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Argumentative Essay Final Draft - CCP English 1
Argumentative Essay Final Draft - CCP English 1
Argumentative Essay Final Draft - CCP English 1
English 1101.505
Prof. Cook
23 November 2021
Technology is becoming more prevalent in the world we live in today. Every day we use our
phones, tablets, or laptops for many different purposes. Children are now becoming reliant on
their technology. It’s okay for children to use technology, however, there comes to a point where
they are on it too much. For children, it is hard to know when you are at the limit where they are
on it too much. With the help of parents limiting their kid's screen time, children can become less
reliant on technology and they will become mentally and physically healthier.
Teens spend a lot of time on their phones, which can lead to poor mental health. This poor
mental health can lead to suicide-related thoughts and actions. According to “Excessive Screen
Time Contributes to Suicide-Related Outcomes in Teens”, “...Teens who spend five or more
hours per day on electronic devices (versus one hour) run a 66 percent higher risk of having at
least one suicide-related outcome.’” (Grandstaff). By allowing teens to have free range on their
screen time can cause an overuse of technology which can lead to poor mental health. The teens
who had a significantly lower screen time average had a lower chance of depression and/or
suicide (Grandstaff).
The overuse of technology has become a mentally unhealthy situation. The depression and
suicide rates have gone up a significant amount and we are in a huge mental health crisis
(Tribune Content Agency). People are becoming more unhappy and are having a feeling of
loneliness when they are excessively on their phones. Steve Jobs, one of the creators of the
smartphone, limits his own kids’ screen time to protect them, and other parents should follow
that lead as well (Tribune Content Agency). Limiting screen time could lead to a decrease in
suicide and depression rates, and lower the likelihood of being unhappy or feeling lonely.
Some may say that screen time does not affect the physiological well-being of a person.
According to the article “Screen time: Conclusions about the effects of digital media are often
incomplete, irrelevant or wrong”, “over 200 studies about social media concluded there was
almost no effect of greater screen time on psychological well-being” (Reeves, Ram, and
Robinson). There is said to be no correlation between media usage and the cognitive well-being
of a person. However, other studies show that the more time people spend on technology, the
unhappier they are compared to those who get more face-to-face interaction versus technology
interaction. According to “Screen time: Mental health menace or scapegoat?”, “13% of eighth-
and tenth-graders who spent 1 to 2 hours a week on social media said they were ‘not happy’”
Another reason that people think that kids' screen time should not be limited is because
they think that their children know when too much is too much. Giving kids the leeway to choose
when they have had enough time on technology, will help them in the future so they learn self
regulation (Freya Dawson). Although this point makes sense, at a young age it can be very
difficult to understand the limit of how much is reasonable and healthy. Parents should have at
least some controls of their kids’ screen time limits and then as the kid begins to grow up then
can be more lenient with it and then the kid will understand how much is a good amount for
them.
Using technology too much can lead to poor outcomes. According to “Screen time and early
adolescent mental health, academic, and social outcomes in 9- and 10- year old children:
Utilizing the Adolescent Brain Cognitive Development â (ABCD) Study”, “We find that more
screen time is moderately associated with worse mental health, increased behavioral problems,
decreased academic performance, and poorer sleep, but the heightened quality of peer
relationships” (Paulich, Lessem, and Hewitt). There are lots of bad things that can come out of
the overuse of technology. So, if the parents do their part and limit their kid's screen time then
they will have a less likely chance of having the poor outcomes listed above.
Overall the use of technology leads to a skyrocketing increase in depression and suicide rates.
It also leads to poor mental health and unhappiness. If parents limit their kid's screen time, they
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