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Style Guide: The Age, SMH, AFR, WAtoday, Brisbane Times
Style Guide: The Age, SMH, AFR, WAtoday, Brisbane Times
The Age
Brisbane Times
WAtoday
April 2022
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FOREWORD
This guide covers The Sydney Morning Herald, The Age, The Australian
Financial Review, WAtoday and the BrisbaneTimes.
As with its predecessors, this updated 2022 version of the style guide is
designed to help foster consistency, clarity and accuracy in the way we
communicate with our audiences regardless of the platform they choose.
Grammar, punctuation and spelling are covered, and the guide is also a
handy reference tool for many of the facts that crop up regularly in our
work. It will also help writers and editors avoid common pitfalls.
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CONTENTS
Foreword 2
GENERAL STYLE 4
Grammar guide 67
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General Style
A
a/an Use a before all words starting with a consonant sound, including those that
start with an audible h: a hotel, a historic. Use an before words beginning with a
vowel sound: an heir, an honour, an hour. Use a or an before sets of initials
according to sound: an RAAF aircraft, an ALP member; but a UN meeting.
abattoir
abbreviations (full points) Full points are not usually used in abbreviations except
for personal initials (A. C. Smith, with a thin space in print between the letters). The
abbreviations e.g. and i.e. also take full points.
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department, the council, the commission, etc. Spell out the full name again further
down in copy if necessary. If an obscure abbreviation is unavoidable, put it in
brackets after the full name. Do not add the abbreviation in brackets if it does not
appear again. Where abbreviations are particularly helpful is in cases where several
departments, committees, etc are referred to. Awkward abbreviations in quotes can
sometimes be avoided, particularly if mentioned only once, by instead spelling out
the full term inside square brackets.
abbreviations (states and territories) NSW and the ACT are always abbreviated.
In general, spell out other names in copy. Where abbreviated in graphics or lists,
use: SA, WA, NT, Qld, Tas, Vic. Avoid Vic, Tas, Qld in headlines.
Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander people There is wide diversity within
Australia’s Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander population, which includes a broad
range of nations, cultures and languages. Opinions often differ on the most
appropriate ways to refer to people. When talking generally, terms such as
Indigenous Australians (always capital I for Indigenous people in the Australian
context), First Nations people, First People/s or First Australians may be used.
Aboriginal people is acceptable when not talking about Torres Strait Islanders.
Do not use the outdated term Aborigine, which offends many people. Black in
reference to Indigenous Australians is also considered offensive by many. It should
not be used as a noun. Adjectival use should generally be avoided but is allowed
when it is considered and respectful.
When writing about individuals, respect their preferences. It is often best to refer to
someone by their language/cultural group (a Wurundjeri man, a Warlpiri woman).
Others may prefer to be known by a regional term, such as Koori (plural Kooris) in
Victoria and parts of NSW. Some elders may use Aunty or Uncle as a term of
respect. Aunty Joy Miles would become Miles on second reference. Use lower case
for elder, traditional owner, stolen generations.
Many Indigenous people around Australia are highly sensitive to the naming and
use of photographs of people who have died. Grieving names are frequently used
to describe the dead, but practices vary from community to community and
according to the wishes of the deceased and their family, along with the length of
the grieving period. We should attempt to find out what the wishes are in individual
cases. See also race and nationality, black
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about Not approximately, not around.
accents We don’t use these in names. Use them in common nouns only where
there would be ambiguity otherwise: lamé v lame, rosé v rose, exposé v expose.
But cafe, fiancee, facade. See also foreign words
accidents Do not apportion blame. In reports of collisions we should say car X and
car Y collided, not that car X hit car Y or collided with car Y. Collisions involve at
least two moving objects. An accident involving a car and a tree, or a moving car
and a parked vehicle is not a collision. A pedestrian hit by a car may have been
moving, but the contest is so uneven that, again, it would not be appropriate to call
it a collision. Also be wary of using words such as ram in accident reports as it
implies intent to damage.
acknowledgment
ACOSS Australian Council of Social Service (not Services). Also VCOSS (Victorian
Council of Social Service) and NCOSS (NSW Council of Social Service).
act (of parliament) Use a capital when giving the title of an act: the Alpine Resorts
Act 1983, the Crimes Act, but the act, an act. The same principle applies to bill: the
Fertiliser Subsidy Bill, the bill.
acting Lower case when used with a title that is in capitals: acting Prime Minister
Sean Harris, etc. The acting prime minister if used without the name of the
incumbent.
actor/actress Use actor for males and females. Actress may be used on award
nights, such as the Oscars, when there are categories for best actor and best
actress. It is also appropriate when talking about sexual assault or harassment in
the entertainment industry.
ACTU No need to spell out the Australian Council of Trade Unions at first reference,
but it doesn’t hurt to do so on subsequent mention.
AD For anno Domini (in the year of the Lord). It goes before the date (AD 259), but
BC (before Christ) is written after the date: 352 BC.
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ad Abbreviation of advertisement. Do not use advert.
adidas This company, along with many others, does not use an initial capital. We
follow suit, except at the start of sentences and headlines. See company names
admit, admitted Can often give a false impression of wrongdoing. Said is usually
enough. Conceded is also a softer option. See claim
ad nauseam
adoption Children who have been adopted should not be referred to as such
unless it is relevant to the story.
adults People aged 18 and over. Refer to them by their surname, although there is
room for discretion in softer, featurish pieces.
affect/effect The verb affect means to influence, produce an effect on: The tax
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reforms affect everyone. The verb effect means to bring about, accomplish: It’s
hard to effect change. The noun is almost always effect (the noun affect is a
psychiatric term).
afflict/inflict People are afflicted with disease, but injuries are inflicted on them.
Afghanistan The people are Afghans, the adjective is Afghan, the currency is the
afghani.
aficionado(s) One f.
after An unfortunate way in which this word is often used: A man was killed after
he was hit by a train … He survived the impact, presumably, but the train driver was
extremely irritated about the dent in his locomotive. Say killed when or died after.
Age, The The Age is owned by Nine Entertainment Co. Its publisher is The Age
Company Pty Ltd. Do not use italics for sections of digital sites or the paper: Green
Guide; the Age Letters page, Spectrum, Business, Sport, Good Food, Traveller, etc.
Spin-off publications are italicised: Good Food Guide, Good Weekend.
aged care The convention these days is to not add a hyphen when aged care is
used adjectivally in common phrases such as aged care home, aged care policy.
Agent Orange Herbicide used by the US military during the Vietnam War.
ages John Smith, 37, or Samantha Jones, 3 (do not spell out). But Samantha Jones
is a three-year-old and John Smith is a 37-year-old nurse. A woman is in her 20s,
not 20’s or twenties. See elderly
ages (past) Capitals for Stone Age, Iron Age, Middle Ages, etc. See historic (and
prehistoric) ages
ageing
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AIDS For acquired immune deficiency syndrome. People living with AIDS should not
be tagged victims. HIV-positive people do not have AIDS unless they have
symptoms linked to the condition.
airlift This should be reserved for large-scale operations, e.g. an airlift of food and
medical supplies to a flood zone. Avoid it as a verb; rather than The girl was airlifted
to hospital, say she was flown to hospital.
airport Use a capital as part of a proper name: Melbourne Airport, Sydney Airport.
air words ONE WORD: airbag, airbase, airborne, airbrush, aircraft, aircrew, airdrop,
airfare, airfield, airframe, airgun, airlift, airline, airmail, airport, airspace, airstream,
airstrike, airstrip, airtight, airtime, airwaves, airworthy. TWO WORDS: air force, air
freight, air raid, air show.
al fresco
alibi Not the same as an excuse. It means a claim or piece of evidence that a
person was elsewhere when an act, usually a crime, took place.
al- Before an Arab name, this means the. See Arab names under ethnic names.
Also see Islamic Style Guide
Al Jazeera
al-Qaeda
Alfred The Alfred hospital in Melbourne, the Royal Prince Alfred Hospital in Sydney.
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Alice, the Meaning Alice Springs. Lower case the.
alleged A useful writ or contempt-saver when used judiciously and specifically: the
alleged offence, the alleged rape, the alleged libel, the alleged murder. But it is not
necessary to say someone is being tried for alleged murder. Even if the defence
contends that no murder was committed, there is no question that the accused is
being tried for murder and the jury trying the charge will decide whether he is
guilty. He faces a murder charge, and his trial is a murder trial. These terms are
objective, and safe. Similarly, a news organisation is sued for libel (not sued for
alleged libel) and a writ claims damages for libel.
Allies Use a capital only when referring to the Allied powers of the two world wars.
allude To allude is to refer indirectly to something already known. It does not mean
to mention directly. The minister appeared to allude to last year’s budget deficit.
alongside (a ship, wharf etc). Not alongside of. Also see outside of
ALP The Australian Labor Party. The British, Israeli and New Zealand Labour parties
and the International Labour Organisation have a u. Use capitals for ALP factions:
Left, Socialist Left, Right, Centre-Left, Centre Unity. Generally, there is no need to
spell out ALP.
altitude Altitude readings for aircraft are expressed in feet, not metres.
aluminium Watch out for the American spelling, aluminum. Alumina is the oxide of
aluminium.
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Alzheimer’s disease
am/pm No full points, no space: 2pm, 7.35am. Beware redundancies such as 3am in
the morning and 9pm at night. Use noon or midnight, not 12pm or 12am.
Americanisms Language changes and some words once considered American are
now standard Australian English. However, that does not mean we should surrender
completely. We still take holidays, not vacations. We walk on pavements, not
sidewalks. Here are a few other examples.
US Australian
American spelling We follow the British preference for using -ise over -ize:
organise, realise, advertise, etc. We use -our over -or: colour, humour, neighbour,
Pearl Harbour. American spellings in job titles and names of organisations and
buildings should be changed: the US Defence Department, the Defence Secretary,
the World Trade Centre, the Centres for Disease Control and Prevention.
America’s Cup It is possessive because it was first won by the yacht America. But
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Americas Cup in golf; the Americas as in the continents of North America and
South America (including, of course, Central America, which is geographically part
of North America).
ampersand (&) Use in business names only if the company itself uses it: Peters &
Georgiou. Also use in such abbreviations as R&R (rest and recreation), R&D
(research and development).
anaemia
anaesthetic
and Usual punctuation: She plays cricket, golf and football. Sometimes, for clarity, it
is helpful to use a comma before and: Follow the dry gully, the creek as far as the
waterhole, and the track up the hillside.
animals General animal names do not take capitals, but use capitals for parts of
names derived from people and places: Jack Russell terrier, Jersey cattle, Friesian
cattle, Australian terrier, Tasmanian tiger, Scottish terrier, German shepherd, Pacific
oyster. The first letter of scientific names takes a capital: Tyrannosaurus rex, Canis
familiaris. Scientific names should be written in italics.
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anticipate This verb has been so long misused for expect that some dictionaries
now give this meaning. But expect is shorter and better. The long-accepted
meaning of anticipate is to foresee and take action against, to forestall: Anticipating
he would lose the election, he applied for another job before the poll.
anti-vax, anti-vaxxer Do not use these terms loosely. Check carefully that a
person or group really is against vaccination and not just objecting to a way a
particular policy is implemented or to an aspect of a particular vaccine.
any words Anyone or anybody can do it, but any one of these doctors and any
body of people; anyhow, anywhere, anyway (I’ll do it anyway), but any way (I can’t
see any way of doing it); any more, any time.
Anzac For the Australian and New Zealand Army Corps of World War I. Rarely do
we need to spell it out. Anzac Day. Anzacs (troops of the corps; also Australian and
New Zealand troops in any later alliance, as in Vietnam). Also see Digger
ANZUS (Treaty) The security treaty between Australia, New Zealand and the
United States.
APEC The Asia-Pacific Economic Co-operation forum. Spell out at first reference.
appeal Avoid the American appeal the decision. Make it appeal against.
appendixes For body parts but appendices for parts of a book or document.
Arab/Arabic Arabic refers to the language: Arab leaders are Arabic speakers.
Arab Spring Anti-government protests and uprisings in the Arab world in the early
2010s.
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Arabian Gulf Use only in quotes. Otherwise prefer Persian Gulf, then the Gulf.
archaeology
aristocracy (British)
Titles used in full take capitals: the Duke of Westminster, the Duchess of Bedford,
the Earl of East Cheam. Lower case for shortened titles: the earl, the duchess, the
duke. Peers are dukes, marquesses, earls, viscounts, barons and baronesses;
baronets and knights are not peers. Dukes and their wives take their first names or
are the duke and the duchess after first reference. Refer to marquesses, lords,
earls, viscounts and their wives by their surname on second mention. English
barons should not be called Baron So-and-So but Lord, and their wives Lady (but
some peeresses holding titles in their own right are called Baroness So-and So).
The correct styling of peers and members of their families is a labyrinth of protocol
and exception. The best course, if interviewing the nobility, is to ask them what
they should be called.
The essential difference between baronets and knights is that baronets hold
hereditary titles and knights do not. Both are called Sir Arthur Posh and their wives
Lady Posh. The wife of a baronet or a knight should never be called Lady Agnes
Posh or Lady Agnes – unless she is the daughter of a duke, a marquess or an earl
and therefore entitled to be called Lady Agnes in her own right. Where this is not
the case, correct form is Lady Posh, wife of Sir Arthur Posh, or Lady (Agnes) Posh.
See royal
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Special Operations Command was formed in 2003 to unite Australian Army special
forces units. These include the Special Air Service Regiment, whose name can be
abbreviated to SAS.
When writing service titles, use capitals for the unit, formation, branch or
organisation. When a job title is written next to the name of the incumbent, use
capitals for senior positions such as Chief of the Australian Defence Force,
Commander-in-Chief and the heads of each of the services, such as Chief of Army.
Use lower case elsewhere. Use lower case for other positions such as commanding
officer, second-in-command.
Service-specific titles are listed below. Do not abbreviate ranks except in lists.
Some ranks can be shortened correctly at second reference. For instance,
Lieutenant-General Rufus Khan becomes General Khan if there is a need to mention
his title again. The accepted short forms are listed below next to the full rank.
Abbreviations for lists are provided in brackets; never use them in stories.
air force
Cap units and formations: No. 1 Squadron, No. 4 Flight, etc.
Service ranks (officers)
Marshal of the RAAF, Air Chief Marshal, Air Marshal, Air Vice Marshal, Air
Commodore,
Group Captain (abbreviate in LISTS ONLY as Gp Capt), Wing Commander (W Cdr),
Squadron Leader (Sqn Ldr), Flight Lieutenant (Flt Lt), Flying Officer (FO), Pilot
Officer (PO), Officer Cadet
(NCOs and other ranks)
Warrant Officer of the Air Force, Warrant Officer, Flight Sergeant (Flt Sgt), Sergeant
(Sgt), Corporal (Cpl), Leading Aviator, Aviator
Service titles Lower case for air officer commanding. But the Chief of the Air Staff;
and Marshal of the RAAF take capitals when used next to the incumbent’s name.
army
Cap units and formations: Royal Australian Artillery, Royal Australian Ordnance
Corps, 4/19 Prince of Wales’ Light Horse, Second Battalion, B Company, Third
Platoon.
Service ranks (officers)
General (abbreviate in LISTS ONLY as Gen); Lieutenant-General, shorten to General
at second reference (abbreviate in LISTS ONLY as Lt-Gen); Major-General, shorten
to General (Maj-Gen); Brigadier (Brig); Colonel (Col); Lieutenant-Colonel, shorten to
Colonel (Col); Major (Maj); Captain (Capt); Lieutenant (Lt); 2nd Lieutenant (2Lt);
(NCOs and other ranks)
Private (Pte), Lance Corporal (Cpl), Corporal (Cpl), Sergeant (Sgt), Staff Sergeant
(Staff Sgt), Warrant Officer Class Two (WO2), Warrant Officer Class One (W01),
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Warrant Officer (a rank held by the Regimental Sergeant Major of the Army.
Service titles Lower case for the commanding officer of the Eighth Battalion (or
officer commanding the Eighth Battalion); but upper case for the Chief of Army next
to the name of the incumbent.
navy
Cap divisions, bases etc. Also see HMAS, ships.
Service ranks (officers)
Admiral of the Fleet; Admiral; Vice Admiral, shorten to Admiral at second reference.
Rear-Admiral, shorten to Admiral at second reference. Commodore, Captain
(abbreviate in LISTS ONLY as Capt); Commander (Cdr); Lieutenant-Commander;
shorten to Commander (Lt- Cdr); Lieutenant (Lt), Sub-Lieutenant (Sub-Lt),
Midshipman.
(NCOs and other ranks)
Warrant Officer of the Navy, Warrant Officer (WO), Chief Petty Officer (CPO), Petty
Officer (PO), Leading Seaman (LS), Able Seaman (AS), Seaman
Service titles Lieutenant-Commander Nelson, captain of HMAS Unsinkable (note
this use of captain, correct for an officer commanding a warship). Upper case for
the Chief of Naval Operations or Admiral of the Fleet next to the incumbent’s name.
artefact
arts movements Generally lower case except where derived from proper nouns. So
cubism, impressionism, modernism, baroque, postmodern. Also art deco, art
nouveau. But pre-Raphaelite, Bauhaus. Use capitals if confusion would arise
otherwise: the poetry of the Romantic era as opposed to a romantic dinner you had
last week.
arts, the Reviews should be treated with particular care. Because arts and
entertainment critics are vulnerable to any changes made to their copy, given its
sensitive nature, any changes must be first discussed with them. Titles of books,
plays, art works, exhibitions, films, TV shows, popular songs, concerts, tours and
podcasts are in italics. If classical works have identifying names, set them in italics,
for example Richard Strauss' Ein Heldenleben and Berlioz’s Symphonie fantastique.
Names that are simply labels, such as Beethoven’s Symphony No. 5 in C Minor,
should stay in roman, but any nicknames should be in italics, as in Beethoven’s
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Symphony No. 9 in D Minor (Choral) and Schubert’s Quartet in D Minor (Death and
the Maiden).
Within titles, use lower case for articles (a, an, the), all prepositions (including of,
for, from, with, without, between, among, behind, against, under, over, beyond,
across) and all conjunctions (including and, but, either, neither, or, nor, as, since,
because), unless they fall at the beginning of the title. Capitals for all other words
(including Is and all other parts of the verb To Be) and adverbs (including those that
are sometimes prepositions and appear in the list above, e.g. Somewhere over the
Rainbow but The Party’s Over). Spell and punctuate titles as the author does.
asylum seeker It is not illegal to seek asylum. Avoid the term boat people.
at about You cannot be definite and indefinite. He arrived at 10am or about 10am.
audiovisual
autoimmune
aunty Not auntie. Use a capital as an honorific: Aunty Joan. Aunty is also an
informal name for the ABC.
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aurora australis, aurora borealis
Australia Post Spell out in full in articles. Use Aus Post in headlines if necessary
but not AusPost.
Aussie Use sparingly, generally only in colour stories or direct quotes. See
business entry.
Australian Border Force Prefer Border Force on second mention over ABF.
Australian Defence Force (not Forces) Encompasses the three services. See
armed forces, Special Operations Command
Australian rules: Where Australian rules is the dominant football code, refer to it as
football. For stories that mention more than one football code use Australian rules
for clarity: Rugby league authorities have accused Australian rules administrators of
copying their marketing techniques. Where other codes are as, or more, popular,
football may mean various things and the distinction should always be made. See
also Australian football in the sport guide
Australian Labor Party No u. British, Israeli and New Zealand Labour parties take a
u, as do many others.
author Do not use as a verb; people do not author a book, they write it.
autism Some people on the autism spectrum prefer to be called an autistic person
rather than a person with autism. Opinions differ as to what is appropriate. Check
with the individual where possible.
awards and prizes Upper case where Awards or Prize is part of the official name:
Academy Awards, Emmy Awards, Booker Prize, Archibald Prize, Nobel Prize, etc.
Unless capitals are needed for clarity, use lower case for the categories in which
awards are given: best film, best director, best short story. But Nobel Peace Prize,
Nobel Prize in Chemistry, Nobel Prize in Literature, etc. Nobels are awarded in a
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field, not for one. Someone does not win best actress; they are named best actress
or win the best actress award.
B
Baby Boomers The 1946-64 generation. Also Gen X (1965-80); Gen Y (1981-96),
also known as Millennials; Gen Z (roughly mid 1990s to early 2010s depending who
you ask); Gen Alpha (early 2010s to mid 2020s).
bachelor’s degree bachelor of arts (BA), bachelor of science (BSc). Also master’s
degree.
backburner
Baghdad
bail/bale Bail someone out of jail. Bale of wool or hay. Bail out a boat. Bail out of an
aircraft or a difficult situation.
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bailout (noun or adjective) bail out (verb) The government will bail out the
company because it considers it worthy of a bailout under its bailout policy.
baksheesh
Balaclava/balaclava Use a capital for the Melbourne suburb, lower case for the
woollen head covering.
ballpark figure Say directly what you mean: a rough or approximate figure; about
$50,000; an estimate.
Bamiyan The Afghan valley (and nearby city) where two giant Buddhas were
destroyed by the Taliban in 2001.
Band-Aid Trade name. Use capitals in the figurative use: a Band-Aid solution. See
also trade names
bandana
bands are referred to in the plural sense: the Cake Explosion are on tour, taking
their new show to all states. The the in names is lower case: the Rolling Stones, the
Beatles, the Killers.
Bar, the Collective term for barristers: X was admitted to the Bar.
BASE jumping BASE is an acronym for building, antenna, span and earth.
Basel (Switzerland)
basis (As in the wasteful phrase on a … basis.) Turn part-time basis into part-time.
Turn on a regular basis into regularly. On a daily basis can be replaced by daily.
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warship.
beaches Use capitals only if part of a suburb or town’s name, as in Sydney’s Bondi
Beach, Melbourne’s Safety Beach. Lower case for St Kilda beach, Manly beach.
Sydney’s Northern Beaches local government area takes capitals, but northern
beaches is lower case if referring only to the actual beaches.
Bennelong Point (NSW) Also, Bennelong electoral division, but suburban street
names vary.
bestseller, bestselling
between The rule is: between two things, among more than two things. But
commonsense exceptions are made, e.g. Switzerland lies between Italy, France and
Germany. A recognised exception is with words such as treaty, pact, agreement,
contract implying one-to-one relationships as well as the overall relationship
between the things named: a treaty between Australia, New Zealand and the
United States; a contract between Jones, Smith and Brown. Note: between 2005
and 2015 (not between 2005-15), and always between five and 10 (not between
five to 10).
Beverley (SA and WA), Beverley Park (NSW), Beverly Hills (Los Angeles and
Sydney).
biannual/biennial These are best avoided as it’s a safe bet they confuse most
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people. Biannual means happening twice a year; biennial means lasting for two
years or happening every two years. Use twice yearly and two-yearly. Also,
bi-monthly might mean twice monthly or every two months; use twice monthly or
every two months.
Bible texts 1 Samuel chapter 4, verse 38 for first reference then 1 Samuel 4:38 for
later references.
Bible, the (with a capital, no italics), but biblical. But Wisden is the cricketer’s bible,
fashion bible Vogue.
bid Unless you are talking about an auction, a card game, the sharemarket,
contract tenders or suchlike, avoid it in text. It is used by some people as an
all-purpose substitute for many good words, including try, attempt, move, effort,
offer.
big four For Australia’s main banks. Also big pharma, big tech, big tobacco.
Big Ben Used nowadays as the name of the bell, clock and tower at Westminster,
although strictly speaking Big Ben is the name of the bell.
bikers/bikies Bikers are conventional motorcycle riders; bikies are motorcycle gang
members. Get them mixed up at your peril.
bilateral For the most part an unnecessary word usually used in the context of
talks or treaties. If there are obviously two parties involved, the reader is told
nothing by adding bilateral.
bill (parliamentary) The bill, a bill, lower case. But upper case for the full name of a
bill: the Aged Care Amendment Bill. See act
billion A thousand million. The letter b can be used in headlines, with no space
between it and the number. See figures
binge-watch
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bird’s-eye view
bitcoin Plural bitcoins. This and other cryptocurrencies, or virtual currencies, are
lower case.
black There is debate about whether black should take a capital in relation to
people, particularly in the African-American context. Our general style is to use
lower case, but if an opinion writer specifically wants to use a capital B, respect
that. Do not use the word as a noun when referring to race. Black is offensive to
some Indigenous Australians. As well as not using it as a noun, adjectival use
should generally be avoided in the context of Australian Indigenous people but is
allowed when it is considered and respectful. If in doubt consult a senior editor.
See Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander people and race and nationality
blackout (noun and adjective), black out (verb). He worried he would black out
during a blackout so he made an emergency blackout plan. Do not use the
American brownout.
blood-alcohol reading With hyphen. Express readings as .05, .12, rather than the
usual decimal style (0.05).
bogey/bogie/bogy Bogey is a golf term (plural bogeys, past tense bogeyed); bogie
is a railway undercarriage and a bogy is an evil spirit (plural bogies).
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Boogie board is a trade name. Use bodyboard. See also trade names
boost Overused to the point where it has come to mean any rise or increase. Do
not use it, in headings or text, unless you mean that something has been increased
greatly or suddenly.
Botanic Gardens, Royal (Melbourne and Sydney). The Australian Botanic Garden
Mount Annan (singular) in NSW.
both Often used when not needed. If you simply want to report that Agnes and
Maria went to a party, it’s unnecessary to insert both. But if you need to underline
the possibly surprising or significant fact that not just one but the two of them
went, you can do so with a both. Look out for confusion such as in the following
sentence: Both government departments and private operators support the new
system.
Brazil nut
breakaway (noun and adjective) break away (verb) A breakaway faction but to
break away from the faction.
breakout (noun) to break out (verb) They intend to break out of jail. Three
prisoners escaped in a previous breakout.
Brexit, Brexiter The opposing campaigns in the referendum that led to Britain’s exit
from the European Union were called Leave and Remain. Refer to members as
Leavers and Remainers.
bric-a-brac
Brighton-le-Sands (NSW)
Britain, United Kingdom Great Britain is made up of England, Scotland and Wales.
The United Kingdom also includes Northern Ireland and may be called the UK (or,
more loosely, Britain unless a clear distinction needs to be made).
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Broken Rites (not Rights), sex-abuse victims’ support group.
Brussels sprouts
bucketfuls, spoonfuls
budget Lower case. The federal budget, the state budget, budget papers.
builders Make two words (no hyphen) of all such terms as house builder, empire
builder, bridge builder. Also see one word, two words or hyphenated
bullet points Use a full stop after each one and a capital letter to start the next
one.
● The first bullet point looks like this.
● The second bullet point follows the same style.
● Then along comes the third.
bureaucrat A word with a built-in sneer. For a neutral word use public servant or
official. Also see public service.
burnt Not burned. Also learnt (but learned gentleman and earned not earnt).
burqa Not burkha or burka. The full-body face-covering garb for women in
Afghanistan. It often has a strip of gauze for the eyes. Also see chador and hijab,
as well as the Islamic style guide
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buyback One word as a noun or adjective, two words as a verb. She intends to buy
back the company in a $100 million buyback.
C
cabinet Lower case for state cabinet, federal cabinet, shadow cabinet, national
cabinet, etc.
cache, cachet Cache is a hidden store. Cachet means something has character,
style, a seal of approval.
cactus, cactuses
calibre Refers to the diameter of a bullet or shell or the barrel diameter of a firearm;
not weight or power. Say large calibre or small calibre, not heavy calibre or light
calibre. Also see firearms
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cane field
Cape York and Cape York Peninsula (Queensland), Yorke Peninsula (South
Australia).
Capital Hill (Canberra), Capitol Hill (Washington). Canberra and Washington are
capitals, but the US Congress meets in the Capitol (building).
CAPITALS Below are some of our more common styles on using, or not using,
capitals. Others are to be found throughout this guide.
caucus
Constitution
opposition Lower case: the federal opposition, the state opposition, the
opposition, opposition policies.
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(shortened to the House), the Senate, the House of Commons (the Commons). But
upper house, lower house. Use capitals for building names: Parliament House, Old
Parliament House. Use lower case for the names of parliamentary committees
(Senate select committee on COVID-19, House foreign affairs committee, Senate
estimates committees).
question time
state
federal
politics and government (people) The basic rule is to use capitals at each
mention of the job titles of incumbent holders of high government office when the
title appears next to a name. Use lower case for mentions not next to a name and
for former office holders. Speaker is an exception (see below).
The following positions take capitals when used next to the name of incumbents,
deputies and acting office holders:
The titles of shadow cabinet members are always lower case. We prefer opposition
health spokesman, energy spokeswoman, etc, to shadow health minister, shadow
energy minister, but make it shadow treasurer, shadow attorney-general, shadow
minister for women (an improvement on opposition spokeswoman on women). For
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longer titles, it's the opposition spokesman/woman/person on (not for) commerce
and industrial relations, etc.
