key elements of romantic poetry is an interest
lectualism in poetry, and urged writers to cast away in the folk traditions of one’s home country. The
traditional forms and follow their inspirations. chivalric tradition, concerned with knights and their
Their call for writers to focus on the natural and relationships to the women they loved, had been
spiritual aspects of the world were mirrored familiar in European poetry for centuries. Chivalry
throughout all the arts at the turn of the century, in- was a code of ethics for knights that developed in
cluding painting, music, and architecture. They the south of France in the twelfth century. It re-
were strongly influential with the next generation quired knights to commit themselves to living by
of British poets. the virtues of loyalty, chastity, honor, and valor. It
The names most commonly associated with ro- bound the knight to be loyal to God and to follow
manticism in literature are Keats, Lord Byron, and Christian ideals; to be loyal to the feudal lord un-
Percy Bysshe Shelley. The three were friends and der whom he served; and to be loyal to one mis-
associates. Their poetry combined elements of the tress to whom he promised his love.
various romantic strains that had come before them: For knights of this tradition, love was consid-
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could be experienced in this world. Women were tion. The poem is lyrical rather than narrative.” De
to be loved from afar and to be considered unat- Reyes points out that the spare description of the
tainable. Knights chose women who were married, landscape “gives the very spirit of the old romance
or who were of a higher social rank, who could be world. And in the intense lyrical feeling we have
worshipped for their beauty and integrity but could the climax of passion.”
not become involved in any sort of physical rela-
tionship without diminishing their appeal. A knight
sworn to a lady would be bound to suffer in her
name, to work hard at making himself worthy of Criticism
her affection. This aspect of the chivalric ideal
served to make knights good servants and citizens, David Kelly
directing their energies away from desire and to- Kelly is an instructor of creative writing and
ward a higher good. literature at Oakton Community College. In this es-
In practice, the idea of chivalry was short- say, Kelly examines the many ways in which Keats
lived, falling to abuse and corruption. It was an idea explores subjective reality in the poem.
more often talked about than acted upon by knights. One of the most notable things about John
It carried on in literature, however, in the songs of Keats’s ballad “La Belle Dame sans Merci” is the
troubadours, who traveled from town to town sly way it presents one of the key issues of romantic
singing poems for a living. In England, chivalry be- philosophy, that of objective versus subjective re-
came crystallized in the legends of King Arthur and ality. The quick, simple understanding—the ency-
his Knights of the Round Table during the four- clopedia version—is that romantic poets favor
teenth century. The suffering of the knight in this subjectivism, particularly those who, like Keats,
poem, his all-consuming desire for the nymph, and wrote at the height of the romantic period and
his relationship with her all refer back to the Eng- helped define the movement, but also those aligned
lish chivalric tradition. with romanticism to this day. Their world view is
generally characterized as a writer focusing on his
or her own experience, with no regard for the va-
riety of perspectives that can occur when other
Critical Overview points of view are considered.
The central figure in “La Belle Dame sans
“La Belle Dame sans Merci” is one of Keats’s most
Merci” is a medieval knight-at-arms who has suf-
beloved poems and one of the few important works
fered one of the worst relationship scenarios imag-
that seems to evade the kind of critical argumenta-
inable. As he explains it, he met a woman and they
tion invoked by the odes and long poems. Typical
fell in love, leading to a brief, passionate romance.
of critics’ magnanimity toward the ballad is T. Hall
After he fell asleep, the unreality of the situation
Caine’s 1882 assessment of the poem as the “loveli-
assaulted him in two ways. First, he was visited in
est [Keats] gave us.” He writes that the ballad is
his dream by figures who warned him the lady was
“wholly simple and direct, and informed through-
insincere in her love, and then their warning proved
out by a reposeful strength. In all the qualities that
true when he woke up and found her gone.
rule and shape poetry into unity of form, this little
work strides, perhaps, leagues in advance of All of these events, the disappearing lover and
‘Endymion,’” one of Keats’s most noted poems. the warning he received about her, could just be in
Caine further argues that the ballad’s strength the knight’s mind. Keats, however, establishes a
comes from the poet’s ability to “(move) through level of objective reality in the poem by opening it
an atmosphere peculiar to poetry, lacing and inter- with a second character who meets the knight in
lacing . . . combinations of thought and measure, the woods and talks with him. It is the interplay be-
(and) incorporating . . . meaning with . . . music.” tween reality and fantasy, and the poem’s refusal
In a 1913 essay, Mary de Reyes notes Keats’s fas- to clearly define what is and is not real, that makes
cination with the doomed nature of love in “La this one of Keats’s most compelling works.
Belle Dame sans Merci.” She compares the poem Another poet might have used the uncertain
with the work of another principle romantic poetin existence of the phantom maiden herself as a test
both tone and technique: “In the magical touch of case for reality. There is, after all, no proof she ever
this picture of desolation and gloom, there is much existed anywhere but in the knight’s imagination,
of the spirit of Coleridge. There is no full descrip- while at the same time there is much evidence that

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she did not. To begin, she appears to the knight in


the wilderness, where no one else could experience
her. He describes her as a “faery’s child,” giving
her, at the very least, mythical antecedents. The ro- The poem’s
mance that transpires between them is too perfect
too quickly to be thought of as the type of rela-
presumption of a jump from
tionship that might develop in the “real” world. But, the emotional to the
this poem does not really make much of the unreal
aspects surrounding the woman and her sudden ap-
physical world shows that,
pearance and disappearance; they are taken as a for Keats, the boundaries
given, as the natural course of the mysterious ways
of love. It is a fairly standard conceit in romanti-
between the two were not
cism to identify love as a part of the internal self, as fixed as readers think of
as more a matter of one person’s mind than as a
meeting of two. In terms of human relationships,
them today.”
this poem makes no effort to focus on more than
one person’s perspective, and so the mysterious na-
ture of the faery child is not very telling. She might
be a figment of the main character’s imagination, hearted misery to think about his own looks would
or she might just be the catalyst that inspires it, but have toned down the intensity of his love. His role
the reader can presume from the tone and from in the story is to concentrate on his lover, not him-
Keats’s other works that this is always the case self. While it is important for the poem to show
when one is in love. what the knight looks like, that description has to
The basic story of the poem could easily have come from someone who is not as deeply immersed
been conveyed by the knight narrating his experi- in the situation as the knight is; therefore, the
ence directly to the reading audience, if all that stranger is necessary.
Keats were trying to do was to capture the dizzy The stranger’s objectivity is also important for
high and unexpected plummet that can happen letting readers know just how odd the knight’s be-
when one is in love. Instead, he adds another char- havior is. As is always the case in issues of sub-
acter, one whose worldly existence is never ques- jectivity and objectivity, there is no way of
tioned. This second character defines the reality knowing, from just one point of view, if the events
that surrounds the knight, giving readers another are mundane, shocking, or just as they should be.
philosophical level against which to compare the If the knight’s perspective were the only one given
love relationship. in the poem, readers could come away from it
Readers are not given any details about who is thinking that the quick romance was sad, unfortu-
speaking in the first three stanzas of “La Belle nate, but in some respect normal. Keats starts the
Dame sans Merci,” and so this speaker can hardly poem with someone expressing shock at the
be thought of as a character in the poem. While un- knight’s pale complexion and at the fact that he is
developed, this stranger adds several vital elements loitering around the empty forest. The knight can
to the poem. First, having another person in the real express the agony of love, but he by himself could
world offers the poet an opportunity to give read- not put this agony into a social context without the
ers a visual description of the knight. This is im- presence of another person.
portant because it gives details about the knight’s In addition to the knight’s subjective view of
state of mind that would not otherwise come out. his situation and the objective perspective the
The knight’s attitude is more optimistic, or at least stranger gives to the same situation, the poem also
defiant, than his looks reveal: he himself is not provides several other elements to blur the line be-
aware of the toll that his ordeal has taken on him. tween internal and external reality. One seldom
In another type of poem, it might be possible for noted element is that the poem takes for granted
the knight to tell readers what he looks like with- a relationship between mental and physical well-
out even being aware of how worn out he is. There being. The knight suffers in romance, and as a re-
are ways for a writer to have a character think about sult, he is dying. His emotional turmoil leaves him
his own appearance, by seeing his reflection or by pale and sweating, the color draining from his face.
feeling his face with his hands. But in this case, The images of dying nature that surround him can
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in his misery, he would choose to pass his time in a fantasy love affair or not, creating his own tuber-
miserable setting. Even though psychologists believe culosis within his mind, and then warning himself
that mental states affect one’s health, the relation- about the dangers of going beyond his own mind
ship between the two is not generally considered as by entering into a relationship with another person.
direct as Keats presents it. According to biographer There is also a strong representation of the objec-
Aileen Ward, Keats and his contemporaries believed tive world, in the unnamed stranger who encoun-
“that emotional agitation, especially that of an un- ters the knight in the woods. The poem provides
happy love, could bring on consumption,” or tuber- no clear-cut answers about how the world of emo-
culosis, which was the disease Keats had, and the tion affects or is affected by the physical world, but
one from which the knight seems to be suffering. it does raise substantive questions that cannot be
The poem’s presumption of a jump from the emo- easily ignored.
tional to the physical world shows that, for Keats, Source: David Kelly, Critical Essay on “La Belle Dame sans
the boundaries between the two were not as fixed as Merci,” in Poetry for Students, The Gale Group, 2003.
readers think of them today.
One final way that Keats blurs the line between Wolf Z. Hirst
subjectivity and objectivity is the appearance, in In the following except, Hirst illustrates how
stanza 10, of the pale images who speak the poem’s Keats intertwines the diverse elements of “La Belle
title to the knight. There can scarcely be any ques- Dame sans Merci.”
tion about whether they exist in the outside world
With an inimitable magic Keats depicts an-
or only in the knight’s mind: they appear in a dream,
other cheated soul in “La Belle Dame sans Merci.”
they appear in a crowd (the way kings, princes, and
Flight into visionary experience and back again is
warriors never do), and they are even in the faded
expressed by means of the well-known motif (to be
colors of a dream. There is no sign of them in the
used once more in Lamia) of a mortal’s ruinous
woods, only in the knight’s mind. Keats complicates
love for a supernatural lady: a knight encounters
the question of existence by having them interact
and falls in love with a beautiful “fairy’s child”,
with the outside world in a way that goes past the
dreams in her “elfin grot” of “pale kings, and
range of the knight’s subconsciousness.
princes” and “Pale warriors”, and wastes away “On
To understand the significance of the ghostly the cold hill’s side.” The poet may have dashed off
figures, one must assume that the faery-child was this masterpiece of the literary-ballad genre straight
in fact real and not just a figure of the knight’s into the journal-letter on 21 April 1819, which
imagination. This is a more substantial interpreta- gives us the version usually preferred to the one
tion than assuming that one fantasy is warning the printed in Hunt’s Indicator in May 1820. (The lat-
knight against another fantasy. If the knight had in ter, among other things, substituted “wretched
fact met a girl in the woods and shared a quick ro- wight” for the “knight at arms” of the first line, and
mance with her, then the figures in his dream could in stanza eight omitted “kisses four,” the expres-
just be interpreted as his subconscious warning sion Keats singled out for the banter quoted in
him, presumably because it had picked up some chapter 2.) Whether Keats was most inspired by
negative sign from her that his conscious mind had Spenser, the popular ballad “Thomas Rhymer,”
not noticed. That would only explain the fact that Dante, vampire literature, Celtic lore, Wordsworth
she would eventually be bad for him. In the poem, and Coleridge, his own earlier poems, a painting
though, they are warning him she will abandon him by William Hilton, or his relationship with Fanny
at the same time she is abandoning him in real life. Brawne is less important than the skill with which
Dreams sometimes are thought to have the ability he conjures the most diverse elements into a uni-
to predict reality, but granting them the ability to fied impression of spellbinding mystery.
know what is going on in the outside world while The poem comprises three concentric dream
the dreamer is dreaming raises a whole new ques- circles. The outer frame (dream 1) consists of a
tion about where the mental world leaves off and weird encounter between the poem’s first speaker
the physical world begins. and a haggard knight on whose cheek the rose is
Romantic poets are famous for describing the fading, while the knight’s ride through the mead
world as a subjective experience, one in which the and the kisses in the grotto form an inner frame
important things happen in the human heart. There (dream 2) to the dream about the pale kings with
is certainly plenty of that in “La Belle Dame sans the starved lips (dream 3). The aura of a transcen-
Merci,” with the knight-in-arms either creating a dental experience which pervades the meeting with

