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Essay 3 Final Draft
Essay 3 Final Draft
Essay 3 Final Draft
Nolan Mendonca
Professor Harano
English 102
26 March 2019
For most people, a college education is a goal to reach when thinking about how far they
want to go with their academic status. Although this is a goal, many people cannot achieve it
because of the financial burden due to the high cost. The financial aspect of college has pushed
away many potential students because they cannot afford the price. The ranges of prices can cost
from $13,000 to $60,00 just for tuition. Due to this, people are denied jobs just because they
could not afford the degree, but I am not saying that it should be free. Free is never always free,
and therefore we should have a compromise on how this solution can be solved. A college
education should not be lowered to free, but there should be a better solution than what we have
now.
A college education is now considered a luxury that can help our economy tremendously. In
the National Education Association’s article, “It’s Time to Push for Free College” by Max Page
and Dan Clawson, they explain how over time college education is now harder to attend due to
the high costs, and it is beneficial for people’s lives in the future. After stating how grades K-12
are free because it helps the individual and society, they say, “As several recent studies have
underscored, a college degree is a pathway to a more stable life, financially and otherwise, even
for students who struggled in high school ” (“It’s). In this generation, it is hard to find a good job
without a degree or with some college education. With a degree in hand, people are more likely
to get hired for higher paying jobs. The lives of people with college degrees have been more
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successful in life, but if a person cannot afford college, that means it can potentially set them up
for a struggling financial status. After making this statement, they follow it with “For example,
one study shows that new spending on public colleges, which would be sparked by an influx of
more students, produces more economic activity than a similar-sized tax cut, or similar spending
on roads and bridges” (“It’s). Since there would be more people with higher paying jobs, there
will be more people with higher taxes, and it can build more architecture. The money the
government will be spending would be a good investment in the long run because then the
people with high paying jobs will be able to afford higher taxes. At the end of the day, the
government might benefit from this dramatic change, but people might take advantage of this.
The benefits of free college can help many people’s lives, but there is always a price to pay
when it comes to free. In Trade’s article, “Should College Be Free? Pros, Cons, and
Alternatives”, they show every angle of the argument, but their cons are their strongest
argument. They first state, “Those who come from high-income families or choose to attend
private colleges or universities are generally left out of this discussion” (“Should”). The families
with a higher income would be taking advantage of this opportunity, and if the person can afford
the price of the school, then they should have a contribution to the school. It is not fair to the
school and the other students who cannot afford the tuition for the kids that can afford it to not
pay it. Taking advantage of this privilege isn’t the only problem, but they also say, “Students
might take their college education less seriously if they don’t have to pay for it” (“Should”).
Since everybody pays for their college education out of their pocket, everybody takes their
education seriously because otherwise, we feel like we are wasting our money. If our college
ends up becoming free, then people have nothing to lose when they fail their classes or even have
the drive to do well at anything. This would waste the government’s money and what they would
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be trying to accomplish. Not only would people not take their education seriously, but “...the
value of those degrees could decrease” (“Should”). The value of a degree would be considered
nothing since they would be so easy to obtain, Saying that you had earned a college degree
would not work as well for a job application if there were so many available to people.
Since there are both pros and cons to this problem, we ask ourselves “What do we do?”. In
HuffPost's article, “Solving the College Tuition Problem Is Easy,” by John Rosenstein suggests
that when the student reaches their junior or senior year, their base tuition can be lowered 25
percent. Rosenstein is a professor of media and cinema studies at the University of Illinois at
Urbana, and they have implemented this policy. With this policy, Rosenstein claims, “It doesn’t
require state legislators to reallocate any of their funds, or raise taxes, or have to find any
additional revenue” (“Solving”). This solution wouldn’t cost the government any extra money or
end up raising taxes. The one small catch he says is that the school must have a Division 1
football program or a school with a large number of students. The small colleges would probably
suffer the most with this change just because of how little students attend rather than the larger
colleges who would see less of a difference. This is the only small kink in the solution, but it
The solution to free college will always be a complicated answer. The only way we can make
the situation better is come to a compromise everyone is happy with and still being able to get
the attendance rate of students up. Instead of complaining for free tuition, we should all be open
Claim: The claim in the paper is “College education should not be lowered to free, but there
Grounds: The grounds that supports this claim is “As several recent studies have underscored, a
college degree is a pathway to a more stable life, financially and otherwise, even for students
who struggled in high school” and “Students might take their college education less seriously if
Warrant: The intended audience in this essay is people who are on the boards of colleges or
government officials. They can see the pros and cons of free college and see that there is a
Backing: The intended audience should agree with this because they should consider the
solution, but they should also see what it would cost to have this implemented.
Rebuttal: The counterargument for this essay is that there is no real simple solution and that not
everyone will benefit from one solution. There will always be someone who is losing or not
Qualifier: The thing that limits the argument is that people can complain that since it’s not being
Work Cited
Page, Max, and Dan Clawson. “It's Time to Push for Free College.” NEA,
Rosenstein, Jay. “Solving the College Tuition Problem Is Easy.” The Huffington Post,