Capital S for the incumbent Speaker, Deputy Speaker, acting Speaker at every
mention, even without a name, to avoid ambiguity. Capitals may also be used for
former speakers if needed to remove ambiguity.
Senator takes a capital only as an honorific: Greens senator Jill Black, new senator
Jill Black, the senator said. But: “I don’t approve of Senator Black’s comments,”
Senator James Brown said.
Lower case for leader of the House, government leader in the Senate, etc.
Lower case for the government (or opposition) whip, someone appointed by a
political party to maintain parliamentary discipline among party members. Lower
case for the serjeant-at-arms (this spelling for the parliamentary official); the clerk
of the Senate (or of the House, the assembly etc). But for clarity, the usher of the
Black Rod (Black Rod is also used as this official’s short title: President of the
Senate Penny Burns summoned Black Rod).
diplomacy Lower case for all job titles and names of embassies, consulates and
high commissions: Mexican ambassador Marisol Calva visited the Colombian
embassy. See also diplomacy/diplomatic titles.
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Australian, Victorian, NSW, national or federal are omitted from an organisation’s
name but the name is substantially intact, retain capitals, e.g. the (Australian)
Broadcasting Tribunal, the (Australian) Taxation Office, the (National) Farmers
Federation. Police forces are an exception: Victoria Police, the police; the Australian
Federal Police, federal police, state police.
CAPITALS (royals) The word royal is lower case except in the name of
institutions. Our current monarch keeps capitals on each mention. Queen Elizabeth,
the Queen. Full titles such as the Duke of Edinburgh, the Prince of Wales, the
Duchess of Sussex take capitals on each mention. Capitals for Prince William,
Princess Mary, etc, but lower case for the prince, the princess, the duke, the
duchess, etc when used without the name. Kings and queens of other countries are
the king, the queen on second mention. See also royal
captions Use round brackets to indicate position: (left), (right), (rear). Use
double quote marks in captions. Name people from left to right unless the most
relevant person is to the right. Don’t make the mistake of adding a (left) when
it’s obvious who’s who, such as in a picture of a government minister and a
child. Someone as famous as the US president or Australian prime minister
does not need a (left) or (right) next to their name. If starting a caption with a
few pithy words in the form of a kicker, use a colon and then a capital letter for
the first word of the caption proper. We use photographers’ names for photos
taken by our own people or where there are special arrangements. Otherwise,
use the name of the wire agency only: AP, PA, Getty Images, Bloomberg, etc. If
crediting more than one agency separate them with a comma.
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Use present tense only in reference to what is visible in a photo, otherwise past
tense: a photo of 10 protesters should not be captioned Hundreds rally outside
Parliament House. Steer clear of captions that describe the obvious; give
readers extra information beyond what they are seeing. If someone is waving,
readers don’t need to be told that’s what they are doing. When using several
similar pictures online, don’t repeat full details in each caption. It’s enough the
first time around to give someone’s full name and title. Give the reader new
information in subsequent captions.
car park Also car parking and car yard, car maker.
cartridge A bullet is fired from a rifle, a pistol or a machinegun; shot is fired from a
shotgun. (A shot, of course, may be fired from any firearm.) Shot and bullets are
packed in cartridges for loading and firing; so a body might be found with bullets in
it but a firearm would be found with cartridges in it. See also firearms
caster For the sugar, in keeping with Good Food style. But castor oil and castors for
the wheels.
Catholic We use Catholic for the church and its people, not Roman Catholic. Avoid
RC. See also churches.
cat-o’-nine-tails
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caulk Not calk.
cement The binding medium used with sand and screenings (stone, gravel etc) to
make concrete, or with sand to make mortar. So: a concrete structure; a concrete
road; Gallagher mixes cement to make concrete.
Central Australia
centre (verb) Should be followed by on, not around. Do not say something centres
around something else (it is not possible).
Centres for Disease Control and Prevention, the US federal agency based in
Atlanta, Georgia. Note plural Centres. Do not use American spelling Centers.
Abbreviated as CDC.
cents Use the cents symbol ¢ in text and headings: Petrol prices rose 3¢ or The
price of oil rose US59¢ a barrel. Shift+Alt+C creates the cents symbol. See figures
2 (money).
century Lower case for the 20th century, third century, first century BC, first
century AD, etc.
CFMMEU The Construction, Forestry, Maritime, Mining and Energy Union. Spell out
high up in copy but not necessarily in the intro. Confusingly, it still commonly uses
CFMEU. Use CFMMEU if referring to the overall national organisation, but CFMEU
for the various divisions.
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chairman/chairwoman/chairperson/chair Some businesswomen prefer to be
called chairman, so do not presume the title on a gender basis. Go by a person’s
preference for chairman, chairwoman, chairperson or chair. See also women
Chatham House rule Not rules. A rule that information disclosed at a meeting may
be reported by those present but the source must not be identified. Named after
Chatham House in London, which houses the Royal Institute of International Affairs.
check/chequered A check suit, check tie, but chequered pattern. Also: chequers;
chequerboard (one word); chequered flag; chequered career; and Chequers, the
British prime minister’s country home.
chief commissioner of police Use capitals only when the title appears next to the
name of the incumbent: Chief Commissioner Margaret Allen said …. but the chief
commissioner said ... See police
chief health officer, chief scientist etc When talking about government positions,
use capitals only when the title appears next to the name of the incumbent.
childcare
chilli(ies)
chink While the use of chink to mean narrow opening (a chink of light) or weak spot
(chink in someone’s armour) has been around for centuries and does not have
racist origins, avoid the word given its other meaning as a slur against Chinese
people. Chink in the armour is cliched anyway.
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Christchurch (New Zealand and Hampshire), Christ Church (Oxford).
Christian name The term is often inappropriate, sometimes offensive. Prefer first
name, given name. In general, do not call adults solely by their given names in copy
or headings. Adults are people aged 18 and over. Also see ethnic names
chukka (polo)
The Catholic Church has archdioceses, which take in smaller dioceses. The
Anglican Church has dioceses. Use capitals in the Anglican Church, the Uniting
Church, the Catholic Church, Presbyterian Church, Greek Orthodox Church etc. Use
lower case for the word church on its own: The church issued a statement.
Religious titles take capitals when used in full next to the names of incumbents,
otherwise lower case: Archbishop of Canterbury Justin Humble (then the
archbishop), Bishop of Bendigo George Faithful (the bishop). An exception: The
Pope takes a capital at every reference when talking about the Vatican incumbent.
Coptic Pope Tawadros, however, would become the pope at later reference. Lower
case for papal, papist and pontiff.
Ordinary clergy in most non-Catholic churches are ministers and mainly use the
Reverend as their honorific at first mention: the Reverend John Smith, then Smith at
later reference. Ordinary clergy in the Catholic Church are priests and have the
honorific Father (do not abbreviate as Fr): Father John Smith, then Smith. Anglican
clergy are sometimes called priests, and some use Father. It is usually not
necessary to use the Very Reverend, Right Reverend, Most Reverend with the
names of higher clergy, as their status is sufficiently indicated in their titles.
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CIA The US Central Intelligence Agency. Generally no need to spell it out. Lower
case director.
cities Capitals for municipality names: City of Parramatta, City of Melbourne, City
of Sydney (meaning the central municipality, not metropolitan Melbourne or
Sydney). Upper case for the City when referring to the London financial district or
New York City (as opposed to the state of New York). Also see councils
City of Sydney Formerly Sydney City Council. If specifying the council as opposed
to the local government area, make it City of Sydney council (lower case).
claim This implies some scepticism on the user’s part about the truthfulness of
what is being said. Use with care, and in most cases use said.
cliches The bottom line is put the ballpark figure on the backburner and try to say
something original. Also see standard phrases
climax It is not the end, but the point of greatest intensity, the culmination.
co-/co Most common words beginning with co are clearly readable without a
hyphen: coalition, coaxial, coeducation, coefficient, coexist, cohabit, coincide.
(Exceptions are co-ed, co-opt, co-operate, co-ordinate, unco-operative,
unco-ordinated.) Use a hyphen in cases such as co-conspirator, co-religionist,
co-respondent.
Coast Guard The United States Coast Guard is a government service. The
Australian Volunteer Coast Guard (administered by the Australian Volunteer Coast
Guard Association) is an organisation of boating enthusiasts who undertake
searches and rescues. To avoid giving the impression that they are a government
service, we should call them the Volunteer Coast Guard, at least at first reference.
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coffin Not casket.
Cold War Upper case for the state of hostilities between the West and
Soviet bloc countries after World War II. Lower case for a more general
reference: a new Coalition cold war.
collectable
collide Be careful not to attribute blame in accident reports. Saying a car collided
with, ran into or hit a truck may seem to attach blame. Better to say the car and the
truck collided. Also, a collision is the meeting of two moving objects. A car cannot
collide with a stationary object such as a pole; it hits the pole. A pedestrian hit by a
car may have been moving, but the contest is so uneven that, again, it would not be
appropriate to call it a collision. Also be wary of using words such as ram in
accident reports as it implies intent to damage.
Colombia is the South American country, Columbia was a space shuttle. The DC in
Washington, DC, stands for District of Columbia.
combating, combated
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commando(s)
Commonwealth Games Also, the Games. Called the Empire Games (1930-50), the
British Empire and Commonwealth Games (1954-66), the British Commonwealth
Games (1970) and the Commonwealth Games from 1974.
company names Give the company name in full at first reference when necessary
to avoid confusion with a company of a similar name (Australian Growth Ltd versus
Australian Growth Properties), or when the story needs to be particularly specific,
such as in a legal context. Otherwise, Pty, Ltd, Co, Inc are usually not required. But
it’s Nine Entertainment Co if referring to our mastheads’ owner in a formal business
sense. Otherwise, just Nine. Use an ampersand if a company does.
Many companies go out of their way to make their names as distinctive as possible
through, shall we say, creative use of spelling, spacing, punctuation and mixes of
capitals and non-capitals. For the most part, do what the companies do: eBay,
adidas, lululemon, YouTube, etc. Some exceptions:
● Yahoo, not Yahoo!. The company itself often drops the exclamation mark.
● NIB for the health fund that has made its name awkward to read by opting
for nib.
● If a company writes its name in all capitals but the name is not an
abbreviation, use upper and lower case. NB: IKEA is an abbreviation.
● Use capitals if the name starts a sentence or headline: EBay profits soar;
Adidas plans new stores.
Some companies present their names differently in their logos to how they write
about themselves. Prefer the latter version.
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compare to/with Compare to means to liken one thing to another, suggesting a
similarity. Compare with means to set things side by side and examine to what
extent they are similar or different. She compared the sound to thunder. He
compared his attempted forgery with the original.
complex (building) Limit this term to projects designed for diverse uses: a
complex of shops, offices and flats. Centre is better for projects designed for
related uses: the arts centre, a sports centre. Refer to an office block, not an office
complex; a block of flats (or apartments), not an apartment complex.
conditions (weather) Bad weather, not bad weather conditions or weather events.
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It has a federal Constitution, of which the adjective is constitutional. The Australian
Commonwealth was formed in 1901 at Federation (cap the event). It is a federation
and its political organisation is federal (lower case for both). It elects the federal
parliament and the federal government, which are responsible for federal matters.
Federation was agreed to by the six colonies, which became states (lower case).
Each elects its state parliament and state government, which are responsible for
state matters.
See also capitals (politics and government)
convince Commonly misused in this way: He tried to convince his brother to give
up gin. Instead of convince … to, say persuade … to. Correct use of convince: He
tried to persuade his brother that gin was bad for him, but he was convinced of its
spiritual efficacy.
cooee, cooeed
cops Prefer police. Cops can cause offence to some but may be used in some
informal contexts and tight headlines.
coroner Capitals for an incumbent state coroner when the title is used next to the
person’s name, but lower case for other coroners. Some take judge as an honorific.
See courts
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some as X Shire, some as X Shire Council. Use a capital C for council or city or S for
shire if part of the council’s name: the City of Sydney (Sydney city council, the
council), the City of Melbourne, Waverley Council (Sydney), Hepburn Shire Council
(Victoria). Council on its own is lower case. Use upper case for lord mayor and
mayor only when written next to the name of an incumbent (Mayor Freda Win, then
the mayor). Use lower case for former office holders. The honorific for councillors,
including a lord mayor or mayor is Cr. There is a tendency in local government
circles to omit the the when talking about councils (e.g. a submission to council).
We should say the council. Use lower case for all council staff positions including
chief executives.
counter-terror/ism
Country Liberal Party (of the NT) A single party, not a coalition. No hyphen.
Likewise Queensland’s Liberal National Party.
COURTS
bench, full bench Lower case. Be careful when using the term full bench, also
known as full court. A full bench/court has a greater than usual number of judges
hearing a case (e.g. three on appeal rather than the initial solo judge) but does not
typically have all of a court’s judges. Rather than the full bench of a particular court,
what should usually be said at first mention is a full bench. In the High Court a full
bench has at least two judges. The court has seven judges in total.
coroners Upper case for the state coroner and any deputy when the title is used
next to the incumbent’s name. Most coroners are not judges. They are usually
magistrates or lawyers.
counsel Singular and plural. Some senior barristers receive “silk”, becoming a
Queen’s Counsel or a Senior Counsel as a mark of their high achievements. Both
groups are collectively called senior counsel. When using their names in full, add
QC or SC according to their preference. Tiffany Chan, QC, is too busy to eat
breakfast. Omar Erdogan, SC, likes sparkling water with his lunch. It is customary to
use counsel without an article: Tim Nguyen, counsel (not the counsel) for the
accused.
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court evidence In court copy, where it is especially important that everything
reported be attributed to the witness, lawyer, prosecutor, magistrate or judge who
said it, two economical and useful devices are available: reported speech and
running verbatim.
Reported speech (paraphrasing the evidence): Jones said she saw Williams tie
the dog’s leash to the wheel of his bicycle. He had then ridden off, dragging the
dog along the road. She said the leash had become tangled around the wheel hub.
Williams had fallen off and landed heavily. Picking himself up, he had shouted:
“Now you know why I hate dogs.”
Use the past tense (saw, became) after the attribution said. Use the past perfect
tense (had mounted … and ridden; had fallen … and landed; had shouted) in the
succeeding sentences to show clearly that we are still giving the witness’s account.
Using reported speech, it is not necessary to use (witness) said in every sentence;
but it should be done often.
Running verbatim (where the aim is to quote a string of questions and answers):
Prosecutor Elahi Singh: “Did you see something done with the dog’s leash?”
Jones: “Yes, Mr Willams tied it to his back wheel.”
And the leash was still around the dog’s neck? – Yes.
What happened then? – He got on and rode off. The dog was being dragged along
the road. What he didn’t know was the leash was getting tangled on the wheel hub.
It got all tangled up and he fell off the bike.
Did he say something? – He yelled out: “Now you know why I hate dogs.”
Make a paragraph of the question, with name, colon and quote marks. Make a
paragraph of the answer, with name, colon and quote marks. Each succeeding
paragraph is question-dash-answer, without quote marks, there being no need to
keep repeating the names. Having finished a passage of running verbatim
reportage, pick up again with a name.
court martial Plural courts martial (see plurals of compounds). No hyphen in the
noun, but a hyphen in the adjective and the verb: These are court-martial charges.
He was court-martialled.
Crown
honorifics and titles (Financial Review only) People charged with offences retain
their honorifics in news stories unless they are convicted or plead guilty. (This
includes celebrities, sportspeople, journalists, artists and others who would not
have honorifics in non-court contexts. Celebrities, sportspeople, etc, appearing as
witnesses also keep honorifics. Honorifics are reinstated when convicted people
have served their sentences or if a conviction is overturned on appeal. Judges of
the High Court, the Federal Court, the Family Court, the Supreme Court and
equivalent jurisdictions have the title Justice at each mention. Judges of the
County Court (Victoria) and District Court (NSW) are Judge X, Judge Y at second
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mention. Coroners and magistrates are usually Mr or Ms.
judges Judges of the High Court, the Federal Court, the Family Court, the
Supreme Court and equivalent jurisdictions have the title Justice. A judge’s given
name should be used at first reference (Justice John Smith, then Smith or the
judge, as opposed to the justice). In the plural it’s Justices Tom Smith and Tina
Nguyen. Judges of the County Court (Victoria) and District Court (NSW) have the
title Judge at first mention. A judge’s first name should be used at first reference:
Judge John Smith, then Smith or the judge. When used next to the name of an
incumbent, use capitals for titles such as the Chief Justice of Australia, the Chief
Justice of the High Court, the Chief Justice of (insert state), the Chief Justice of
the Supreme Court, the Chief Justice of the Federal Court, the Chief Justice of the
Family Court, the Chief Judge of the County Court (Victoria), Chief Judge of the
District Court (NSW). Upper case for Master Paul Jones in the Supreme Court, but
lower case for a master of the Supreme Court. Whether a former judge retains a
judicial title varies. Check for each individual.
magistrates Capitals for the incumbent chief magistrate, deputy chief magistrate
when the title is used next to their name, but lower case for other magistrates. Do
not call a magistrate a judge. A magistrate’s given name should be used at first
reference. The Magistrates’ Court in Victoria takes an apostrophe. Those in other
states do not use one.
COVID-19 Short for coronavirus disease 2019. Use COVID-19 in body copy but it
can be shortened to COVID in headlines or compounds such as COVID-safe, a
COVID-normal situation. The name of the virus that causes it is SARS-CoV-2
(severe acute respiratory syndrome coronavirus 2). There are various coronaviruses
that can infect humans. SARS-CoV-2 is genetically related to the virus that caused
the SARS outbreak of 2003. Variants are designated with Greek letters: Alpha,
Delta, Omicron, etc. Use super-spreader with a hyphen for a person who infects
many people.
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crevasse/crevice A crevasse is a deep fissure in ice; a crevice is a narrow opening
or fissure.
Crime Stoppers
criteria Plural, and it takes a plural verb. The singular is criterion. It means the
principle or standard that something is judged by, not a requirement.
Croat/Croatian/Croats People from Croatia are Croats. But the adjective derived
from Croatia is Croatian. There are also Bosnian Croats.
crossbench, crossbencher
cross-examine
crowdfund
crowdsource
Crown/crown Upper case for the institution, lower case for the object: Crown land,
a Crown prosecutor; a heavy crown.
Crown casino (Melbourne) The word casino is not part of its name.
cul-de-sacs
culmination Not the end, but the highest point, the climax.
Cup (Melbourne) At first reference it’s the Melbourne Cup, then the Cup, Cup Day,
Cup week, Cup fashions. Also see the racing section of the sport guide
currently Unnecessary the vast majority of the time. Save it for when you really
need to stress that something is happening now as opposed to in the past or
future. Note: Don’t substitute presently for currently. It means soon, not now.
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curriculums
custom-made
cutout (noun and adjective), to cut out (verb) He cut out the pattern to make a
cardboard cutout.
cynic A person with little faith in human goodness and sincerity. A sceptic is a
doubter.
D
dad, mum Use with restraint in text and headlines. Use mother, father in serious
stories. Cap mum and dad when used in place of a name. "I told Mum to take the
car,'' but "I heard his mum yelling.''
damage Damage is worth nothing, so do not say $100,000 worth of damage. Say
the fire caused $100,000 damage, or damage estimated at $100,000.
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dates Follow this style: Friday, February 27, 1987; Friday, February 27; February 27,
1987; February 1987; February last year. Also: 1981-82; 1905-06 (not 1981-2,
1905-6). See AD, BC, century.
David Jones DJs (no apostrophe) can be used at second reference and in
headlines.
D-Day
death Tragic death is a tautology. The same goes for died tragically and the done
to death brutal murder. Avoid passed away except in quotes.
decade It may mean, loosely, any 10-year period. In more precise use a decade
runs from the beginning of the first year, say, of the century to the end of the 10th
year (1901-10, not 1900-10); from the beginning of the 81st year to the end of the
90th year (2081-90). Also see AD, BC, century, historic
decimate Historically, it meant to kill one in 10 people. These days it means to kill,
destroy or remove a large proportion of and doesn’t only relate to people. Don’t use
it to mean total destruction.
Defence Force Capitals for the Australian Defence Force (not Forces); also the
Defence Force. The ADF is acceptable on second reference. Also see armed forces
Delhi The Indian capital, New Delhi, is located within the wider city of Delhi.
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Democratic Party (US) But the Australian Democrats or the Democrats.
dialogue Prefer talk, debate, discussion, conciliation, unless you are talking about
the dialogue in a play, film, book, etc.
diarrhoea
didgeridoo
differ from/differ with I differ from you in that I am a conservative. But I differ with
you on abortion; I differ with your opinion.
dingoes
diphthongs Generally, when a word can be spelt with a diphthong, use it:
anaesthetic, paedophile, leukaemia. Two exceptions are primeval and medieval,
where not using the diphthong is becoming standard. We also drop it for
homeopathy unless spelt otherwise in the title of an organisation. Fetus should not
have a diphthong.
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embassies, in other Commonwealth countries.
direct and indirect speech The use of direct speech enlivens reports but often
what people say may have to be paraphrased because of the need to condense it
or because a speaker is not very articulate. Most reports of meetings, speeches,
statements, etc will contain a mixture of direct and indirect speech. There are some
simple rules to keep such reports easy to read.
(1) Readers get impatient, so in a quoted passage never leave them guessing the
identity of the speaker. Source the speaker before or during the first sentence. Use
quotation marks at the beginning of each paragraph of the quoted passage.
(3) When there is a change of speaker, the new paragraph must start by identifying
the new speaker.
(4) When using indirect speech, the past tense should follow he/she said. This
allows several sentences of indirect speech to be put together without any further
he/she said. For example: Premier Rashida Porter said she would not increase taxes
in the budget next month. “I have no intention of imposing further burdens on
people in a time of recession,” Porter said. “Taxes will not be raised.” However, she
said borrowing overseas would be used to meet any shortfall in revenue. She did
not believe more than $500 million would have to be borrowed. Ministers would be
instructed to keep their departmental budgets at this year’s level. “All departments
will have to make big savings,” Porter said.
Opposition spokesman Jim Brown said the government would have to cut back
services if it was not going to raise taxes. “Many needy people will suffer even
more,” he said.
Said is a fine word that can be used throughout copy. Usually there is no need to
resort to she added, he stated, she continued, they declared. Nor do we need to
keep telling readers that someone told The Age/Herald/Brisbane Times/WAtoday or
Financial Review. According to and claim/ed should be used sparingly. They imply
doubt as to the veracity of the person quoted. Be wary of saying in court cases
that a person admitted anything. If they have pleaded not guilty that is for the
judge and/or jury to decide.
director of public prosecutions The title takes capitals when used next to the
name of the incumbent. The initials DPP are acceptable on second reference. NSW
has the Office of the Director of Public Prosecutions. Victoria has the Office of
Public Prosecutions.
disability Steer clear of stereotypes, stigma, defining people by their condition and
words that evoke pity. Don’t mention a person’s disability unless it’s relevant. Ask
people how they want to be referred to. In general, adopt an approach that puts the
person before the disability: Paul Winters has X, Paul Winters is living with X; not
Winters is afflicted with or a victim of. Refer to people with disabilities rather than
the disabled. Do not use terms such as handicapped, a schizophrenic, an epileptic.
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Say that someone is in a wheelchair or uses a wheelchair rather than that they are
confined to a wheelchair or wheelchair-bound.
disc/disk Use disk in reference to computers (the old floppy disk, hard disk, disk
drive etc) and disc (compact disc) in all other cases.
diseases Use lower case for all words in names of diseases except those that are
proper nouns: acquired immune deficiency syndrome, mumps, measles. But
Legionnaires’ disease, Alzheimer’s disease, Parkinson’s disease, Down syndrome,
German measles, Ebola (named after a river).
disruptor
do’s and don’ts An apostrophe is not usually used to form a plural, but an exception
is made here for clarity. Also: so-and-so’s, dotting the i’s and crossing the t’s, and
plurals of other letters of the alphabet: A’s, D’s, C’s. See also plurals and verb
number in the grammar guide
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doughnut Not donut.
downplay This means to make something seem less important than it actually is.
The fact that politicians say something is of little importance does not mean they
are downplaying it if the truth is that it really is of little importance.
Down syndrome Not Down’s. Named after John Down (1828-96), who first studied
it.
Down Under Upper case when referring to Australia, but save it for colour stories.
draconian Lower case. It means excessively harsh and severe, not merely tough.
drink-driver, drink-driving
drug names Pharmaceutical drugs have several names: brand, generic and
chemical. As much as possible we should try to distinguish between them and
preferably use generic, rather than brand, names. For example, a drug used to treat
narcotic overdose, Narcan, is called naloxone; a drug used in opiate drug
dependence, Trexan, is called naltrexone.
dumbbell
E
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each It takes singular in these forms: Each was fined $20. Each man was fined $20.
Each of them was fined $20. And plural in these forms: They each pay $20. Smith,
Jones and Deng each pay $20.
earth Upper case when talking of the planet Earth as opposed to Mars, Uranus and
the rest. The satellite orbited Earth for three years. Lower case for idioms: she’s
down to earth, what on earth?
East, Eastern Upper case for Eastern civilisation, Eastern philosophies, the East,
Eastern Europe, East Asia; similarly the West, the Western world, Western Europe.
East Jerusalem
Ecuador, Ecuadorian
educationist Not educationalist. Not strictly a teacher, but one who studies the
science or methods of education; she may teach teaching, but it is wrong to
substitute teacher for this word. An educator, on the other hand, is a teacher.
effect/affect The verb affect means to influence, move, touch, produce an effect
on (The tax reforms affect everyone). The verb effect means to bring about,
accomplish, cause to exist or happen. The noun is almost always effect. (This will
have a positive effect). The noun affect is a psychiatric term. See also words to
watch.
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effectively Often misused. It means that something has been done in an effective
way. It does not mean in effect, and should not be used in that sense.
e.g.
Eid al-Fitr The feast that marks the end of Ramadan. A second festival called Eid
al-Adha coincides with the end of the Hajj.
either/neither Either takes or; neither takes nor: Either you or I am wrong; Neither
Smith nor Brown has a chance. Neither I nor the detectives are convinced of the
butler’s guilt.
elderly This description should never be used gratuitously e.g. An elderly man was
injured. It should be enough to give his age, even approximately (in his 70s),
without using a description that can give offence. Drawing the line is not easy, but
nowadays you could well buy a quarrel calling anyone under 75 elderly.
-elect Titles such as prime minister and president take capitals when used with the
word elect if appearing next to the name of a person who has been elected and is
waiting to be sworn in. The word elect is lower case. Prime Minister-elect Mark
Markus.
electorate MPs have in their electorates an electorate (not electoral) secretary and
an electorate office.
electrocute This used to mean to kill by electric shock but is now accepted to also
mean to injure. Be clear either way as to what state the person is in.
eleventh hour
ellipsis ( … ) Used to indicate that words have been omitted or that a sentence is
incomplete, broken off: I was ready to go but … Use a space on either side of the
ellipsis.
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El Salvador/San Salvador/Salvadorean The country/the capital/the people.
elite This word can imply an unfair sneer when used in reference to private schools.
Use with care.
email No hyphen for email, ebook, esports, but use one for other e-words:
e-learning, e-reader, e-commerce, e-tag, e-cigarettes.
embarrass, embarrassed
em dash A dash the width of an upper case letter M (—). We don’t use it. See also
en dash, which we do use.
encyclopaedia
en dash A dash the width of the letter N (–). This is the one we use. See also em
dash.
English-speaking, non-English-speaking
enormity Strictly speaking this means monstrous wickedness. Its use to mean
hugeness is widespread, but you will keep more people happy by not using it in this
sense.
en suite
EPA The Environment Protection Authority in Victoria and NSW, but the
Environmental Protection Agency in the US.
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epicentre The point on the planet's surface above the focus of an earthquake. Not
to be used to mean the centre or focus itself.
epilepsy Epileptic seizures, not fits. Person with epilepsy, not an epileptic.
e-tag
ethnic Use this word only as an adjective: "ethnic cleansing", ethnic group, ethnic
minority. Someone’s ethnicity should be mentioned only when relevant. See also
slurs
ETHNIC NAMES
It is sometimes difficult to determine which of a person’s names is the family name
and which is the given name. Names can vary from country to country and within
the same country because there is no standard way to transcribe them into English.
It is always best to ask people how they prefer their names spelt or check what
they use on their social media accounts. When that isn’t possible, use the following
as a guide. Sometimes it will be necessary to choose one wire agency’s style
(Reuters being our preference) and stick with it.