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the fairy lady (dream 2) is undermined by the


knight’s dream of the death-pale kings and warriors
(dream 3) with its suggestion of mortality and be-
trayal. This dream within the knight’s dream in the It is unclear whether
dream poem—this third dream of the starved lips the knight himself knows
and horrid warning—comes true when the knight
awakes on the cold hillside pale and enthralled as exactly how, why, and
the dream prophesied. The realization of this dream what things have happened
of deathly pallor and starvation has moved in the
opposite direction from Endymion’s and Made- to him.”
line’s dreams, where fulfillment signified a shift
from the actual to some ecstatic transcendental
realm. Within the overall dream frame of the first
speaker’s words to the fantastic knight-at-arms and the questioner at the most what the knight himself
the latter’s reply, the transition from the dream has learned but what the reader has known all along
within a dream in the supermortal elfin world to from the title: the knight is entranced by a cruel
the world of the withering sedge (from dream 3 to lady. By only pretending to provide a solution to
dream 1) has a touch of harsh reality. On the other the enigma, this ballad calls attention to the inde-
hand the entry into, journey through, and sojourn terminacy and frequent mystery of its genre just as
in the elfin world itself remains pure dream “St. Agnes” showed how the author of romance
throughout (dream 2). This dream comprises the manipulates his reader. But whereas in “St. Agnes”
poem’s six central stanzas from the knight’s en- the last stanza cast us abruptly back from romance
counter with the fairy’s child till she lulls him to to reality, the last six lines of “La Belle Dame,”
sleep; and the encroaching domination of the fairy though apparently returning us to a realistic level,
world is reflected in the transfer of the initiative leave us in fact still within the dream world of the
from the knight’s “I” in stanzas four to six to the outer frame, which makes rational explanation of
lady’s “she” in stanzas seven to nine. The lady’s what has happened impossible and superfluous.
ambiguity (does “as she did love” in stanza five The solution that does not solve anything merely
mean that her love is true or sham? is she a flirta- confirms our initial impression that we have here
tious seductress or a caressing mother-figure?) and the presentation of something felt on the pulses, of
eccentricity (her sidelong bending, unusual food, a beauty seized as a truth by the imagination and
strange language, and sore sighing), though ex- expressed in a language of sensation inaccessible
plicable in a supernatural and perhaps even a nat- to consecutive reasoning.
ural context, yet create an atmosphere of dreamlike The poem pushes negative capability to a new
vagueness. The knight has evidently never entered extreme. Since we have to guess even at what has
a grotto and never left “the cold hill’s side,” for happened, it is not surprising that readers fail to
here, we are told, he dreams “The latest dream”, so agree upon what the lady, the knight, his journey,
that instead of awaking in the grot he finds himself and his dream might symbolize. In this “most mys-
in the setting of the outer frame. terious and evasive of all Keats’s poems,” we can-
In the final stanza the knight tries to explain not know whether the fairy’s child is a Cynthia who
his sorry condition to the questioner. A folk ballad has failed to “make / Men’s being mortal, immor-
such as “Lord Randall,” structured on question and tal” (Endymion, I.843–44), a vampire, a Circe, “a
reply, solves its mystery in the last stanza. In “La fairy mistress from hell,” or “neutral as to good and
Belle Dame,” however, the explanation (“And this evil.” If we conjecture that she stands for the po-
is why …”) raises more questions than it answers. etic imagination, we still do not know whether the
The knight explains his haggard appearance and knight’s lapse from vision is due to her refusal to
why he does not go home in the inclement season: keep up the deception or to the knight’s own fail-
he is “in thrall.” But this explanation merely con- ure to sustain the transcendental experience; and in
fuses the questioner, who sees that the knight is un- the latter case, whether this failure is, as Wasser-
der a spell and wonders what the nature of this spell man suggests, the inevitable concomitant of his
is. It is unclear whether the knight himself knows mortal condition or the result of some particular de-
exactly how, why, and what things have happened ficiency on his part—for instance, as Richard Ben-
to him. The dream in the grotto (dream 3), which venuto argues, his fear of facing death. The lady
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than the allurements of what in the ode he calls “my


demon Poesy”, especially since the perils of love

What have repeatedly appeared in Keats’s poetry, notably


in “Isabella” and in the Romeo and Juliet motif of
Do I Read “St. Agnes.” But Murry’s assertion that behind the
poem lies “the anguish of an impossible love” (of
Next? Fanny Brawne) is only one more conjecture and his
assumption that the joking comment on the four
kisses in the letter “is the detachment of a man who
• All of Keats’s poetry is available in one volume has uttered his heart and must turn away from what
entitled The Complete Poems. This book is
he has said” can be proved no more than Jane Rabb
edited by John Barnard and was published in
Cohen’s contrary (and more extravagant) sugges-
1977 by Penguin. The Modern Library also has
tion that the comment indicates the humorous mood
a volume entitled The Complete Poems of John
in which the ballad itself was written. The suppo-
Keats, published in 1994, but it uses a revised
sition that the knight’s journey symbolizes the
version of “La Belle Dame sans Merci” that al-
tragedy of Faustian rejection of human limitations
most no other publisher uses.
is appealing, because the “starv’d lips” echo a pas-
• Sir Walter Scott’s novel Ivanhoe was published sage in Endymion: “There never liv’d a mortal man,
the same year as “La Belle Dame sans Merci.” It who bent / His appetite beyond his natural sphere,
is a tale of knights and sorcery set in the Middle / But starv’d and died”.
Ages and began a trend in historical fiction that We only know for certain, however, that the
has come to characterize the romantic movement. knight is a victim of his supernatural adventure and
• Since Keats presents his knight as turning pale no longer finds his bearings in the natural world of
and drawn, literally dying of lovesickness, stu- birdsong, harvest, and decay. While he was jour-
dents might want to read Susan Sontag’s neying through the fairy kingdom, birds sang and
groundbreaking 1978 essay “Illness as Meta- the squirrel filled the granary; now the harvest is
phor.” It was republished in 2001 by Picador over and the knight is left unprovided for. (In the
USA in one volume with the sequel essay, first two quatrains the truncated stanzaic close
“AIDS and Its Metaphors.” echoes the finality of this loss.) Those who boldly
confront this world of growth and decline (as Keats
• Keats’s own death at the young age of twenty- does in “To Autumn”) not only see the withered
six is the subject of John Evangelist Walsh’s 1999 sedge but also experience the joys and fulfillment
book Darkling I Listen: The Last Days and Death of harvest-time. In his vain attempt to die into the
of John Keats, published by St. Martin’s Press.
life of fairyland the knight separates himself from
• Andrew Motion’s acclaimed biography Keats the natural order and thus becomes a double loser:
provides one of the most thorough portraits of the cheated of both the wonders of elfin land and of
poet available. It is available in a 1999 paperback nature, he suffers a kind of death-in-life. The Ro-
edition from the University of Chicago Press. mantic journey into vision vindicated in Endymion
and still depicted as a worthwhile risk in “St.
• Keats’s name is almost always mentioned along
Agnes” here proves disastrous.
with that of his friend and fellow romantic poet
Percy Bysshe Shelley. The most dependable, au- Source: Wolf Z. Hirst, “Dying into Life: The First Hyper-
ion and ‘The Eve of St. Agnes’,” in John Keats, Twayne,
thoritative text of Shelley’s poetry available is
1981, pp. 92–118.
the 1977 edition entitled Shelley’s Poetry and
Prose, selected and edited by Donald H. Reiman
and Sharon B. Powers and published by W. W.
Norton & Company.

Keats in “Why did I laugh tonight?”: verse, fame,


beauty, and death. She may represent the fatality
of beauty or of what in “Ode on Indolence” the poet
sees as “a fair maid, and Love her name”, no less

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poem. Bostetter shows how Keats’s mistress, Fanny


Brawne, fit the love pattern he describes in this poem.
Evert, Walter H., Aesthetic and Myth in the Poetry of Keats,
Princeton University Press, 1965.
Evert analyzes the attempts of critics to determine the
“source,” or inspiration, of this poem. Examining dif-
ferent theories, he finds substantial evidence that the
theme of “La Belle Dame sans Merci” was drawn
from a sub-theme in his earlier work, Endymion.
Grant, John E., “Discovering ‘La Belle Dame sans Merci,’”
in Approaches to Teaching Keats’s Poetry, edited by Wal-
Sources ter H. Evert and Jack W. Rhodes, Modern Language Asso-
ciation of America, 1991, pp. 45–50.
Caine, T. Hall, “That Keats Was Maturing,” in Tinsley’s
This brief analysis was written primarily to help in-
Magazine, Vol. XXI, August 1882, pp. 197–200.
structors make the poem more understandable for stu-
de Reyes, Mary, “John Keats,” in Poetry Review, Vol. III, dents.
No. 2, August 1913, pp. 72–82.
Harding, Anthony John, The Reception of Myth in English
Ward, Aileen, John Keats: The Making of a Poet, The Romanticism, University of Missouri Press, 1995.
Viking Press, 1963, p. 273. Harding examines the myths and folk stories that ro-
mantic writers worked into their poetry, tracing
source materials and noting the ways in which tradi-
tional stories were altered to fit the mood of the times.
Further Reading Hirst, Wolf Z., John Keats, Twayne’s English Authors Se-
ries, No. 334, Twayne Publishers, 1981.
Bostetter, Edward E., Romantic Ventriloquists: Wordsworth, Hirst’s analysis of the poem visualizes it in “three
Coleridge, Keats, Shelley, Byron, University of Washington concentric dream circles,” examining it in terms of
Press, 1975. the interrelationships among the encounter between
The method used here is primarily biographical with two men, the encounter between two lovers, and the
relationships drawn between the poet’s life and the knight’s encounter with the pale dream figures.

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The Waste Land
Because of his wide-ranging contributions to poetry,
T. S. Eliot criticism, prose, and drama, some critics consider
Thomas Sterns Eliot one of the most influential
1922 writers of the twentieth century. The Waste Land
can arguably be cited as his most influential work.
When Eliot published this complex poem in
1922—first in his own literary magazine Criterion,
then a month later in wider circulation in the Dial—
it set off a critical firestorm in the literary world.
The work is commonly regarded as one of the sem-
inal works of modernist literature. Indeed, when
many critics saw the poem for the first time, it
seemed too modern. In the place of a traditional
work, with unified themes and a coherent structure,
Eliot produced a poem that seemed to incorporate
many unrelated, little-known references to history,
religion, mythology, and other disciplines. He even
wrote parts of the poem in foreign languages, such
as Hindu. In fact the poem was so complex that
Eliot felt the need to include extensive notes iden-
tifying the sources to which he was alluding, a
highly unusual move for a poet, and a move that
caused some critics to assert that Eliot was trying
to be deliberately obscure or was playing a joke on
them.
Yet, while the poem is obscure, critics have
identified several sources that inspired its creation
and which have helped determine its meaning.
Many see the poem as a reflection of Eliot’s disil-
lusionment with the moral decay of post–World
War I Europe. In the work, this sense of disillu-
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type of Holy Grail legend. Eliot cited two books


