Noah Deakyne

Reflection On Essa Topic

At first when I was trying to find information about my subject. A lot of websites didn’t really give
a clear for or against statements. I had trouble finding webcites that were all against my topic.
My number one way of “brainstorming ideas'' is just writing on a paper what you think would be
a good essay. After that I will make edits and adjustments as needed. A lot of the time if I am
stuck on what to write I will take a break and go eat or drink. Your brain can only go so far with
being perfected and on point. Brains need breaks in the day. Breaks are crucial for a successful
essay. Honestly I didn’t have any feedback. Nobody responded to my essay. So I decided to do
it myself. I added better citations to my essay. Also I was more defined on my side on the essay
and gave room for counterarguments. I believed my essay and it was really well thought out.
Also I would give my conclusion 10 out 10. The conclusion tied in all the points and repeated the
thesis in different words to end it all off. My doubts would be if I have enough infomation on my
essay. Overall I had a great time writing and exploring new ideas for my essay. Of course it took
me time to gather my thoughts on paper. Also a struggle I had was finding great websites for my
essay. Lots of websites talked about both subjects and were neutral about it. Besides that I
really think my essay was really well thought out.