MUSLIM NAMES
Arab names Residents of Arab countries – Iraq, Jordan, Egypt, Libya, Algeria,
Morocco, Tunisia, Mauritania, Sudan, Saudi Arabia, United Arab Emirates, Bahrain,
Oman, Qatar, Kuwait, Yemen, Syria and Lebanon – and Arab residents of Israel
usually have three names. These consist of a given name and the names of father
and grandfather, for example Mohammed Ahmed Fahd. Most Arab family names in
the Gulf region have the prefix al-, which is often joined to the surname with a
hyphen. For example, Mohammed Ahmed al-Torabi; Torabi at second reference. In
Egypt and Sudan, the prefix should usually be al- unless the person in question is
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known to spell their name with el- in roman characters (e.g. former International
Atomic Energy Agency chief Mohamed ElBaradei). Either article may be dropped
depending on a person’s preference or common practice. Muslims in North Africa
hardly use al- or el-. They prefer bin, which means “son of”. Title and first name
usually suffice in first reference to rulers (kings, imams, emirs and sheikhs). For
example Abdul Faisal ibn King Aziz al-Saud was King Faisal. Sheikh is the title of
rulers of Persian Gulf principalities. For example, Sheikh Abdullah al-Salem al-Sabah
becomes Sheikh Abdullah. See the Islamic style guide
Persian-influenced names Most Iranians and residents of countries that once
belonged to the Persian Empire – Afghans, Tajiks, Pakistanis and Indians – use two
names. For example Mohammad Khatami; Khatami (family name) at second
reference.
Turkish-influenced names Turkish names are easier to sort out because Turkey
adopted roman letters in the early 1900s and most Turkish names have standard
spelling. The same is true for Albanians and East Europeans.
ASIAN NAMES
There are few hard-and-fast rules. Only one rule applies in all cases: use the
spelling or second reference preferred by the person being referred to. In general,
Asian names can be divided into three groups: those that on second reference
should be referred to by the first name, by the last name or by the whole name. Use
the following as a guide.
Bangladesh/Pakistan Usually given name first, family name last. For example
Benazir Bhutto; use Bhutto at second reference. Shiites in Pakistan often have
three names. Use last name at second reference.
Myanmar Most have two or three given names. None have surnames. Usually use
the complete name at second reference. But Aung San Suu Kyi can be shortened to
Suu Kyi on second mention. U is an honorific. For example U Thant.
Cambodia The family name usually precedes the given name. Use full name at
second reference. Given name is used only by close friends or family.
China Family name usually precedes given name. Use family name at second
reference. Xi Jinping becomes Xi.
Hong Kong Cantonese names generally include two given names preceded by a
family name. Use family name at second reference. Note: most Hong Kong Chinese
also have a Western name. In these cases, the family name is second in the list.
Mary Lau Wai-hing.
India Generally, family name follows given name. Use family name at second
reference. Male Sikhs follow their given name with Singh. Use Singh at second
reference only when the story contains one Singh. If it contains more than one, use
full names throughout. Note: not all Singhs are Sikh.
Indonesia Many Javanese have only one name, including former leaders Suharto
or Sukarno. Most non-Javanese have adopted surnames, which should be used at
second reference.
Japan Family name follows given name in romanised usage. Use family name at
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second reference.
Korea Surname precedes two given names, usually hyphenated. Use surname at
second reference, e.g. Kim Jong-il; Kim at second reference.
Laos Given name precedes family name. Use given name at second reference.
Malaysia Given name precedes father’s name. Use given name on second
reference. Mahathir Mohamad; Mahathir at second reference. Omit honorific titles
that often precede Malay names such as Tan Sri, Datuk, Dato and Haji.
Philippines Family name comes last. Use family name at second reference.
Taiwan The Wade-Giles system of transliteration is used. Given name is
hyphenated, with the second element in lower case. Surname precedes given
name. Lee Teng-hui becomes Lee at second reference.
Thailand Given name precedes family name. Use given name at second reference.
Vietnam Usually three names. Family name first, then two given names. Use the
third name at second reference. For example Nguyen Co Thach is Thach at second
reference. Note: many Vietnamese have adopted pseudonyms, especially
revolutionary noms de guerre such as Ho Chi Minh. Ho at second reference.
Pseudonyms such as Le Duc Tho and Truong Chinh, which means Long March,
cannot be split. Use all the names at second reference. Wherever possible check
the origin of each name.
EUROPEAN NAMES
Russia Usually, Russians have three names: a given name, followed by their father’s
given name – adding the suffix -a for a woman – and then their father’s family
name.
Spain Spanish people generally have one or two given names (e.g. Juan Carlos)
followed by their father’s family name (Gonzalez) and then their mother’s family
name (Cardozo). In everyday use, some Spanish people will drop their second given
name and their mother’s family name (Juan Gonzalez). Gonzales at second
reference.
PACIFIC NAMES
Samoan
Typically, the first name comes before the last name. Omit honorific titles such
as To'osavili, Fiame and Seiuli.
NAME ELEMENTS
As a general rule, lower case elements such as al, arap, bin, binte, de, de la, van,
von, y (Spanish) except when they begin a sentence or a headline. But pay heed to
personal preference where a person has an established spelling of their name in
roman characters.
euro Lower case. The symbol € is used with figures in heads and text.
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eurozone
European Union, the The executive body is the European Commission. The initials
EU can be used in headings and at second reference in text.
euthanise
ever It can mean all time, all past time, or all future time. It is legitimate to call
something the biggest ever, meaning that it is not only the biggest in existence but
the biggest known, remembered, etc. But it is a tautology to call something the first
ever (once a first, always a first).
ex parte No hyphen.
expatriate (noun and verb) Not expatriot or ex-patriate. Expat, not ex-pat.
extracurricular
extramarital
extramural
extraterrestrial
F
F-111 Not F-III. See aircraft.
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Facebook Upper case as a noun and a verb. See trade names
face mask
facility, facilities Do not use this military or industrial jargon for base, station,
plant, factory, laboratory and other straightforward words. Find out what is meant
by these code words and let the reader in on the secret.
facts Not actual facts or true facts. Avoid the courtroom jargon: Outlining the facts,
the police prosecutor said … Just report the things the prosecutor said without
calling them facts (which we cannot prove). Do not use the police statement of
facts. It is the police statement; they may not be facts.
fail to Implies an unsuccessful attempt or neglect of duty. A neutral term is did not.
Falun Gong
fascist/fascism
fast food/fast-food An issue with fast food is its fat content but One fast-food
issue is its fat content.
faze/phase Faze means to embarrass or disturb: The snub did not faze her. Phase
denotes an aspect or stage: They will phase in a new system.
FBI It is the US Federal Bureau of Investigation, but no need to spell out. Lower
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case director.
Federation Upper case when referring to the event in Australian history and
adjectival uses Federation houses etc. See also constitutional matters.
fellows Lower case for members of certain learned or professional societies and
for specific distinctions (a fellow of the Royal Australasian College of Surgeons).
female Don’t use such descriptions as female doctor, female architect or female
pilot as if the very fact a woman has such a role needs pointing out. Say doctor,
architect, pilot, etc. If you do need to point out femaleness, use female as the
adjective rather than woman. See women
fewer/less Fewer than refers to things that can be counted, less than to quantity:
fewer than 80 children, fewer than 100 protesters, less sugar, less time.
FIGURES (general) One to nine are usually spelt out;10 and above are in
numerals: six hectares, eight boats, five kilometres, 50 years. But tens of
thousands, hundreds, thousands of people, the Twelve Apostles,Ten
Commandments, a thousand-to-one chance, an eleventh-hour decision. We don’t
use commas in four-digit numbers (3000, 9450). Spell out first to ninth, then 10th,
etc.
Rules may vary in tables, charts, diagrams, etc, with numerals used for figures that
we would spell out in text. In print, separate numerals and their associated measure
with a thin space to prevent bad turns.
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second semester).
temperatures (8 degrees, minus 3 degrees)
type 1, type 2 diabetes
category 4 storm
phase 3 trial
scope 1
tier 2
Page 1 of The Age, etc
zone 1 transport area
ages written next to a name: Dev Patel, 6. But he is aged six and he is a
six-year-old.
literary, legal and parliamentary references Julius Caesar, Act 1, Scene 2; section
2 (a) of the Crimes Act; an 11-1 verdict.
FIGURES 2 (money) Use the cents symbol ¢ (Shift+Alt+C) in text and headings:
Petrol prices rose 3¢ on Thursday, or The price of oil rose US59¢ a barrel. In
conversions to Australian dollars, make it $US1.75 million ($2.5 million). The pound
symbol (£) should be used when dealing with sterling or our old currency. We also
use the euro symbol (€). Foreign currencies should usually be converted once only,
at the first reference, but a subsequent conversion may sometimes be more useful:
After giving a homeless man her last $US5, she won $US100 million ($130 million)
in a lottery. Or The price rose US50¢ to $US12.50 ($23). This was $US5 more
expensive than last year. Also see currencies in the business guide
FIGURES 3 (fractions and decimals) For whole numbers with fractions, use
figures: 2½ hours, 5½ years, etc. Hyphenate written-out fractions: one-third,
three-eighths. For complicated fractions use figures as in 11/64ths. Precise
fractions are better expressed in decimals: 2.6, 3.75. Figures less than one should
carry a nought before the decimal point for clarity: 0.6, 0.062. An exception is
blood-alcohol readings: .05, .16. Also, the inch calibre of a firearm is .22, .303 etc.
Interest rates are written as 0.2, not 0.20, 2.5, not 2.50
FIGURES 4 (ages) Where ages are given after a name, they go between commas,
not brackets: John Smith, 39. As per above, the figures style is varied for ages
below 10: Robert Smith, 6, (the numeral instead of the word). But he is aged six and
he is a six-year-old. It’s a man in his 20s, not 20’s or twenties.
FIGURES 5 (roman numerals) The roman one is a capital I (“EYE”), not the Arabic
figure 1. Too often, World War II appears as World War 11. It’s a cricket XI, but a
squad of 12 cricketers. A rugby XV.
FIGURES 6 (starting sentences) Figures are spelt out at the start of sentences:
Eighty-four people attended. Frame sentences so as to avoid big figures spelt out
at the beginning.
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For other entries on figures also see billion, per cent, weights and measures. Also
check currencies and per cent, percentages in the business guide
Filipino, Filipina The male and female inhabitants of the Philippines. Where we
need a collective word use Filipinos. Philippine is the adjective as in the Philippine
ambassador.
filmmaker
firearms Firearms include machineguns, rifles, shotguns and pistols. These are
small arms. A shotgun has a smooth bore. Machineguns, rifles and modern pistols
have rifled bores. Strictly speaking, a rifle is not a gun, but it has become one in
common usage. Colloquially, a pistol is a gun or handgun. A pistol may be a revolver
(having a revolving cylinder magazine) or an automatic (having a clip magazine).
But automatic weapon means a machinegun, sub-machinegun, machine pistol or
automatic rifle. Rifles may be automatic, semi-automatic, repeating (bolt-action) or
single-shot.
A bullet is fired from a rifle, a pistol or a machinegun; shot is fired from a shotgun.
(A shot, of course, may be fired from any firearm.) Shot and bullets are packed in
cartridges for loading and firing; so a body might be found with bullets in it but a
firearm would be found with cartridges in it. Rounds may be anything from
small-arms ammunition to artillery shells.
Cannon is singular and plural. Also see calibre, figures 3 (fractions and decimals)
first Tautologies to avoid: first ever (it’s enough to say it was the first); first
discovered (discovered); it was first introduced (introduced).
first lady As used of the wife of a leader in countries such as the US. Always lower
case. The same principle applies for first gentlemen. Australia does not use such
titles.
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fishers is the plural form of people in the fishing industry.
Five Eyes Intelligence alliance made up of Australia, Canada, New Zealand, the UK
and the US.
flak/flack Flak is anti-aircraft fire or severe criticism. Flack is US slang for publicity
agent.
flyer
focaccia
foreign name elements As a general rule, lower case elements such as al, arap,
bin, binte, de, de la, van, von, y (Spanish) except when they begin a sentence or a
headline.
But pay heed to personal preference where someone has an established spelling of
their name in roman characters: Robert De Niro, former International Atomic Energy
Agency chief Mohamed ElBaradei. Also see ethnic names.
forever
foreword Of a book.
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formula Plural formulas, not formulae.
freak accident Do not use. An accident is an accident, however unusual its cause.
freak wave A misnomer for a natural oceanic phenomenon. Say big wave.
free trade agreement The convention these days is to drop the hyphen between
free and trade as there is no ambiguity.
freedom of information Should be lower case except in the proper name of the
legislation: the Freedom of Information Act; but freedom of information in general
use and freedom of information laws. The abbreviation is FOI.
Freemasons Upper case for the order and the lodges. Lower case for the members
(mason, freemason) and their hierarchy (grand master etc).
French Upper case for French polish, French window, French fries, French toast,
etc. See also animal breeds; Scot, Scottish, Scotc h
frequent-flyer points
front line (noun), frontline (adjective). In the front line, but the frontline states.
frontman/frontwoman
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fruit grower
-ful The plurals of words such as handful, mouthful, cupful, spoonful, bagful,
bucketful are handfuls, mouthfuls, cupfuls, spoonfuls, bagfuls, bucketfuls.
fundraiser, fundraising .
G
G7, G8, G20 The abbreviations can be used at first reference. Provide meanings in
the story.
Gandhi Rajiv, Indira, Sonia (widow of Rajiv) or Mahatma Gandhi. A common error is
Ghandi.
gasoline Use petrol. Also prefer aircraft fuel to aviation gasoline (or avgas).
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-gate Since Watergate, this has become a cliche denoting scandal. We could do
with fewer -gates.
Geiger counter
genetically modified (GM) crops, not genetically engineered (GE), though genetic
engineering is a legitimate term.
Geneva Conventions
Germanys Before reunification they were the two Germanys, not Germanies.
Ghanaian
ghetto(s)
glasnost Literally, Russian for openness, publicity. The policy in the former Soviet
Union of open, consultative government and wider dissemination of information.
Also see perestroika.
Glen Huntly (Melbourne) The suburb and the road. The names Glen Huntly, Glen
Eira and Glen Iris come from ships of the Glen Line.
goalkeeper Also goalkicker, goalsneak, goal line, goalpost, goal scorer, goal
square, goal umpire.
God For the Judaeo-Christian and Islamic God. Upper case pronouns used for God:
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He, Him, His, Thou, Thee, Thy, Thine, You, Your, Me, My. Lower case god, gods
generically and sayings: Oh my god; for god’s sake.
gold medal In the Olympics etc, lower case. Also silver, bronze.
Google Upper case at all times, including when used as a verb: I’ll Google that. See
trade names
government Lower case: the Coalition government, the Morrison government, the
federal government, the Queensland government, a government spokesman, etc.
Also see capitals (politics and government)
government committees Lower case for the names of all government and
parliamentary committees. Also see capitals (politics and government)
governor Always lower case for the governor of the Reserve Bank and a prison
governor but upper case for the state Governor, the Governor-General, Texas
Governor, etc when written next to the name of incumbents.
grade 6, grade 3 Lower case, with numerals. Also year 3, year 10, term 2, but
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second term.
Grampians The mountain ranges are in Victoria’s Grampians National Park. The
Aboriginal name for the region is Gariwerd.
grand final Lower case for the AFL, NRL and other grand finals. Also see the sport
guide
grand prix Capitals only when using the full name of a race: the Australian Grand
Prix (thereafter the grand prix). Plural grands prix. Capital F for Formula 1.
Greens, greens, greenies Upper case for Green in the proper name of any political
party or organisation (the West Australian Greens). Lower case green as a general
term for the environmentally aware.
grotto(es)
Ground Zero Upper case when referring to the site of New York’s World Trade
Centre. In other cases it is lower case. It means the point on the Earth’s surface
where an explosion occurs.
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grow We do not grow a business or grow customers, or grow profits. Use instead
words such as expand and increase. We do grow flowers.
growers, miners, makers and other doers If not otherwise mentioned in this
guide, follow the Oxford when making these one or two words or hyphenated. See
also the style guide entry under one word, two words or hyphenated
guesthouse
Gulf War The 1990-1991 action by allied forces against Iraq. The 1980-88 conflict
formerly known as the Gulf War should be called the Iran-Iraq War. The conflict that
started in 2003 is the Iraq War or, for the sake of clarity, it is sometimes called the
Second Gulf War.
gutted Do not say fire gutted a building unless you mean the internal fittings were
burnt out, leaving the external structure standing.
gynaecology
Gypsy/gypsy Not gipsy, unless in The Virgin and the Gipsy (D. H. Lawrence), The
Scholar Gipsy (Matthew Arnold) and other titles spelling it that way in art, literature,
etc. Upper case for Gypsy in reference to the Romani people, although Romani is
the preferred term. Some consider Gypsy offensive.
GRAMMAR GUIDE
GRAMMATICAL PARTS
nouns “Naming” words – they name people, places and things. Often divided into
proper nouns (John, Sydney, Toyota), common nouns (man, city, car), abstract
nouns (beauty, truth, science) and collective nouns (committee, jury, team),
although there are many other divisions.
pronouns These stand for nouns and include words such as I, you, he/she/it, we,
they, me, him/her/them. My/mine, your/yours, his/her/its, our/your/their/ are
possessive pronouns. Other pronouns include this, that, these, who, what and
which.
verbs These are the “doing” or “action” words and “being” words: They ran to the
shops. They are at home.
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adjectives These give more information about nouns or pronouns: a red car, a big
dog, poor me. Compound adjectives are frequently hyphenated: a first-class
performance, a five-member committee.
adverbs These qualify verbs, other adverbs, adjectives, prepositions and
conjunctions, but mostly verbs. He ran slowly, (modifying a verb), she taught well
(verb), she is seriously ill (adjective), the weather changed very suddenly (adverb).
prepositions These show position, direction and other relationships (in, at, on,
above, about, among, around, at, before, down, for, from, into, on, off, out, over,
under, up, with etc). They introduce phrases: in the end, on the table, over the
moon, under the weather. They are added to simple verbs to make complex
meanings: to take on, to take over, to take up, to take down, to take away.
conjunctions Joining words: and, but, then, or, so, for, nor, yet.
interjections Expletives (what you say when your computer crashes) and other
interjections: help! cool! oh! ow! cheers, oh dear, etc.
collective nouns Collective nouns for organisations usually take a singular verb:
the company, the government, the council, the association or the management is.
Note that we treat bands and sporting teams as plural though, as is widespread
practice. Also, where circumstances dictate, the plural is used. Ask yourself
whether you want to emphasise the individuals in a group or the overall single
entity.
The crowd shook their heads in amazement.
The crowd is marching to Times Square.
The audience are asked to be in their seats by 7.15pm.
The audience is at capacity.
The family is the building block of society.
My family want me to take them mountaineering.
The couple are arguing about where to take their holiday.
That couple isn’t coming.
Similarly:
A number of options are available.
A team of doctors were operating.
The majority of people want us to govern.
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battle-hardened, drought-stricken, war-weary, value-added, hand-held. Many
adjective-noun combinations require a hyphen for clarity or flow when used
adjectivally: low-income families, no-confidence motion, high-risk investment. This
is sometimes true, too, of combinations of nouns used adjectivally: market-force
economics, time-and-motion study, make-or-break effort. But restraint and
common sense must be exercised if a publication is not to break out in a rash of
hyphens. Some combinations are clear enough without hyphens. No rule will cover
all cases, so let clarity be your guide.
Example 1: Intending to leap tall buildings, his Superman costume was donned.
This reads as though the costume intends to do the leaping. The words
appearing before the comma and doing the modifying need to be immediately
followed by a mention of the subject they modify. Intending to leap tall
buildings, Linus Periwinkle donned his Superman costume.
Example 2: A favourite gift for friends and family, Jane Waters likes to fill pretty
old plates with shortbread. In this example, Jane ends up sounding like the
favourite gift. Again, the subject (plates of shortbread) needs to come
immediately after the words doing the modifying. A favourite gift for friends and
family, pretty old plates filled with shortbread have long given Jane Waters an
excuse not to have to think of more expensive presents.
its and it’s Its is the possessive form of it, as in The house was a long way from the
road, its roof barely visible from the front gates. It’s stands for it is. The confusion
between its and it’s is a common error and a source of irritation to readers. Equally
irritating is the misspelling of the possessives hers, yours and theirs by adding an
apostrophe.
passive and active voice In an active sentence, the agent or “doer” of the action is
the subject and appears before the verb. In a passive sentence, the target or “done
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to” of the action is the subject and appears before the verb. Active: The speaker
addressed the crowd. The subject is speaker. Passive: The crowd was addressed
by the speaker. The subject is crowd.
Passive voice is longer and more convoluted in construction. Public servants and
media releases often love the passive because it can hide much.
The decision has been made to … doesn’t say who was responsible as an active
sentence would: The human resources manager has decided to …
Naturally, news media prefer active sentences.
split infinitives An infinitive is the form of a verb that has to in front of it: to run, to
cry, to laugh, to go. Many people were taught that it is wrong to place another word
between the two words: to boldly go, as they say in Star Trek; to quickly run; to
quietly ponder. This teaching is not strictly followed these days and we are not
bothered by split infinitives. People have been splitting them for centuries.
splitting verbs Constructions such as he will this week decide are common, and
clumsy. Write it as you would say it: he will decide this week. And watch out for
ambiguity with timing: “She said on Wednesday she would get a payout” is clarified
by adding a that: “She said that on Wednesday she would get a payout” or “She
said on Wednesday that she would get a payout.”
tenses Be consistent in tense throughout a story or feature, unlike this writer: Tom
Smith sips a coffee and puts his feet on the desk. “I don’t give a damn,” he said. Be
consistent, too, when quoting someone indirectly in the past tense: The former
prime minister said the government was making progress and would win the next
election.
verb number The simple rule is that a singular subject requires a singular verb and
a plural subject requires a plural verb. But English is not that simple. Collective
words such as group or the government, or entities such as a company or
department usually take singular verbs, but see collective nouns for alternatives.
A common mistake is to start in the singular and switch to plural:
Woolworths has declared a record profit for the year to June 30 and they are
confident results will be higher this year.
The Coalition is still split over the level of farm subsidies but their meeting
tonight is expected to resolve any differences.
A subject which is plural in form may take a singular verb if it signifies a single
country or organisation or a measure:
The United Nations is acting quickly to settle the dispute.
Four weeks is too long to wait.
Six tonnes of newsprint is needed for a single issue.
Nouns joined by and take a singular verb when they represent a single thing or
person:
Gin and tonic is her favourite pre-dinner drink.
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His main coach and mentor [the same person] has been with him for years.
The verb stays in the singular in this circumstance:
The Defence Minister, with her chief adviser, is going to the manoeuvres.
There is, there are:
There is a bottle in the bin.
There are two bottles in the bin.
There are a bottle and a can in the bin.
There are a bedroom, a study and a bathroom on the top floor.
None Whether it takes a singular or a plural verb depends on what there is (or are)
none of. If you cannot get the wood, none is available. If you cannot buy aardvarks,
none are available. It is a prevalent misconception that none is always singular; in
fact the plural, long recognised by grammar authorities, is more common.
verb number (after one in, as in one in five Australians) Although the meaning is
not literally one (but one-fifth of Australians), we treat such phrases as singular.
One in five Australians has no health insurance, not one in five have.
verb number (after one of those who and similar forms) A common error: I am one
of those who believes in three square meals a day. This should say one of those
who believe. The word believe relates to the plural those.
H
h Use a before all words beginning with a consonant sound, including an audible h:
a hotel, a historic. Use an before words beginning with a vowel sound: an heir, an
honour, an hour.
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haematoma, haematology
haemoglobin
haemophilia
haemorrhage
haemorrhoid
hand down (a court decision) Prefer give decisions, judgments etc.See courts
hangar/hanger A hangar is a building for housing aircraft, etc. A hanger is used for
hanging clothes.
hanged/hung Use hung unless referring to someone who had a noose around their
neck: I’ve hung the picture but Ned Kelly was hanged at the Melbourne Gaol in
1880.
hara-kiri
harbour Sydney Harbour Bridge, Harbour Bridge but lower case for the bridge, the
harbour. Note that our style is Pearl Harbour.
harbourmaster
hard line (noun), hardline (adjective). Take a hard line, but a hardline policy. Also
hardliner.
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headmaster, headmistress (one word), head teacher (two words). Generally
non-state schools have a headmaster or headmistress. The head of a state school
is the principal. Also see schools.
headscarf, headscarves
Hells Angels
hemisphere Lower case for northern/southern hemisphere. Also lower case for the
equator. See equator.
her majesty Lower case your majesty, your honour, your eminence, her majesty,
his excellency, her highness, etc.
Hezbollah Not Hizbollah. Hezb-ollah when breaking over two lines in print..
hiccup
high-flyer
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high jinks Not high-jinks, hi-jinks or hi-jinx.
hip-hop
historic (and prehistoric) ages/events/ movements Upper case for such things
as the Jurassic Age; the Stone Age; the Roman Empire; the Middle Ages; the Dark
Ages; the Modern Age; the Renaissance; the Reformation and
Counter-Reformation; the Regency; the French, American, Industrial, Russian (or
other important) Revolution; the (Great) Depression; World War II; the Falklands
War; the Gulf War; the Cold War (see wars); the Steam Age, the Nuclear Age. Time
spans other than age (e.g. era, epoch, period, times, years) should be lower case:
the Victorian era, the Edwardian era, modern era; the baroque period; classical
times, Edwardian times, modern times; the Depression years, the war years (but
upper case for such things as the Year of the Rat, the UN Year of Peace, etc). Art
movements are generally lower case except where derived from proper nouns.
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hit list
hitman
hitch-hike, hitch-hiker
HMAS Ships’ names such as HMAS Adelaide do not take italics or a definite article.
‘‘The Her Majesty’s Australian Ship Adelaide’’ does not make sense.
hold-up (noun and adjective), to hold up (verb). Also see -up words
home brand Use house brands for generic grocery brands. One of the house
brands is called Homebrand.
home buyer, home owner, first home owner grant, first home buyer
home school (noun) home-school (verb and adjective) Their parents set up a
home school. To home-school for 12 hours a day is to overdo it.
home town (noun), home-town (adjective) The home-town girl returned to her
home town.
honorifics
(Age, Herald, WAtoday, Brisbane Times) With a few exceptions, we do not use
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honorifics. Keep them if used in direct quotes or to establish someone’s credentials
or position at first mention: Senator James Cross, then Cross; biologist Dr Wilfred
Wolf, then Wolf, Monash University’s Professor James Erudite, then Erudite.
Honorifics may be used if needed to distinguish between two people with the same
surname. The main thing is clarity for the reader. The following are the only
honorifics we would abbreviate: Mr, Mrs, Cr (for Councillor), Dr, St (for Saint); no full
points. Ms is not an abbreviation. Judges, magistrates, coroners and people with
religious titles take only a surname on second mention. The same applies to lords,
dames, baronesses, sirs, ladies, etc. People under 18 are referred to by their first
names. For royals, Prince Edward may become Edward, the prince or Prince
Edward; Princess Mary becomes Mary, the princess or Princess Mary. People with
honorary doctorates should not be called Dr. See also aristocracy and royal
horse breeds Upper case for breeds named after places: Arabian, Clydesdale, etc.
See animal breeds
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horse owner, horse breeder, horse race.
hotspot
houses (of parliament) Lower case for upper house and lower house. Upper case
for the House on its own when it is part of the full name: the House of
Representatives then the House. Note that the Houses of Parliament is the proper
name of the legislative buildings at London’s Westminster. See also capitals
(politics and government)
hydroelectric, hydroelectricity
I
-ible words accessible, admissible, audible, collapsible, compatible,
comprehensible, compressible, contemptible, credible, deductible, discernible,
divisible, edible, fallible, feasible, flexible, forcible, gullible, imperceptible,
incompatible, incomprehensible, incorruptible, incredible, indefensible, indelible,
indestructible, indigestible, inexhaustible, inflexible, intangible, intelligible,
irresistible, legible, negligible, ostensible, perceptible, permissible, persuasible,
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plausible, reprehensible, reversible, submersible, suggestible, suppressible,
susceptible, tangible, transmissible, visible.
icare NSW state-owned insurer. Icare at the start of sentences or in headlines but
try to avoid.
ice-cream
iconic Avoid this overused word. Not everything that is well known should be
described as iconic.
i.e. For the Latin id est, meaning that is. Full points. Prefer that is
in addition/in addition to Prefer also, too, and, besides, as well, as well as.
incontestable
in-depth Don’t use this cliche to describe interviews etc; we try not to publish
in-shallowness interviews.
Independent Commission Against Corruption (NSW) Moroni told the ICAC, not
told ICAC. Keep the the.