from which he drew to create the poem’s symbol-
ism: Jessie L. Weston’s From Ritual to Romance
(1920) and Sir James G. Frazer’s The Golden
Bough: A Study in Magic and Religion (1890). The
1922 version of The Waste Land was also signifi-
cantly influenced by Eliot’s first wife Vivien and
by his friend Ezra Pound, who helped Eliot edit the
original 800-line draft down to the published 433
lines. While The Waste Land is widely available
today, perhaps one of the most valuable editions
for students is the Norton Critical Edition, which
was published by W. W. Norton in 2000. In addi-
tion to the poem, this edition also includes anno-
tated notes from editors and from Eliot, a
publication history, a chronology, a selected bibli-
ography, and a collection of reprinted reviews from
the 1920s to the end of the twentieth century.
An attempt to examine, line by line, the spe-
cific meaning of every reference and allusion in
The Waste Land would certainly go beyond the in-
tended scope of this entry. Instead, it is more help-
ful to examine the overall meaning of each of the T. S. Eliot
five sections of the poem, highlighting some of the
specific references as examples. But first a discus-
sion of the poem’s title The Waste Land is neces-
sary. The title refers to a myth from From Ritual Harvard with a bachelor’s degree in philosophy,
to Romance, in which Weston describes a kingdom and he finished his master’s degree in philosophy
where the genitals of the king, known as the Fisher a year later. Over the next six years, he pursued
King, have been wounded in some way. This in- further graduate studies in philosophy at a number
jury, which affects the king’s fertility, also mythi- of institutions in the United States and Europe, in-
cally affects the kingdom itself. With its vital, cluding Harvard, the Paris Sorbonne, Marburg in
regenerative power gone, the kingdom has dried up Germany, and Merton College, Oxford, ultimately
and turned into a waste land. In order for the land completing his dissertation in 1916.
to be restored, a hero must complete several tasks, During the period of his studies, he met two
or trials. Weston notes that this ancient myth was people who would prove to be influential to his writ-
the basis for various other quest stories from many ing. The first was fellow poet Ezra Pound, who be-
cultures, including the Christian quest for the Holy came Eliot’s friend, mentor, and editor. The second
Grail. Eliot says he drew heavily on this myth for was Vivien Haigh-Wood, whom he met and mar-
his poem, and critics have noted that many of the ried in 1915 while studying in England. He and
poem’s references refer to this idea. Vivien settled in London the same year, but they
experienced a troubled relationship from the start,
due in a large part to Vivien’s neurotic illnesses.
The dark tone of Eliot’s poetry during the 1910s
Author Biography and 1920s is often attributed to his marriage. In 1915
Eliot started teaching at a London boys’ schools,
Eliot was born September 26, 1888, in St. Louis, High Wycombe Grammar School, and continued
Missouri. He was a bright and hardworking stu- his teaching the next year at Highgate Junior School,
dent, who experienced a classical, wide-ranging ed- also in London. In 1917 Eliot left teaching to work
ucation. Eliot studied philosophy and French in the Colonial and Foreign Department at Lloyds
literature at Harvard. He also joined the staff of the Bank in London, a position he held until 1925. At
university’s literary journal, the Harvard Advocate, the same time he became assistant editor of the Ego-
in which he first published parts of “The Love Song ist (1917–1919), in which he published Prufrock,
of J. Alfred Prufrock.” In 1909 he graduated from and Other Observations (1917).

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In 1921 the combined strain of his marriage, ex-wife died after having spent several years in an
his bank job, and his writing and editing pursuits institution. Eliot met Valerie Fletcher, who became
led Eliot to have a nervous breakdown. He recov- his secretary and eventually, in 1957, his wife. Un-
ered at a sanitorium in Switzerland, where in 1922 like his previous marriage, Eliot was notably happy
he completed his poem The Waste Land. Upon his in this relationship.
return to London the same year, Eliot became the In 1948 Eliot was awarded the Nobel Prize in
founding editor of the literary journal Criterion, at literature and the English Order of Merit. These and
which he remained editor until 1939. At the sug- many other awards, along with Eliot’s general pop-
gestion of Pound, who also helped him in the en- ularity as a dramatist, made the author a noted lit-
deavor, Eliot edited The Waste Land from about erary and public figure until his death and beyond.
800 lines to 433 before publishing it in late 1922, Eliot died January 4, 1965, in London, England, of
first in Criterion, then a month later in another lit- emphysema and related complications.
erary journal, the Dial. The poem, which is largely
credited with helping to launch the modern litera-
ture movement, shifted Eliot from a poet who was
only moderately in the public consciousness to a Poem Text
poet who was alternately praised and vilified.
In 1925 Eliot left Lloyds to work as a literary I. THE BURIAL OF THE DEAD
editor at the publishing firm of Faber and Gwyer April is the cruellest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
(later Faber & Faber). In 1927 he became a natural- Memory and desire, stirring
ized British subject and a member of the Anglican Dull roots with spring rain.
Church, at which point, his work began to change Winter kept us warm, covering 5
thematically, addressing more religious issues. Earth in forgetful snow, feeding
During the 1932 to 1933 academic year, Eliot was A little life with dried tubers.
Summer surprised us, coming over the
invited to Harvard as the Charles Eliot Norton Pro-
Starnbergersee
fessor of Poetry. This physical separation from his With a shower of rain; we stopped in the
wife, who stayed behind in London, ultimately led colonnade,
to their divorce. And went on in sunlight, into the Hofgarten, 10
And drank coffee, and talked for an hour.
During the 1930s Eliot began devoting much Bin gar keine Russin, stamm’ aus Litauen, echt
of his writing time to lectures and literary criticism, deutsch.
publishing such landmark works as The Use of Po- And when we were children, staying at the
etry and the Use of Criticism: Studies in the Rela- archduke’s,
tion of Criticism to Poetry in England (1933) and My cousin’s, he took me out on a sled,
After Strange Gods: A Primer of Modern Heresy And I was frightened. He said, Marie, 15
Marie, hold on tight. And down he went.
(1934). Just as The Waste Land and Eliot’s other In the mountains, there you feel free.
works in that era helped to usher in the modernist I read, much of the night, and go south in the
period of literature, his critical work in the 1930s winter.
and 1940s is commonly acknowledged as a major What are the roots that clutch, what branches grow
catalyst for the rise of the New Criticism move- Out of this stony rubbish? Son of man, 20
ment in England and the United States. You cannot say, or guess, for you know only
A heap of broken images, where the sun beats,
Also in the 1930s, Eliot wrote several plays. And the dead tree gives no shelter, the cricket no
One of his first plays, The Rock: A Pageant Play relief,
(1934), was commissioned by the church and was And the dry stone no sound of water. Only
overtly religious in its themes. His next play, Mur- There is shadow under this red rock, 25

der in the Cathedral (1935), was also commis- (Come in under the shadow of this red rock),
And I will show you something different from
sioned by the church, and it is widely considered
either
Eliot’s most successful play. Your shadow at morning striding behind you
Eliot wrote his last four major poetic works in Or your shadow at evening rising to meet you;
the 1940s: East Coker (1940), Burnt Norton (1941), I will show you fear in a handful of dust. 30
Frisch weht der Wind
The Dry Salvages (1941), and Little Gidding
Der-Heimat zu
(1942). Collectively these works were published Mein Irisch Kind,
as The Four Quartets (1943). In 1947 Eliot’s life Wo weilest du?
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“They called me the hyacinth girl.” In fattening the prolonged candle-flames,


—Yet when we came back, late, from the hyacinth Flung their smoke into the laquearia,
garden, Stirring the pattern on the coffered ceiling.
Your arms full, and your hair wet, I could not Huge sea-wood fed with copper
Speak, and my eyes failed, I was neither Burned green and orange, framed by the coloured 95
Living nor dead, and I knew nothing, 40 stone,
Looking into the heart of light, the silence. In which sad light a carvèd dolphin swam.
Oed’ und leer das Meer. Above the antique mantel was displayed
Madame Sosostris, famous clairvoyante, As though a window gave upon the sylvan scene
Had a bad cold, nevertheless The change of Philomel, by the barbarous king
Is known to be the wisest woman in Europe, 45
So rudely forced; yet there the nightingale 100

With a wicked pack of cards. Here, said she, Filled all the desert with inviolable voice
Is your card, the drowned Phoenician Sailor, And still she cried, and still the world pursues,
(Those are pearls that were his eyes. Look!) “Jug Jug” to dirty ears.
Here is Belladonna, the Lady of the Rocks, And other withered stumps of time
The lady of situations. 50 Were told upon the walls; staring forms 105

Here is the man with three staves, and here the Leaned out, leaning, hushing the room enclosed.
Wheel, Footsteps shuffled on the stair.
And here is the one-eyed merchant, and this card, Under the firelight, under the brush, her hair
Which is blank, is something he carries on his Spread out in fiery points
back, Glowed into words, then would be savagely still. 110
Which I am forbidden to see. I do not find “My nerves are bad to-night. Yes, bad. Stay
The Hanged Man. Fear death by water. 55
with me.
I see crowds of people, walking round in a ring. Speak to me. Why do you never speak? Speak.
Thank you. If you see dear Mrs. Equitone, What are you thinking of? What thinking?
Tell her I bring the horoscope myself: What?
One must be so careful these days. I never know what you are thinking. Think.”
60
Unreal City, I think we are in rats’ alley
115
Under the brown fog of a winter dawn, Where the dead men lost their bones.
A crowd flowed over London Bridge, so many,
I had not thought death had undone so many. “What is that noise?”
Sighs, short and infrequent, were exhaled, The wind under the door.
And each man fixed his eyes before his feet. 65 “What is that noise now? What is the wind doing?”
Flowed up the hill and down King William Street, Nothing again nothing. 120
To where Saint Mary Woolnoth kept the hours “Do
With a dead sound on the final stroke of nine. You know nothing? Do you see nothing? Do you
There I saw one I knew, and stopped him, crying: remember
“Stetson! “Nothing?”
“You who were with me in the ships at Mylae! 70
I remember
“That corpse you planted last year in your garden,
Those are pearls that were his eyes. 125
“Has it begun to sprout? Will it bloom this year?
“Are you alive, or not? Is there nothing in your
“Or has the sudden frost disturbed its bed?
head?”
“O keep the Dog far hence, that’s friend to men,
“Or with his nails he’ll dig it up again! 75 But
“You! Hypocrite lecteur!—mon semblable,—mon O O O O that Shakespeherian Rag—
frère!” It’s so elegant
So intelligent 130
II. A GAME OF CHESS
“What shall I do now? What shall I do?
The Chair she sat in, like a burnished throne,
I shall rush out as I am, and walk the street
Glowed on the marble, where the glass
With my hair down, so. What shall we do
Held up by standards wrought with fruited vines
tomorrow?
From which a golden Cupidon peeped out 80
What shall we ever do?”
(Another hid his eyes behind his wing)
The hot water at ten. 135
Doubled the flames of sevenbranched candelabra
And if it rains, a closed car at four.
Reflecting light upon the table as
And we shall play a game of chess,
The glitter of her jewels rose to meet it,
Pressing lidless eyes and waiting for a knock upon
From satin cases poured in rich profusion. 85
the door.
In vials of ivory and coloured glass
Unstoppered, lurked her strange synthetic When Lil’s husband got demobbed, I said—
perfumes, I didn’t mince my words, I said to her myself, 140
Unguent, powdered, or liquid—troubled, confused HURRY UP PLEASE ITS TIME
And drowned the sense in odours; stirred by the air Now Albert’s coming back, make yourself a bit
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He’ll want to know what you done with that The rattle of the bones, and chuckle spread from
money he gave you ear to ear.
To get yourself some teeth. He did, I was there.
A rat crept softly through the vegetation
You have them all out, Lil, and get a nice set, 145
Dragging its slimy belly on the bank
He said, I swear, I can’t bear to look at you.
While I was fishing in the dull canal
And no more can’t I, I said, and think of poor
On a winter evening round behind the gashouse 190
Albert,
Musing upon the king my brother’s wreck
He’s been in the army four years, he wants a good
And on the king my father’s death before him.
time,
White bodies naked on the low damp ground
And if you don’t give it him, there’s others will, I
And bones cast in a little low dry garret,
said.
Rattled by the rat’s foot only, year to year. 195
Oh is there, she said. Something o’ that, I said. 150
But at my back from time to time I hear
Then I’ll know who to thank, she said, and give me
The sound of horns and motors, which shall bring
a straight look.
Sweeney to Mrs. Porter in the spring.
HURRY UP PLEASE ITS TIME
O the moon shone bright on Mrs. Porter
If you don’t like it you can get on with it, I said.
Others can pick and choose if you can’t. And on her daughter 200

