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How To Write Complex Sentences in The IELTS
How To Write Complex Sentences in The IELTS
The word ‘complex’ is what usually creates all of the problems. Complex, in
this situation, does not mean complicated, long or impressive. This is a
common misconception and leads to students writing overly long sentences
that seem to go on and on, and to make matters worse they contain
grammatical mistakes.
‘In the modern world, global warming is one of the most popular topics,
because it causes many environmental difficulties and there are many
tough challenges that arise from the serious consequences if it is
neglected.’
Always remember that your writing should be clear, the examiner or the
reader should not have to read it twice to make sense of it. The sentence
above has been written without any major grammatical mistakes but it’s
meaning is a bit lost. There’s just too much information that is being
squeezed into one sentence.
Why should you write complex sentences? If you only write in Simple
sentences then this will make your essay appear very boring.
Let’s take a look at the example again. This time we shall rewrite it using
only simple sentences.
This is not desirable, notice when you read how the sentences keep
breaking. When you write a complex sentence it allows your thoughts and
ideas to be linked together.
This will make it more easy to read and understand the essay and most
importantly also show the examiner that you are able to write complex
statements.
Notice here that we have taken the 5 sentences and rephrased them, we
have grouped together our ideas into two complex sentences. Unlike in the
first example simply splitting the sentences into two separate sentences it
is much more easier to read and understand.
How do you construct a
complex sentence?
Like with most things a complex sentence needs to start with a simple idea.
For instance let’s start with a very simple idea that we’d usually write while
attempting an essay that deals with the environment.
Simple Idea:
How?
Why?
Where?
When?
Planting trees is good for the environment because they trap carbon
dioxide from the atmosphere in the process of photosynthesis.
Because trees trap carbon dioxide from the atmosphere in the process of
photosynthesis, planting them (trees) is good for the environment.
Remember if you rephrase the sentence like this you must remember to
add a comma after the dependant clause.
Because trees trap carbon dioxide from the atmosphere in the process of
,
photosynthesis planting them (trees) is good for the environment.
It’s easy to remember whenever you start a sentence with words like
Because / While / If / Until / When you will have to remember to put a
comma.
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