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indicated Don’t use this as a routine substitute for said. It is valid only when the
source has done no more than imply something, and we are making an inference:
The prime minister indicated that the election would be held before September
next year. He said he wanted to have it over before the US president’s visit, which is
expected to take place in September.
Indigenous Upper case when referring to Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander
people. Lower case in relation to indigenous people of other countries. See
Aborignal and Torres Strait Islander people
inflict/afflict People are afflicted with a disease, but injuries are inflicted on them.
initials Use points and a space or thin space for personal initials: C. L. Smith. Use
given names rather than initials unless a person is widely known by or prefers
initials. Don’t follow the American practice of inserting initials in the middle or at the
beginning of names. In US copy, delete the initials except where the person is
widely known as such – for Australian purposes this is almost never.
inner/outer Do not hyphenate phrases such as inner east, inner south, outer
Brisbane. But adjectivally it’s an inner-city apartment or an outer-Melbourne land
deal. Also, the Inner West local government area in Sydney.
innocuous
innuendo, innuendoes
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inoculate
intifada
in vitro Do not hyphenate, but use a thin space in print if necessary to stop the two
words breaking onto different lines.
Iron Curtain
irony Saying one thing when you mean another: Brutus is an honourable man.
There are technical variations, such as Socratic irony and dramatic irony, which are
in dictionaries, and it may also apply to an outcome contrary to what was or might
have been expected. It does not mean an odd or unusual coincidence.
-ise/-ize The suffix. Use -ise in all cases where there are options. Note that
capsize is not optional.
Islam, Islamic Call followers Muslims, not Moslems. Also see Muhammad and the
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Islamic style guide
Islamic State We use this name for the extremist group also known as ISIL (Islamic
State of Iraq and the Levant) and ISIS (Islamic State of Iraq and Syria). Call it Islamic
State, or IS, on subsequent references, not the Islamic State. There is usually no
need to mention it is also known as ISIS or ISIL unless someone is quoted using
these terms.
italics We italicise the titles of books (except for the Bible, Koran, etc), films, works
of art, plays, songs, concerts, tours, exhibitions, reports, newspapers, statements,
television programs, podcasts and scientific names (see scientific names). We also
italicise websites with newspaper or magazine-like names. Use italics for computer
games resembling dramatic works: Grand Theft Auto XXX, Tomb Raider, Call of
Duty. Electronic versions of mere board games or puzzles stay in roman: chess,
draughts, etc. The names of ships are not italicised. Foreign words are italicised
only if necessary to avoid ambiguity. Rarely do we need to use italics to add
emphasis to words. Acts of parliament are not italicised.
its, it’s Its is the possessive of it. (The dog scratches its ear); it’s is short for it is (It’s
scratching its ear).
This section contains a brief guide to style and usage for some of the more
common IT terms. whatis.techtarget.com, webopedia.com and techterms.com
are three detailed online sources for definitions.
antivirus
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bit The smallest unit of information used on a computer. A bit – short for binary digit
– consists of either a 0 or a 1. A byte is made up of eight bits. See byte
bitcoin This and other virtual currencies are lower case. Plural bitcoins.
bits per second Refers to speed of data transfer (as in internet connection). The
standard measures are:
kilobits per second (Kbps) - 1000 bits per second.
megabits per second (Mbps) - 1 million bits per second (1Mbps = 1000 kbps)
gigabits per second (Gbps - 1 billion bits per second (1 Gbps = 1000 Mbps)
terabits per second (Tbps) - 1 trillion bits per second (1 Tbps = 1000 Gbps)
BitTorrent (one word) One of the most common peer-to-peer protocols for large
amounts of data over the internet.
bot (from robot) A program that runs automated tasks over the internet. It can be
useful or a type of malware (malicious software) allowing an attacker to gain control
of an affected computer, which itself can also be known as a bot, or as a zombie.
byte Eight bits. Refers to the size of a file, as in a 5MB photo file. See bit
kilobyte – 1024 bytes. Abbreviate as KB.
megabyte –1024 kilobytes. Abbreviate as MB.
gigabyte – 1024 megabytes. Abbreviate as GB
terabyte _– 1024 gigabytes Abbreviate as TB
petabyte – 1024 terabytes. Abbreviate as PB
computer games Use italics for computer games resembling dramatic works:
Grand Theft Auto XXX, Tomb Raider, Call of Duty etc. Electronic versions of mere
board games or puzzles stay in roman: chess, etc.
cookie A tracking file stored on a computer user's equipment and used by websites
to learn about visitors' browsing habits.
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cyberterrorist, cyberbully, cyberwar, cyberwarfare.
database
disk/disc Use disk in reference to computers (hard disk, disk drive etc) and disc
(compact disc) in all other cases
domain name The part of a website address, or URL, that is listed at the right of
the www in the address, such as afr.com, smh.com.au, theage.com.au, etc.
dotcom One word. As in dotcom companies, dotcom boom, dotcom slump. Use
this form whether noun or adjective.
email No hyphen for email, ebook, esports, but use one for other e-words:
e-learning, e-reader, e-commerce, e-tag, e-cigarettes.
flash memory Computer storage memory that has no moving parts, used in USB
drives.
HTTP Stands for hypertext transfer protocol. It appears at the beginning of internet
addresses.
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iiNet An Australian internet provider.
measurements Screens for computers, TVs and mobile devices are measured in
inches.
national broadband network NBN for the abbreviation, not nbn. Operated by NBN
Co.
optical fibre A glass thread that allows high-speed, reliable transmission of data.
USB Trade name that stands for Universal Serial Bus. A standard plug used to
connect electronic devices to computers..
URL Short for uniform resource locator. The formal name for an internet address
such as http://www.fxj.com.au. Also see addresses.
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video-conferencing
VoIP Stands for voice over internet protocol. Phone calls that are transmitted as
internet data, avoiding phone networks.
website Lower case, one word. Also the web, webmaster, webcast, but the world
wide web.
world wide web Lower case. Also the web, website, webcast, webmaster etc.
Yahoo Without the exclamation mark. The company drops it itself in corporate
communications.
J
jackaroo
jackpot
Jakarta
jamb of a door.
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jet-ski, jet-skiers
Jewish There’s no such language as Jewish; the Jewish languages are Hebrew and
Yiddish. Use upper case for Jewish festivals and holy days: Day of Atonement (Yom
Kippur), Passover, etc. See bar mitzvah and Hanukkah
jihad Although the term has come to be associated in the West with violence, the
word means struggle. It can refer to a spiritual struggle, a struggle to improve
oneself.
JobSeeker The government payment for unemployed people looking for work
during the COVID-19 pandemic. Those people are job seekers not JobSeekers.
job titles Do not retain the definite article in titles at first mention unless the title is
unwieldy: Prime Minister Herbert Black, President Malia Green. But prime ministerial
adviser on women’s affairs and sport Martha Smith is too much of a mouthful. Make
it the prime minister’s adviser on women’s affairs and sport, Martha Smith. Or use
her name first.
jodhpurs
judgment
ju-jitsu
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K
kaffir Lower case. The derogatory term used by some South African white people
for black people. Not to be used except if necessary to quote a bigot. See race,
slurs
Kalashnikov
Kampuchea Name for Cambodia under the Khmer Rouge regime that ruled from
1975 to 1979. See also Khmer Rouge
Khmer Rouge Held power in Cambodia from 1975 to 1979. The name Khmer Rouge
cannot be abbreviated to Khmer or Khmers. Using Khmers alone indicates the
people of Cambodia, not just the Khmer Rouge.
kibbutz The plural form kibbutzim may be appropriate in some copy, but generally
prefer the Anglicised plural kibbutzes.
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kimono, kimonos
Kings Hall In Old Parliament House, Canberra. No apostrophe. Also Queens Hall,
Parliament House, Melbourne.
Kingsford Smith For Sir Charles, the federal electorate and the airport. No hyphen.
Kings Way No apostrophe. The highway through Melbourne and South Melbourne.
Kingsway all other suburbs.
Kmart
km/h Kilometres an hour. Our style is 3km/h, without a space. No need to spell out.
knots Nautical miles an hour; a measure of speed, not distance. A ship moves at 25
knots, not 25 knots an hour. Knots survived metrication; no conversion is required.
See nautical miles
KO, KO’d
Korea There is no such place. There are North Korea and South Korea.
Ku Klux Klan
Ku-ring-gai (Sydney)
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Kyiv No longer Kiev for the capital of Ukraine.
L
Labor (ALP) and Labor Council of NSW, but British, New Zealand, Israeli and other
Labour parties and the International Labour Organisation. Upper case for the
factions of the ALP: Left, Socialist Left, Right, Centre Left, Centre Unity.
labour movement.
Lady Knights’ wives are usually called Lady Blank; they should not be called Lady
Flora Blank, Lady Arthur Blank (after the husband), or Flora, Lady Blank. When the
wife’s name is used, the following forms are acceptable: Lady (Flora) Blank; Sir
Arthur Blank and his wife, Flora; Lady Blank, wife of Sir Arthur Blank. On second
mention they are Blank. Adult daughters of senior peers (dukes, marquesses and
earls) are as follows: Lady Henrietta Knuckle, thereafter Knuckle.
laissez-faire
LandCruiser
Laos/Laotian/Lao The people and the government of Laos are Laotian. The
country’s dominant tribal group is the Lao.
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Last Post, the No quotes, no italics.
Last Supper
latitude and longitude Latitude, the angular distance north or south of the equator,
is designated by parallels. Longitude, the angular distance east or west of
Greenwich, England, is designated by meridians.
Latrobe/La Trobe It’s the Latrobe Valley, Latrobe River and Latrobe Shire, but La
Trobe for the man, the electorate, the university and the Melbourne CBD street.
The town in Tasmania is Latrobe. Charles Joseph La Trobe (1801-75) was
superintendent of the Port Phillip settlement from 1839, and the first
lieutenant-governor of Victoria (1851-54). Although he never had the title of
governor, he was in sole charge of the colony and it is acceptable to describe him
as Victoria’s first governor.
lay/lie (1) To lay, meaning primarily to put something (or someone) down. I lay him
to rest. I laid the table. I have laid a charge against him.
(2) To lie, meaning to repose. I lie down. I lay down (past tense). I had lain down.
The book lies on the table. The book lay on the table. The book will lie on the table.
(3) To lie, meaning to tell an untruth. I lie sometimes. I lied to him. He has lied to me.
lead (present tense), led (past). Be alert for the common mistake of using lead in
the past tense.
leader (of a party) Upper case for the official position of Opposition Leader (or
deputy) used next to the name of an incumbent. But use lower case for Liberal
leader, Greens leader, Coalition leader, Labor leader, leader of the House,
government leader in the Senate, etc.
left and right (in politics) Use lower case for the left, the right and the centre in
politics generally; also left-wing (adjective), the left wing. But upper case for the
Left and Right factions of the Australian Labor Party. This exception is necessary
because of the variety of formally organised ALP factions that require capitals:
Socialist Left, Centre Left, Centre Unity, NSW Right and the like.
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Legionnaires’ disease Capital L. First diagnosed in members of the American
Legion.
Leichhardt The explorer, the river and other things named after him, including the
Sydney suburb.
lese-majeste
levee An embankment.
Liberal/liberal Upper case for a member of the Liberal Party of Australia or any
other party of the name. Lower case for people described as liberals because of
their outlook or beliefs. When Liberal Party members talk about Liberalism, Liberal
philosophy, Liberal policy and the like, use cap L. But liberalism as a non-partisan
philosophy should be lower case. Also: a small-l liberal (or Liberal, i.e. one on the
left of the party).
licence/license Licence is the noun: liquor licence, driver’s licence, gun licence,
licence number. License is the verb; to grant permission or authorise. Also licensee,
licensed grocer.
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lifeboat Also lifebelt, lifebuoy, lifejacket, liferaft, lifetime, life preserver, lifesaver,
lifesaving, but the Surf Life Saving Association.
lifesaver, lifeguard Lifesavers are volunteer members of surf clubs; lifeguards are
professionals employed by councils etc.
lifting Lifting is defined as the reproduction in our publications of material that has
been published in other media, without first checking its authenticity. Do not do it.
You must check and ensure the accuracy of every detail you plan to reproduce.
Lifting does not include taking quotations from first-person articles published in
other news media and magazines or material contained, say, in a newly published
book (but remember Copyright Act provisions on fair use). Lifting does not include
quoting from recorded interviews on radio or television. When quoting from a
first-person article, or a book or radio or TV interview, we should take care to
source our quotation: e.g. Fahour was speaking on the ABC’s Four Corners. Care
should also be taken when reproducing references from our archives. They may not
be the last word on the subject. Be particularly careful about inserting material from
past court reports, which can land us in trouble. Our lawyers can offer guidance.
liftout
light year A unit of astronomical distance, not time. It is the distance light travels in
a year, 9460 billion kilometres. Light travels at 300,000 kilometres a second.
like Don’t use instead of as/as if: She acted as if she was angry, not like she was
angry. There is a subtle difference between like and such as depending on whether
what follows is included in the group of things being talked about. She went to
countries such as Vietnam and Thailand means those two countries were part of
her travels. She went to countries like Vietnam and Thailand could mean she went
to similar countries but not necessarily those countries.
likeable
likely Don’t use this in the American way. American: She will likely attend.
Australian: She is likely to attend or will probably attend.
linchpin
literally This means it actually happened. When used with a metaphor it can be
absurd: He literally ate his own words. Really? Did he add salt and pepper?
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literati But glitterati.
liveable
loan It is not a verb. It is wrong to say Joe Blow will loan his friend $50. Rather, he
will lend him $50. Don’t use lend as a noun, as in Give me a lend of your pen.
loath/loathe The adjective means reluctant: I am loath to interfere; loathe the verb
means detest.
Londonderry (Northern Ireland), but Derry City Council, City of Derry Airport.
lord mayor Capitals for an incumbent lord mayor, mayor, shire president when the
title is used next to their name. Otherwise lower case. The same applies to mayor.
Lord mayor is not exclusively male.
loveable
Lyon (France)
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M
Macau Not Macao.
Magna Carta
maharajah
makers Follow the Oxford at lexico.com when making these one or two words or
hyphenated. See the entry in this guide under one word, two words or hyphenated
mandarin/Mandarin Lower case for the fruit and the official, but upper case for
the language.
manifesto(s)
man-made
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manoeuvre, manoeuvring
man-of-war Rather than man-o’-war for old warships – and for the Portuguese
man-of-war, a venomous sea creature.
Mao Zedong
march-past
marines Upper case for the US Marine Corps and the US Marines when the corps
is meant; but lower case for US marines when referring to a number, group, etc of
these seaborne soldiers. Upper case for the Royal Marine Commandos or the Royal
Marines when the unit is meant, but lower case for marines when referring to the
troops. Also see armed forces
Marseille (France)
marshal The military rank and the verb. One l, but marshalled, marshalling.
Mass Upper case for the rite. Low Mass (usually just Mass) is said, held or
celebrated. High Mass is sung, held or celebrated. But celebrated is inappropriate
for Requiem Mass (a form of Low Mass) or Solemn Requiem Mass (a form of High
Mass).
mathematics Singular, like economics, politics. Shorten to maths, not the American
math.
mayday Lower case for the distress call, which has nothing to do with May Day, the
festival or holiday.
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MCG No need to spell it out. Also referred to as the ’G in Melbourne media only.
medals (Olympic etc) Lower case for gold medal, silver, bronze. Upper case medal
as in Brownlow Medal (but Brownlow medallist).
Medecins Sans Frontieres It means Doctors Without Borders but stick with the
French name, which is widely used outside France.
medieval Use of the diphthong in this case has largely fallen out of favour. Also see
diphthongs.
meet Not meet with. The PM will meet his ministers for pre-budget talks.
mega- This should not be used as a standalone word but with a hyphen or joined
up without a hyphen depending on what the dictionary says. We see too many
mega productions, mega bills and mega projects. Some acceptable uses:
mega-production, megabyte, megastar.
Melbourne Cup At first reference it is the Melbourne Cup, then the Cup, Cup Day,
Cup week, Cup fashions. Also, spring carnival.
Melburnian
member The member (lower case) for Brisbane. Also lower case member of
parliament.
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memento(es)
Messiah Upper case in its primary meaning, the foretold deliverer of the Jews; also
Jesus Christ as the Messiah. But lower case in figurative use, e.g. a rabble-rousing
politician being referred to as a political messiah.
.
methamphetamine Not methylamphetamine.
miners/mining Two words for gold mine, gold mining, gold miner and coal mine,
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coal mining, coal miners. Also sand mine, sand miner, sand mining.
mini-budget
miniseries
ministers Use Health Minister, Education Minister, Justice Minister, etc for short
titles when next to the name of incumbents, but Minister for Local Government and
Planning for longer titles to avoid clumsiness. Use lower case when a title is not
next to a name. Use lower case for the minister, a minister, ministers, ministerial
(and prime ministerial). If a minister has more than one portfolio, only the one
relevant to a particular story need be mentioned. See also capitals (politics and
government)
minus Spell it out (e.g. minus 10 degrees not -10 degrees), except financial credit
ratings where the plus or minus symbols are used. See credit ratings in the
business guide
minuscule
misspell, misspelt
Morse code
Moslem Make it Muslim. See also Muhammad and the Islamic style guide
mosquito(es)
Mother Nature
Mother’s Day
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Mount Spell out in names of mountains and places.
moveable
MPs Plural of MP. There is no need to spell out as member of parliament at first
reference. Senators are also MPs, so do not write of MPs and senators.
Muhammad The prophet, but individuals may spell their name in various ways. See
Islamic style guide.
multi- Words with this prefix are generally one word: multicellular, multichannel,
multicoloured, multicultural, multidimensional, multigrips, multilateral, multilingual,
multimedia, multinational, multipurpose, multiskilling, multistorey.
multiple Steer clear of this often superfluous word. Multiple injuries simply means
injuries; multiple choices means choices. Where possible prefer few, some, several,
many, hundreds, etc.
mum, dad, kids Use with restraint. Upper case for Mum and Dad when used in
place of a name. "I told Mum to take the car,'' but "I heard his mum yelling.''
Murray-Darling Basin
Muslim Not Moslem. Also see Muhammad and the Islamic style guide
Myanmar Formerly Burma. The capital is Naypyidaw. The largest city is Yangon,
formerly Rangoon.
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Myer Use the apostrophe in the colloquial forms shopping at Myer’s, Myer’s
Christmas windows, etc.
myki Victorian public transport ticket system (all lower case except at the start of a
headline or sentence).
myriad Often misused. It means many, so you might say the myriad complications
but you can’t have a myriad of complications or anything else.
N
names Use a given name rather than initials unless the person prefers initials. Do
not follow the American practice of inserting initials in the middle or at the
beginning of names. In US copy, delete the initial except where the person is widely
known as such – for Australian purposes this is almost never. Don’t take the spelling
of any name for granted. Check any that are new to you.
See ethnic names, foreign name elements, honorifics, nicknames, plurals (of
proper names ending in –s, -es, -ess), possessives
NASA The National Aeronautics and Space Administration but no need to spell out.
national anthem Advance Australia Fair is the national anthem. God Save the
Queen is used for royal and vice regal occasions and may be used for other
occasions.
national broadband network Spell out at first reference for clarity if referring to
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the network rather than the company behind it. Use NBN for the abbreviation, not
nbn. It’s NBN Co for the company.
Nationals Formerly the National Party; now the Nationals. In headlines, Nats is
acceptable.
navy, army, air force Lower case for these as short forms for the armed services of
Australia or any other nation. But upper case for full names: Australian Army, Royal
Australian Navy, US Navy etc. See armed forces
Nazi/nazi Upper case for the Nazis of Hitler’s Germany. Also neo-Nazi.
net, the Lower case for the internet. Also see internet & IT guide
net zero emissions Refers to greenhouse gas emissions. Give the full term high up
in a story. It may be shortened to net zero later on. Net zero may also be used in
headlines.
Netherlands, the Lower case the. But The Hague. Holland is a region of the
Netherlands.
newlywed (noun), newly wed (adverb and adjective). The newlyweds, a newly
wed couple. Also as adverb and verb: They are newly wed.
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newspapers/website names Italicise the titles of newspapers and newspaper and
magazine-like website names. Where a publication uses The with a capital T in its
masthead, so do we: The Sydney Morning Herald, The Sun-Herald, The Age, The
Australian Financial Review, The Australian, The Guardian, The Observer; but the
Herald Sun. The Sydney Morning Herald becomes the Herald on second mention.
When using a title adjectivally, drop the article The: a Times reporter, a Times
article, the Times report. Also see individual entries for details on Nine metropolitan
mastheads and their associated publications and supplements. Also see medical
journals
New Year’s Day Also New Year’s Eve, New Year’s celebrations, festivities, greetings
etc. But the new year, in the new year.
New Zealand Can be abbreviated to NZ after first mention. North Island and South
Island take capitals. Use in the North Island’’, not ‘‘on’’.
nicknames Do not use upper case for the in nicknames such as Bert “the Wombat”
Smith. Do not use politicians’ nicknames in straight news reports. They may have a
place in lighter or comment pieces.
Nobel Prize Nobel Peace Prize, Nobel Prize in Chemistry, Nobel Prize in Literature,
etc. Prizes are awarded in a field, not for one.
none Whether it takes a singular or a plural verb depends on what there is (or are)
none of. If you cannot get the wood, none is available. If you cannot buy
hedgehogs, none are available.
non-English-speaking
no one No hyphen.
nor/or Neither always takes nor; not almost always takes or. The exception for not
is circumstances such as the following: I am not, nor have I ever been, a terrorist. I
am not a terrorist. Nor am I a sympathiser. But: I am not a terrorist, or a
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sympathiser.
north-east, north-north-east
North Queensland
Northern Beaches Upper case for the Sydney local government area administered
by Northern Beaches Council, which takes in more than beaches. Lower case if
talking only about the actual strip of beaches.
north shore (Sydney) Lower case. Suburbs between Middle Harbour and
Ku-ring-gai National Park in the east; Lane Cove River and Lane Cove National Park
in the west; North Sydney in the south to Waitara in the north.
notorious This should not be used to mean well known, widely known, generally
known. If used in any unfavourable reference it aggravates the damage by implying
that the description is widely known and accepted as true, e.g. a notorious drunk
(he wasn’t just tipsy last night, he guzzles all the time and everyone knows it). See
infamous
nuclear non-proliferation treaty Lower case. Its full title is the Treaty on the
Non-Proliferation of Nuclear Weapons, but we prefer the shorter version.
nuke Avoid.
Nullarbor Plain
number/No. When abbreviating, use No. (with a full point and a thin space in print
between No. and the numeral). Numbers 1 to 9 are hard-up online. No.1
nunchukkas
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N-word The highly offensive nigger should not be spelt out without a compelling
reason. Consult a senior editor. The mere fact that someone uses it as a racist slur
does not mean we need to repeat it. It can be referred to as the N-word or written
with dashes if necessary (n----r), say in a quote. See black and slurs (racist,
sexist)
O
objet d’art Not object d’art.
o’clock Use 6am, 9.57, noon, 4pm, 8.30pm, midnight. Do not say 9pm on Tuesday
night, 4am on Thursday morning; say 9 o’clock on Tuesday night, 11.30 on Tuesday
night, 4am on Thursday. And: about 7pm, not at about 7pm. No space between the
figure and am/pm. Do not say 12pm, 12 noon, 12 midnight, 12 am.
odds, odds-on Write odds as dollar amounts. $11 not 10-1; $1.20 not 1-5 etc.
-off words Nouns such as play-off, spin-off, turn-off, take-off and stand-off take
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hyphens. See -out words, -up words
office-bearer
Olympic Olympic Games, the Games, Winter Games, Summer Games, the
Olympics, Olympian, an Olympian (a present or past Games competitor). Treat the
Games as a plural: the Games are underway, the Olympics are about to start. Note
that the Olympiad is the four-year period between Games. The enumeration of the
Games does not correspond with the number of Olympiads in the modern era, as
Games were not held in some years. So the Sydney 2000 Games were the Games
of the 27th Olympiad, but not the 27th Olympic Games.
Ombudsman Upper case only when the title appears next to the name of an
incumbent. This is not a gender-specific English word, but a Swedish word for legal
representative. So don’t say ombudswoman or ombudsperson, or ombud. The
plural is ombudsmen.
omelette
one word, two words or hyphenated The “doer” words (-maker, -miner, owner,
-taker,
-grower, -builder, -worker, -broker, -holder etc) are variously written as one word
(winemaker, stockbroker, shipbuilder, metalworker, bondholder); two words (house
builder, uranium miner, profit taker, unit holder, grain grower) or hyphenated. Our
general approach is to follow the Oxford Dictionary. If the Oxford does not list it as
a single word or hyphenated, it is usually written as two words. If it is to be used
adjectivally (e.g. pie-making skills), the hyphen is necessary only when the flow of
the sentence is interrupted without it or to avoid confusion. Hyphens are not
needed in adjectival compounds that contain immediately identifiable groups of
words, e.g. balance of payments results (rather than balance-of-payments results),
as the flow is not affected.
only Take care that the position of this word in a sentence does not create
ambiguity. Keep it as near as possible to the subject it limits and you are unlikely to
go wrong. Here are six sentences whose meaning depends on the placement of the
word only.
1. Only he dreamt of becoming the editor of The Times. (No one else wanted the
job.)
2. He only dreamt of becoming the editor of The Times. (He did nothing about it.)
3. He dreamt only of becoming the editor of The Times. (He dreamed of nothing
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else.)
4. He dreamt of becoming only the editor of The Times. (He didn’t want to be the
managing director.)
5. He dreamt of being the only editor of The Times. (He wasn’t interested in
sharing the job.)
6. He dreamt of becoming the editor of The Times only. (He wasn’t interested in
editing The Timbuktu Post.)
onto One word as a preposition: He jumped onto the bus. But: They marched on to
victory (adverb).
op-ed Opinion pieces should have a sentence in bold at the end giving a brief
description of the author.
open-cut In mining.
Opera House (Sydney) Lower case for its venues, the concert hall, the opera
theatre, the drama theatre, the studio.
opposition Lower case for the federal/state opposition, the opposition, opposition
spokesman on, opposition policies, but upper case for the official position of
Opposition Leader next to the name of the incumbent. Shadow titles are always
lower case. We prefer opposition health spokeswoman, energy spokesman, etc, to
shadow health minister, shadow energy minister, except in cases such as shadow
treasurer, shadow attorney-general, shadow minister for women (an improvement
on opposition spokeswoman on women). For longer titles, it's the opposition
spokesman/woman/person on (not for) commerce and industrial relations, etc.
op shop
-or/-our words We use the -our ending: harbour, honour, valour, candour, Saviour
(meaning Jesus Christ), the Endeavour, the British Labour Party, the New Zealand
Labour Party. It is, however, the Australian Labor Party. Other exceptions are:
(1) Titles of books, plays, films (e.g. the movie Pearl Harbor, as opposed to the
actual Pearl Harbour), newspapers, works of art etc.
(2) Registered business names and trademarks. If the name includes an -or
spelling, follow suit.
orangutan
Order of Australia The order is a “society of honour for the purpose of according
recognition to Australian citizens and other persons for achievement or for
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meritorious service”. The various levels of the order are: Companion (AC), Officer
(AO), Member (AM). There is also a Medal of the Order (OAM). Strictly speaking,
people are appointed as members, officers or companions, or they are awarded the
medal. We would usually say Penny Smith was made an officer of the Order of
Australia. Do not say she was awarded an Order of Australia.
orthopaedic
ounce Except with gold, which is still weighed in ounces, convert to metric. Can be
used in the sense of He didn’t carry an ounce of fat.
-out words Nouns with the suffix ‘‘out’’ generally do not have hyphens: bailout,
blackout, blowout, burnout, buyout, checkout, cutout, dropout, fallout, handout,
hideout, liftout, lookout, payout, pullout, rollout, runout, sellout, shootout, stakeout,
turnout, walkout). They are two words as verbs. The employees intend to walk out
of the office in a mass walkout. See -off words, -up words.
outpatient
outside of Ditch the of. Similarly, of should not be tacked onto inside, beside or
alongside.
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P
Pacific Rim
package Remember there are other words, such as plan, scheme, proposal, terms,
offer.
paediatrician, paediatrics
paedophile, paedophilia
painkiller, painkilling
Pandora’s box When opened, it released all the ills of the world on mankind. It is
wrong to use it of treasures, pleasures and other good things.