But if Albert makes off, it won’t be for lack of 155


They wash their feet in soda water
telling. Et O ces voix d’enfants, chantant dans la coupole!
You ought to be ashamed, I said, to look so Twit twit twit
antique. Jug jug jug jug jug jug
(And her only thirty-one.) So rudely forc’d. 205
I can’t help it, she said, pulling a long face, Tereu
It’s them pills I took, to bring if off, she said.
(She’s had five already, and nearly died of young 160
Unreal City
George). Under the brown fog of a winter noon
The chemist said it would be all right, but I’ve Mr. Eugenides, the Smyrna merchant
never been the same. Unshaven, with a pocket full of currants 210

You are a proper fool, I said. C.i.f. London: documents at sight,


Well, if Albert won’t leave you alone, there it is, I Asked me in demotic French
said, To luncheon at the Cannon Street Hotel
What you get married for if you don’t want Followed by a weekend at the Metropole.
children? 215
At the violet hour, when the eyes and back
HURRY UP PLEASE ITS TIME 165 Turn upward from the desk, when the human
Well, that Sunday Albert was home, they had a hot engine waits
gammon, Like a taxi throbbing waiting,
And they asked me in to dinner, to get the beauty I Tiresias, though blind, throbbing between two
of it hot— lives,
HURRY UP PLEASE ITS TIME Old man with wrinkled female breasts, can see
HURRY UP PLEASE ITS TIME At the violet hour, the evening hour that strives 220
Goonight Bill. Goonight Lou. Goonight May. 170
Homeward, and brings the sailor home from sea,
Goonight. The typist home at teatime, clears her breakfast,
Ta ta. Goonight. Goonight. lights
Good night, ladies, good night, sweet ladies, good Her stove, and lays out food in tins.
night, good night. Out of the window perilously spread
III. THE FIRE SERMON Her drying combinations touched by the sun’s last 225

The river’s tent is broken; the last fingers of leaf rays,


Clutch and sink into the wet bank. The wind On the divan are piled (at night her bed)
Crosses the brown land, unheard. The nymphs are 175 Stockings, slippers, camisoles, and stays.
departed. I Tiresias, old man with wrinkled dugs
Sweet Thames, run softly, till I end my song. Perceived the scene, and foretold the rest—
The river bears no empty bottles, sandwich papers, I too awaited the expected guest. 230
Silk handkerchiefs, cardboard boxes, cigarette ends He, the young man carbuncular, arrives,
Or other testimony of summer nights. The nymphs A small house agent’s clerk, with one bold stare,
are departed. One of the low on whom assurance sits
And their friends, the loitering heirs of City 180 As a silk hat on a Bradford millionaire.
directors; The time is now propitious, as he guesses, 235
Departed, have left no addresses. The meal is ended, she is bored and tired,
By the waters of Leman I sat down and wept . . . Endeavours to engage her in caresses
Sweet Thames, run softly till I end my song, Which still are unreproved, if undesired.
Sweet Thames, run softly, for I speak not loud or Flushed and decided, he assaults at once;
long. Exploring hands encounter no defence; 240
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And makes a welcome of indifference. Nothing with nothing.


(And I Tiresias have foresuffered all The broken fingernails of dirty hands.
Enacted on this same divan or bed; My people humble people who expect
I who have sat by Thebes below the wall 245 Nothing.” 305
And walked among the lowest of the dead.) la la
Bestows one final patronising kiss, To Carthage then I came
And gropes his way, finding the stairs unlit . . .
Burning burning burning burning
She turns and looks a moment in the glass, O Lord Thou pluckest me out
Hardly aware of her departed lover; 250 O Lord Thou pluckest 310
Her brain allows one half-formed thought to pass: burning
”Well now that’s done: and I’m glad it’s over.”
IV. DEATH BY WATER
When lovely woman stoops to folly and
Phlebas the Phoenician, a fortnight dead,
Paces about her room again, alone,
Forgot the cry of gulls, and the deep sea swell
She smooths her hair with automatic hand, 255
And the profit and loss.
And puts a record on the gramophone.
A current under sea 315
”This music crept by me upon the waters” Picked his bones in whispers. As he rose and fell
And along the Strand, up Queen Victoria Street. He passed the stages of his age and youth
O City city, I can sometimes hear Entering the whirlpool.
Beside a public bar in Lower Thames Street, 260 Gentile or Jew
The pleasant whining of a mandoline O you who turn the wheel and look to windward, 320
and a clatter and a chatter from within Consider Phlebas, who was once handsome and tall
Where fishmen lounge at noon: where the walls as you.
Of Magnus Martyr hold V. WHAT THE THUNDER SAID
Inexplicable splendour of lonian white and gold. 265
After the torchlight red on sweaty faces
The river sweats After the frosty silence in the gardens
Oil and tar After the agony in stony places
The barges drift The shouting and the crying 325

With the turning tide Prison and palace and reverberation


Red sails 270 Of thunder of spring over distant mountains
Wide He who was living is now dead
To leeward, swing on the heavy spar. We who were living are now dying
The barges wash With a little patience 330

Drifting logs Here is no water but only rock


Down Greenwich reach 275 Rock and no water and the sandy road
Past the Isle of Dogs. The road winding above among the mountains
Weialala leia Which are mountains of rock without water
Wallala leialala If there were only water amongst the rock 335
Amongst the rock one cannot stop or think
Elizabeth and Leicester
Sweat is dry and feet are in the sand
Beating oars 280
If there were only water amongst the rock
The stern was formed
Dead mountain mouth of carious teeth that cannot
A gilded shell
spit
Red and gold
Here one can neither stand nor lie nor sit 340
The brisk swell
There is not even silence in the mountains
Rippled both shores 285
But dry sterile thunder without rain
Southwest wind
There is not even solitude in the mountains
Carried down stream
But red sullen faces sneer and snarl
The peal of bells
From doors of mudcracked houses 345
White towers
If there were water
Weialala leia 290
And no rock
Wallala leialala
If there were rock
”Trams and dusty trees. And also water
Highbury bore me. Richmond and Kew And water 350
Undid me. By Richmond I raised my knees A spring
Supine on the floor of a narrow canoe.” 295 A pool among the rock
If there were the sound of water only
”My feet are at Moorgate, and my heart
Not the cicada
Under my feet. After the event
And dry grass singing 355
He wept. He promised ‘a new start.’
But sound of water over a rock
I made no comment. What should I resent?”
Where the hermit-thrush sings in the pine trees
300
”On Margate Sands. Drip drop drip drop drop drop drop
I can connect But there is no water
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Who is the third who walks always beside you? DA


When I count, there are only you and I together Damyata: The boat responded
But when I look ahead up the white road Gaily, to the hand expert with sail and oar
There is always another one walking beside you The sea was calm, your heart would have 420
Gliding wrapt in a brown mantle, hooded responded
I do not know whether a man or a woman 365 Gaily, when invited, beating obedient
—But who is that on the other side of you? To controlling hands
What is that sound high in the air I sat upon the shore
Murmur of maternal lamentation Fishing, with the arid plain behind me
Who are those hooded hordes swarming Shall I at least set my lands in order? 425
Over endless plains, stumbling in cracked earth 370 London Bridge is falling down falling down falling
Ringed by the flat horizon only down
What is the city over the mountains Poi s’ascose nel foco che gli affina
Quando fiam ceu chelidon—O swallow swallow
Cracks and reforms and bursts in the violet air Le Prince d’Aquitaine à la tour abolie
Falling towers These fragments I have shored against my ruins 430
Jerusalem Athens Alexandria Vienna London 375
Why then Ile fit you. Hieronymo’s mad againe.
Unreal Datta. Dayadhvam. Damyata.
A woman drew her long black hair out tight Shantih shantih shantih
And fiddled whisper music on those strings
And bats with baby faces in the violet light
Whistled, and beat their wings 380
And crawled head downward down a blackened
wall Poem Summary
And upside down in air were towers
Tolling reminiscent bells, that kept the hours I. Burial of the Dead
And voices singing out of empty cisterns and The first section, as the section title indicates,
exhausted wells. is about death. The section begins with the words
385
In this decayed hole among the mountains “April is the cruellest month,” which is perhaps one
In the faint moonlight, the grass is singing of the most remarked upon and most important ref-
Over the tumbled graves, about the chapel erences in the poem. Those familiar with Chaucer’s
There is the empty chapel, only the wind’s
home.
poem The Canterbury Tales will recognize that
It has no windows, and the door swings, Eliot is taking Chaucer’s introductory line from the
Dry bones can harm no one. 390 prologue—which is optimistic about the month of
Only a crock stood on the rooftree April and the regenerative, life-giving season of
Co co rico co co rico spring—and turning it on its head. Just as
In a flash of lightning. Then a damp gust Chaucer’s line sets the tone for The Canterbury
Bringing rain
395
Tales, Eliot’s dark words inform the reader that this
Ganga was sunken, and the limp leaves is going to be a dark poem. Throughout the rest of
Waited for rain, while the black clouds the first section, as he will do with the other four
Gathered far distant, over Himavant.
The jungle crouched, humped in silence.
sections, Eliot shifts among several disconnected
Then spoke the thunder thoughts, speeches, and images.
DA 400 Collectively, the episodic scenes in lines 1
Datta: what have we given? through 18 discuss the natural cycle of death, which
My friend, blood shaking my heart is symbolized by the passing of the seasons. The
The awful daring of a moment’s surrender first seven lines employ images of spring, such as
Which an age of prudence can never retract
“breeding / Lilacs,” and “Dull roots with spring
By this, and this only, we have existed 405
Which is not to be found in our obituaries rain.” In line 8, Eliot tells the reader “Summer sur-
Or in memories draped by the beneficent spider prised us, coming over the Starnbergersee.” The
Or under seals broken by the lean solicitor time has shifted from spring to summer. And while
In our empty rooms the reference to Starnbergersee—a lake south of
DA 410 Munich, Germany—has been linked to various as-
Dayadhvam: I have heard the key pects of Eliot’s past, to Eliot’s readers at the time
Turn in the door once and turn once only
We think of the key, each in his prison
the poem was published, it would have stuck out
Thinking of the key, each confirms a prison for other reasons, given that World War I had fairly
Only at nightfall, aethereal rumours 415 recently ended. During the war Germany was one
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In line 43 Eliot introduces the character of


