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Feedback Essay 3
Kate De La O
Instructor McCann
English 1302.203
18 April 2022
Something
Ambition, the drive pushing humans to improvement is evident throughout history. Any
boundaries set seem to only aggravate the human race to surpass it. Technological advancements
made in the twenty-first century have revolutionized medicine and what is perceived to be
possible. Genetic modification of the human embryo is the new curiosity plaguing those who are
ambitious to now alter the human race. While the pace of technological advancements never kept
Genetically up with the humans’ imagination of possibility, it has now in the aspect of germline editing.
modifying
plants and Genetical modifying plants and animals is no longer suffice. Going a step further with the
animals is no
longer modification of the very being of an individual is the next upcoming challenge. Genetic
sufficient
modification of the human embryo is supported by many for its plethora of benefits: removing
hereditary diseases, curing diseases, and building immunity to sicknesses. However, surpassing
this challenge may undo the very good and harmonious living they are trying to achieve.
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While genetic modification of the human embryo claims many benefits our technology is
not up to par, therefore requiring more research. However, research backing modification of
germ cells (sperm cells, eggs, and embryos) is unregulated. Currently in the U.S, germline
editing is banned, preventing the government from funding any research regarding human
genetic engineering (Global Gene Editing Regulation Tracker). Granted, there are no legislations
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preventing private companies from entering and experimenting in this field of study. There is no
opposition to one’s right to create a private organization of study but rather the latter, the
the federal government human embryos are exposed to unethical and cruel methods of
experimentation. Though many may argue that an embryo is not yet a human, merely a fertilized
egg, they are considered human research subjects by the National Institution of Health (NIH) if
they are intended to transfer into a woman’s uterus (Dressor 203). Therefore, only protecting a
few out of the many potential lives to be experimented on. Countries such as Hungary, Costa
Rica, and Ecuador determined that every embryo has the right to life (Ossarch 736). While the
United States has not yet come to specific definitions and regulations when it comes to genetic
modification of the human embryo, it leaves the door wide open to unethical practice. Embryos,
that would have otherwise grown to become healthy children, are now threatened to be a product
advancements are made in this field of study. The Department of Health and Human Services
can only advice “responsible conduct of research involving human subjects such as pregnant
women, embryos and fetuses” (Dressor 204). If regulations are to be put in place, how strict and
direct can they become to simultaneously protect human embryos and allow room for
advancement? There is never going to be a balance in which both sides live in a harmonious
functioning agreement. Like freedom and order in the U.S, regulation, and protection of the
human embryo counter each other in every recurrence. In order for there to be experimentation
there is failure and death of an embryo, and for complete protection of the embryo there is no
more than just the disposing of chemicals or prototype machinery, it would result in the disposal
of human embryos and lives. If an embryo born with negative off target results, unforeseen and
unintended genome edits, where would the guilt lie? Who would remain responsible for
providing and aiding the individual whom is unfortunately and unfairly a failed product or
byproduct? Answering the infamous question “do the ends justify the means?” is where the
argument narrows too. Is humanity ready to make those types of sacrifices? Sacrificing humans’
lives, forever altered, for the better or worse. One may argue that other scientific breakthroughs,
medicine was new to the twentieth century. On the contrary, while antibiotics were in essence in
an experimental phase at one point, they never put in danger future offspring of the individual
who was experimented on. Nor did it achieve its success through unethical practices. (INSERT
CLOSING SENT.)
Rights and liberties are the epidemy of American beliefs. The drive fueling the American
Revolution was the belief that every human was designated, from birth, fundamental rights. The
current governmental system in the United States is centralized around the protection of citizens
liberties and rights. While loose interpretation of the Constitution seems to be the most common
forms of interpretation, many argue that genetic modification of the human embryo is a right.
Nevertheless, human germline editing has not yet been directly ruled by the Supreme Court as a
right, as no human germline modification case has been presented before it. Advocates for
human germline modification use the extended clause under the fourth amendment to justify the
right to genetic modification of the human embryo, which was endorsed in the Meyer vs.
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Nebraska Supreme Court case (Ossareh 737). This justification is unapplicable as any
modification conducted on the germ level becomes hereditary, affecting generations to come.
Therefore, affecting more than the life of one child and being outside the sphere of parental
rights. The Myer vs. Pierce Supreme Court case established two requirements necessary to
prevent government intervention in raising a child: “the right at issue had to be fundamental and
the right had to be traditionally protected by our society” (Montoya 1033). Genetic modification
of the human embryo is not deeply rooted into human culture, therefore not “traditionally
protected” by society. The human race has gone all it’s years of existence without human
germline modification, proving genetic modification of the human embryo is not a fundamental
right. unalienable
“Life, liberty, and the pursuit of happiness” are the unaidable rights mentioned in the
Declaration of Independence. These “god given” rights are the foundation on which the rest of
our government is built upon. It is the protection and guarantee of these very rights that dictate
the governmental system, laws and regulations passes, and how the country is operated. A
parent’s choice to genetically modify their child denies this individual from liberty and the
pursuit of happiness. The genetically modified individual had no say in whether the modification
should or should not take place jointly with the type of modification that was to be conducted.
Yes, it is absurd to expect consent from an individual that was yet be developed and birthed, but
this only proves the point further. Human embryos modified and discarded are denied the right of
life. Embryos born with defects, deficiencies, and off-target edits are robbed of their right to a
deprived
healthy life. Those born and left to live out their lives are dispossessed of liberty and privacy,
being obligated to constant supervision and continuous check-ups by the experimenters and
Malevolence
It has been exemplified through time that a human with an ambition to conquer will
climb the tallest mountains, crawl through the roughest terrain, and swim through the greatest
oceans to achieve their goal, even if it means harm to others. The human race, as opposed to
other mammals, is capable of purposeful harm, a malicious intent. Any resource within reach is
utilized for the purpose of getting one step closer to their visualization. If genome editing in
humans permits one to pick specific characteristics, what stops another from selecting traits that
favor for war and obedience? One with the means and drive to create a specific civilization can
germ line editing. Of course, genetic modification of the human embryo is neutral, only tipping
the scale as the effect of one’s use. While the current intention to operate the genetic
modification of the human embryo is with good intention to improve human health, it may very
well be used to create soldiers. Yes, one can argue that laws and regulations will prevent such
uses. However, in current laws established it is noted that while the laws and regulations are
enforced, it has not prevented illegal gun purchases, human-trafficking, illegal usage of drugs,
etc. No matter law or regulation there will always be one who does the contrary.
Replace? What about other countries? Laws implemented in nation does not guarantee the
implementation of similar laws in another. Inconsistent national regulations are utilized today
(ADD EXAMPLE). Despite rules and enforcement meant to prevent evils, these evils still occur.
Those who commit a crime have proven that the law is simply dismissed when ambition and
greed is too great. In the case of World War II, if Hitler had such technology at hand one can
only assume that it would have been utilized. Possibly to create obeying, painless, and strong
soldiers, or to create the Herrenvolk, the German race thought to be superior. Technology so
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powerful and influential would only in the end aid those who wish to commit great harm or
control.
The Inevitable
“The human heart is greedy: it will use religion, color, or any other excuse to justify its
The Future
The unpropitious effects of genetic modification do not lie to far into the future as some
presume. Germline modification does not only put at risk the lives of future generations but
advancement and support for genetic modification of somatic cells. Modifications made to the
somatic cells are not inherited by the next generation and are conducted after the individual’s
birth and diagnosis of disease. The negative stigma associated with genetic modification of the
human embryo concerns scientists who see the improving and promising modification of somatic
cells.
Conclusion
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