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parliamentary committees All lower case: the joint committee on foreign affairs, a
Senate estimates committee. See also capitals (government and politics)
Parramatta River (Sydney) It starts (and Port Jackson ends) at Long Nose Point,
Balmain.
part-time, full-time
party Upper case only when part of a name: Labor Party, Liberal Party, etc,. Later
the party.
past The past (not last) six months if we mean the six months to now; the past few
days, year, seven years, decade, century.
per Use a/an wherever possible: $40 per hour becomes $40 an hour; $10 per
kilogram becomes $10 a kilogram; $40 per person becomes $40 a head.
per cent Two words. Always use numerals, even for figures below 10. This applies
also to percentage points: 3 percentage points. Beware the common mistake in
calculating percentage increases. If the housing interest rate rises from 4 per cent
to 5 per cent it is not a rise of 1 per cent, but 1 percentage point. (A jump from 4 per
cent to 5 per cent is in fact a rise of a quarter, or 25 per cent.) If a party lifts its
share of the vote from 50 per cent to 55 per cent at an election, it is not a rise of 5
per cent, but 5 percentage points (in percentage terms it is actually a jump of 10
per cent). Per cent or the per cent symbol % may be used in headlines, tables and
graphics.
Another way of expressing fractions below 1 per cent is to use basis points. If
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interest rates move from 5.25 per cent to 5.75 per cent, they have risen by 50 basis
points. The correct expression for rises of less than 1 percentage point is 0.2 (or
whatever) of a percentage point. Not 0.2 per cent or 0.2 percentage points.
Be careful when calculating percentage changes. Make sure you are calculating the
change to the original figure, which is not necessarily the larger or higher figure.
You do this by:
(a) calculating the difference between the original figure and the new figure, then
(b) dividing that difference by the original figure, then (c) multiplying the result by
100 to reach the percentage figure. The less brave can ask an online calculator to
do it for them.
perestroika Russian for restructuring. The policy in the former Soviet Union of
restructuring or reforming the economy and the political system. Also see glasnost
Persian Gulf Do not use Arabian Gulf, unless it is in a quote. The Gulf is acceptable
at second mention.
pharmacist Use this, not chemist, for the people who dispense drugs.
Philippines, the But Filipino or Filipina for its people. In the collective sense use
Filipinos. Adjectivally: the Philippine ambassador (not Filipino) or a Philippine
minister.
place names Spell out Avenue, Boulevard, Close, Court, Crescent, Drive, Grove,
Highway, Island, Lake, Lane, Mount, Road, Street, Point, Port and any others except
St as in the Melbourne suburb of St Kilda. Use upper case The for such street
names as The Boulevard, The Corso, The Strand, The Esplanade when that is the
proper name. Also in names such as The Hague, The Entrance, The Gap. Lower
case the in country names: the United States, the Netherlands. As per government
policy, all Australian place names are written without apostrophes: Rushcutters Bay
(Sydney), Fishermans Bend (Melbourne), Frenchs Forest (Sydney), etc. Use
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capitals for South-East Asia, the US South, Midwest, London’s East End, etc.
American spellings in names of towns and cities can stay: Ann Arbor, Michigan,
Brooklyn Center, Minnesota. However, as many non-Americans do, we add a u to
the geographical feature Pearl Harbour. Also see addresses, street, road;
apostrophes
plaster of Paris
platypus, platypuses
plurals (of compounds) The principal word takes the plural form:
attorneys-general, aides-de-camp, commanders-in-chief, governors-general,
courts martial, poets laureate. But major-generals, detective sergeants, lord
mayors.
plurals (of initial abbreviations) Add s (not ’s) to form the plural: MPs, BAs, MLCs,
QCs.
plurals (of letters of the alphabet) Here are some exceptions where ’s is used to
form the plural (because otherwise there would be a reading difficulty): the A’s in
the index; dotting the i’s and crossing the t’s; minding one’s P’s and Q’s. Two other
exceptions for clarity: do’s and don’ts; so-and-so’s.
plurals (of numerals) Add s, not ’s: the 1970s, not the 1970’s; the ’70s, not the 70’s
or the Seventies; a man in his 20s, not 20’s or twenties.
plurals (of proper names ending in -s, -es, -ss) Add es (never ’s) to form the
plural: Burnses, Joneses, Baylisses.
plurals (of words adopted from other languages) With some exceptions, to be
found below and in other alphabetical entries, prefer the anglicised options.
antennas (radio etc) but antennae (of insects)
appendixes (anatomy) but appendices (books and reports)
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bureaus (not bureaux)
indexes (in books) but indices (statistical)
mediums (spiritualists) but media (news and other media)
millennia
referendums
curriculums
stadiums
tableaus
trousseaus
stimuli
strata
data (single and plural)
police Use capitals for names of forces: NSW Police Force, Victoria Police,
Queensland Police Service, Australian Federal Police but lower case for the police
force, federal police, state police. Names of organisations are treated as singular:
Police are on the scene, but Victoria Police is restructuring. Avoid giving the full
name of a force when police on its own will do, i.e. Police are at the scene of a
hold-up in Melbourne’s CBD. It is obvious in this example that the police are of the
Victoria Police variety. But Victoria Police (the organisation) has defended the
actions of senior officers. Use lower case for police stations, police area commands
(NSW), police districts. Some people consider the word cop offensive. Prefer police
in formal copy and headlines where possible.
Branches, squads, etc Use lower case for squads, units, groups, branches, etc: the
homicide squad, the critical incident response team, special operations group,
tactical response unit. Use capitals for the top-level command bodies: State Crime
Command (NSW), Crime Command (Victoria), Professional Standards Command.
Taskforce is lower case: Purana taskforce (Victoria) but Strike Force Parrabell, etc
(NSW).
Titles Use capitals for Chief Commissioner, Deputy Commissioner, Assistant
Commissioner for Crime, etc only when written next to the name of the incumbent.
Spell out commander, sergeant, constable, inspector. Detective is a designation
rather than a rank. Our default style is to drop honorifics, but if you need to
distinguish someone such as Detective Sergeant Pedro Smith from another Smith
in a story, he would be Sergeant Smith at subsequent mention. Detective Senior
Constable Melinda Boyle would become Senior Constable Boyle. Don’t abbreviate
ranks. Ranks that include chief or senior or leading can’t be shortened without
demoting the holders.
police (federal) The Australian Federal Police (subsequently federal police or AFP).
policymaker Also policyholder. Also see the entry under one word, two words or
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hyphenated
pompom
Pope, the Upper case for all mentions when referring to the Vatican incumbent:
Pope Leo, the Pope. For a past pope, it's Pope Julius III, the 16th-century pope.
Lower case as a plural, e.g. popes through the ages. Lower case papal, pontiff.
pork-barrelling
postnatal
postwar
powerbroker
power line
pm/am No full points, no space: 2pm, 7.35am. Beware redundancies such as 3am in
the morning and 9pm at night. Use noon or midnight, not 12am or 12pm. Also see
times
practice (noun), to practise (verb). Sport practice, but he practises kicking. Each
can also function as an adjective. A practice shot, a practised performer.
pre-/pre (in compound words) When to use, and when not to use, the hyphen:
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pre- (with hyphen) is used when the second part of the compound begins with the
vowels e, i or u: pre-eminent, pre-existing, pre-issue, pre-use. Also, pre-tax,
pre-wedding, pre-war, pre-race. Use the hyphen before all capitals (pre-Christian,
pre-Columbian). Use pre (no hyphen) in other cases, including: prearrange,
precaution, predetermined, prehistoric, prejudge, premarital, premeditated,
preoccupy, preordain, prepaid, preschool, preseason, preselection, presuppose.
presently It means soon, in a little while, not at the present time. When knocking
out a superfluous currently, do not substitute presently. See also currently
Prime Minister-elect, President-elect Use capitals only when next to the name of
someone who has been elected and is waiting to be sworn in.
prise open Pry in this sense is American. Use pry in the sense of delving too
closely into someone’s personal affairs.
prizemoney, prizewinner
program
pronouns See the grammar guide for entries on its and it’s and who, which and
that
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prophecy (noun), to prophesy (verb)
prophet, the (lower case) Muhammad. See also the Islamic style guide
protagonist Strictly, it means the main character in a play, book, film, etc, but
these days it is common to talk about a number of protagonists.
proved/proven Prefer proved in these forms: This proved to be correct; Her guilt
was proved. But adjectivally: a proven method.
public-private partnership
public service Lower case for the public service. Capitals for senior officers
appointed by governments when the title is used next to the name of the
incumbent: the Director of Public Prosecutions, the Solicitor-General, the
Auditor-General, Chief Scientist, Chief Medical Officer, the State Coroner, the Chief
Commissioner of Police, the Ombudsman, but lower case for permanent heads of
departments: Treasury secretary Dolla Moneybags.
puns Some of the most eye-catching headlines use puns. Unfortunately, a pun
works well only if it is fresh and genuinely clever. Most are not, so don’t use a pun
unless it’s a good one. Be aware that pun-style headlines often don’t work online as
readers need a decent amount of information as to what a story is about if they are
to click on it.
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The government decided long ago that Australian geographical names would not
take apostrophes, making life simple for journalists around the nation (St Leonards,
Coffs Harbour, Kings Cross, Fishermans Bend, etc). Keep apostrophes in overseas
place names that use them (St James’s in London). An initial apostrophe is used
when denoting a decade: the ’70s, the ’50s. Abbreviations do not take apostrophes
in the plural (two MPs, five GPs). Phrases such as six months’ jail, a week’s holiday
take apostrophes. When forming the possessive of a name ending in s, add an
apostrophe only (Jones' car, Williams' computer, Qantas' profit, Dickens’ works).
Add apostrophe s for singular common nouns: the boss’s bonus, the virus’s toll.
colons
Used as a pause before a list or elaboration.
The following articles were found in his pockets: a wallet, a phone and a piece of
chewing gum.
Here’s my secret to success: get plenty of sleep and take frequent holidays.
Use a capital after the colon when the colon introduces a quotation
He said: “What are you doing with that crowbar in your hand?”
Question: “What are you doing?” Answer: “You tell me.”
Use a capital after caption kickers
Married to the job: Newlyweds Mila Jovavich and David Preiss tied the knot in a
car factory. See also captions
Use a capital in headlines except when what follows is an attribution
Federal budget 2030: Surplus up, taxes down
Get the buzz: Bees are back in town
Baker broke into flour mill: police
commas
Although there are times when they are optional, the pause commas create is often
crucial for preventing ambiguity and unintended meanings. Consider these two
sentences:
Before eating the soldiers went for a run.
Before eating, the soldiers went for a run.
Commas are used as a substitute for and in a list: Oats, corn, maize and barley.
Some people would insert a further comma (known as an Oxford comma) after
maize. Our style is to do so only if it is needed for clarity.
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They set off introductory words: John, this is not good enough.
They indicate reinforcement before short expressions: That’s not the right way, is
it?
They separate words that give extra information in a sentence but that can be
removed and still leave a grammatical sentence behind in which the overall
meaning is unchanged: Katie, normally a quiet child, threw a tantrum. Take out the
extra information provided by normally a quiet child and you are left with Katie
threw a tantrum, a grammatical sentence.
Taylor Swift dined with her parents, Mick Jagger and the Duchess of Sussex.
(Wrong as it suggests Jagger and the duchess are her parents.)
Taylor Swift dined with her parents, Mick Jagger, and the Duchess of Sussex.
(Correct as the pause created by the Oxford comma before and removes any
misinterpretation.)
He was “a tremendous social climber,” bon vivant and rare intellect in the field of
Kardashian studies.
(Wrong. Commas always go inside quote marks in American English but not our
English.)
He was “a tremendous social climber”, bon vivant and rare intellect in the field of
Kardashian studies.
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(Correct)
The hackers broke into the company’s systems, but did not steal any data.
(Comma not needed. One is usually used if the words on either side of the but (or
other conjunction such as and, or, so) can stand alone as separate sentences.
The hackers broke into the company’s systems, but they did not steal any data.
(Correct)
A man, who allegedly held up a service station while dressed as Napoleon, was
arrested on Tuesday.
(The problem with this lede is that in bracketing off who allegedly held up a service
station while dressed as Napoleon, it suggests this is a bit of extra information by
the way and the thrust of the sentence is that a man was arrested on Tuesday, not
in itself a notable fact.)
A man who allegedly held up a service station while dressed as Napoleon was
arrested on Tuesday.
(Correct. Mention of the robbery and the Napoleon outfit is now at the heart of the
sentence.)
As the Oxford puts it: “Commas are used to separate a part of a sentence that is an
optional ‘aside’ and not part of the main statement.”
Stephen Murray-Smith in Right Words uses this example of the misuse of commas:
Soldiers, who run away, are not welcome in any army. (The comma after soldiers
gives the unintended meaning that all soldiers always run away.)
dashes
Dashes may be used in pairs instead of parentheses:
The Australians would have been struggling if Murdoch had held a sharp chance
at slip – he seemed to be impeded by the keeper – when Collins was on only 15.
A dash may be used to indicate an abrupt break in a sentence as in an
interrupted conversation:
“Don’t tell Petra that we don’t like –” “I wouldn’t dare.”
A dash may also be used before an afterthought or interjection to give it
emphasis:
The dictator might have decided to jail his opponents – at a risk. Instead he
decided to compromise – at a price.
Don’t overuse dashes. If you use a pair instead of parenthesis don’t use another in
the same sentence; it will cause confusion.
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exclamation marks are for exclamations, thus: oh! or ouch! or, “Never!” she cried.
Otherwise, use sparingly.
full stops
Sentences marked by full stops normally represent a discrete or distinct statement;
more closely connected or complementary statements are joined by a semicolon
(as here).
hyphens
Hyphenation is one of the more fraught areas of punctuation. Like the comma, the
hyphen is often neglected but is an invaluable aid to making your meaning clear.
The trend is to use far fewer hyphens than in the past. Until early last century
even to-day, to-night and to-morrow were mainly hyphenated. If you’re not sure
whether a word or phrase takes a hyphen, check this guide or the dictionary.
When it comes to compounds, ask yourself if adding a hyphen helps clarity
and/or flow or makes no difference. No one would inject a hyphen into a phrase
such as federal government policy. There is zero ambiguity without one and the
flow is fine. Federal and government naturally go together – ask anyone in
Canberra. But consider these examples:
Arcadia has little town charm as opposed to Arcadia has little-town charm.
A man-eating flounder or a man eating flounder.
A fine-tooth comb or a fine tooth comb.
These are cases where omitting a hyphen can change the meaning or at least
cause confusion. While we don’t want to slavishly add hyphens everywhere, we
often omit them where they should be and add them where they shouldn’t be.
Here is a rundown of some common areas that can cause problems:
(1) -ly words When these words are adverbs (words that modify adjectives,
verbs or other adverbs) a hyphen should not be used.
The remarkably unattractive sponge cake did not rise to the occasion.
The brightly lit room hurt his eyes.
The poorly written article annoyed readers.
(2) re- words Use hyphens where a single word can have two meanings:
re-cover and recover, re-sent and resent, re-sign and resign, re-form and reform.
(3) ill, well, better, best, worse, worst . When used before a noun hyphenate, when
after a noun don’t.
This was a well-built house but This house was well built.
He is the worst-behaved boy in class, but I know no other boys who are worse
behaved.
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a 12-year drought (but a drought that has lasted 12 years)
a two-metre-long fingernail
one-quarter, two-fifths
two-year jail term
a child aged 10 is a 10-year-old
a six-day war
a first-class effort
(5) -up, -out and -off words Our basic rule of thumb is to hyphenate nouns ending
in -off or -up but make those ending in -out one word. Examples can be found
throughout this guide. Verbs are always two words. A take-off, to take off; a
standout, to stand out; a hold-up, to hold up.
(6) Use a hyphen in this case: Then-prime minister Ben Chifley said he liked
hyphens. but Ben Chifley was the then prime minister.
quotation marks
So you've got a quote and now you want to punctuate it. A full quote is easy
enough: ''Commas are so 20th century,'' she said. It's with variations on the
theme that confusion arises. Here are some common examples and simple
ways to treat them:
Partial quotes
He said he knew of ''no salient reason to stand on his head''.
Prime Minister Jacinda Ardern said she was “most unimpressed”.
The full stop goes outside the quote marks.
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The judge said Diaz’s theft of the compost was “without a doubt the worst such
case I have ever seen.
''You are a menace to decent worm farmers everywhere.”
Interrupted quotes
“You are a reckless man,” the judge said, “and have shown yourself to be a
menace to decent worm farmers everywhere.”
Readers get impatient, so in a quoted passage never leave them guessing the
identity of the speaker. Source it before, during or at the end of the first sentence.
We use double quote marks in captions and body text (single for quotes within
quotes). We also use double for homepage write-offs. Use single quotation marks
in headings, precedes (standfirsts) and breakout quotes.
Don’t use unnecessary quote marks on mundane words in reported speech. This
habit is rife and serves no purpose. Rather than Smith said the fine was
“excessive”, make it: Smith said the fine was excessive. But Smith said the fine was
“humongous”. In this example the quote marks tell the reader that the speaker used
an unusual word. See quotes
semicolons
Heavier than a comma but of less weight than a full stop or colon, a semicolon
commonly connects two sentences whose thoughts the author wants to link
closely, as in:
The candidate could not be said to give a very good impression; he looked as if
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he needed a good wash.
The enemy snipers were difficult to dislodge; they held out to the end with
complete devotion.
In both cases the semicolon could have been replaced by a full stop, but the effect
might have been too disjointed or jerky. The semicolon is also used to divide
balancing statements, as in:
Some children wanted to play cricket; others wanted to go swimming.
All the virtue and all the praise go to socialism; all that is unvirtuous and
damnable is non-socialist.
Use semicolons to separate items in lists if one or more item also has a comma.
The large cage contained three budgies, two of which were chicks; four parrots,
one of which would not stop talking; and a toy cockatoo.
square brackets
Square brackets are used to enclose explanatory information in a quote when it is
not included by the speaker.
“The whole thing [the Middle East] is on the brink of an outbreak of major
violence,” he said.
“It [the project] is way behind schedule.”
If a statement or report has inserted the explanatory information, round brackets
are correct.
Q
Queen Rarely do we need to refer to the monarch as Queen Elizabeth. The Queen
is sufficient. Use her name only when mentioning other queens: Queen Elizabeth,
like Queen Mary …
Queen Elizabeth the Queen Mother No comma. The late Queen Mother.
Queen’s Counsel Singular and plural. Abbreviate as QC e.g. John Smith, QC, said …
Also Senior Counsel (SC). See counsel
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Queens Hall In Parliament House, Melbourne. Also Kings Hall, Old Parliament
House, Canberra.
queue, queueing
quotations
The abiding principle is that readers have every right to expect accuracy in quotes.
Minor grammatical slips, however, can usually be cleaned up, particularly if made
by people who are not native English speakers. Ums and ahs and other pause
devices should be removed. Otherwise, if a quote is messy, paraphrase it – fairly
and accurately. If omitting part of a quote, use ellipses – three points with spaces
on either side – to indicate this is the case: “They don’t like to boast about their
achievements …” as opposed to “They don’t like to boast about their achievements
regardless of where they made them.” Use this device if needed to get to the
essence of a quote, but only when the meaning is not altered.
If two people are quoted in a row, the second person needs to be identified before
their quote appears. When one speaker’s quotes continue for consecutive
paragraphs, whatever attribution is required must be given with the first par, not
left until the end. Don’t leave the reader guessing or with a false impression.
quotations (social media) Tweets, Facebook posts and the like can generally run
without being cleaned up for spelling, punctuation and grammar, and shouldn't be
littered with sics. Clean them up too much and they may look inauthentic. But
consider context and clarity. A tweet on a serious topic by someone who obviously
has no trouble with the English language but has made a simple typo can be
corrected.
R
R&B rhythm and blues.
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R&D research and development.
race and nationality Do not make gratuitous references to racial and national
origin. Unless there is an overriding justification for the identification of nationality
or race, it should be omitted. It would be relevant to say: Five Sudanese-born
people were attacked by white supremacists. It is not relevant to say: A
Sudanese-born man appeared in court on burglary charges. See also Aboriginal
and Torres Strait Islander people, black, N-word, racist/sexist slurs
rack/racked Racked with pain. Also nerve-racking and rack and ruin. Not wracked.
racquet/racket Tennis and squash players use racquets; criminals run rackets.
radio stations Write their names as they do: ABC Classic, 2UE, triple j, 2DayFM,
smoothfm, etc. An exception: If a name is all lower case, use a capital at the start of
a sentence.
razzmatazz
re-/re (in compound words) re- (with hyphen) is used when followed by an e
(re-elect). Re (no hyphen) is used in other instances: rearm, reappear, reinforce,
reiterate, reopen, reunion, reconstitute, remake, reselect. EXCEPTIONS: Use re-
(with hyphen) in re-read and where confusion would arise with another word
(between, say, recover and re-cover, reform and re-form, recreation and
re-creation, re-sent and resent).
realpolitik
referendum, referendums
reform Not all change is reform (which means a change for the better), so we
should not bias our mastheads by automatically describing every proposed or
implemented change as a reform.
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refute, rebut Refute means to disprove, not simply deny or reject. To say The
government refuted the opposition’s claims is to take a side in the argument. Rebut
can mean to claim that something is false or to disprove it. If you’re talking about
the back and forth debate and don’t mean that something has been disproved, use
reject.
reign/rein Reign is the period a ruler is on the throne. A rein is a strap used to
control a horse.
report Lower case in the Gowans report, the Stuart report, etc. It’s report on, not
into.
Reverend Spell out the Reverend Alex Smith at first reference. Do not abbreviate to
the Rev.
rhinoceros, rhinoceroses
Ring, The Wagner's epic cycle of four operas is titled Der Ring des Nibelungen, or
The Ring for short. Cycle is not part of the name.
Ripponlea The Melbourne suburb, but Rippon Lea and the Rippon Lea estate for
the house and estate administered by the National Trust.
river Use upper case when the word is part of a river’s name: The Yarra River, the
River Nile, the Hawkesbury River, but the Barwon and Darling rivers.
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Riverina, the
road, street, etc Spell out street, road, avenue, court, boulevard, highway, etc in all
cases. See addresses and place names
road map Not roadmap. And remember not every plan has to be a road map. In fact
plan is a good alternative.
roman numerals It is essential that they be keyed correctly. The Roman one is a
capital I (“EYE”), not a lower case L (“ELL”) or the Arabic figure 1. Too often, World
War II appears as World War 11. A cricket XI, but a squad of 11 cricketers. A rugby
XV.
royal Use capitals only in names of institutions, buildings, established events, etc
(Royal Melbourne Hospital, Royal Easter Show but royal wedding), in specific royal
commissions when giving the full title (the NSW Royal Commission on Drugs) and in
specific titles such as the Princess Royal when used with a name. Use lower case
for royal family, royal tour, royal commissions generally (calling for a royal
commission, etc), royal assent, royalty, the royals.
Our current monarch keeps capitals on each mention. Queen Elizabeth, the Queen.
She may be referred to as the Queen on every mention unless an article talks about
more than one queen. Full titles such as the Duke of Edinburgh, the Prince of Wales,
the Duchess of Sussex are upper case at each mention. Capitals for Prince William,
Princess Mary, Prince Harry, etc, but lower case if used without the name (the
prince, the princess, the duke, the duchess). Kings and queens of other countries
are the king, the queen on second mention. Use the Duchess of Sussex or Meghan.
She is no longer Meghan Markle. The Duchess of Cambridge is, formally speaking,
Catherine. If you want to be informal, she’s Kate, not Kate Middleton. Use lower
case for forms of address such as your majesty, your royal highness, your
excellency, and the description her majesty, his majesty. See also honorifics
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Royal Botanic Gardens Melbourne and Sydney. Not Botanical.
royal commissions The titles of royal commissions take capitals when used in full:
the Royal Commission into Fruitfly Eradication, the royal commission on second
reference or the fruitfly royal commission. Lower case for royal commissioners:
Justice Tamara Smith, the royal commissioner inquiring into fruitfly eradication, but
Commissioner Tamara Smith if that is her preferred honorific. Lower case for royal
commissions in general.
S
Sabbath
sacked Be careful using this term in relation to an individual as there could be legal
ramifications. The individual may have been sacked, but also may in fact have been
stood aside, stood down, resigned, asked to resign or other distinctions. Ousted is
a good general-purpose word for situations where it is unclear or a short headline
word is needed.
said Said is an excellent word. Use it freely. Prefer the minister said to told (insert
masthead), declared, added, urged, argued, commented, continued, etc. We use
told (insert masthead) far too often.
St (for Saint) Use the abbreviation (no full points) for saints’ names, and for
churches, places, etc named after them.
salt water (noun), saltwater (adjective). Saltwater crocodiles live in salt water.
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salvo, salvos And Salvo(s) for a Salvation Army member(s).
Samoa There are two: American Samoa in the east and Samoa in the west
(formerly Western Samoa).
same-sex marriage
sanatorium, sanatoriums
sat-nav
sceptic Also sceptical, scepticism. But Australian Skeptics and The Skeptic
magazine.
schadenfreude
schizophrenia People with schizophrenia do not have split personalities. They may
have various psychotic disorders, but only one personality. Do not use the term
figuratively (‘‘The Swans’ form has been schizophrenic.’’)
schoolies week
schools Use an apostrophe in their names if they do: Mac.Robertson Girls’ High
School, (Melbourne) Presbyterian Ladies’ College. Use numerals for grades and
years below 10: a grade 2 student. Also term 2 but second term.
scientific names Italicise. Upper case for the first word (the genus name), lower
case for the second word (the specific name): Homo sapiens, Homo erectus,
Macropus rufus (red kangaroo), Acacia elata, Eucalyptus maculata (spotted gum).
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Note: scientific names should not be referred to as Latin names.
Scot, Scottish, Scotch A Scot, a Scotsman (not Scotchman); Scottish (not Scotch)
people; Scotch whisky; Scotch egg; Scotch broth; Scotch College (Melbourne and
Adelaide), Scots College (Sydney); Scots Church (Melbourne).
sea change, sea-changers (The original TV show was SeaChange). Also tree
change, tree-changers.
section, article Lower case for section 3 of the Crimes Act and article 4 of the
Vienna Convention, etc.
secretary Lower case for all positions including the secretary of the Treasury,
except in titles of incumbent US or British cabinet members (the Secretary of State,
Transport Secretary).
self- Most terms beginning with self, such as self-esteem, take a hyphen.
Exceptions include selfless, selfsame.
senator A senator, the senator, Labor senator Joe Tan, but use a capital as an
honorific: Senator Joe Tan, Senator Tan said. Senators are MPs. It is wrong to talk
of senators and MPs as if they are separate groups.
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September 11, 2001 The terrorist attacks on the US are widely referred to as ‘‘the
September 11 attacks’’, but, where possible, include the year: ‘‘The attacks on the
US on September 11, 2001 …’’ 9/11 is OK for headlines.
7-Eleven stores
sharemarket
sharia (Islamic law), lower case. Not shariah. It is a tautology to say sharia law. Use
sharia or Islamic law. See also the Islamic style guide
sheikh is a title of rulers of Persian Gulf principalities and can be used for religious
figures and tribal chiefs as well. Not sheik.
Shiite Muslims We use this spelling rather than Shia or Shi’ite. See also the Islamic
style guide
ships We do not italicise ships’ names. A ship is referred to as it, not her. Use
HMAS Hobart, the Hobart, or the destroyer Hobart, not just Hobart (‘‘Hobart has
sailed for Sydney’’ is ludicrous). Also, do not say the HMAS Hobart (if you do, you
are saying, in effect, the Her Majesty’s Australian ship, which is silly). Submarines,
however, are known as boats. Naval fighting vessels are warships, not battleships.
A battleship is a type of warship.
shires Upper case for the Sutherland Shire. Lower case for the shire, shires. See
councils
shootout (noun)
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shops Use butcher’s shop (not butcher shop), grocer’s shop. Retail shop is a
tautology.
Show It’s the Royal Melbourne Show, the Royal Easter Show (Sydney), the Show,
the Showgrounds (Melbourne), the Showground (Sydney), showbags.
side effect
skilful
skulduggery
slurs (racist, sexist etc) We should not slavishly report slurs used by bigots. Often
it is enough to say Twitter trolls used a racist slur or protesters hurled racist abuse.
Reporting the exact words of someone prominent may well be valid. See also
N-word
small business Small-business man, woman, people etc, but businessman etc.
smartcard
smartphone
smartwatch
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SMS short message service. SMS message is redundant. Prefer text messaging.
Socialist/socialist Upper case when used of a member of a Socialist Party (that is,
a party bearing that name.) Otherwise lower case. The same principle applies to
conservative, liberal, communist, green, etc.
socioeconomic
some time/sometime Usually two words: I’ll do it some time. As one word it means
former, erstwhile: a sometime friend.