Madame Sosostris, a gifted mystic with a “wicked
pack of cards,” or tarot cards. She pulls the card of
“the drowned Phoenician Sailor,” another image of
Media death and also a direct reference to a fertility god
who, according to Sir James Frazer’s The Golden
Adaptations Bough, was drowned at the end of summer. Again
these images collectively illustrate the natural cy-
cle of death. Following the Madame Sosostris pas-
• Eliot’s The Waste Land and several other works sage, Eliot, beginning in line 60, introduces the
were adapted as an unabridged audiobook in “Unreal City, / Under the brown fog of a winter
2000, featuring narration by the author. T. S. Eliot dawn, / A crowd flowed over London Bridge, so
Reads: The Waste Land, Four Quartets, and many.” These lines suggest a similar description of
Other Poems is available from HarperAudio.
the modern city by Baudelaire. The image of brown
fog is dismal, as is the next line, which notes “I
had not thought death had undone so many.” Eliot
here is describing a waking death. These people are
included both the United States and England— alive in the physical sense, but dead in all others.
Eliot’s two homes. By including German refer- It is a sad city, where “each man fixed his eyes be-
ences, which continue in the next several lines and fore his feet.”
culminate in a German phrase, Eliot is invoking an
In line 68 Eliot notes there is “a dead sound
image of the war. Who are the dead that are being
on the final stroke of nine,” which refers to the start
buried in this section? All the soldiers and other ca-
of the typical work day. In other words these peo-
sualties who died during World War I.
ple trudge along in a sort of living death, going to
The German phrase leads into a conversation work, which has become an end in itself. Within
from a sledding episode in the childhood of a girl this procession, however, the poet sees someone he
named Marie. The season has changed again, to knows, “Stetson,” who was with the poet “in the
winter. Marie notes, “In the mountains, there you ships at Mylae!” Mylae is a reference to an ancient
feel free,” implying that when she is not in the battle from the First Punic War, which by exten-
mountains, on a sledding adventure, she does not sion evokes an image of death on the civilization
feel free. In other words, Marie feels trapped, just scale. The poet asks his friend if the “corpse you
as humanity feels trapped in its own waste land. In
planted last year in your garden” has “begun to
line 19 Eliot starts to give some visual cues about
sprout?” Here again Eliot is invoking the idea of
the waste land of modern society. “What are the
resurrection, and of the natural cycle of death and
roots that clutch, what branches grow / Out of this
life. First, when dead people decompose, their or-
stony rubbish?” the poet asks. In response, Eliot
ganic matter fertilizes the ground, which loops back
refers to a biblical passage, addressing the reader
to the first line of the section, in which April, “the
as “Son of man.” The poet tells the reader that
cruellest month,” is breeding flowers, which pre-
he or she “cannot say, or guess” what the roots of
sumably are feeding off this decomposed flesh. But
this waste land are, because the reader knows only
in a more specific way, this passage refers to
“A heap of broken images” where “the dead tree
Frazer’s book, which details a primitive ritual
gives no shelter.” These and other images depict a
barren, dead land. But the poet says in line 27, whereby in April these primitive civilizations
“I will show you something different.” In lines 31 would plant a male corpse, or just the man’s gen-
to 34 Eliot reproduces a song sung by a sailor in itals, in order to ensure a bountiful harvest. This
the beginning of Wagner’s Tristan und Isolde. Eliot harvest, which can be interpreted symbolically as
is inviting the reader to come on a journey, a the rebirth of civilization, is potentially threatened
tour of this modern waste land. The song—which by “the Dog,” which has been interpreted as the
asks why somebody is postponing a journey, lack of meaning in life.
when there is fresh wind blowing toward a home- Critics interpret the dog this way largely be-
land—indicates Eliot’s desire to regenerate this cause of the final lines of the section, a quote from
barren land. In fact his use of the word “Hyacinths,” Baudelaire, which indict the reader for his or her
which are symbolic of resurrection, underscores part in creating the waste land by sucking all mean-
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II. A Game of Chess play, the rich couple literally play a game of chess,
In the second section Eliot turns his attention since their relationship is sterile.
from death to sex. The title of this section refers to The next passage switches relationships, from
a scene from Thomas Middleton’s Elizabethan play the idle rich to the dirt poor. This scene, which con-
Women Beware Women, in which the moves of a tinues until the end of the section, concerns “Lil”
chess game between two people are linked onstage and her husband “Albert,” who has just been “de-
to the seduction played out by another pair. In the mobbed,” or released from the military. The line
first lines of the section, Eliot creates a lush image “HURRY UP PLEASE ITS TIME” is a reference
of a wealthy woman, who sits in a chair “like a bur- to the last call at the pub, or bar, and indicates that
nished throne.” The scene also includes “standards they must hurry if they wish to drink. The poem
wrought with fruited vines,” a “sevenbranched can- talks about Albert, who has “been in the army four
delabra,” and “jewels.” On the woman’s table are years” and who “wants a good time.” In other
“satin cases poured in rich profusion.” Inside these words he wants to have sex with his wife. He has
cases are “strange synthetic perfumes,” which also given his wife money to buy “new teeth,” be-
“drowned the sense in odours.” In other words cause he cannot stand looking at her bad teeth. And,
aphrodisiacs (artificial substances used to create or as Lil is warned, if she does not give Albert a good
enhance sexual desire). Since sex is linked to pro- time, “there’s others will.” The line “HURRY UP
creation, and thus fertility, the fact that aphrodisi- PLEASE ITS TIME” is used again, reinforcing the
acs are needed is telling. In this room there is also importance of alcohol in the relationship. The
a painting above the mantel that depicts “Philomel,” woman’s appearance is described as “antique,”
a reference to a classical woman who was raped (in- even though she is only thirty-one, and she attrib-
dicated by the words “rudely forced”) by “the bar- utes this to “them pills I took, to bring it off,” a ref-
barous king” Tereus. Eliot notes that “other erence to abortion. As the next line notes of her
withered stumps of time,” or figures from history, previous children, “She’s had five already,” a tes-
are depicted on the walls. Then he launches into tament to Albert’s immense sexual appetite, which
several disparate passages, the first of which is a is discussed further when Eliot says Albert will not
hysterical plea by the woman in the room to her leave the woman alone. But Lil is asked, “What
lover. “My nerves are bad to-night,” she says, and you get married for if you don’t want children?”
“Stay with / me.” She also asks the man what he is This line refers back to the fertility thread in the
thinking, and repeats the word “think” several times poem and the fact that modern sex is not always
in both question and statement form, ending with a about procreation. The section ends with several
one-word sentence, “Think.” Eliot is trying to get more references to “HURRY UP PLEASE ITS
his readers to think about the modern waste land, TIME,” showing that drinking has taken on more
which is clearly indicated by his multiple emphases importance in the relationship than anything else.
of the word “think” and the fact that he sets it off So, as with the first section, Eliot is showing the
on its own. loss of meaning—in this case during sex, and
Eliot repeats this pattern in another snatch of through images of loveless sex—by showing that
dialogue, in which he emphasizes the words this is true for both the rich and the poor. Just as
“noise,” “wind,” and “nothing.” He sets off “noth- the king from Weston’s book is wounded sexually,
ing” in its own one-word sentence like “think,” al- so is all of human society. It has lost the vitality
though as a question: “Nothing?” The wind and the and procreative focus of sex, and instead sex is a
noise evoke an image of activity and life, but the meaningless—and in the case of abortion, fruit-
final “nothing” again underscores the lack of mean- less—act.
ing that Eliot is trying to convey. Following this
passage, Eliot includes a passage that talks about III. The Fire Sermon
remembering the “pearls that were his eyes,” which The third section also addresses sex. The title
refers back to the dead Phoenician sailor from the refers to one of Buddha’s teachings about desire
first section. Finally, in the last passage that refers and the need to deny one’s lustful tendencies. The
to the wealthy woman and her lover, Eliot has them images with which Eliot chooses to open this sec-
talking to each other, asking what they should do. tion underscore this idea of lovelessness. For ex-
Ultimately they decide “we shall play a game of ample, “the last fingers of leaf / Clutch and sink
chess, / Pressing lidless eyes and waiting for a into the wet bank.” The dying vegetation is a sign
knock upon / the door.” While this game of chess of the death of fertility, as is the brown land and
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that the river bears no litter, such as “empty bot- section, “burning.” This one-word line refers to the
tles,” “Silk handkerchiefs,” or “cigarette ends,” all Buddhist sermon that gives the section its title, and
of which are a “testimony of summer nights”—in which encourages men to douse the fires of lust.
other words, signs of a raucous party—the image
of lifelessness is enhanced. There is no youthful IV. Death by Water
passion anymore. This feeling of despair is noted The brief fourth section, the shortest of the
further through such phrases as “A rat crept softly five, starts off with a reference to “Phlebas the
through the vegetation / Dragging its slimy belly Phoenician,” the dead sailor who was first men-
on the bank.” From here on, Eliot includes images tioned in the second section. Eliot is again focus-
and references to sex and death, including talking ing on death, and in this section he gives a thorough
about “my father’s death” and “White bodies naked description of the sailor’s body being torn apart by
on the low damp ground.” the sea: “A current under sea / Picked his bones in
After a brief, four-line stanza in which he once whispers.” The section ends with an address and
again invokes the rape of Philomel, Eliot returns to warning to the reader to “Consider Phlebas, who
the “Unreal City,” the modern city, where he is was once handsome and tall / as you.”
propositioned by a “Mr. Eugenides” to have “lun-
cheon at the Cannon Street Hotel / Followed by a V. What the Thunder Said
weekend at the Metropole.” These two locations, The poem’s final section builds on the images
famous for clandestine meetings, indicate that of death and sterility, but attempts to offer hope
Mr. Eugenides wants to have a homosexual affair that these can be overcome, as they are overcome
with the poet. in the waste land of Weston’s book. The title of the
Following this interlude, Eliot introduces the section is derived from an Indian fertility legend in
which all beings—men, gods, and devils—find the
character of Tiresias, a mythological, prophetic fig-
power to restore life to the waste land by listening
ure who was turned into a hermaphrodite—indi-
to what the thunder says. The section begins with
cated by the phrases “throbbing between two /
a long discussion of Jesus Christ, “He who was liv-
lives” and “Old man with wrinkled female breasts.”
ing is now dead,” which leads into scenes from
The fact that Tiresias is a prophet is important,
Christ’s journey to Emmaus following his resur-
since Tiresias can see the true nature of things. In
rection, where he joins two disciples that do not
Eliot’s notes he calls this character the most im- recognize him: “Who is the third who walks always
portant one in the poem. Tiresias witnesses a sex beside you?” one disciple asks the other.
scene between a “typist home at teatime” and “A
small house agent’s clerk.” The woman prepares Following the images of Christ, Eliot alludes to
scenes of battle, “hooded hordes swarming / Over
food until the man arrives, and they eat. After the
endless plains, stumbling in cracked earth.” The dry
meal, “she is bored and tired,” but he nevertheless
earth refers back to the waste land. Eliot includes
starts to “engage her in caresses.” Although these
more images of war and destruction, noting the
advances are “undesired,” the woman makes no at-
“Cracks and reforms and bursts in the violet air /
tempt to stop the man, so “he assaults at once,”
Falling towers.” The image is one of a castle being
oblivious to the woman’s “indifference.” After the
destroyed, and Eliot follows this image with a list of
man leaves, “She turns and looks a moment in the
historical cities that were destroyed or that fell into
glass / Hardly aware of her departed lover,” her
ruin and decay: “Jerusalem Athens Alexandria /
only thought being, “Well now that’s done: and I’m Vienna London.” By including London at the end
glad it’s over.” of this list, Eliot implies that the modern city is also
At this point Eliot includes a long montage of falling into decay, a moral decay. From this de-
scenes from London interspersed with many liter- scription Eliot moves on to discuss “the empty
ary references to failed relationships through the chapel,” a reference to the Chapel Perilous, which
ages. The indented passage that begins with the line Weston’s book describes as the final stage on the
“The river sweats” invokes a Wagner poem that de- hero’s quest to restore life to the waste land. At this
scribes the downfall of ancient gods. The section point, “a damp gust” brings rain to the dry and
concludes with a quotation from St. Augustine’s cracked land, and then the thunder speaks, “DA.”
Confessions: “O Lord Thou pluckest me out / O According to the Indian legend, men, gods, and
Lord Thou pluckest.” St. Augustine was a noted devils ask the thunder the same question, and each
lecher in the days before he embraced religion. This is given a different answer—give, sympathize, and
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includes several lines that respond to the thunder the land is all “stony rubbish,” where roots and
on these topics. Critics disagree on whether these branches do not grow, and “the dead tree gives no
responses are meant to be pessimistic or optimistic, shelter,” and there is “no sound of water.”
but many feel they are Eliot’s solution to restore Eliot also expresses disillusionment through
life to the modern waste land. episodes of joyless sex, such as through the exam-
In the last stanza of the poem, the Fisher King ple of Philomel, upon whom sex is forced. In fact
from Weston’s book speaks: “I sat upon the shore / Eliot employs a litany of joyless sexual situations,
Fishing, with the arid plain behind me / Shall I at including the rich couple who would rather play
least set my lands in order?” The king wonders what chess than have sex, and the poor couple for whom
the solution is, how he can bring life back to the sex becomes a way only of pleasing the husband,
waste land again. Eliot follows this passage with a and even then, only if the wife has “a nice set” of
line from an English nursery rhyme: “London teeth. There is no love in any of these unions, and
Bridge is falling down falling down falling / down.” in the case of the poor couple, the wife has started
These words take the work from the mythological having abortions because she “nearly died of young
world back to Europe, which also in Eliot’s view George,” one of her children. This purposeful
is a waste land that is falling down. The poem ends killing of new life is another way Eliot shows how
with several phrases from different languages, people are disillusioned regarding sex and how pro-
which give a mixed message. Some discuss rebirth, creative power in many cases is lost. But perhaps
while others discuss violence and death. The final the most prominent example of meaningless sex
line consists of the same words repeated three comes during the scene between the typist and the
times, “Shantih shantih shantih,” which Eliot and clerk. Following this joyless sexual encounter, in
others have noted can loosely be translated as the which the man satisfies his lust, he leaves the
peace which passes understanding, and which woman, who is “Hardly aware of her departed
seems to be Eliot’s final pronouncement—only lover.” Her indifference shows in her simple actions:
through peace will humanity ultimately be able to “She smooths her hair with automatic hand, / And
restore its vitality. puts a record on the gramophone.” Her hand, like
the sex itself, is “automatic,” without emotion,
merely a routine act.

