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The poem is constructed in quatrains with alternating rhyme scheme (abab).

  I wrote that first because I


don't know what I should write about this one.  Yes, I did choose this poem, and I think I chose it because
of the inconsistencies or, maybe, humor in the poem.

The last line in the first stanza, "Jehovah, Jove, or Lord!"  shows a sense of desperation or rather
overstatement (over-dramatization) of need.  From here on out, I get a sense of sarcasm from the poem. 
In stanza two, "To know but this -- that thou art good, / And that myself am blind: / Yet gave me, in this
dark estate to see the good from ill"  Within four lines there's a quandry.  An omnipotent being is good, but
made me blind, but in my blindness, inflicted by a good omnipotent being, I am able to see the good in
things because of the good omnipotent being.  Yeah, kind of confusing.

Yet this line solidifies the sense of sarcasm for me, "This, teach me more than Hell to shun, / That, more
than Heaven pursue."  Past me wrote, "I find this to be interesting -- if human beings have free will, then
teach this person, the speaker, life is more than praise (Heaven) or punishment (Hell)."  I guess I sidestep
the obvious religious debate here.  What is there more than wanting to go to Heaven in a prayer?  Isn't
Heaven the end result.  So there's a question being asked instead of statement -- what is there to pursue
more than Heaven?

So here's a list of what this omnipotent being is to impart on the speaker:

1) If the speaker is right, let the speaker have grace.


2) If the speaker is wrong, teach the speaker a better way.
3) Not to have foolish pride.
3) Not to be discontent with religious pursuits.
4) Feel another's pain
5) Hide the speakers faults
6) Show mercy onto others and mercy is shown upon the speaker.

That's a mighty list for one omnipotent being to do.  At this point, the poem is not what the being can do
for the speaker; rather, what the speaker wants to gain from the being -- control of self.  But isn't control of
the self, well, up to the self?

And the speaker has the self-awareness of his/her faults, "Mean though I am" the speaker blames, I
mean, trust, the being to show him/her a better way.

The last stanza interests me.  Yes, Nature can be looked upon as another name for a higher being, but
there's a pun in there.  Nature as in being, but also, Nature as in self (human nature).  Thus, perhaps, the
speaker is talking about him/herself as a higher being with the ability to change.  Universal doesn't always
mean out there, but in here as well.

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