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Argument Essay
Cade Bucher
Mrs. Cramer
14 April 2022
Mobile phone dependency has grown rapidly over the past few years, with npr.org stating
that fifty-three percent of children and eighty-four percent of teenagers own their own
smartphone. This has led to addiction in a high percentage of teens, causing noxious and
dangerous actions that the kids or teens take part in. Phone addiction in teenagers is unhealthy
because it leads to bad habits and violence, as well as poor performance in schools and jobs.
Some of the habits that teenagers develop because of phone addiction include sleep
issues, stress, and anxiety. These are just a few of numerous side effects of phone addiction.
Phone addiction is caused by a large amount of things but is mostly linked to the apps that teens
indulge in while they use their phones. The websites and apps that they use work with certain
colors, sounds and vibrations to get teens used to them, and make them feel a separate way when
they are without them (Gomez). An example of a dangerous effect of heavy phone usage would
be a decrease in the brain's grey matter, with Gomez saying, “A recent study scanned
participants’ brains with a phone addiction and discovered a change in the brain’s grey matter.”
The scans also revealed that the shape and size of the brain was like the brains of drug users.
This, along with the information stating grey matter volume had decreased in phone addicts,
In addition, it is shown that there may be a correlation between abusive and violent
parenting and phone dependency. The Korean Children and Youth Panel Survey showed that
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abusive parenting style largely raised phone dependency and addiction in children and teens.
Along with this, the study found that 17.3% of the adolescents that participated reported that they
felt anxious when they were not in possession of their phone or other device (Kim and Chun).
Some studies done in the past can be linked to side effects as well. Kim and Chun state, “Past
research suggests that MPD (mobile phone dependency) among young users is associated with a
host of internalizing problems...)”. Some of the problems listed include depression, suicidal
ideation, headaches, tinnitus, and other physical related symptoms. With the combination of
negative mental and physical effects related to cell phone addiction, it is overtly obvious that
Even though the evidence would suggest phones are hazardous, it can be argued that cell
phones are more beneficial than they are negative to teens and even adults. Although phones are
shown to worsen mental health, they can also help it. There are apps that one can download that
give words of encouragement, and reminders for things such as eating and drinking water to help
the person physically. Another benefit of cell phones is communication. It allows for long-
distance messaging or calls between friends, family, or businesses. Discover Seven Stars’ blog
listed a few more positive things about phone usage, including improved communication,
organization, help in emergencies, access to information such as global news, and many more
(The Difference Between, para. 3). This goes to show that not only does phone addiction affect
productivity in students, but also adults in the workplace, but it should be noted that this is not
directly focused on phone addiction. Instead, it is a broad set of terms that can apply to healthy
users.
While this may be true, the pros cannot outweigh the cons, as a person’s mental health
should be prioritized over communication with friends. Another priority should be school, which
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is also negatively affected by phones and phone addiction. According to a study done by The
Conversation, they found that the banning of phones at schools led to an increase of 6.4% for test
scores in students that were 16 years old, compared to the average test scores before phones were
banned. It is not only important for teens and even undergraduate students to do well in school,
determined that an office employee spent an average of 56 minutes per day using their phone for
things that were not work-related. This adds up to around five hours per week in which that
employee is not being productive, which may not seem like much, but it can add up quickly.
To conclude, the vast majority of studies and piles of research would suggest that cell
phones are a hazard to teenagers’ mental health, and the other components of their daily life.
Granted, it is still possible to use phones in a healthy and non-addictive way, however the
statistics prove that more often than not teenagers are, to some degree, addicted. With that being
said, cell phones and other devices are an immediate threat to teens’, and even some adults’,
mental and physical health. This is due to strategic methods apps use to hook someone, and the
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