Themes Restoration
The other major theme, restoration or rebirth,
Disillusionment is the opposite of disillusionment. If modern soci-
There are only two master themes in the poem, ety can somehow overcome its disillusionment, it
which in turn, generate many sub-themes. The first will be restored back to a state in which life once
of these major themes is disillusionment, which again has meaning. This refers to the Fisher King
Eliot indicates is the current state of affairs in mod- myth from Weston’s book. Yet throughout the
ern society, especially the post–World War I poem, when this idea is referred to, it is generally
Europe in which he lived. He illustrates this per- handled in more subtle ways than the references
vasive sense of disillusionment in several ways, the that underscore the idea of disillusionment. For
most notable of which are references to fertility rit- example, in the first section, “the hyacinth girl”
uals and joyless sex. First Eliot draws on the types speaks. Hyacinths are often associated with the idea
of fertility legends discussed in Weston’s and of resurrection, which in the context of this poem
Frazer’s books. For example, in the beginning of is looked at as the goal. But as soon as he intro-
the first section, he uses an extended image of a duces the idea, Eliot counters it with an image of
decomposing corpse lying underground in winter, disillusionment: “I could not / Speak, and my eyes
which “kept us warm, covering / Earth in forgetful failed, I was neither / Living nor dead, and I knew
snow, feeding / a little life with dried tubers.” A nothing.” The idea of restoration, in the form of
tuber is the fleshy part of an underground stem, but resurrection, is not explored in detail until the fi-
here it is human flesh, feeding new plants. Human nal section, with the introduction of Christ. The fi-
society is so disillusioned that it has undergone a nal section begins with talk of Christ’s betrayal and
moral death, an idea on which Eliot plays through- death and of “The shouting and the crying” of
out the poem. In fact, in the second stanza Eliot of- Christ’s followers at his death. With Christ’s death,
fers a contrast to the first stanza, which at least “We who were living are now dying.” Lost with-
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its distinct forms and rules. For example, in tradi-


tional poetry, poets often sought uniformity in

Topics for stanza length and meter. Those poets who could
work within these sometimes challenging rules and
Further still express themselves in a unique or moving way
were considered good poets. But particularly after
Study World War I, as literature and other art shifted from
a traditional, romantic, or idealized, approach to an
• Find a painting, movie, or other visual artwork approach that emphasized gritty realism full of dis-
you think could serve as a companion piece to continuity and despair, artists began to experiment
the poem. Explain why you think this pairing with nontraditional forms, ideas, and styles.
makes sense. Disillusioned by the war, artists and writers
such as Eliot rebelled against the logical, traditional
• Research what life was like for soldiers during
thinking—which they believed helped start and es-
World War I. Imagine that you are a soldier in
calate the war. Eliot’s poem, in all of its complex-
the trenches along the Western Front. Write a
ity and obscurity, was like a catalog of modernist
journal entry that describes your typical day.
poetic techniques, including free verse, odd stanza
• Imagine that through time travel Eliot is able to lengths, snatches of dialogue, quotations from other
visit your town for one day and that you have works, phrases from other languages, indistinct tran-
been assigned to give the poet a tour. Based on sitions, conflicting ideologies such as Christianity
what you know of Eliot and what you know and paganism, frank discussions and depictions of
about your own society, write a story that de- sexuality—and the list goes on. Each of these
scribes Eliot’s reactions to modern life. devices ran counter to the traditional. Collectively,
as many critics have noted, the staggering mod-
• Read another work by a different author who be-
ernistic effect of this one work set off a bomb in
came disillusioned by World War I. Compare
the public consciousness.
this work to Eliot’s The Waste Land.

Historical Context
all hope is not lost, for Christ is resurrected, and World War I
joins his disciples on the road. Unfortunately, just While Eliot published The Waste Land in 1922,
as with the blindness in the hyacinth girl passage, it was widely acknowledged as reflecting the disil-
Christ’s disciples do not recognize him. Ultimately, lusionment in Europe following World War I. This
through his use of complicated and conflicting for- global war started from a regional tragedy. On June
eign quotations, Eliot ends his poem on this same 28, 1914, Archduke Franz Ferdinand, heir to the
noncommittal note. Restoration is possible, but so Austro-Hungarian throne, made a fateful trip to
is disillusionment. Sarajevo, capital city of Bosnia and Herzegovina—
two provinces under his family’s control—where he
and his wife were assassinated. These murders re-
flected a regional tension among some residents of
Style the two provinces, which wished to become part of
Serbia once again. Serbia, which also wished to re-
Modernism claim Bosnia and Herzegovina, helped stage the as-
The most important aspect of the work, and the sassinations. When this fact was realized by
one that informs all others, is the literary move- Austria-Hungary, the leaders of this nation state de-
ment to which it belongs, modernism, which this clared war on Serbia on July 28, exactly one month
work helped define. Modernism is the broad term after the assassination. In times past this might have
used to describe post–World War I literature that been a localized battle between two countries. But
employs techniques Eliot uses in The Waste Land. due to an extensive system of pre-existing alliances,
These techniques, and all the techniques associated most other European countries were pulled into the
with modernist literature, expressed a rebellion war, which escalated the conflict. Eventually the list
against traditional literature, which was noted by of combatants grew to include the United States and

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Compare
&
Contrast
• 1920s: In the aftermath of World War I, which world deal with the physical, financial, and psy-
introduced modern weapons and the psycholog- chological costs of ongoing battles against ter-
ical horrors of trench warfare, some people in rorists and other insurgents in Iraq, Afghanistan,
the United States and Europe become shocked and other areas of the Middle East.
and disillusioned and turn away from religion.
• 1920s: Women embracing personal liberation,
Today: In the aftermath of the terrorist attacks known as “flappers” in Britain and the United
on New York City and Washington, D.C, on States, engage in many previously scorned ac-
September 11, 2001—which introduced com- tivities, such as drinking and smoking in public,
mercial airliners as a new type of airborne ex- wearing provocative clothing, participating in
plosive—some people turn to religion to cope wild dancing, and having promiscuous sex. So-
with the horror and disbelief. cial critics become concerned about the effect
• 1920s: Although major military operations in on the family of this behavior along with the
World War I ended in 1918, the United States general relaxing of social morals.
and the world continue to deal with the physi- Today: Critics become concerned about the so-
cal, financial, and psychological costs of the cial and psychological effects of the rise in teenage
war. The U.S. Congress does not declare World sex activity. In addition, incidents of school homi-
War I officially over until July 2, 1921. cide, such as the massacre at Columbine High
Today: Although U.S. President George W. School, spark a national debate about the safety
Bush declares major military operations in Iraq of America’s children, as well as what parents’
over on May 1, 2003, the United States and the roles should be in dealing with these issues.

parts of Asia, all of which aligned themselves with each side added reinforcements to maintain the
either the pro-Serbian “Allies” or with the “Central” trenches.
powers, who supported Austria-Hungary.
When fighting began in August 1914, each The Lost Generation
side believed its modern weapon technologies such By the time the war officially ended in 1918,
as hand grenades, tanks, long-range artillery, and an estimated eight million people were dead and
poison gas would lead to a quick and efficient war, countless more wounded. For the generation of men
with minimal casualties. The reverse was true, and and women who came of age during or shortly af-
the war raged on for four years along two main ter the war, life seemed bleak, and many of these
lines, or fronts, of fighting. The Western Front, young men and women became disillusioned or
which ran through France, experienced some of the hopeless about their own futures and the sanctity
bloodiest battles in the war. The front was defined of humanity. While this entire group was coined
by an extensive trench that ran along its entire the Lost Generation, most critics today associate
length, on both sides. Allied and Central soldiers this term with a group of American writers who trans-
occupied their respective trenches—which were of- lated their disillusionment into a social protest, and
ten close to each other—and with a series of bat- in the process produced some of the greatest works
tles, each side attempted to drive their opponent out of twentieth century literature. Many members of this
of his trench and force the line back with a flurry group, which included Ernest Hemingway and
of grenades and machine-gun fire. The results were F. Scott Fitzgerald, became expatriates living in
horrific. For years the battles in the trenches held Europe. Paris became a particularly noted hot spot
at a virtual stalemate, and the body count rose as where several budding authors benefited from the

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influence of more experienced authors such as Eliot


and Ezra Pound.

Critical Overview
From the time it was published until the twenty-
first century, The Waste Land has inspired both pas-
sion and hatred. Jewel Spears Brooker sums it up
best in her entry on Eliot for Dictionary of Liter-
ary Biography: “The Waste Land was taken by
some critics as a tasteless joke, by others as a mas-
terpiece expressing the disillusionment of a gener-
ation. As far as Eliot was concerned, it was
neither.” As many critics have cited, Eliot viewed
the poem as a catharsis, a way to release much of
his frustration and stress that had ultimately led to
his nervous breakdown.
Yet, while this is what Eliot said, his decision
to include extensive notes with the poem, which
identified the source of many of the poem’s ob-
Proof page with markings on it for “The Waste
scure or confusing references, seemed to ascribe
great meaning to the poem. The author notes also
Land,” from “T. S. Eliot’s The Wasteland: A
invited negative criticism. Many critics, like Facsimile and Transcript of the Original,” edited
Conrad Aiken, felt that Eliot’s notes—and indeed, by Valerie Eliot
many of the references in the poem itself—were
unnecessary. As Aiken notes in his now-famous
1922 review in New Republic: “Mr. Eliot’s sense
of the literary past has become so overmastering as review of the 1971 restored and expanded version
almost to constitute the motive of the work.” Aiken of The Waste Land, Richard Ellmann says of Eliot,
sees this approach as involving “a kind of idolatry “Lloyd’s most famous bank clerk revalued the
poetic currency” with the initial publication of
of literature with which it is a little difficult to sym-
his poem.
pathize.” As testament to the complexity and con-
troversy of the poem, however, Aiken’s overall Yet the aspects of the poem that make it “mod-
review is positive. He notes that Eliot’s focus on ern” also have led to the greatest amount of confu-
all of these references “has colored an important sion and conflict among critics. As Helen Vendler
and brilliant piece of work.” Yet, Aiken says that, says in her Time article on Eliot, the poem’s many
when these “reservations have all been made, we references focus on the past, but it is “a past so
accept The Waste Land as one of the most moving disarranged—with the Buddha next to St. Augustine,
and original poems of our time.” and Ovid next to Wagner—that a reader felt thrust
into a time machine of disorienting simultaneity.”
In fact, the originality of the poem is key to
This focus on the past seemed to be intentional, as
understanding the divided reactions that it received. John Xiros Cooper discusses in his book T. S. Eliot
The poem is largely credited with helping launch and the Politics of Voice: The Argument of ‘The
the modern literature movement, a fact that cannot Waste Land.’ Cooper says
be understated and about which many critics speak
Unlike the older generation, who saw in events like
in grand terms. For example, Nancy Duvall
the Great War the passing of a golden age, Eliot saw
Hargrove says in her entry on Eliot for Dictionary only that the golden age was itself a heap of absurd
of Literary Biography, the poem’s “originality sociopolitical axioms and perverse misreadings of the
shook the foundations of the literary world.” Like- cultural past that had proved in the last instance to
wise, in America James S. Torrens says, “A bomb- be made of the meanest alloy.
shell burst upon the world of modern poetry 75 In other words, Eliot was rebelling against
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demonstrate that the past was gritty and real, es-


