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Nguyễn Thị Mỹ Uyên - Writing Entry 5
Nguyễn Thị Mỹ Uyên - Writing Entry 5
case study 1
JUST GOOD FRIENDS?
WRITING TASK
Techno 21
Company Guidelines on Workplace Relationships
Welcome to Techno21, the company that cares!
relationships.
2. Acceptable behavior
treat each other with respect and avoid hindering other people’s work.
to stop and notify your manager. In the event that the above individual
● Every individual is different. Therefore, the company believes that not all
work. If you belong to the case, don't be ashamed because the Executive
this weakness.
environment, the program launched will not only give lessons in how to
have better conduct but also help establish healthy relationships and
If you have any questions or want more information about the guidelines,
please feel free to contact the HR Department through this number : (619) 726-
Class: QH.2020.F.1.E25
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Task requirements The writing included all the points required, though
(All the content the writer exceeded the word limit. I suggest she
points required in
shorten her expressions to ensure the word limit.
the task are included
or not?)
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Task requirements All the content points are required in the task.
(All the content However, the writer exceeded the limited words.
points required in
the task are included
or not?)
Register and Format Appropriate format and formal language were used
Sentence structures The writer used both complex and simple structures.
However, I suggest shorten this sentence:
(Wide range of “With the desire to bring a healthier and more
sentence structures? practical working environment, the program launched
Both simple and will not only give lessons in how to have better
complex?) conduct but also help establish healthy relationships
and bring the staff closer.”
Vocabulary The writer managed to use a medium range of
business themed vocabulary. No spelling mistakes
(Wide range of were found. Nevertheless, the writer should consider
business vocabulary? word choosing.
Spelling mistakes?)