South-East Asia
southern hemisphere
South Pacific
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Reporters should give as much information about the source as possible (a
source with direct knowledge of the situation) and explain why they are
anonymous (... said a source who did not want to be identified because the
matter is confidential, or because they were still employed by the company).
Speculative or general comments such as the move is likely to anger the
government or The AFL/NRL has been under growing pressure over off-field
behaviour of players must be backed up by a relevant source and context. Who
exactly is putting the AFL/NRL under pressure? Otherwise, the piece becomes
comment, instead of news. Pseudonyms should be avoided.
soybean
Speaker, Deputy Speaker (of parliament) Capitals at each mention for incumbents.
Also for former office holders if needed for clarity. See also capitals (politics and
government)
special characters These can be found in Ink via the Omega (Ω) button below
embeds.
spiral It can go up or down or in any direction, so a wage spiral simply means the
money is going around and around, not necessarily upward.
splitting verbs Constructions such as he will this week decide are common, and
clumsy. Say he will decide this week … See the grammar guide
sponsors’ names The use of sponsors’ names in close association with sporting
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and cultural events should be avoided where possible.
spoonfuls, bucketfuls
states and territories Lower case: a state, the state, state parliament, New York
state. New South Wales is abbreviated to NSW at all times. Use the abbreviation
ACT at every reference. It’s the Northern Territory at first reference, then the
territory or the NT. Avoid Tas, Vic, Qld.
stations Upper case as proper nouns for a city’s main train station/s: Flinders
Street Station or Southern Cross Station in Melbourne, Central Station in Sydney.
Other stations take lower case, as do police stations.
stimulus, stimuli
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stockbroker Also, stockholder, stock owner. Also see one word, two words or
hyphenated
straightforward
straitjacket
straitlaced
Stratford-upon-Avon
street, road Spell out street, road, avenue, highway, freeway, etc: High Street,
Princes Highway, Eastern Freeway. In the plural, Lonsdale and Spencer streets. See
also addresses and place names
street numbers These are not usually given in news reports. If there is a reason for
including them, check carefully.
studmaster, studbreeder
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Suharto Former Indonesian president. Not Soeharto.
suicide Noun only. The term committed suicide is seen as stigmatising given the
association committed has with crime and sin. Use died by suicide, took her own
life. killed himself. Don’t use failed suicide or successful suicide. When a story
about suicide or mental illness is running, helpline website links and/or phone
numbers should be included at the bottom.
summon, summons People are summonsed when they get a court summons.
Otherwise, they are summoned.
Sun-Herald, The For sections and liftouts do not use italics. The fun run is known
as the Sun-Herald City2Surf.
swath/swathe Use swath for a wide area or strip of something, as in what you get
using a scythe or mower. Broad swaths of the state were left without power. To
swathe means to wrap or bandage something.
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Sydney Harbour Or the harbour.
Sydney Morning Herald, The The Sydney Morning Herald is owned by Nine
Entertainment Co. The legal entity listed as its publisher is Fairfax Media
Publications Pty Ltd. Do not use italics for sections of digital sites or the paper:
Green Guide, the Letters page, Spectrum, Business, Sport, Good Food, Traveller,
etc. Spin-off publications are italicised: Good Food Guide, Good Weekend. If you
need to specifically mention that someone told the masthead (aim to avoid doing
so), give the full title at first reference followed by the Herald at later reference.
T
T Use a hyphen in T-shirt, T-square, T-bone, T-junction etc, but T cell.
takeaway food
takeover One word as a noun and adjective, but take over as a verb.
take place Things take place by design, or occur or happen by chance. Meetings
take place, accidents or disasters occur or happen.
Talib/Taliban Talib is singular, Taliban is the plural noun. The Taliban are in charge
...
Taser (trade name) Upper case as noun and verb. The generic equivalent is stun
gun. See also trade names
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Tattersall’s (with apostrophe), but Tatts (no apostrophe).
tautology Tautology is a waste of words, saying the same thing twice. Here are
some examples:
ABN number
added bonus
advocate for
brief moment
climb up
close proximity
completely full
consensus of opinion
descend down
end result
few in number
final outcome
follow after
free gift
future prospects
green-coloured
hectares of land
hoist up
invited guest
join together
little baby
merge together
new innovation
new recruit
noxious poison
old adage
passing phase
past experience
past history
past record
PIN number
raze to the ground
repeat again
retail shop
return again
revert back
safe haven
skirt around
SMS message
sufficient enough
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temporary reprieve
temporary respite
total extinction
totally destroyed
triangular shape
true facts
universal panacea
usual customs
See also wasted words.
taxes Use lower case for names of taxes: the fringe benefits tax, goods and
services tax (or GST). It’s the Australian Taxation Office, Taxation Office or Tax
Office, not the Taxation Department.
teammate, teamwork
tea-tree
telehealth
telephone numbers They should be spaced as below, using thin spaces to avoid
line breaks. (Sometimes producers will have to reword paragraphs containing
phone numbers to avoid line breaks and loose lines.)
Metropolitan numbers: (eight digits) 9123 4567. With area code (07) 9123 4567.
1300, 1800 or 1900 numbers:
1800 123 456
13 numbers 13 25 19
Mobile phones: 0418 123 456
television stations (free to air) ABC, SBS, Seven, Nine, Ten, Channel Seven,
Channel Nine, Channel Ten, Network Ten, Seven Network, Nine Network, NITV,
Channel 31. SECONDARY CHANNELS: ABC TV Plus, ABC ME, ABC News; SBS
Viceland, SBS Movies, SBS Food; 7TWO, 7mate, 7flix; 9Go!, 9Gem, 9Life, 9Rush; 10
Bold, 10 Peach, 10 Shake. STREAMING: ABC iview, 9Now, 7plus, 10 play, SBS On
Demand. Point out in copy that Nine is our owner. In business contexts, the full
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name is Nine Entertainment Co. In copy transcribed from television (and radio)
broadcasts, always credit the station (or network) and the program: The actor was
speaking on ABC program Four Corners, or ABC TV’s 7.30.
Ten Commandments
thalidomide
the Use lower case for countries (the United States, the Netherlands) and
nicknames such as Jimmy “the Weasel” Fratianno, Bert “the Wombat” Smith. Also
band names such as the Beatles and the Rolling Stones.
Use upper case for the the as part of an official street name or place name, such as
The Avenue, The Gap, The Hague, The Rocks. Use a capital for titles of publications
and works of art if they do: The Sydney Morning Herald, The Taming of the Shrew.
In most other cases, use lower case. We prefer to go without the the when giving
someone’s title or job description, but use it if the title is a mouthful. Prime Minister
Tony Dukakis said, rather than the prime minister, Tony Dukakis, said. But the
president of the Southern HIghlands Flora and Fauna Appreciation Society Bowral
branch, Greg Bird, said.
The Hague
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The Spit (Sydney)
think tank Other options include advisers, experts, panel of advisers (experts,
etc),.
through Not to be used in the American sense Monday through Friday, January
through March. Use instead January to the end of March, January to March 31.
timing Use 6am, 9.57, noon, 4pm, midnight. Avoid redundancies such as 9pm at
night, 4am in the morning. Use about 7pm, not at about 7pm. No space between
the figure and am/pm. To avoid confusion in a multiplatform world, reporters should
not use yesterday, today or tomorrow to time stories. Name the day. The journalist
bought her fourth mansion on Wednesday, not yesterday or today. And the
preposition on must stay. Avoid the American practice of dropping it as in, The
mansion was bought Wednesday. Today, yesterday and tomorrow are used in print.
Desk editors should make the appropriate changes. Live blogs may use today,
tonight, overnight, etc to aid clarity if necessary. Write (AEST), (AEDT), not
Melbourne time or Sydney time.
titbit
town halls Capitals for the Richmond Town Hall, the Willoughby Town Hall, etc,
and at subsequent mentions the town hall (lower case). But it is the Sydney Town
Hall, Melbourne Town Hall and thereafter the Town Hall (upper case).
Toys ‘R’ Us
trade names Owners of trade names guard them closely. If necessary they will go
to court to defend their rights. Unless we intend to refer to a specific product, we
should try to avoid them. Some trade names, particularly in the tech world, have
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become commonly used as verbs. Where this is the case, use a capital: to Google,
to Photoshop, to Taser, to Skype, to Facebook.
Aspro………………………………...aspirin
Biro…………………………………...ballpoint pen
Bobcat………………………………..earth-moving machine
Breathalyzer………………………....breathalyser
Cellophane………………………… .(transparent) wrapping
Coca-Cola/Coke…………………….soft drink, cola
Doona………………………………...continental quilt, duvet
Duco………………………………….enamel paint
Glad Wrap…………………………...cling wrap
Hoover……………………………….vacuum cleaner
Laminex…………………………….. laminate
Laundromat……………………...….laundrette
Lycra……………………………….. stretch fabric
Mace……………………………….. tear gas
Perspex…………………………… . transparent plastic
Rollerblades…………………………inline skates
Scotch tape……………………….. ..sticky tape
Taser………………………………... stun gun
Technicolor……………………….... colour
Texta…………………………………felt pen
Thermos……………………………. vacuum flask
Vaseline………………………… … petroleum jelly
tree change, tree-changer Also sea change, sea-changer (but the initial TV series
was SeaChange).
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triple zero triple 0 can be used in headlines. Use a hyphen adjectivally.
T-shirt
tug of war
Tutankhamun
U
U Myanmarese honorific.
ugg boots No capitals in the general sense although trademarks exist in various
logos and designs.
Ukraine (Ukrainian) Note: not the Ukraine. The capital is Kyiv. This spelling rather
than Kiev is now used by many countries, institutions and major media
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organisations.
ukulele
ultra-Orthodox
un-Australian, un-American
under-/under (in compounds) When to use, and when not to use the hyphen:
under (no hyphen) makes a natural compound in most cases: underline, underarm,
undermanned, underbid, underplay, undercarriage, underrate, underclad, underrun,
underdone, undersized, underestimate, undertone, underfed, undervalue,
undergarment, underweight, underhung, underwrite. EXCEPTIONS: under-officer,
under-secretary, under-treasurer.
UNHCR United Nations High Commissioner for Refugees, not High Commission.
unique A unique thing is one of its kind; the word cannot be qualified by quite,
rather, somewhat, more, less, very, etc. Anything that is almost unique should be
called rare. Unique may be qualified in this way: unique among sea creatures;
unique in Australia.
United Kingdom Great Britain is made up of England, Scotland and Wales. The
United Kingdom also includes Northern Ireland and may be called the UK (or, more
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loosely, Britain unless a clear distinction needs to be made).
United Nations, the Thereafter, the UN. Capitals for the UN General Assembly, the
Security Council. Capitals for Secretary-General when used next to the name of the
incumbent.
University titles are lower case: chancellor, vice chancellor, dean of medicine (not
dean of the faculty of), registrar, etc. Honorifics take capitals: Professor Marcus
Wisdom, Emeritus Professor Marcus Wisdom (but he is an emeritus professor). Do
not use chancellor, vice chancellor, dean or similar titles as honorifics. Spell out
University of NSW and University of Technology Sydney at first mention.
unlikeable
-up words Nouns ending in up, such as break-up, build-up, check-up, flare-up,
hold-up, make-up, shake-up and stuff-up, should usually be hyphenated. See also
-out words and -off words
V
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vacation Use holiday instead of this Americanism.
venetian blind
verandah
verb number See grammar guide for entries on verb number after collective
nouns, after one in, and after who and similar forms. Also see either/neither, none
very Every time you use this word you should read back and consider whether it is
very justifiable, very essential or very indispensable. Even in less extreme cases, it
would not be very extravagant to say that 80 per cent of verys are very
superfluous.
vice No hyphen in titles such as vice president, vice chancellor, vice admiral, vice
chairman but keep one in pro vice-chancellor.
vice versa
video call
video conference
volcanoes
W
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wacky
wars World War I or the First World War, World War II or the Second World War; the
World Wars; the Great War (WWI) (usually only when looked back on from the
period between the wars). Upper case for the Hundred Years War, the Wars of the
Roses, the Thirty Years War, the American Civil War, the Korean War, the Vietnam
War, the Six-Day War, the Falklands War, the Iran-Iraq War, the Gulf War, the
Afghan War and so on. See also Gulf War and roman numerals
was/were How to handle the subjunctive and the conditional. See if it were/if it
was in the grammar guide
Unnecessary Preferred
a group of 10 people…………………………10 people
absolute perfection………………………….. perfection
added………………………………………….said
added bonus……………………………….....bonus
address an issue……………………………..handle, tackle, deal with
adjacent to…………………………………….near, by
ahead of ………………………………………before
airlift a patient to hospital……………...….…fly
approximately……………………….………..about
assistance…………………………….………help, aid
at an early date……………………………....soon
attempt ………………………………..………try
blue in colour………………………………….blue
breathalyser test……………………………...breath test
centred around………………………………..centred on
call a halt ……………………………………...stop
close proximity ………………………………..close
commence……………………………………..start, begin
completely empty …………………………….empty
completely gutted……………………………..gutted
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constructed……………………………………built
co-worker……………………………………...colleague, workmate
currently………………………………………..now
deceased………………………………………dead
disadvantaged…………………………………poor
discussions…………………………………… talks
dispatched…………………………………….. sent
facility……………………..…………………... factory, plant, depot,
fast-track……………………..……………….. speed up, accelerate, bring forward
filled to capacity…………..…………………...full
finalise………………………..………………...finish, end, make a decision,
flatly rejected………………..………………... rejected
for a period of 15 days……..………….…..... for 15 days
for the month of June…………..……………. for June
freak accident…………………..………….… accident
freak wave ……………………..……….……..big wave
funds……………………………..……….…….money
functionality…………………..…………...…...function
future prospects……………..………….….….prospects
gainfully employed……………….…………...employed
head up an organisation…………..…………head, lead
10 hectares of land ……………………….…10 hectares
in addition ………………………………….....also
inform……………………………………….….tell
in order to………………………………………to
in-depth interview…………………………......interview
in seasonally adjusted terms………..…........seasonally adjusted
in short supply…………………………….…...scarce
in spite of……………………………………….despite
in the direction of………………………..……..towards
in the lead-up to………………………..…...…before
in the near future……………………..…….... soon
in the run-up to…………………………..….... before
in the wake of………………………………….after
invited guest……………………………….......guest
knock back……………………………………..reject
less expensive ……………………….….…....cheaper
major breakthrough……………………......… breakthrough
manufacture…………………………………... make
meaningful talks………………………………. talks
meet with………………………………………. meet
mutual co-operation……………………..….....co-operation
necessitate……………………………………...require
new record……………………………………...record
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objective………………………………………...aim
old adage………………………………………..adage
ongoing……………………………………….….continuing
optimise……………………………………….…make the best use of, use effectively
passing phase …………………….…………....phase
past history ……………………………….……..history
personal experience ………………………..….experience
placed under arrest ………………………........arrested
possessed ……………………………………....had
presently …………………………………..…….soon
relocate …………………………………..……..move
raze to the ground ……………………………...raze
render assistance ………………………..….….help
resuscitate …………………………………….…revive
retail outlet ……………………………………....shop
strike action ………………………...…………...strike
subsequently …………………………...…….....later, since
take action on ………………………………...…act on
temporary reprieve………………………….…..reprieve
terminate ……………………………………..….end
the majority of ……………………………..…....most
totally destroyed ……………………………..….destroyed
track record …………………………………..…record
utilise…………………………………………......use
worst-case scenario……………………….…... at worst
weather bureau The proper name is the Bureau of Meteorology, but the weather
bureau (lower case) will do for routine references.
website Also the web, world wide web. See also internet & IT guide
wedding anniversaries 1st: paper, 2nd: cotton, 3rd: leather, 4th: linen, 5th: wood,
6th: iron, 7th: wool, copper, 8th: bronze, 9th: pottery, 10th: tin, aluminium, 11th:
steel, 12th: silk, 13th: lace, 14th: ivory, 15th: crystal, 20th: china, 25th: silver, 30th:
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pearl, 35th: coral, jade, 40th: ruby, 45th: sapphire, 50th: gold, 55th: emerald,
60th: diamond, 70th platinum.
WEIGHTS AND MEASURES In routine copy, spell out metric units: He walked six
kilometres; A is 74 kilometres from B; a five-metre fence; a six-hectare block;
7.8 centimetres; 10 square metres; 2 million square kilometres; two kilograms of
sausages. Separate numerals and their associated measure with a thin space in
print to prevent bad turns. Use km/h (for kilometres an hour) at all references
(10km/h), but other metric units may be abbreviated only in tables, graphs, lists
(such as auctions) and in cases of special need such as sport, property, Good Food
or financial market pages, where a lot of numbers, weights or distances have to be
mentioned. Common abbreviations should be written up against the figure,
although tsp and tbsp take spaces in recipe ingredient lists. The nautical mile and
the knot are recognised in the metric system. In air navigation, altitude is measured
in feet but distance in nautical miles. The principal units and contractions are:
LENGTH
metre (m)
millimetre (mm)
centimetre (cm)
kilometre (km)
AREA
square metre (sq m) not m2 or metres squared
hectare (ha)
square kilometre (sq km)
WEIGHT
gram (g)
milligram (mg)
kilogram (kg)
tonne (t)
VOLUME
cubic metre (cu m) not m3 or metres cubed
cubic centimetre (cc)
FLUID
litre (lt, not l, too easily confused with figure 1)
millilitre (ml)
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temperature Use numerals: 2 degrees, 30 degrees, minus 2 degrees (not -2).
Australia has been using the Celsius scale for decades, so it is not necessary to say
20 degrees Celsius unless making comparisons with Fahrenheit readings.
imperial measures If these need to be used, they should be spelt out: 60 feet; six
feet two inches; 10 inches; eight square miles; 120 square yards; five pounds; four
ounces. Avoid absurd metric conversions: He wants his 453.59237 grams of flesh.
Other points: in air navigation, altitude is measured in feet and distance in nautical
miles. The nautical mile and the knot are recognised in the metric system. Also see
knots, nautical miles
wellbeing
well-known, well known A well-known story; this story is well known. Hyphenate
before the noun; no hyphen after the noun. See adverbs and adjectives in the
grammar guide, and famous
Welsh/Welch Welsh people; the Welch Regiment, the Royal Welch Fusiliers, but the
Welsh Guards.
welsh on a bet.
were/was How to handle the subjunctive and the conditional. See if it were/if it
was in the grammar guide
West, Western Upper case for the Western world, Western Europe, Western
civilisation, the West (in this sense); similarly, Eastern civilisation, Eastern
philosophies, the East, etc. And it is the Wild West (US) but a western movie.
Western Australia, West Australian A West Australian, West Australian racing, the
West Australian government. The newspaper is The West Australian.
Western Port (Victoria) Two words. Commonly, but wrongly, called Western Port
Bay.
wheatgrower
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whether or not The or not is sometimes superfluous. These are correct: It’s yours,
whether you want it or not. But: Let me know whether you want it; and Whether you
want it is up to you.
which, that See the who, which, that entry in the grammar guide
whisky For all whiskies except Irish, Canadian and American whiskey, whiskeys.
white paper Lower case. Also green paper. A green paper is a preliminary report of
government proposals published for consultation. A white paper is a statement of
government policy.
who, whom See the who, which, that entry in the grammar guide
whose/who’s See the who, which, that entry in the grammar guide
WikiLeaks
wines Lower case for all wine types, including those with regional names: riesling,
burgundy, champagne, bordeaux or chablis, etc.
winemaker
witch-hunt
with Not to be attached to verbs that do not need it: met, not met with; visit not
visit with. Separately, the incorrect use of with to join parts of sentences is
rampant. The problem is that with isn’t a conjunction, a word that can join
sentence parts in the way that and, but, for, nor, or, so, and yet can. These
examples are wrong:
Rock legends the Knitters say they won’t perform at the table tennis grand final,
with the Crochet Quartet agreeing to rev the crowds up instead.
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Ten out of 10 teenagers surveyed suffered from parental embarrassment
syndrome, with nine out of 10 showing extreme symptoms of cringe, a condition
characterised by screwed up faces and protracted scowling.
Often, the with construction can be avoided by writing two sentences instead
of one.
women Do not use such descriptions as female doctor, female architect or female
pilot as if the very fact of a woman in the job were remarkable. If you do need to
highlight femaleness use female rather than woman for the adjective. Do not use
girl for anyone aged 18 or over. In stories that don’t concern family matters, do not
gratuitously describe a woman as a mother of three or grandmother of two as if
that were the most salient fact about her. Do not assume maleness in the language
you use.
Woolloongabba (Brisbane) The district (and the cricket ground) are, colloquially,
the Gabba.
workers’ compensation
WWF The former World Wildlife Fund now uses its initials only, but make it clear to
readers what the WWF is by referring to it as a wildlife preservation group.
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WORDS TO WATCH
affect/effect Affect (verb) means to influence or cause a change in. Her bad cold
affected her singing. Effect (verb) means to bring about. He effected a return to
profit by slashing the company’s costs. Effect as a noun means a result, a
consequence: the effect of heat.
alibi Latin for elsewhere. A legal term, it is a defence that an accused person was
elsewhere when an offence was committed. Don’t use it to mean excuse.
arguably When used as in He is arguably the best cricketer Australia has seen, the
meaning is not clear. The writer may mean it can be argued that the player is the
best cricketer or that he is not. Most often the writer means probably or, if he is
certain, unarguably.
bail/bale Bale of wool or hay. Bale out a boat. Bale out of an aircraft or a difficult
situation. Bail someone out of jail.
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forego/forgo To forego means to go before, to precede. To forgo means to give up,
to relinquish.
faze/phase Faze means to embarrass or disturb: The snub did not faze her. Phase
denotes an aspect or stage: They will phase in a new system.
When in doubt, match the problem to these examples: I lie on the bed. I lay on the
bed (past tense). I will lie on the bed. I have lain/am lying/was lying/will be lying on
the bed. The book lies on the table. The book lay on the table. The book will lie on
the table. The book has lain/is lying/was lying/will be lying on the table.
He lays the book on the table. He laid the book on the table. He will lay the book on
the table. The book is/was/will be/has been laid on the table. Lay the table. I laid
the table. I will lay the table. The table is/was/will be/has been laid.
licence/license Licence is the noun e.g. liquor licence, driver’s licence, gun licence,
licence number. License is the verb; to grant permission or authorise. Also licensee,
licensed grocer
only Keep it as near as possible to the subject it limits and you are unlikely to go
wrong: She went to the shops only twice a week. Not She only went to the shops
twice a week. Also see only in the general style section
X
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Xmas Banned.
Y
yarmulka
yoghurt
you and me Between you and me. The mistaken between you and I stems from
sincere efforts to be correct by people who have learnt that You and I are friends is
correct for the subjective case but who do not understand that me is still required
for the objective case: He wants to see you and me. (They would not say He wants
to see I.)
your/you’re Do not confuse them: your is the possessive of you; you’re is the
contraction of you are. Thus: You’re right, it’s your horse.
youth Applies to people aged from age 13 to 17. Those younger than 13 are
children, and those 18 or older are adults.
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Z
Zaire, Zairean Now Democratic Republic of Congo.
zero, zeros
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Business Style
A
ABARES Australian Bureau of Agricultural and Resource Economics and Sciences.
Spell out at first reference.
administration A rescue mechanism for insolvent entities that allows them to carry
on running their business. See also liquidation and receivership
All Ordinaries Index All Ords at second reference. Formerly the benchmark index
for the Australian sharemarket, now usually quoted in tandem with the benchmark,
the S&P/ASX 200 Index. Use a thin space in print to prevent bad turns in
S&P/ASX 200 Index and others. See index.
aluminium Watch out for the American spelling, aluminum. Alumina is the oxide of
aluminium – in other words, a different thing.
analysts’ ratings Each broker has its own wording, but some common terms are
buy, hold, reduce and sell. Do not turn these words into nouns e.g. Amcor is a buy.
If you absolutely must, put quote marks around the word e.g. Amcor is rated a
“buy”. The quote marks are not needed from second reference on.
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multiplying it by 12 or four; do not confuse with year-on-year, where the figure for
one year is compared with the figure for the previous year to find the percentage
change.
ANZ Banking Group The company may be referred to as ANZ at first reference (but
note it is not the ANZ, just ANZ).
arbitrage, arbitrageur
auditor All auditors are accountants, but not all accountants are auditors.
ASX This abbreviation is the official name of the listed company. It stands for
Australian Securities Exchange.
Aussie The commonly used market term for the Australian dollar (by convention,
the dollar refers to the US dollar). Acceptable at second reference and in heads in
business sections only. Avoid, if possible, the term local dollar.
Australian business number Lower case. Can be called ABN at each mention. Do
not say ABN number.
AWE Average weekly earnings. Also, average weekly ordinary time earnings, which
should be abbreviated as AWOTE. These are different things; use the relevant term.
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Spell out each at first reference.
B
balance of payments Adjectivally: balance of payments figures. There is no such
thing as a balance of payments deficit; it is a current account deficit (or surplus).
The trade balance is a subset of the current account.
Bank for International Settlements Note for and plural Settlements. Based in
Basel, Switzerland, the BIS is the central bank for central banks. Write out at first
reference.
bankruptcy In Australia (but not the US) bankruptcy applies to people but not to
companies. A company goes into liquidation, administration or receivership.
Bankwest
Barclays No apostrophe.
barrel of oil equivalent Oil plus gas measured by energy value as if it were all oil.
Abbreviate as boe (lower case) but spell out at first reference.
basis points Use digits for basis points and percentage points. One hundred basis
points equals 1 percentage point. Use percentage points rather than basis points
where possible. A bill yield that moves from 8 per cent to 9 per cent has risen 1
percentage point or 100 basis points; from 8 per cent to 8.1 per cent is 10 basis
points; from 8 per cent to 8.01 per cent is 1 basis point. No hyphens required in the
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adjective: a 50 basis point rise. See points and per cent.
bbl The abbreviation for barrel within the oil sector; use barrel/s.
Beige Book The common name for the US Federal Reserve’s Summary of
Commentary on Current Economic Conditions by Federal Reserve District. It is used
as a guide at the monthly Federal Open Market Committee meeting on interest rate
policy. Use words such as The monthly economic conditions report known as the
Beige Book … See Federal Reserve
Bidder’s Statement Capped. It is the formal name of the document and there is
potential for confusion if lower case is used.
big four As in the big four banks: Commonwealth, NAB, ANZ, Westpac. Lower case,
no hyphen. Also big tech, big super, big pharma, etc. Lower case.
bloc, block Dollar bloc or trading bloc but a block (or large holding) of shares.
boardroom
bondholder, bondholding
bond market Two words. The key thing to remember about the bond market is that
the yield on a bond rises as its price falls, and vice versa. The bond market
strengthens when prices rise (but yields fall); and it weakens when prices fall (but
yields rise). Because we tend to refer to the percentage yield in the story it is easy
to make the mistake of saying that bonds rose – because the yield rose – when in
fact bonds weakened. Take care in phrasing stories and writing headlines. Bonds
can strengthen or weaken; bond prices and bond yields can rise or fall.
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bonus issue An issue of free shares to existing shareholders in proportion to each
shareholder’s holding; an issue of one new share for every five held would be
expressed as a 1-for-5 bonus issue (using numerals).
book building (verb), book-build (noun) A process in which the offer price of a
float is based on demand from institutional investors, who are invited to place
orders indicating the number of shares they want and the price they are prepared
to pay. Work an explanation into the story.
book-to-bill ratio A ratio above 1 means orders for goods and services are being
received faster than items are being shipped. Explain.
bottom fisher An investor who looks for bargains among stocks whose prices have
recently dropped dramatically. Explain.
bottom line (noun), bottom-line result (adjective). Bottom-line profit is the net
profit after everything. See profit.
Bpay
Brent crude A benchmark price for North Sea oil; note capital B.
broker One word for stockbroker, sharebroker, etc but two words for commodities
broker, livestock broker etc. See one word, two words or hyphen in the general
style section
bullion Not all gold, but gold or silver in the form of bars or ingots and of at least
99.95 per cent purity.
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businessman/businesswoman But business person, business people.
buy now, pay later Spell out, but BNPL allowed in Financial Review headlines if
absolutely necessary.
C
CAD Do not use as the abbreviation for current account deficit, even though this is
common in the financial markets – use the deficit at second reference. See balance
of payments.
calendar year Calendar years are given as 2025, and fiscal or financial years as
2025-26, to avoid any confusion between the two. See fiscal year/financial year
capital gains tax Lower case, no hyphens even as an adjective. Abbreviate as CGT.
capital-guaranteed (adjective)
carat Use carat for gems and gold. Do not use karat, which is US usage.