pecially the recent past events of World War I. By
demythologizing the events of the past, Eliot forces
his readers to focus on the grim realities of his post- Like the mythical
war present.
quest hero who must
undergo trials and assemble
information to earn
Criticism restoration, Eliot’s readers
Ryan D. Poquette must review the various,
Poquette has a bachelor’s degree in English
and specializes in writing about literature. In the fragmentary pieces of the
following essay, Poquette discusses the structure of poem and pull from it the
the poem.
ideas that make the most
When Eliot first published The Waste Land in
1922, it caused a colossal stir in the literary world
sense to them.”
and in society in general. Eliot’s use of nontradi-
tional techniques, his gritty imagery, and the sheer
incoherence of the work as a whole mystified, en-
raged, and enthralled readers and critics. As Helen its specific, objectifiable meaning, one can offer up
Vendler notes in her 1998 Time article, “Modern an interpretation for Eliot’s choice of large-scale
poetry had struck its note.” In fact, readers had structure.
never seen anything quite this modern before. The The first section is “The Burial of the Dead”
poem seemed to have a little bit of everything, and deals mainly with issues of death. The second sec-
was much meatier than the other literary offerings tion “A Game of Chess” deals mainly with issues
of the time, and not just in Europe. Vendler notes of sex. The third section “The Fire Sermon” also
that “Whether or not Eliot had written down the deals with sexual issues. The fourth section “Death
Armageddon of the West, he had showed up the by Water” deals with issues of death. The final sec-
lightweight poetry dominating American maga- tion, “What the Thunder Said,” is mainly about res-
zines.” But even though every reference in Eliot’s urrection or restoration, which may or may not be
apocalyptic opus has since been documented, and attainable. So, if one were to write out these gen-
one can begin to draw parallels among the poem’s eral themes in order, it would go: death, sex, sex,
many pieces, most critics agree that these pieces death, possible restoration. One of the first notice-
will probably never be assembled into one cohe- able aspects about this order is that the first four
sive whole. The poem’s structure defies that type sections are symmetrical. The two sections on death
of interpretation. bookend the two sections on sex, almost as if the
When one discusses the structure of a mod- second two sections are a mirror image of the first
ernist work like The Waste Land, it helps to break two. When a poet deliberately juxtaposes thematic
it down into two types, structure on a large scale material like this, it usually means something. This
and structure on a small scale. On the large scale, is especially true when a modernist poet imposes a
the poem has a clear structure. It is organized into distinguishable form on his or her poetry. This or-
five sections, each of which is numbered and la- dering of themes becomes even more suspicious
beled, almost in the style of a traditional poem. Yet, when one looks at the length of the fourth section.
in her entry on Eliot for Dictionary of Literary When compared to the others, this is almost not a
Biography, Jewel Spears Brooker says that these section at all. If Eliot had left it out, however, it
five sections, “by traditional standards, seem unre- would have destroyed his symmetry.
lated.” The key word is “traditional.” Part of the So what does this mean? Why is Eliot inter-
joy involved in modernist writing was in not play- ested in this symmetry? To answer this question, it
ing by the traditional rules. Still, Eliot did not is first necessary to examine the small-scale struc-
choose his structure on a whim. In fact, when tural techniques that Eliot uses in the poem. Again,
viewed from a modernist perspective, one that em- if traditional analysis techniques were used, this
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stanza by stanza, searching for the connections However, the final section does not fit this sym-
among them. As James S. Torrens notes in his 1997 metry, which makes sense too. This final section is
article on the poem in America: “How many un- also the most ambiguous. The first four are clearly
dergraduates since 1922 have sweated their way about either death or sex. The fourth is about
through this labyrinth and come out dazzled, or restoration, but it leaves the question of possible
completely dazed.” The fact is, applying traditional restoration open-ended, by providing mixed com-
analysis to the poem is a fruitless effort, for the mentary at the end in the foreign phrases. Eliot of-
poem exists not in the logical world, but in a world fers some insight into this with the line directly
of indefinite reality, which disorients the reader. before these foreign phrases: “These fragments I
But from Eliot’s point of view, the reader have shored against my ruins.” Some critics say that
needs to be disoriented. Society has become too this statement is Eliot’s introduction to the foreign
stale and exists in a state of living death, where phrases themselves, which are just fragments of
crowds of these walking dead file off to work, ex- thoughts. Others say that this is Eliot’s commentary
haling “Sighs, short and infrequent.” Even the sighs on the fragmentary nature of the entire poem itself.
of despair and disillusionment are “infrequent,” be- The latter interpretation seems to make more sense.
cause this society is lost and does not even have In his 1923 review of the poem for New Re-
the energy to sigh. Eliot is attempting to shake up public, Conrad Aiken sees the fragmentary, inco-
society and get people to, as he notes during the herent nature of the poem as its greatest strength
second section, through the mouthpiece of the rich and says that the work must be taken as
woman: “Think.” To do this, to shake up people A brilliant and kaleidoscopic confusion; as a series
and force them to think about the current state of of sharp, discrete, slightly related perceptions and
society, Eliot structures his poem in episodes. On feelings, dramatically and lyrically presented, and vi-
the small scale, these episodes help him hook read- olently juxtaposed, (for effect of dissonance) so as to
ers, even as he disorients them. Within each sec- give us an impression of an intensely modern, in-
tensely literary consciousness which perceives itself
tion, Eliot divides the narrative into episodes that to be not a unit but a chance correlation or con-
invoke aspects of the past, the present, and in many glomerate of mutually discolorative fragments.
cases both. Time and place shift with little or no
In other words, while readers familiar with tra-
transition, like the clicks of a camera shutter. And
ditional, neatly ordered poetry might look for the
as the poem progresses, Eliot clicks his poetic shut-
poet to tell them what they need to know, Eliot very
ter rapidly, populating his bizarre landscape, his
shrewdly conceals his true thoughts behind his
waste land, with a litany of historical and mytho-
fragmentary structure, which ultimately reflects the
logical figures. In this surreal, constantly changing
chaos of the poet’s modern, disillusioned society,
setting, Vendler notes that Buddha is juxtaposed
even as its links it to humanity’s shared past
“with St. Augustine, and Ovid next to Wagner,” il-
through its use of mirror image. Like the mythical
logical placements that defy traditional modes of
quest hero who must undergo trials and assemble
thought.
information to earn restoration, Eliot’s readers must
This leads back to the reason behind Eliot’s review the various, fragmentary pieces of the poem
conscious choice to include a symmetrical large- and pull from it the ideas that make the most sense
scale structure. In the long scope of human history to them. The important thing, as Eliot indicates, is
and experience, Buddha and Augustine are linked, to be engaged in this process in the first place. Be-
as are Ovid and Wagner and the countless other cause when people wake up from their moral stu-
seemingly contradictory pairings in the poem. By por and start thinking about the current state of
choosing Weston’s myth of the Fisher King—a society, then maybe they will also be motivated to
seminal myth that is thought to have ultimately in- work toward improving it.
fluenced many religious stories, including the
Source: Ryan D. Poquette, Critical Essay on “The Waste
Christian quest for the Holy Grail—Eliot is indi- Land,” in Poetry for Students, Gale, 2004.
cating that they are one and the same, mirror im-
ages of each other. Likewise, Eliot’s modern James Torrens
society and the other past societies refered to in the In the following essay, Torrens discusses the
poem are also mirror images of each other, which history of Eliot’s poem and its literary impact.
is why he juxtaposes “Jerusalem” with “London,”
for example, and ultimately, why he chooses to A bombshell burst upon the world of mod-
make the first four sections reflect this mirror im- ern poetry 75 years ago this November in the
age concept. pages of the New York literary journal The

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Dial—T. S. Eliot’s “The Waste Land.” The author


had published this outpouring in England a month
earlier in his own magazine, The Criterion; and in
December, Boni & Liveright was to bring it out in Early critics summed
book form, with the famous footnotes to fill out
empty pages. A corporation lawyer in New York,
up ‘The Waste Land’ as
John Quinn, put up $2,000 for The Dial prize of expressing the
that year, an astonishing sum that relieved the au-
thor of the burden of medical and other expenses
disillusionment of a
weighing on him. generation. This
The 434 lines of “The Waste Land”—in interpretation galled the
lengths and bunches that might seem totally ran-
dom—thrilled and bewildered early readers. They author, who claims he never
found in it the following: stream-of-consciousness had illusions to begin with,
writing, sudden switches of scene as in film clips,
motifs from classical and medieval myth, exposure and who can be seen
of the libido a la Dr. Freud, music-hall rag, anxi- anxiously searching for any
ety before the Bolshel vik menace and borrowings
from the sacred books of East and West. signs of life.”
Robert Penn Warren remembered that “under-
graduates were reading it all over the place, mem-
orizing it.” How many undergraduates since 1922
have sweated their way through this labyrinth and its robot workers pouring in to the office with an
come out dazzled, or completely dazed. I confess to exhalation of sighs as if from Dante’s “Inferno.”
having led many of these expeditions, with sover-
Early critics summed up “The Waste Land” as
eign and unwarranted self-confidence. The process
expressing the disillusionment of a generation. This
is still worth recreating at this anniversary time.
interpretation galled the author, who claims he
“The Waste Land” comes in five parts, start- never had illusions to begin with, and who can be
ing with “The Burial of the Dead,” a name taken seen anxiously searching for any signs of life. The
from the Anglican funeral ceremony. The famous poem addresses a Londoner named Stetson sarcas-
opening line yields a shock: “April is the cruellest tically: “That corpse you planted last year in your
month.” Quite a switch from that upbeat start of garden, / has it begun to sprout? . . . Oh keep the
the most famous poem in English, “The Canterbury Dog far hence, that’s friend to mend or with his
Tales,” where the pilgrims set off to their shrine nails he’ll dig it up again!” What dog? Perhaps
amid the unfolding panoply of spring. But the days Anubis, the dog-headed god of Egypt who conducts
after World War I were no time for medieval op- the dead to immortal regions. All dogs love to dig
timism. What Eliot wants to highlight is the pain up, of course. When Eliot wrote these lines, he was
of coming back to life. emerging from psychotherapy in Lausanne,
The imagery and episodes of Part One evoke a Switzerland, which had forced him to dig up a lot
person, indeed a civilization, numbed, distressed. of his own troubling history.
Coherence and meaning have gone out of the world, The poet, throughout “The Waste Land,” puz-
as a prophetic voice with an Old Testament sound zles over the apparent disconnection between sex
announces: “Son of man . . . you know only / a heap and love, flesh and spirit. He does so through a re-
of broken images, where the sun beats, / and the curring figure, the quester, as in medieval versions
dead tree gives no shelter.” of the quest for the Holy Grail. The quester early on
To convey a vague menace, and recreate the proves incapable of the romantic innocence offered
craze for spiritualism at the turn of the century, by the hyacinth girl, with an armful of flowers.
Eliot introduces “Madame Sosostris, famous clair- Eliot calls Part Two “A Game of Chess,” a
voyante,” with her “wicked pack” of Tarot cards. metaphor for sexual maneuvering. He begins again
She tells an implied hearer (the reader, actually): by rewriting a classical set piece, the wide-eyed re-
Your card is “the drowned Phoenician sailor.” How port by the soldier Enobarbus about the opulent
ominous. He follows this up memorably with the queen Cleopatra on her barge, from Shakespeare’s
sketch of London on a business morning, with all “Antony and Cleopatra.” Eliot gives us instead a

