Courage

by ariuntsetseg p

Submission date: 05-Apr-2019 09:44AM (UTC+0800)

Submission ID: 1106203609
File name: Courage.pdf (39.4K)
Word count: 820
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Courage
GRADEMARK REPORT

FINAL GRADE GENERAL COMMENTS

Instructor

62
Intro: A sense of direction present but missing some
elements of the task asked to do.

/100
Body: Good flow, however, many of your points can be
expanded for more depth in meaning.

Conclusion: Acceptable summary and paraphrasing.

Overall, good essay. however, missing elements inwha

the task asked.

Word Count: quite a bit short on words. See handout.

No penalty at this time.

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Comment 1
Do not start sentences with 'because' especially in formal writing.

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