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car maker Two words.
cash burn Also known as the burn rate, this is the rate at which a fledgling
business uses up its capital before it gets to the point of generating positive cash
flow from operations. Ensure this is clear in the story.
cash cow Products that produce a large amount of revenue because they have a
large share of an existing market.
cents Use the symbol ¢ in text and headings: 5¢, 57¢, US5¢, US57¢, bread will rise
10¢ a loaf. SHIFT + ALT + C creates the symbol in Cyber. The symbol can be found
under special characters in Ink.
CFO The abbreviation for chief financial officer. Use it at second reference only.
Lower case when spelt out.
chaebol South Korean family-run conglomerate; singular and plural – not chaebols.
Chapter 11 The most common form of bankruptcy in the United States. This
provision of the bankruptcy law allows a company to continue operating while
working with creditors to reorganise the business, which makes it roughly
equivalent to voluntary administration in Australia. Explain.
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chartered accountant Chartered accountants belong to the Institute of Chartered
Accountants. Do not confuse with certified practising accountants, or CPAs.
CIO This can stand for chief investment officer or chief information officer. Ensure
you specify which.
closing high The highest price recorded at the market’s official close; the price
may in fact have been higher during the day (sometimes known as the intraday
high but preferably the day’s high), so a record closing high may not be the record
high.
Co Acceptable abbreviation for company, but only when required. See company
names
collapse Be careful using this term, including in headlines. It means a company has
gone into liquidation. This happens when a liquidator is appointed, meaning the
final destruction of the company. It does not mean a company going into
administration, which is a process to try to save it. Reasonable headings for a
company in administration could be “Administrators called in”, “Company under
microscope” or “Company books under review”. If a creditor appointed the
administrator, “Creditor takes control” may work, or name the creditor if it’s
famous: e.g. “Westpac takes control”. If the directors appointed the
administrator, “Directors surrender control” is a possibility.
Committee for Economic Development of Australia A business network; second
reference is CEDA or the committee, not the CEDA.
commodity trading adviser Use CTA at second reference. CTAs direct trading in
the commodity managed funds, using global futures markets. They have sufficient
firepower to move markets.
companies Companies are collective nouns and take the singular. The company is
… and the pronouns that or which (not who).
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company names Give the company name in full at first reference only when
necessary to avoid confusion with a company of a similar name (Australian Growth
Ltd versus Australian Growth Properties), or when the story needs to be
particularly specific, such as in legal contexts. Otherwise, Pty, Ltd, Co, Inc are
usually not required. But it’s Nine Entertainment Co if referring to our mastheads’
owner in a formal business sense. Otherwise, just Nine. Use an ampersand if a
company does.
Many companies go out of their way to make their names as distinctive as possible
through, shall we say, creative use of spelling, spacing, punctuation and mixes of
capitals and non-capitals. For the most part, do what the companies do: eBay,
adidas, lululemon, MinterEllison, etc. Some exceptions:
● Yahoo, not Yahoo!. The company itself often drops the exclamation mark.
● NIB for the health fund that has made its name awkward to read by opting
for nib.
● A name such as adidas takes a capital if it is the first word in a sentence or
headline: EBay profits soar; Adidas to open new stores.
● If a company writes its name in all capitals but the name is not an
abbreviation, use upper and lower case. NB: IKEA is an abbreviation.
Some companies present their names differently in their logos to how they write
about themselves. Prefer the latter version.
company job titles Always lower case: president, vice president, chairwoman,
chief executive, general manager, etc.
consumer price index Abbreviate at second reference as CPI. It tracks the prices
of selected goods and services to provide a measure of inflation. Note that inflation
is a measure of the change in prices expressed in percentage terms, so it is not
correct to say inflation rose by 2.5 per cent. Inflation is 2.5 per cent. If you want to
express the change in the rate of inflation, then compare it with the previous rate –
say, 2 per cent, in which case the inflation rate rose by half a percentage point.
corporate Use only as an adjective not a noun: Corporate profits are increasing but
not Corporates are watching their profits increase.
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only if required: News Corp. See company names. But it should be spelt out for
government agencies and other organisations using the term.
Corporations Law
correction A strong movement in prices that reverses a previous trend. The term
usually refers to falling share prices after a sustained period of increase. Some
people define it as a move of 10 per cent or more. Do not overuse.
counter-bidder
credit ratings Agencies such as Standard & Poor’s and Moody’s Investors Service
assess the ability of governments and companies to repay debt. A nation’s credit
rating is known as its sovereign credit rating. These ratings determine the sort of
interest rate lenders or investors will seek. Moody’s generally expresses its ratings
(from highest to lowest) as Aaa, Aa, A, Baa, Ba, B, Caa, Ca and C (note upper and
lower case). S&P generally uses AAA, AA, A, BBB, BB, B, CCC, CC (upper case) and
sometimes adds a plus or minus sign e.g. AA- or B+ (use the symbols). S&P also
has a creditwatch designation that it uses when it is assessing the effect of events
– a positive creditwatch means the rating may be raised; a negative creditwatch
means it may be lowered; while a developing creditwatch means the rating may be
raised, lowered or affirmed. This is an expression of the likely movement, not an
actual upgrade or downgrade.
Crown casino Lower case for casino as it isn’t part of the name. The company is
Crown Resorts.
cum dividend Latin for with; a share sold cum dividend entitles the buyer to any
dividend that is due. See ex dividend
currencies
(1) $US, not US$. Use the ¢ symbol in text and headings: 5¢, 57¢, US5¢, US57¢,
bread will rise 10¢ a loaf.
(2) Dollar, euro and pound should be spelt out and lower case in general
references but written as $, £, and € when a specific figure is given: The US dollar
fell today; The deal was worth $US500,000 ($1 million); The euro rose in early
trading; The company spent €20 million. Other currencies are always written out: 5
billion yen, 2 billion Swiss francs.
(3) Foreign currencies should usually be converted once only. Do so at the first
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reference but perhaps at the second or third if that is more useful: The price rose
US50¢ to $US12.50 ($23). Use yuan, not renminbi, for the Chinese currency. See
also krona; rand; rouble
(4) The Australian dollars are given in brackets. Be aware that in wire copy $
figures may refer to $US and the US will need to be inserted. Only use $A in a story
that is about several $ currencies (Hong Kong, Canadian, etc).
(5) In general, do not convert if the figure is historical.
(6) Don’t be slavish when converting – round off.
(7) When a short form is needed to refer to a currency within body copy or
headlines, the US dollar may be shortened to the $US at second reference. In
business pages, the Australian dollar may also be referred to as the Aussie at
second reference, the name by which it is known in the markets, and the NZ dollar
as the kiwi. Try to avoid the local dollar for the Australian dollar.
cyclical stocks Shares that move in line with the business cycle; they advance as
business conditions improve and decline when business slackens. Do not assume
readers understand the term.
D
David Jones The colloquial term DJs (no apostrophe required) may be used at
second reference.
deal maker
deficit A deficit is a gap, therefore it does not rise or fall, it widens or narrows,
expands or shrinks. A surplus, however, can rise or fall.
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deflation A general fall in prices; the opposite of inflation. Do not confuse with
disinflation
demerger
disinflation A lower rate of inflation, where prices are not rising as fast as they
were, but are still rising; do not confuse with deflation
dividend Do not confuse the final (or second-half) dividend with the full-year
dividend. Use the terms first-half and second-half dividend and there will be no
danger of readers being confused. Always state whether dividends are franked,
partly franked, or unfranked.
divisions Business divisions are lower case when they are descriptive: Shell’s
petroleum division, not Petroleum division, even if the company uses upper case.
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purchase of a business.
E
E*Trade Online broker.
ease Interest rates are eased when the Reserve Bank lowers its official cash rate;
the opposite term is tighten. Use plain English.
economics A collective noun taking the singular: Economics is known as the dismal
science.
ended, ending In the period ended for past events, period ending for future.
euro Use the symbol € when next to a figure. Use euros as plural.
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eurobond
ex-banks A measure of the sharemarket not including banking stocks; try to work
that description into the story rather than using the term itself.
ex dividend Means without dividend. A share that is sold ex dividend is sold on the
basis that the seller, not the buyer, will be entitled to the current dividend. Use a
hyphen for ex-dividend date, ex-dividend announcement. See cum dividend
expansionary A government or central bank that wants to boost the economy can
use expansionary policies such as higher government spending or lower interest
rates. Ensure the context makes the meaning clear.
F
fair value, or fair market value The price an interested but not desperate buyer
would be willing to pay and the price a similar seller would be willing to accept on
the open market; the term is often used to describe where foreign exchange
traders and sharebrokers think a currency or sharemarket should be – its
theoretical value. Explain in the story.
federal funds rate Lower case. The US equivalent of Australia’s official cash rate.
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FOMC, but this assumes that readers know which policy – make it clear that it is
interest rate policy.
Federal Reserve The US central bank. US Federal Reserve at first reference, then
the Fed.
final half The final half, or the second half, is the second six months of the financial
year. Work in a reference to specific dates e.g. the six months to December 31. Be
careful not to confuse the final dividend with the annual dividend. See dividend
fitout (noun), to fit out (verb). In property, to furnish with furniture and fixtures.
fixed-interest security
force majeure A force majeure clause in a contract excuses a party from liability if
an unforeseen event – such as a natural disaster – prevents it meeting its
obligations. Explain.
free on board The FOB value is the value of a commodity transported at the
supplier’s – not the buyer’s – expense. It is used by the Australian Bureau of
Statistics in working out Australia’s export earnings, excluding freight costs. Spell
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out at first reference.
free trade agreement The convention these days is to drop the hyphen between
free and trade as there is no ambiguity.
G
gasfield, gas well, gasworks
GmbH German abbreviation for proprietary limited company – but not usually
required. See company names
goods and services tax Lower case. Abbreviate as GST. Introduced on July 1,
2000.
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graingrower Also grain growing, grain-growing district.
grams per tonne Lower case, even for the abbreviation, which is g/t.
greenback Use the US dollar at first reference. Greenback and $US can be used in
heads and at second reference.
grow You grow grass, not profits, companies or the economy. Do not use.
H
half-year (adjective and noun)
headhunter, headhunting
heading south (or north) Don’t use for profits, because it can be unclear.
home-loan rates
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I
Inc The abbreviation for Incorporated. No full point. Generally not required. See
company names
Independent Pricing and Regulatory Tribunal (NSW) not Regulation. Use tribunal
on second reference.
index Plural indices for statistical use, but indexes for books.
(1) The names of benchmark indices of each national sharemarket take capitals: the
S&P/ASX 200 Index, the Hang Seng Index.
(2) Use a thin space in print between words and numbers in index names: FTSE
100, Nikkei 225, S&P/ASX 200.
(3) Sub-indices can be described as the financials index, or the telecom index,
without capitals.
(4) Economic indices such as the consumer price index do not need capitals.
initial public offering Offering, not offer; the initial offer of shares when a company
goes public, a float or issue. IPO at second reference.
interbank
interest rate policy The plain English term for monetary policy.
intraday Within the same day; an intraday high is the highest price recorded during
the day – not necessarily at the close.
issue price The price at which shares are sold in the initial offer. Not to be
confused with the listing price, which is the price at which they subsequently start
trading on their first day on the stock exchange.
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J
joint venture (noun), joint-venture partners (adjective)
JPMorgan Chase The name of the holding company behind the JP Morgan
investment bank.
K
karat Use carat for gems and gold. Karat is US usage, which we do not follow.
kiwi The market term for the NZ dollar, acceptable at second reference and in
heads on the business pages if the meaning is clear. Lower case.
krona (plural kronur) Iceland’s currency; krona (plural kronor) Sweden; krone (plural
kroner) Denmark and Norway.
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L
landholder, landowner
lead manager The investment bank with the main responsibility for organising a
transaction such as a share or bond issue. Use plain English: The bank organising
the deal; or A group of banks led by …
leaseback
lessee The person or company that takes the lease on a property (the tenant).
lessor The person or company that grants a lease on a property (the landlord).
leverage The use of borrowed money, or financial instruments such as options and
futures, by an investor or business to increase the potential return (although also
the risk) of an investment; the ratio of a company’s debt to its issued capital. Also
known as gearing. Explain.
limited Abbreviate as Ltd, but generally not required. See company names
liquidation Where an enterprise is wound up and its assets are put up for sale. See
also administration and receivership
.
liquidator The person, usually appointed by a court, who winds up a company. Not
interchangeable with receiver or administrator.
listing price The price at which shares start trading on the stock exchange after
the float. Not to be confused with the issue price, which is the price at which they
were sold to investors in the float.
London Metal Exchange The world’s leading nonferrous metals market, providing
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benchmark prices for aluminium, copper, nickel, zinc, lead and tin.
long Traders go long when they buy something – such as Australian dollars – in
excess of the orders they actually have. They do this when they believe the value
of the asset will rise, meaning they can sell it at a profit later. The risk is that the
price will fall, rather than rise. Do not assume readers understand the term.
loss leaders Goods sold by a retailer at a loss to attract customers into a store, in
the hope they will buy other, more profitable, goods. Explain.
Ltd Abbreviation for Limited, but not generally required. See company names
lump sum (noun), lump-sum payment (adjectival). A one-off, large cash payment,
usually in superannuation.
M
M&A At first reference use merger and acquisition, or mergers and acquisitions
(plural) depending on the context. So, mergers and acquisitions are down this year;
but according to the merger and acquisition department of the bank. See also
mergers and acquisitions
Macquarie More than one company uses this name – Macquarie Bank and
Macquarie Telecom are two. Be specific.
macroeconomic No hyphen.
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shares on issue multiplied by the share price. Use market cap only at second
reference.
mergers and acquisitions Merger is the term when the two parties amalgamate by
mutual agreement. In a takeover, an offer is sprung by one party on the other. If the
target welcomes the offer it is described as a friendly takeover; if it opposes the
offer it is described as hostile. Abbreviate as M&A.
microeconomic No hyphen.
mid-rate miners See one word, two words or hyphenated in the general style
section
monetary policy More simply known as interest rate policy. The RBA eases
monetary policy when it lowers interest rates – easing the burden of borrowing –
and tightens monetary policy when it increases interest rates. Use plain English.
multiple Market multiples refer to price-earnings ratios. Avoid the term; be specific.
mutual fund American term for collective investments such as our managed funds.
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N
national broadband network Use NBN for the abbreviation, not nbn. NBN Co runs
it.
net inflow, net outflow Over a given period, some investors place money with
investment managers while others withdraw it – the difference is the net inflow (or
net outflow) of funds. A net outflow is not a good result – more money left the
manager than came to it. Ensure the story makes the meaning clear.
net profit Net profit is after tax, therefore it is a tautology to say net profit after tax.
News Corp The Murdoch publishing business. Its Australian arm is News Corp
Australia, formerly News Ltd.
Nikkei 225 Index May be referred to simply as the Nikkei. See Topix
Nine (Channel Nine) Owned by Nine Entertainment Co, as are our mastheads.
North-West Shelf
noteholder, noteholding
O
OECD Organisation for Economic Co-operation and Development at first reference
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– or at second reference if it makes an intro unwieldy.
off balance sheet Not off-balance sheet. The transaction was off balance sheet; it
was an off-balance-sheet transaction.
official cash rate Not rates, because there is only one – the Reserve Bank’s official
cash rate.
off-market (adjective)
offshore
oil flow, oil rig, oilfield, oilwell Use hyphen and capitalise oilwells e.g. Ecanuba-1.
on-market (adjective)
on-sell An unnecessary piece of jargon for the process of buying something, then
selling it to someone else.
OPEC Organisation of the Petroleum Exporting Countries should be spelt out at first
reference – or at second reference if the full name makes an intro unwieldy. Note
there is also OPEC+, made up of OPEC member nations and non-OPEC members,
including Russia.
open-cut mining
open market operations When central banks buy and sell government securities.
Say that.
option holder
overbought Analysts say a market is overbought when there has been strong
buying, in value or volume, above the level they believe justified. Work an
explanation into the story.
overhang A term that refers to stock expected to come onto the market, perhaps
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with the result of pushing the share price down (as excess supply tends to do).
Explain.
oversold Analysts say a market is oversold when prices are weaker than they
believe justified. Work an explanation into the story.
oversupply
P
P&O
PaperlinX
per Use a/an wherever possible: $40 per hour becomes $40 an hour.
per capita Use per head of population, or even better, a person, when appropriate.
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(2) Always use figures, even 1 to 9: 1 per cent, 2 percentage points, 0.25 of a
percentage point (but a quarter of a percentage point is better).
(3) Try to keep to one decimal place: 1.5 per cent..
(4) Note placement of hyphen in 50 per cent-owned.
(5) Percentage changes become meaningless once they get into territory above
200 per cent – use terms such as doubled, tripled, rose fourfold …
(6) Never use a percentage when the change is from a loss to a profit, or vice
versa.
Be careful when calculating percentage changes. Getting the calculation wrong can
result in a profit slide being painted as much worse than it really is, or a market
move being much larger or smaller than it really is. When doing the calculation,
make sure you are calculating the change to the original figure, which is not
necessarily the largest or highest figure. If you’re not using an online calculator,
here’s how it’s done:
(a) Calculate the difference between the original figure and the new figure, then
(b) divide that difference by the original figure, then
(c) multiply the result by 100 to reach the percentage figure.
For example, the All Ords ends at 2610 points, down from 2660 the previous day,
so
(a) 2660 minus 2610 equals 50
(b) 50 divided by 2660 – we are working out how much the market has fallen from
2660, our starting point – is 0.0187
(c) which multiplied by 100 (and rounded to one decimal place) comes to 1.9 per
cent.
players Market players are investors, traders, business people … use those words
instead.
plc Lower case, but generally not required. See company names
points Always in figures. Basis points is the term for interest rates or bond yields
(see basis points), but points is the market term for movements in a currency –
though we refer to moves in terms of cents.
preference shares Use this rather than the US term preferred stock.
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pre-tax profit
private equity Private equity covers equity investments made outside the
sharemarket, including venture capital, leveraged buyouts and mezzanine finance.
The terms private equity and venture capital are not interchangeable – venture
capital is only one form.
profit Profit can be expressed in many ways – net profit after significant items
(formerly known as abnormals), which is also known as bottom-line profit; or
pre-tax profit, earnings before interest and tax (EBIT), earnings before interest, tax
and depreciation (EBITD), earnings before interest, tax, depreciation and
amortisation (EBITDA). All are valid, just ensure the reader knows which measure is
being used.
profit margin The profit margin is profit as a percentage of turnover (or sales).
Specify profit margin, rather than saying just margin or margins.
property trust These trusts can be listed or unlisted – state if it is a listed property
trust.
proprietary limited Abbreviated to Pty Ltd, but not usually required. See company
names.
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prospectus, prospectuses
Pty Ltd Abbreviate at first reference, but not generally required. See company
names
public company Not a synonym for a listed company, as not all public companies
are listed. A public company has a broad range of shareholders and is governed by
rules of disclosure, which do not apply to private companies.
patent attorney They are not lawyers, so the word lawyer should not be
substituted.
Q
quartile Top quartile or upper quartile refers to the top 25 per cent – fund
managers who achieve returns in the top 25 per cent of returns, for example. Lower
quartile is the bottom 25 per cent. Use plain English.
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R
rally A market rallies when it makes an upward swing after a downturn – not when it
merely continues a rise.
Reserve Bank of Australia Reserve Bank acceptable at first reference, then the
RBA, the Reserve, the central bank. The titles governor and deputy governor are
lower case. The bank’s quarterly report, Statement on Monetary Policy, takes italics
and capitals.
retail A term referring to individuals; retail investors are individuals who buy and sell
securities for their personal account, not for another company or organisation; retail
banking is primarily for individuals and small businesses; the opposite term is
wholesale, and refers to services for institutions and larger businesses. Refer
instead to individual, personal or small investors.
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revenue Not revenues. Also known as sales or turnover, but note that while sales
are revenue, revenue does not necessarily come just from sales.
roadshow
rollover (noun and adjective) But to roll over (verb). The transfer of superannuation
from one fund to another.
S
S&P 500 No need to spell out as Standard and Poor’s 500 (the US share index).
Use a thin space in print.
sacked Be careful using this term in relation to an individual as there could be legal
ramifications. The individual may have been sacked, but also may in fact have been
stood aside, stood down, resigned, asked to resign or other distinctions. Ousted is
a good general-purpose word for situations where it is unclear or a short headline
word is needed, or perhaps pushed out.
sales revenue Use just sales, or revenue, not both. But note that while sales are
revenue, revenue doesn’t necessarily come just from sales.
savings and loan The US version of a building society; also known as a thrift.
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Abbreviate as S&L, the plural is S&Ls.
seasonally adjusted Always state the basis of any economic statistic. Seasonally
adjusted tends to be used for month-by-month changes, but the trend figure is
often quoted to give the bigger picture. See trend
SEC The US Securities and Exchange Commission. Spell out at first reference.
shareholder
share issues Express numerically – an issue of one share for every five held is a
1-for-5 issue.
share split A division of shares into a larger number of shares. Splits tend to be
conducted when a share price remains at a high level e.g. a $40 stock might be
split into four $10 shares. The style is 2-for-1, or 1.0651-for-1.
short Traders who go short agree to sell something – such as Australian dollars –
that they don’t have yet, in the hope of being able to meet the obligation by buying
later at a price lower than the price at which they sold. The risk is that the price
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rises rather than falls before they complete the deal by buying in, say, the currency.
Short covering is when a trader covers a short position, i.e. buys in after having
gone short. Going short is the opposite of going long. Explain these terms for
readers. See also long
short-dated
short squeeze A squeeze occurs when there is a lack of supply but excess
demand, forcing prices up. Do not use the term.
significant items One-off items formerly known as abnormals. This term is being
used in a specific sense, not in the general sense of significant, so don’t play
around with the word if it is used – but its meaning should be clear.
small cap Use small capitalisation at first reference to stocks with a small market
capitalisation.
SpA Note lower case p, but this Italian company designation is generally not
required. See company names
spend A verb, not a noun, so the defence spend should be defence spending.
spot price, spot market The present – as opposed to forward – market price of a
commodity. The meaning should be clear from the context.
spread The difference between buying and selling rates or, in the case of a loan,
the margin above a benchmark rate. A spread widens or narrows, rather than rises
or falls.
Standard & Poor’s Note apostrophe. A US credit rating agency and indices
manager. Abbreviate as S&P.
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sterling British pounds; use the symbol £ with figures.
sublease
subprime
T
takeover (noun), to take over (verb). See mergers and acquisitions
Target’s Statement It is the formal name of a document and there is potential for
confusion if lower case is used.
taxation Tax avoidance, or tax minimisation, is legal – tax evasion is not. Use these
terms carefully.
tighten Interest rates are tightened when the Reserve Bank raises its official cash
rate. The opposite term is ease. Use plain English.
time periods When a reporting period ends on December 31, say, do not refer to
the six months to December (that would end November 30); it is the six months to
December 31, or the six months to the end of December, or the December half.
TPA Trade Practices Act at first reference, then the act, not the TPA.
tradeable
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trade balance See balance of payments.
trader A person who actively buys and sells securities for his or her own account,
usually in a relatively short time. Trader is not synonymous with investor.
tranche Loans can be divided into slices or tranches, usually because different
conditions – such as interest rates – apply to each tranche. Use only when
necessary.
transferable
treasuries In the US, these are Treasury notes and bonds (upper case, as in
Treasury Department). The colloquial term treasuries (lower case) may be used at
first reference.
Treasury note
two strikes law This holds company directors accountable for executive salaries
and bonuses. A first strike occurs when a company's remuneration report receives
a ''no'' vote of 25 per cent or more by shareholders at the company's annual
meeting. A second strike occurs when a subsequent remuneration report also
receives a ''no'' vote of at least 25 per cent. When a second strike occurs,
shareholders vote on whether all directors will need to stand for re-election (other
than the managing director, who is permitted to continue to run the company).
U
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unbundle Refers to the practice of separating the components of a business or a
product. Often used in telecommunications. Avoid this term, or ensure it is
explained in the story.
undersubscribe
undervalued
unit cost The average cost, calculated by dividing the total cost by the number of
units. Use a term such as average cost.
unrealised Profits or losses that are on paper, not yet crystallised by a sale.
unwind A dealer unwinds or squares his or her position by buying or selling to get
out of a short or long position. This is jargon. See short, long
V
value-add/add value A popular piece of marketing jargon. Avoid and instead be
specific about how value is being added to the product or service.
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venture capital A subset of private equity, not a synonym. Venture capitalists
invest in start-ups and small businesses believed to have long-term growth
potential. See private equity
vulture fund A fund that buys into distressed investments such as high-yield
bonds that are in or near default, or businesses that are in or near bankruptcy. The
goal is a high return at a bargain price. Explain.
W
Wall Street The location of New York’s financial district but also acceptable
shorthand for the New York Stock Exchange or the US sharemarket generally.
withholding tax Tax deducted from dividends paid to non-residents, i.e. people
who do not pay tax in Australia. They may be able to claim a tax credit in their home
country. Do not assume readers understand this term.
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Woolworths (the supermarket company) Woolies (one l) may be used at second
reference or in headlines. No connection with Woolworths Holdings Ltd, the South
African retail group, which should not be referred to as Woolies. Nor should the
unrelated Woolworth Corp of the United States.
write Jargon that should be avoided. It usually means to sell, e.g. to write
insurance.
write-back (noun), to write back (verb). Use write-down, the more widely
recognised term.
write-down (noun), to write down (verb). To reduce the recorded value; do not
confuse with write off.
write-off (noun), to write off (verb). To write off the value of assets, such as
property, completely, rather than to merely reduce it. Homepage write-offs take
double quote marks.
Y
Yahoo Drop the exclamation mark, as the company does when writing about itself.
years Use the style 2025-26, not 2025-2026 or 2025/26 when referring to financial
years. Also, 2025 should be used only to refer to the calendar year.
.
year-on-year Hyphenate adjectivally. In statistics, a year-on-year change is the
figure for one year compared with the figure at the same time the previous year,
while an annualised rate involves the conversion of a monthly or quarterly figure
into an annual one by multiplying it by 12 or four. They are not interchangeable
terms. Used adverbially, remove the hyphen: Growth is stagnant year on year.
yield curve The curve generated on a graph when tracking interest rates for
differing terms (one year, five years, 10 years, for example). Normally, the curve
moves upwards because investors expect a higher interest rate for carrying risk for
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a longer term. It is noteworthy when investors perceive greater risk and seek higher
interest rates in the shorter term – an inverse yield curve. Don’t assume too much
reader knowledge.
yuan/renminbi Use yuan for China’s currency. The two words denote the same
currency, but yuan is the more formal term. If necessary, say yuan, also known as
the renminbi.
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SPORT STYLE
This guide contains a general section, reminders and a list of banned words, but
the bulk is made up of terms used in individual sports. The entries contain specific
terms and guidelines, along with subheadings for positions, teams, leagues and
websites. Apart from the odd minor exception, spelling, usage and scoring styles
are consistent across mastheads. Teams are plural and soccer is the name we use
for the game with the round ball.
BANNED
back in 2007 as in He won a gold back in 2007. Back is redundant for any year.
including the likes of List the names you mean, or use for example, among others.
saw as in saw them go to the top, Go to saw in the general sport section.
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REMEMBER
Hawk-Eye
compare with Means to compare two or more things for similarities or differences;
compare to is to liken someone or thing to something else. (Shall I compare thee to
a summer’s day?)
try line, goal line, goalkicker, leading goal scorer See individual sports for more.
baggy green
VENUES
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GENERAL
abbreviations for weights, measures and times Use only from second
reference and make them hard-up. Metres (m), kilograms (kg), hour (hr), minutes
(min), seconds (s). For times, spell out at first reference: one hour, 20 minutes, four
seconds, and abbreviate thereafter as 1:20.04. Or 9.74 seconds; 9.74s at second
reference. If there is no doubt as to what unit is being used, abbreviations can be
left out. Boxer X weighs 75 kilograms, boxer Y 74.
Admiral’s Cup
backmarker
carotid artery
cross-country
Cup Lower case at second and subsequent references except Melbourne Cup (Cup
capped at all references).
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dressing room Also change room.
esports
grand final Lower case for all grand finals, semi-finals, preliminary finals, etc.
grand prix Tennis and motor racing. Lower case except when it is part of the event
name, e.g. the Australian Grand Prix. Plural grands prix.
grand slam
halfway line
ironman
King’s Cup
knockout
line breaks Dates, sporting pools, race categories and millions of dollars should be
joined by a thin space for print so they do not break over a line: September 2;
group B; group 1; $12 million.
medals (Olympics, etc) Lower case gold medal, silver, bronze. Upper case for
medal as in Brownlow Medal (but Brownlow medallist). Do not use medal as a verb.
modafinil A stimulant.
