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5. Your reflections on the project outcomes and group process. 1200 words.

this part should include:


1. introduction

you should say what reflective essay is (you cannot forget about reference)

2. main body

3. conclusion

the fifth section of my essay should include:

You should describe our group work in .

I sent you a copy of 'Project planner foundation project '.

Project planner foundation project shows all of our steps in working on the project. This is very
important, and it should be included in my essay.

It must include information about how we worked and what we did. You must write about the
difficulties we encountered while gathering information, selecting photos for presentation, and so on.

Because this is a reflective essay, we must write about our feelings as well as the overall work on the
project.

My group worked extremely hard and methodically. Our team leader (Edyta) assigned us roles and tasks.
We completed our tasks and then consulted as a group.

The teachers graded our project three times in total.

You can find this information in Project Planner Foundation Project

week 6
1. First draft of project proposal to be done, continue with research. (Jewellery for women safety).
Reference list and sladies Turnitin upload.

and after that our leader modul (Chris - teacher) gave feedback (90 percent) after that,

2. week 13

Project progress presentation ( we had the first presentation our project)

presentation our sladies plus Foundation project presentation (attachment) without model canvas

and after that Bushr (our teacher) gave feedback 76 percent

3. week 15

we had to add to our presenation (sladies) - Model canvas

4. our final presentation (Week 23 Tuesday 4pm – zoom meeting to practise presentation,
Wednesday final presentation.)

6 slides plus Foundation project presentation (attachment)

We don't have feedback after our final presentation but teacher (bushra) was very happy and she said
that it was a great job

2. Presentation Foundation Project ( attachment)

In our presentation (slides) there is a slide called the social model canvas. You will find all the additional
information that must be included in this part of essay. You write about the costs of our project. check
the information contained in the social canvas (coast of delivery) you will find information that the
project costs are pilot for a group of 20 women.

Please put in this section also information that I wrote social canvas with iwona and it was a very hard
work. you have to show that we have searched a lot of websites and etc
You can find information about what I and my friends have said in the foundation project presentation. I
am Julia

Conclusion

you have to write what we think about our project. what we learned while writing this project. What are
our feelings and reflections. you have to write what we learned in this module (we learned about all sdg
and solutions). How important this module is today and for the whole world.

you have to write here that our teachers gave us instructions and comments and we used them and
improved our final presentation. You write how I am very happy that I could participate in this module
and how much I learned because I had great teachers and etc.

………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

I think that it is not enough references in whole eassy ( 2000-2200 words - it cannot be more)

For example

Your work – I cannot find any references here – it is wrong

Proposed Solutions
The proposed solution is to improve the existing solution while making these devices
more accessible. We plan to place a GPS chip in the pieces of jewelry worn by women. The GPS
microchip is inexpensive and can be accessed by everyone. Wearable technology and elegant
jewelry design can include contemporary bracelets, key chains, and necklaces that hide the GPS
chip which is linked to the smartphone app via Bluetooth. The users who will have this app on
their smartphone will invite family or friends to join their circle. Pressing on this jewelry will
allow the chip to send an alert to all those who are in their circle. The alert will include the exact
location of the user. Those wearing these jewels will feel it vibrate and information on the
location of the user will be sent to each phone user in the circle. The jewelry will have a textured
or smooth leather or silicone with the GPS chip which is eco-friendly and reusable. The user can
replace the chip without the new pendant. The battery life of the device will be sufficient to
ensure durability and reliability. The device will allow the users to connect more than one
individual in the circle to ensure if one member is in the circle the user can help other members.
The device can be used by both men and women because both men and women are victims of
crimes.

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