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What
Do I Read
Next?
• Many critics highlight the fact that Eliot wrote Frazer’s The Golden Bough: A Study in Magic
The Waste Land while he was suffering a ner- and Religion, which Frazer released in two vol-
vous breakdown. Another group of post–World umes in 1890, then revised into a one-volume
War I writers disillusioned by the war, the sur- edition in 1922. Although popular in its day, this
realists, attempted to create literary works while book, which attempts to explore the origins of
their minds were in alternative states, a condi- magic and religion and their relevance to his
tion often reached by deliberate attempts to af- modern world, came under critical fire in later
fect their consciousness, such as through years.
hypnosis. The Magnetic Fields (1920), a series
• Ernest Hemingway is probably the best known
of prose poems by French poets André Breton
of the Lost Generation group of American writ-
and Phillipe Soupault, was created during one
ers. Like The Waste Land, Hemingway’s The
of these mental experiments, a marathon project
Sun Also Rises (1926) explores the post–World
that lasted eight days.
War I sense of disillusionment. In the novel, the
• Eliot’s “The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock,” protagonist, Jake Barnes, a World War I veteran,
first published in the magazine Poetry (1915) and suffers from physical and psychological war
later collected in Prufrock, and Other Observa- wounds that greatly affect his life and view of
tions (1917), is considered one of Eliot’s most the world.
important works. Like The Waste Land, the poem
• While Ezra Pound is considered one the twen-
mixes classical references with other modern im-
tieth century’s great writers, he never had a wide
ages. The poem details the ramblings of the title
reading audience, in part because he spent much
character, a self-doubting man who is pessimistic
of his time helping nurture the fledgling writing
about his future and the future of society.
careers of Eliot, Ernest Hemingway, James
• In 1971, Eliot’s estate authorized the release of Joyce, Robert Frost, and others. Yet Pound did
a facsimile edition of the poet’s original 800- produce one series of works, his Cantos, pub-
line version of the poem, entitled, The Waste lished in various pieces from 1917 to 1968 (for
Land: A Facsimile of the Original Drafts, In- a total of 117 sections), which some consider a
cluding the Annotations of Ezra Pound. As the masterpiece. Like Eliot’s The Waste Land, how-
title implies, the book includes the original re- ever, this ambitious work relies on chaotic, dis-
vision notes from Pound, but it also includes parate techniques that turned off some critics
notes from Eliot’s first wife and Eliot himself. and readers.
This landmark edition, which includes an intro-
• In his notes on The Waste Land, Eliot also cites
duction by Eliot’s widow, his second wife
the influence of Jessie L. Weston’s From Ritual
Valerie Eliot, gave critics and readers insight
to Romance (1920), a book that explores the
into the process used to create the 1922 version.
Grail legend of King Arthur and its relation to
• In his original notes to The Waste Land, Eliot the recorded myths of ancient mystery cults and
states that he was inspired by Sir James G. their fertility rites.

pampered woman in her palatial bedchamber, im- “My nerves are bad to-night. Yes, bad.
mersed in anything that could arouse the senses Stay with me.
Speak to me. Why do you never speak.
(“synthetic perfumes,” illustrations of a mythologi-
Speak.
cal rape). This passage, sumptuous but labored, What are you thinking of?” . . .
shifts suddenly into Eliot’s forte, a dramatic dialogue I think we are in rats’ alley
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At one time the author had thought of naming Eliot then changes the cadence for a short-line
this poem after a line from Dickens, “He Do the impressionistic contrast of the mercantile present
Police in Many Voices,” in the spirit of English (oily merchant ships coming up the tide) with
parlor games with their popular charades. He does a regal past (Queen Elizabeth with her favorite,
his mimicry best in a pub scene, in Cockney Leicester, in a Cleopatra-like barge on the Thames).
English, concerning a certain Lil, whose soldier- After which come some brief exempla of lust, in
husband, in the days before contraceptives, has women’s voices, and concluding words from the
worn her down with his appetite for sex. It ends, fa- Buddha—”burning burning burning burning”—
mously, as the bartender calls out, “Hurry up please along with the exclamation of relief from the
it’s time”—suggesting judgment is imminent—and once lustful Augustine: “O Lord thou pluckest
the customers go off with a drunken “Goonight.” me out.”
This painful vision of humanity swept up in lust In Part Four, “Death by Water,” our poet
continues in Part Three, “The Fire Sermon,” which delivers a quick, highly concentrated homily on
takes its name from the preachment of Buddha the fate of an adventurer-quester of the old
about all things being consumed by desire. Again Mediterranean, a Phoenician sailor. He undergoes
Eliot replays an English masterpiece, the Renaissance the judgment of the sea. The intoning voice aims
wedding ode of Edmund Spenser, “Prothalamion,” this homily at the reader, who still has his Tarot
which chants in a refrain, “Sweet Thames run softly card with the seaman’s picture.
till I end my song.” But “The Waste Land,” no cel- Phlebas the Phoenician, a fortnight
ebratory flow, evokes the shores of a wintry Thames dead,
River long after the casual lovers have left their Forgot the cry of gulls, and the deep
sea swell
sandwich paper, silk handkerchiefs and bottles.
And the profit and loss.
“The nymphs are departed. / And their friends, the A current under sea
loitering heirs of city directors.” Picked his bones in whispers. As he
Eliot’s imagery takes a step into the nightmar- rose and fell
He passed the stages of his age and
ish, a surreal world of the grinning skeleton, the youth
“rat’s foot creeping,” plus “white bodies naked on Entering the whirlpool.
the low damp ground / and bones cast in a little low Gentile or Jew
dry garret” (a gruesome fusing of sex and death). O you who turn the wheel and look to
Yet the passage ends with a wistful reminder of in- windward,
nocence—children’s song resounding in a cupola. Consider Phlebas, who was once
handsome and tall as you.
Then Part Three unfurls its narratives of desire. Ezra Pound, Eliot’s self-proclaimed mentor,
In the first, very briefly, a Near Eastern merchant had the chance to blue pencil many a line from the
makes his oily offer of a homosexual weekend. original version of “The Waste Land,” which the
Then, at length, we watch the loveless connection poet showed him in Paris, as he was returning to
of a typist and the “small house agent’s clerk” who London from Lausanne. Pound’s surgery was most
comes to her apartment, “one of the low on whom radical for Part Four, which he clipped down (much
assurance sits / as a silk hat on a Bradford million- to its benefit) to the size reproduced above. The au-
aire.” “She is bored and tired;” but since “his van- thor responded with a dedication naming Pound, in
ity requires no response,” he takes his sexual words from Dante, il miglior fabbro, “the best of
pleasure. We don’t get the graphic details, but rather workmen.”
a quick intervention from the narrator of this tawdry Now comes the most powerful and challeng-
scene, Tiresias, the mythical peeping Tom, who ing section of “The Waste Land,” Part Five, “What
has “foresuffered all / enacted on this same divan the Thunder Said” (a phrase from a Hindu
or bed.” Upanishad), asking whether rain will come to our
Throughout “The Waste Land” Eliot sows al- parched souls, or life return to our society panting
lusions to “The Tempest,” Shakespeare’s late ro- for grace. Eliot intertwines allusions to the storm-
mance in which a mysterious providential action ing of the Winter Palace by the Bolsheviks, Christ’s
saves the victims of shipwreck. The quester quotes: agony in the garden, the collapse of Babylon ac-
“This music crept by me upon the waters.” The cording to the Apocalypse and the finding of the
music, in this one bright spot, comes from a pub- Holy Grail. Consider the following passage, which
lic bar in Lower Thames Street that still preserves plays on the theme of the Mysterious Stranger. The
sociability and a dignity from the past. reader comes away asking, Do we have here a

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beneficent Christ on the road to Emmaus, or a men- What to say about this attack on “The Waste
acing specter? Land” for its allusiveness? The first thing is to ac-
Who is the third who walks always knowledge plainly that it takes form as a brilliant
beside you? Ph.D. exam on European literature and culture, a
When I count, there are only you and genre that does not admit repeating. Eliot never
I together tried the method again himself. But what a fine ve-
But when I look ahead up the white hicle it proved to be for meditating on the fate of
road
There is always another one walking
civilization after World War I—and in particular
beside you for probing, radically, the most precious documents
Gliding wrapt in a brown mantle, of the Great Tradition. Eliot was also ciphering his
hooded own struggle with sin and for sanity and salvation.
I do not know whether a man or a
woman
In short, “The Waste Land” is still worth every
—But who is that on the other side of penny that John Quinn offered in obeisance to it
you? and, with all the reservations one might muster, it
The concluding lines of “The Waste Land” do remains sans pareil.
not so much resolve The question, How shall things Source: James Torrens, “T. S. Eliot: 75 years of The Waste
end up for us? as pose a three-part challenge, in a Land,” in America, Vol. 177, No. 12, October 25, 1997, pp.
24–27.
voice of thunder: GIVE of yourself, “in the awful
daring of a moment’s surrender” (which may be
what Eliot did in his costly marriage to Vivienne
Haigh-Wood); SYMPATHIZE, get through to oth-
ers, who are so much like yourself, “each in his Sources
prison / thinking of the key”; CONTROL: Exert Aiken, Conrad, “An Anatomy of Melancholy,” in New Re-
some loving initiative and expect some beloved’s public, Vol. 33, No. 427, February 7, 1923, pp. 294–95.
response.
Brooker, Jewel Spears, “T. S. Eliot,” in Dictionary of Lit-
Not to end his potpourri of a poem neatly, be- erary Biography, Vol. 45: American Poets, 1880–1945,
cause there is no neat resolution to our affairs, Eliot First Series, edited by Peter Quartermain, Gale Research,
concludes it with a shower of one-line allusions, 1986, pp. 150–81.
signaling collapse of society, then expiation, then Cooper, John Xiros, T. S. Eliot and the Politics of Voice:
urge for innocence. His final words are a Hindu in- The Argument of “The Waste Land,” UMI Research Press,
vocation, almost a blessing, for the reader whom 1987.
he has pulled through this ordeal: Shantih shantih Eliot, T. S., The Waste Land, in The Waste Land and Other
shantih (“Peace,” three times). Poems, edited by Frank Kermode, Penguin Books, 1998, pp.
53–69.
To the initiate, “The Waste Land”—brilliant if
maddening pastiche, anguished outcry against hu- Ellmann, Richard, “The First Waste Land-I,” in New York
man impurity, meditation on the decline of the Review of Books, Vol. 17, No. 8, November 8, 1971, pp. 10,
12, 14–16.
West-has an endless fascination. In its 75th year it
remains as elusive, as haunting, as thought-pro- Hargrove, Nancy Duvall, “T. S. Eliot,” in Dictionary of Lit-
voking as ever. erary Biography, Vol. 7: Twentieth-Century American
Dramatists, edited by John MacNicholas, Gale Research,
The 1990’s do not happen to be a good season 1981, pp. 151–72.
for T. S. Eliot stock, which was once soaring. Po- Torrens, James S., “T. S. Eliot: 75 Years of ‘The Waste
litical correctness has banished him into outer dark- Land,’ ” in America, Vol. 177, October 25, 1997, pp. 24–27.
ness for some stereotypes of Jews that seem present
Vendler, Helen, “T. S. Eliot,” in Time, Vol. 151, No. 22,
in earlier poems and, in his longing for a Christian June 8, 1998, p. 108.
society, for drawing the boundaries a bit tight. Al-
ready in Eliot’s day some contemporaries be-
moaned and rued the ascendancy of this dizzying
poem. William Carlos Williams, in his fervent de-
sire for more writing “in the American grain” and Further Reading
his battle against dependence on the European Bloom, Harold, ed., T. S. Eliot’s The Waste Land (Modern
tradition, wrung his hands and declared that “The Critical Interpretations), Chelsea House Publishers, 1986.
Waste Land” had set our poetry back at least a Bloom collects criticism on The Waste Land from the
generation. 1950s to the 1980s, some of which was published

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here for the first time. In addition, the book includes papers to chronicle her experiences with these au-
an introduction by Bloom, a chronology, and a thors, including Eliot.
bibliography.
Keegan, John, The First World War, Knopf, 1999.
Conrad, Winston Stuart, Hemingway’s France: Images of While many books have been written about World
the Lost Generation, Woodford Publishing, 2000. War I, Keegan’s is widely acknowledged as one of
While this photo-essay book focuses on Heming- the most comprehensive, accurate, and non-biased
way’s life, by extension it also encompasses many of versions. Keegan, a noted historian, draws on origi-
the influential figures from the Lost Generation, in-
nal records to create a narrative that guides readers
cluding Eliot. Conrad’s modern-day color pho-
through the complex causes and events of the war.
tographs of France are juxtaposed against vintage
black-and-white photos of the background and vari- Moody, A. David, ed., The Cambridge Companion to T. S.
ous writers and artists who lived and worked in Eliot, Cambridge University Press, 1994.
France after World War I. Moody’s book offers a comprehensive overview of
Fitch, Noel Riley, Sylvia Beach and the Lost Generation: A Eliot’s life and work. Contributors examine every-
History of Literary Paris in the Twenties and Thirties, W. W. thing from Eliot’s philosophical background to his
Norton, 1983. impact on twentieth-century poetry, offering both
The influence of Sylvia Beach and her Paris book- critical and biographical insights in the process. The
shop on the writers of the Lost Generation is well book includes a chapter on The Waste Land, a
known. Fitch’s history draws from the Beach family chronology, and a list of suggested further readings.

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