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motocross
Open Upper case Open at all times except when referring to: (1) a generic event
that is open; (2) several opens together; (3) the open era, as in tennis.
practice, practise He was late for practice (noun); He was practising or wanted to
practise (verb).
pre-season
prizemoney
quarter-final
quarter-time
record-holder
repechage
round-robin
saw As in The win saw them return to the top of the table or The innings saw him
become the leading run-scorer. Do not use saw in these contexts. The sentence
must be rewritten.
semi-final
shortlist
shootout (noun)
shutout (noun)
sponsors The use of sponsors’ names in close association with sporting and
cultural events should be avoided. We do not refer to the Lexus Melbourne Cup or
similar. Use such names when needed for the sake of clarity, but avoid them in the
first paragraph. The restriction is waived when such things as yachts and stadiums
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are named after sponsors.
Super Bowl
taekwondo
teammate
teams/club (singular AND plural) Treat team names as plural: Collingwood are
going to win the flag; Manchester United are going to be European champions.
Test match Upper case for Test. Also, first Test for any sport.
three-quarter-time
titleholder
times Spell out at first reference, e.g. two hours, one minute, 26.5 seconds, then
2:01.26.5
try line, goal line, goal scorer, goal-scoring record, points scorer, points-scoring
record, goalkicker, goal-kicking fullback, run scorer, run-scoring record.
touchline, byline
touch judge
versus Spell out at all times in copy, but the abbreviation v (NOT vs.) is acceptable
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in headlines and tables.
world championship Use when one title is on offer, such as F1 driver’s world
championship or FIFA under-23 world championship.
AMERICAN FOOTBALL
website
nfl.com
end zone
field goal
Hail Mary
line of scrimmage
onside kick
play-offs
turnover
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wide receiver
wildcard
ATHLETICS
websites
athletics.com.au
iaaf.org (International Association of Athletics Federations)
anchor runner
backmarker
Balco
countback
distances For races, spell out metres at first reference, then abbreviate to m: 100
metres then 100m; 1500 metres then 1500m.
Gift Write out the full name of the event at first reference: Stawell Gift, then Gift
thereafter.
hammer throw(er)
high jump
long jump
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middle-distance event
pacemaker
take-off foot
times For times spell out at first reference, e.g. one hour, 20 minutes, four seconds,
and abbreviate thereafter as 1:20.04.
triple jump
website
afl.com.au
All-Australian
Aussie rules
Australian Football League No need to spell out. Abbreviate as the AFL. In Victoria
it can also be referred to simply as the league (lower case). In NSW, always use AFL
rather than the league. The governing body is the AFL Commission (the
commission, and commissioners).
back line
captain-coach
centre line
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coach’s box
dressing room
finals Lower case grand final, preliminary final, semi-final etc. Also, grand finalist.
forward line
goal words goal-scoring, goalkicker, goal sneak, goalless, goal mouth, goal post,
goal square, goal line, goal umpire.
handball
key-position player
league The Australian Football League, at later references, is the league (lower
case) or the AFL. Use the latter in NSW. Generally, there is no need to spell out AFL.
onballer
positions
full-back
back pocket
half-back
half-back flank
centre half-back
centre half-forward
half-forward flank
half-forward
forward pocket
full-forward
rover
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ruck-rover
ruckman
pre-season
scores The style is goals, points, total: 12.10 (82) d 10.10 (70). Please do the maths
to check they are correct.
tap-on
time-on
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western Sydney
BASEBALL
websites
mlb.com (Major League Baseball – US)
baseball.com.au
balk
base (first)
bullpen
bunt
catcher
clean-up hitter
double play
dugout
fastball
homer
hitter
no-hitter
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outfielder
pitcher
triple play
world series
BASKETBALL
websites
nbl.com.au (National Basketball League – Australia)
wnbl.com.au
basketball.net.au
nba.com (National Basketball Association – US)
wnba.com
fiba.com
alley-oop
buzzer beater
downtown
foul line
goaltending
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key
lay-up
March Madness
overtime
slam dunk
triple-double, double-double
tip-off
travelling
turnover
BOWLS
website
bowls-aust.com.au
bias, the
end
jack
lawn bowls
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Royal Victorian Bowls Association (RVBA)
tenpin bowling
BOXING
websites
boxrec.com
wbo-int.com
worldboxingfederation.net
wbcboxing.com
ibf-usba-boxing.com
boxing.org.au
www.secondsout.com
www.aussiebox.com.au
counterpunch
divisions This is not a complete list of divisions, but follow this as a guide to
spelling and hyphenation.
heavyweight
super-cruiserweight
cruiserweight
light-heavyweight
super-middleweight
middleweight
super-welterweight
welterweight
light-welterweight or junior-welterweight
lightweight
super-featherweight
featherweight
super-bantamweight
bantamweight
super-flyweight
flyweight
light-flyweight
minimum
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knockout Thereafter KO.
southpaw
CRICKET
websites
espncricinfo.com (international)
iplt20.com (Indian Premier League)
cricketnsw.com.au
auscricket.com.au
cricket.com.au
all-rounder
Ashes, the
baggy green Lower case for the green cap worn by the Australian Test cricketers.
ball tampering
Cricket NSW
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doosra
drive
dressing room
fast-medium
first slip
fours, sixes
hat-trick
inswinger
left-arm spinner
left-handed, left-hander
leg-break
leg-bye
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leg-spin, leg-spinner
leg stump
limited-overs match
long hop
Lord’s
match referee
mid-wicket
mis-hit
nightwatchman
no-ball
off-break
off-spin, off-spinner
off stump
one-day match
on side
outswinger
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overarm, underarm
over rate
overthrow
plumb
positions
cover, extra-cover, deep extra-cover, short extra-cover, cover point
fine-leg, deep backward fine-leg, short fine-leg
gully
long-on, long-off, wide long-off, wide long-on
mid-on, mid-off, deep mid-on, deep mid-off
mid-wicket, deep mid-wicket,
point, backward point, deep backward point, forward point, silly point
silly mid-on, silly mid-off
slips (slips cordon)
square-leg, short-leg, deep square-leg, deep backward square-leg
slips, fly slip,
sweeper
third man, short third man
wicketkeeper, then keeper (no apostrophe)
right-handed
run out The batsman was run out, but the runout decision, and the runout left the
team devastated.
second-wicket partnership
Sheffield Shield
sightscreen
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square cut, square drive
sledging
slog-sweep
strokeplay
tailender
teams
NSW (Blues)
Queensland (Bulls)
Victoria (Bushrangers)
Western Australia (Warriors)
South Australia (Redbacks)
Tasmania (Tigers)
Test Upper case for the first Test, Test match etc.
third man
third umpire
WACA Ground, the The ground in Perth. It is not simply the WACA, which is the
association.
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wicketkeeper Then keeper (no apostrophe).
wrong ’un
CYCLING
websites
cycling.org.au
uci.ch
letour.fr
breakaway
criterium, criteriums
domestique
echelon
individual pursuit
keirin
madison
peloton
points race
repechage
teams pursuit
time trial
Tour de France Riders compete in sponsored teams. Insert team names in brackets
at a convenient spot after names if not already mentioned in text.
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GOLF
websites
pgatour.com
lpga.com
golfaustralia.com.au
rydercup.com
pgatour.com.au
europeantour.com
bogey One over par on a hole. Also double bogey, triple bogey. The plural is
bogeys.
caddie
clubhouse
dogleg
even par
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lay-up He played a lay-up but decided to lay up short of the water.
leaderboard
match play Scoring style: 7 and 6, 1 up, e.g. Norman finished one over par; Norman
had a one-over-par total of …
out of bounds
outward nine
pro-ams
Q-School
R&A
sand trap
shootout
scoring Tiger Woods birdied the par-five 18th hole. He finished with a four under
par round of 68. He was 10 under par for the tournament.
Stableford
St Andrews
stroke play
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tee up, tee off, teed off, teeing off, a tee-off
tours
HOCKEY
websites
hockey.org.au
fih.ch (International Hockey Federation)
centre pass
D, the
flick
mis-hit
long corner
push-back, the
positions
centre-half
centre-striker
goalkeeper
inside-left
inside-right
left full-back
left-half
left-striker
right full-back
right-half
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right-striker
scoop
square ball
straight ball
teams
Hockeyroos (women)
Kookaburras (men)
through ball
time-wasting
MOTOR SPORT
websites
formula1.com
v8supercars.com.au
worldsbk.com
fia.com
cams.com.au (Confederation of Australian Motor Sport)
nascar.com
backmarker
drive-through penalty
formula Ford
constructors’ championship
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drivers’ championship
grand prix, grands prix Upper case when using the full name of a specific race,
e.g. the Australian Grand Prix, then the grand prix.
Indycar
MotoGP
Magny-Cours
motocross
Maranello
McLaren
Nurburgring
stop-go penalty
superbike, supercars
NETBALL
websites
netball.com.au
netballnz.co.nz
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positions
centre
goal attack
goal defence
goal keeper
goal shooter
wing attack
wing defence
super shot
websites
olympic.org
thecgf.com (Commonwealth Games Federation)
paralympic.org
Olympiad Is the period of four years between Games. The enumeration of the
Games does not correspond with the number of Olympiads in the modern era, as
Games were not held in 1916, 1940 or 1944. So the Sydney 2000 Games were the
Games of the 27th Olympiad, but not the 27th Olympic Games. The 2020 Games
were postponed to 2021.
Olympic Use the Olympic Games, the Games, Winter Games, Summer Games, the
Olympics, Olympian, an Olympian (a present or past Games competitor).Treat the
Games as a plural: the Games are under way, the Olympics are about to start.
Paralympics
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Winter Olympics Thereafter the Games.
RACING
black-type race
Brisbane Amateur Turf Club At second reference it is the BATC or the club.
Cup Upper case when it forms part of the name, but in second and subsequent
references lower case, except Melbourne Cup, where Cup is always capped.
dead heat
derby/derbies At first reference the Victoria Derby, then the Derby. Plural: the
Victoria and WA derbies.
details btg (betting), carr (carried), pp (post position), fin (finish), scr (scratched),
divs (dividend, dividends), h (horse), m (mare), g (gelding), c (colt), f (filly), b (bay),
br (brown), gr (grey), ch (chestnut), imp (imported), len (length), ½ len (half length),
nk (neck), long nk (long neck), hd (head), sht hd (short head), abt (about), hcp
(handicap), stks (stakes), 2yo (2-year-old), 50 kg, wfa (weight-for-age), all
(allowances), no (number, numbers), SP (starting price).
In tipping panels, abbreviate the first word in horse’s name when necessary, e.g.
Black Beauty becomes B Beauty.
Doomben 10,000
form guide
gelding A male.
Golden Slipper Keep Slipper upper case at second and subsequent references.
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group Lower case. As in group race.
horses’ names All horses’ names should have initial capitals: Show A Heart, Might
And Power.
Interdominion
Ipswich Amateur Turf Club At second reference it is the IATC or the club.
lightweight jockey
listed
Longchamp
maiden
mud-runner
Moonee Valley Racing Club At second reference it is the MVRC or the club.
NSW Thoroughbred Racing Board At second reference NSW TRB. Its appeal panel
is lower case and singular.
oaks Lower case unless it forms part of the event name, in which case it would be
Oaks at second reference.
odds, odds-on
off-course betting
on-course betting
photo-finish
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plate Lower case unless it forms part of the event name, e.g. the Cox Plate.
racetracks
St Leger
South Australian Jockey Club At second reference it is the SAJC or the club.
stewards’ inquiry
Sydney Turf Club (Rosehill, Canterbury) At second reference it is the STC or the
club.
topweight The topweight is Black Joe, but Black Joe has the top weight of 61
kilograms.
three-quarters of a length
trackwork
trainers No honorific.
triple crown
winner’s circle
women trainers, jockeys Unless it is pertinent to the story don't state that they
are female.
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ROWING
website
rowingaustralia.com.au
coxless four
coxless pair
eight
lightweight sculls
Oarsome Foursome
quad sculls
repechage
single sculls
RUGBY LEAGUE
websites:
nrl.com.au
superleague.co.uk
arch-rivals
CT scan
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chip kick, grubber kick
Centenary Test
counter-attack
dead-ball line
dummy half
forward pass
full-time
goal line
hand-off (noun)
hit-up (noun)
judiciary
knock-on (noun)
lineout
National Rugby League Do not spell out; abbreviate as NRL at all references.
offload
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off-season
offside, onside
onside
open side
Origin, Origin I, II, III But game one or game two, etc.
place kick
play-the-ball
positions
centre
five-eighth
fullback
halfback
hooker
lock
prop or front-rower
second row or second-rower
winger
premier league
pre-season
put-in
rugby, rugby league Lower case for the game but upper case for the
organisations, e.g. the NSW Rugby League. By itself, rugby means rugby union, but
rugby football covers both codes.
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sidestep
sin bin
starts off the bench Banned. He doesn’t start off the bench, he starts on the
bench. Or he is on the bench.
NRL teams
NSW: Do not use both the name and nickname except Wests Tigers. Victoria: Use
Melbourne Storm to avoid confusion with Melbourne (Demons).
Brisbane (Broncos)
the Bulldogs
Canberra (Raiders)
Cronulla (Sharks)
Gold Coast (Titans)
Manly-Warringah (Sea Eagles, Manly)
Melbourne (Storm)
New Zealand (Warriors)
Newcastle (Knights)
North Queensland (Cowboys)
Parramatta (Eels)
Penrith (Panthers)
South Sydney (Rabbitohs, Souths)
St George Illawarra. No hyphen. Do not omit Illawarra and do not use Saints
(Dragons)
Sydney Roosters. Do not use Sydney alone
Wests Tigers. Do not omit Tigers.
try line
try-scorer
RUGBY UNION
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Bledisloe Cup
dead-ball line
drop kick
forward pass
full-time
goal line
half-time
kick-off
knock-on
lineout
offside
onside
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inside-centre
winger
fullback
Rugby/union The Herald uses union in subheads to differentiate from league. But
rugby is acceptable in copy. Rugby football covers both rugby codes.
semi-finals
set-piece
Six Nations
Super 15
Super 15 teams
NB: There are 16 teams in the following list, but only 15 participate annually.
Brumbies (ACT)
Reds (Queensland)
Waratahs (NSW)
Rebels (Melbourne)
Western Force (WA)
Bulls (Pretoria)
Cheetahs (Bloemfontein)
Lions (Johannesburg)
Sharks (Durban)
Stormers (Cape Town)
Southern Kings (Port Elizabeth)
Blues (Auckland)
Chiefs (Waikato)
Crusaders (Canterbury)
Highlanders (Dunedin)
Hurricanes (Wellington)
teams (club)
Eastern Suburbs (Tricolours, Beasts, Easts)
Eastwood (Woods NOT Woodies)
Gordon (Highlanders)
Manly (Marlins)
Northern Suburbs (Shoremen, Norths)
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Parramatta (Two Blues)
Penrith (Emus)
Randwick (Galloping Greens)
Southern Districts (Rebels, NOT Southern)
Sydney Uni (Students)
Warringah (Green Rats)
West Harbour (Pirates, Wests)
touch judge
Tri Nations
Wallaby and Wallabies The Wallaby has played 100 Tests; the Wallabies
five-eighth has played 100 Tests
SAILING
18-footer
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49er
America’s Cup It is possessive because it was first won by the yacht America.
knot
monohull
mistral
multihull
skiff
soling
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Sydney to Hobart No hyphens.
tornado
SOCCER
(not football except in quotes and organisation names)
websites
footballaustralia.com.au
a-league.com.au
bbc.co.uk/football
theworldgame.sbs.com.au
soccerbase.com (for results, goals scored, player fact files)
fifa.com
backheel
back post
back pass
clean sheet
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Copa America
Copa Libertadores
Club World Cup Not Club World Championship or World Club Cup.
crossbar
crossfield
extra time
FIFA The football governing body known in English as the International Federation
of Association Football.
50-50 ball
free kick
goal kick
Golden Boot
golden goal A method used to decide the winner in drawn elimination matches at
the end of regulation time.
halfway line
half-volley
handball
hat-trick
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keeper no apostrophe
leagues
A-League
English Premier League, the Championship, League One, League Two
Scottish Premier League, first division
Primera Liga (La Liga)
Serie A (no itals)
Bundesliga
Major League Soccer
miskick
offside, onside
positions
centre-back
centre forward or striker
centre midfield
goalkeeper
left full-back
left midfield
right full-back
right midfield
striker
sweeper
scissors kick
six-yard box
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Socceroos The national men’s team, but not Olympic team.
St James’ Park
through ball
total football
World Cup Cup is upper case at all times when referring to the World Cup.
SPORTS BETTING
odds Generally, write as dollar amounts. $11 (not 10-1); $1.20 (not 1-5) etc, except
in quotes. When quoting odds for overseas events use the style 10-1, etc, rather
than the dollar amount, to avoid discrepancies in currency conversions.
odds-on
off-course betting
on-course betting
points spreads Should be expressed as fractions, e.g. 1½ points starts not 1.5,
especially in quotes.
SQUASH
website
squash.org.au
racquet
SURFING
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website
aspworldtour.com
backhand, backdoor
Bells Beach
goofy-footer
re-entry
repechage
SWIMMING
websites
swimming.org.au
fina.org
backstroke
breaststroke
butterfly
championships
false start
freestyle
kick turn
lane rope
longcourse
luteinising hormone
medallist
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open water, open-water swimming
shortcourse
starting blocks
tumble turn
TENNIS
websites
wtatour.com
atptour.com
frenchopen.org
usopen.org
wimbledon.org
australianopen.org
masters-series.com
daviscup.com
All England club Lower case c, as the proper name is the All England Lawn Tennis
and Croquet Club.
backcourt
backhand
backspin
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baseline, baseliner
break point
centre court
counterpuncher
crosscourt
double fault
drop shot
Fed Cup
fifth-set win
Flushing Meadows
forehand
grand slam
groundstroke
half-volley
hardcourt
Hawk-Eye
left-handed, left-hander
let cord
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lineball But a line-ball decision.
line call
masters series Lower case unless part of the event name, as in Madrid Masters.
match-fixing
midcourt
nationalities Player’s nationalities should be included in all copy, unless they are
Australian.
open era
overhead
quarter-final, semi-final
racquet
right-handed
Roland Garros
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needs to be identified.
seedings Always check with the tournament website as seedings can often differ
slightly from world rankings.
Sydney International
topspin
two-handed backhand
wildcard
the world No. 2, world No. 8, the Australian No.1 A hair space between the No.
and the figure for print please.
world group
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A GUIDE TO ARABIC
AND ISLAMIC TERMS AND NAMES
TERMS
1.1 Arabs Arabs was initially a name given to people from Arabia, but with time the
word has come to encompass anyone whose native tongue is Arabic and who
identifies as Arab. The adjective varies:
(a) Arabian is a geographic term that applies to Arabia (Arabian Peninsula, Arabian
Sea).
(b) The language and all things relating to it are Arabic.
(c) A person is Arab, as are things relating to the people in a non-Arabian
geographic setting. Not all present-day Arabs live in Arabia, which is why we speak
of the Arab world rather than the Arabian one, i.e. in terms of people, rather than
geography. The Arab world stretches from Morocco and Mauritania on North
Africa’s Atlantic coast in the west to Iraq in the east. Details of the member states
of the Arab League, founded in 1945, can be found here:
http://www.arab.de/arabinfo/league.htm and at
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Arab_League
(d) References to Arabs as a ‘‘race’’ should be avoided. Before the Islamic period,
the Arabs lived solely in Arabia, but the Islamic conquests changed that and they
assimilated many other peoples in the process. A person from Sudan and a
Caucasian from Lebanon might both describe themselves as Arabs, so standard
conceptions of race do not apply.
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(e) Most Muslims are not Arab. Of the eight countries with Muslim populations of
more than 50 million, only one, Egypt, is an Arab country. About 15 to 20 per cent
of the world’s Muslims are Arab. By the same token, although most Arabs are
Muslim, and Arabic is the sacred language of Islam and the Koran, there remains a
significant minority of Arabs who profess Christianity and other faiths.
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lord’’, often used to refer to a spiritual leader.
Pir, which refers to a ‘‘living saint’’ to whom some communities of Muslims owe
allegiance. The most famous example is the Pir Pagaro or ‘‘turbaned Pir’’, who is
revered as a descendant of the prophet Muhammad by the Hur community in the
Pakistani province of Sindh.
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leaders (from the school’s founder, Mohammed ibn Abdel Wahhab), Wahhabis
themselves do not use this term. They call themselves Salafis (followers of the
Salaf) or Muwwahidun (monotheists). The term Salafi is a contested one that refers
to the Islam of the earliest era, and is often also used by Islamists who are in
conflict with the Saudi regime.
(d) One sect that may also come up in news stories is that of the Druze. The Druze
consider themselves Muslims, but their belief in reincarnation and other secret
practices mean they are considered a heretical group by most Sunnis and Shiites
and are not recognised by them to be Muslims at all. The Druze are native to only
three countries: Syria, Lebanon and Israel/Palestine. The Druze also often refer to
themselves as Muwwahidun or monotheists.
(e) Sufi Muslims can be found all over the Islamic world and in both the Sunni and
Shiite sects of Islam. They follow a mystical form of Islam that often involves song,
dance and poetry. They are often viewed at best uneasily and at worst as heretics
by more traditional Muslims. The most famous Sufis in the West are the whirling
dervishes.
1.6 Dress
In recent years, the dress codes of Muslim women have become a frequent topic in
Western media. The most common Arabic word used in such stories is hijab, which
is often translated as ‘‘veil’’ or ‘‘headscarf’’. However, this word does not refer to a
specific item of dress but to the whole concept of modesty in personal attire, so
that we may say someone has ‘‘assumed hijab’’. Purdah, a Persian word that literally
means ‘‘curtain’’ but refers to the seclusion of women from men’s eyes, functions in
the same way. Where a Muslim woman wears a headscarf as hijab, we should
simply call it a headscarf (plural: headscarves). However, there are terms that apply
to specific items of dress which may pop up, and these are our preferred spellings
for them:
Burqa is a word that has different meanings in different languages used by
Muslims. For Arabs, a burqa is a mask tied over a headscarf that veils the face
apart from the eyes. However, in the culture of the Pathans (a non-Arab ethnic
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group found mainly in Pakistan and Afghanistan and sometimes called Pashtuns)
the word burqa is used to mean a robe that covers the entire body and includes a
net panel over the face.
Chador is an outer robe that covers the wearer from head to toe but leaves the
hands and face exposed. The word is Persian.
Dupatta is an Urdu word for a headscarf that usually also covers the breasts.
Jilbab is an overcoat designed to hide the shape of the body. It does not cover the
head.
Khimar is similar to the chador in that it covers the head, leaving the face exposed,
but falls only to a woman’s waist.
Niqab is a word for a veil that covers the face, sometimes leaving the eyes
exposed.
Individual Muslim women will interpret the requirements of hijab in different ways
according to their specific cultural background and personal experience, and that
interpretation may involve only one of these items or a combination of them, but
will usually at least involve covering their hair and legs (some young Muslims may
even wear bandannas or beanies to conceal their hair).
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becomes Anwar.
In Islam, there is no tradition of wives taking their husband’s surname. Although
the spread of Western norms, especially in former colonies, means this does now
happen, many married Muslim women will have a different surname to their
husband’s.
Note: The prefix ‘‘al’’, which is dealt with in more detail in 2.3, does not
necessarily mark the beginning of a surname. Some compound names, such as Abd
al-Rahim and Abu al-Qasim, have an ‘‘al’’ in the middle, and even middle and first
names can begin with ‘‘al’’.
2.2 Spelling
(a) Arabic names can, due to the spread of Islam, be found in every corner of the
globe. The main problem we face in reporting them accurately is rendering the very
different sounds of the Arabic alphabet of 28 letters into English letters, a process
called transliteration.
(b) Many Muslims have made up their own ‘‘Latin’’ spellings of their names, or had
them made up for them, and these spellings are now a fixture of their lives (in
passports etc). Thus we can have three men who spell their surname
Shamsuddeen, Shamseddine and Shams al-Din, a name which, in Arabic, has only
one spelling.
(c) Another source of variation is the colonial past. Arabs once ruled by the French
(e.g. Algerians, Lebanese) tend to adopt French spellings for Arabic sounds: Cheikh
instead of Sheikh, Said instead of Saeed, Moussaoui instead of Musawi, Achcar
instead of Ashkar.
(d) In countries of sub-Saharan Africa, familiar Arabic names may carry an extra
final vowel sound, for example Ibrahima, Abdullahi and Muhammadou.
(e) A final and most important source of variation is transition to other languages.
Not all Muslims speak Arabic or use the same letters. So in Turkey, for example,
Najmuddin becomes Necmettin, and in countries where Persian languages are
spoken (e.g. Iran, Afghanistan) names may feature the letter ‘‘v’’ instead of ‘‘w’’, or
‘‘p’’ instead of ‘‘b’’. Arabic has no letter ‘‘p’’ or ‘‘v’’.
(f) When someone with an Arabic name has a well-established way of spelling it in
roman characters, this must be allowed to stand. However, where we are dealing
with inhabitants of Islamic and Arab countries who are unlikely to have given any
thought to how their name might be spelt using Latin characters, we should try to
keep spelling variations to a minimum (Ahmed, Mohammed, Mahmoud and Ali are
all best versions of common names).
Important exceptions to this rule are Turkey, Indonesia/Malaysia and Somalia,
where spellings must never be altered as the written languages of these countries
use Latin characters and so the spellings are not transliterations.
(g) In some Arabic names and words, you may come across the use of an
apostrophe. This can be used to indicate the letter ayn, which is difficult to
represent in Latin script and difficult for non-Arabophones to pronounce, or to
represent the glottal stop, which is also a feature of Arabic. An example is the word
al-Qaeda, which some newspapers render as al-Qa’ida because there is an ayn in
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the middle. Under our style, we should remove apostrophes that we come across in
Arabic words. They do not really aid pronunciation and are meaningless to
Anglophone readers.
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refers to God. Remember that if someone’s name is given as ‘‘Abdul’’, your
immediate reaction should be ‘‘Abdul what?’’ If a person’s name is given as Abdul
Aziz, for example, you are looking either at a given name or a family name, but not
both. There are dozens of Abdul names, but common examples include
Abdulhamid, Abdullah, Abdul Karim and Abdel Mahdi. In each of these cases,
spelling might vary, for example Abd al-Hamid, Abdel Karim and Abdul Mahdi.
(c) Ghulam This also means ‘‘servant of’’ and is the first element of a name in which
the second element refers to a religious figure. This name is more common among
non-Arab Shiites, especially from the Indian subcontinent and Persian-speaking
countries. The most common examples are Ghulam Hussein (sometimes written as
one word, Gholamhosein) and Ghulam Reza (Gholamreza).
(d) al-Din Sometimes written as -uddin or -edine or -eddine, it means ‘‘the faith’’
and is almost always the second element of a single name.
Note: When used as given names, names of types (b), (c) and (d) would be used
only for males.
2.5 Identities
(a) In Arab culture, there are two ways to refer to any adult person. The obvious
one is that person’s given name. However, all Arab men and women may also be
referred to in terms of their eldest child, or more traditionally their eldest son. They
will often be referred to in this way as a mark of respect even if they have no sons
or no children. For example, Palestinian Authority President Mahmoud Abbas is
known as Abu Mazen (father of Mazen). His eldest son was called Mazen.
Mahmoud Abbas' wife would be called Umm Mazen.
(b) As the Abu Mazen example illustrates, this name is not necessarily an
alias or nom de guerre (‘‘name of war’’), though it may be. Where caution
does need to be employed is when dealing with people suspected of
terrorism. In the case of “Abu’’ names in particular, we should be aware
that both this name and any name that follows it may be aliases. For
example, the real name of the al-Qaeda leader known as Abu Hafs
al-Masri is Mohammed Atef. The real name of Abu Musab al-Zarqawi is
believed to be Fadeel al-Khalayleh. In both cases, the second name
(Masri, Zarqawi) refers to that person’s origins: Mohammed Atef is from
Egypt (Masr in Arabic) and so he is called ‘‘Abu Hafs the Egyptian’’ (which
should remind us of gangland sobriquets like ‘‘Nick the Greek’’ or ‘‘Tony
the Bulgarian’’). In such cases, we may have to use final names at second
reference even when they clearly are not authentic, either because we
lack the person’s real name or their real name is unfamiliar to readers.
Sometimes we may use an ‘‘Abu’’ name at second reference for the same
reasons. The notorious Palestinian terrorist Sabri al-Banna was always
known in media reports as Abu Nidal. As was explained in 2.4 a, this
name should not be split subsequently, in other words Abu Nidal should
not later become “Nidal”.
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