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Ielts Writing Task-2 by Krupa Desai
Ielts Writing Task-2 by Krupa Desai
TASK-2
STRUCTURE / FORMAT:
• Those who have read more than 250 essay are able to write
global sentence. Also, you should be using the global
sentence while writing or practicing the essay.
• For example:
Many people think young people should follow traditions. Others
argue that young people should be free to be individuals. Discuss
both the views and give your opinion.
2. Question reference:
Example:
• Do the advantages of this development outweigh the
disadvantages?
• Question reference: In my perception, the benefits of this
trend surpass its drawbacks to a major extent.
3. Thesis statement:
• Some people say that too much attention and resources are given to
protect wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
Intro: Today, the conservation of wildlife has become an important
issue since some creatures are becoming extinct day-by-day. In this
regard, it is believed by some people that excessive amounts of funds
as well as extreme focus are being provided by authorities and public
in order to save wild species. I, however, reckon that undoubtedly they
are cared greatly, but not ‘a lot’ is being done for them. My preference
is justified further.
Essay types and their structures
1. Discuss both the views and give your opinion (discussion based
essay)
• Intro — B1—B2—Conclusion + opinion
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90 90
Words
Note: Do not write your opinion in introduction.
• Intro—B1—B2—B3—Conclusion
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80% 20% writer’s stand with a few contrary points
Writer’s stand
• For example: Intro—B1—B2—B3—C
| | |
agree agree disagree(20%)
(80%)
• In this essay type also, you can use that optional structure(50%-50%
stand) or (partially agree) format mentioned above. Only when you
don't have ideas to write the essay with 80-20% stand. However, this
happens very rarely. Most IELTS essays are not that hard.
• Intro—B1—B2—Conclusion
| |
1st 2nd
question’ s answer
• When you are asked questions like below:
1)What are the reasons? Is it a positive development or negative
development?
2) what are the causes? Do the advantages of this outweigh the
disadvantages?
• You should write B1 for question 1 which is reasons here. But, you
will take 1 paragraph means B2 for the 2nd question as well. In
question based essay if you are asked these questions given above
you do not need to make 2 or 3 paragraphs for 2nd questions. For
instance, either you will write positives/advantages or negatives/
disadvantages in 2nd paragraph(B2). You do not need to write the
opposite side of your stand.However, if the 2nd questions given
above are asked separately in the essay, they are not called
question based essay and you have to write 3 paragraphs for it.
• Intro—B1—B2—Conclusion
| |
Reasons solutions
or or
Causes Effects
or or
Problems Solutions
or or
Causes Problems
• One body paragraph should have only one main idea. For example, If
you are asked to write causes and effects, then B1 should only
have causes and B2 should only have effects.
6. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
OR
Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?
[80%-20% stand]
• Intro—B1—B2—B3—Conclusion
| | |
80% 20%
Advantages Disadvantages
or or
Disadvantages Advantages
• If you do not have enough ideas to write the essay as per the
structure given above, then here also you can take 50-50% stand.
• You will be seen the question reference for this structure ahead in
the pdf:)
• Intro—B1—B2—Conclusion
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Advantages Disadvantages
8. Is it a positive or a negative development? [80-20% stand]
• Intro—B1—B2—B3—Conclusion
| | |
80% 20%
Positives Negatives
or or
Negatives positives
• Here also, you can use 50-50% structure,but only when you don’t
have enough ideas to write the essay according to the structure
given above.
• Intro—B1—B2—C
| |
50% 50%
Positives Negatives
• In this essay type, you should write your opinion in the introduction.
Then, explain your opinion in body paragraphs.
1. Topic sentence:
Conclusion
CONCLUSION STRUCTURE:
1.Concluding linker:
• You should use concluding linkers such as “To conclude” and”In
conclusion”. Linkers like “To recapitulate” can be used only when you
have ability to write 8 or 9 band essays. Do not use linkers like,“To
sum up”, “To summarize”, “To put it in a nutshell”, “Finally”, “In
general”,”In a nutshell”,”Summing up”, in your conclusion. They are
called informal words/linkers in IELTS.
• Students who use “To conclude” and “In conclusion”, also get more
than 7 bands in essay. Remember, only a linker does not decide
your bands in writing task-2. So, do not use any fancy concluding
linkers.
Sample essays
• Conversely, the latter opinion has its own arguments. The believers
reason that in many countries people are still facing different issues:
Poverty, unemployment, hunger, lack of education, malnourishment
and terrorism. If the government allocates a proper budget on these
matters and looks after some major problems, individuals can live a
better life. Besides, the environmental deterioration has become a
serious concern for the globe which also requires attention. In many
regions of the world, people are suffering from severe diseases and
due to lack of money they are unable to get proper medical
treatment.
• When the question regarding funding the mode of transport crops up,
some are of the viewpoint that it is essential to reserve funds to build
infrastructure for speed trains connecting cities;whereas, the other
group solicits that money should be spent to develop public
transit that is already existing. Therefore, ahead of my stand, both
the opinions would be discussed.
• It has been rightly said that prevention is better than cure. Therefore,
some individuals reckon that the government should spend public
money on encouraging people to live a healthy life rather than on the
cure of patients. I strongly support this opinion. My preference will be
explained in ensuing paragraphs.
Some people claim that traditional games had more benefits for
children than modern games. To what extent do you agree or
disagree?
• To add to this, it is also true that there are social and physical merits
attached to traditional games. These games provide children to
strengthen their communication and cooperation skills on one hand;
while on the other hand, most games require dexterity and quite a
few body movements such as swinging of arms, walking fast,
running, jumping and other stretching. This encourages exercise and
enhances eye-hand coordination.
• When a man first landed on the moon nearly half a century ago, he
stated that humanity has taken a giant leap toward the road of
excellence. But some individuals believe that traveling to outer
space has not made any significant impact on human lives. To a
large extent I disagree with this statement. My preference will be
explained in ensuing paragraphs.
• Discussing the reasons, the prime one is that people do not follow
the policies made by the government to protect the environment,
such as ban on plastic bags and cut down trees. Although
environmental pollution is a global concern, its impact is not going to
be the same for every country. Therefore, some nations do not place
the environmental issues so high on the priority list. Moreover, when
some steps are taken for the protection of the environment, they
affect adversely on the economy. For instance, despite having many
benefits of solar power, it is still considerably costlier than thermal
power.
• However, it is important to take some steps to mitigate this problem.
To begin with, government of every country should put some specific
fine to those, who break the rules of environmental defense. To add
to this, every country should contribute to save nature, whether it is
affected by its problems or not, as it is a global issue and can be
solved by joint endeavors. Some nations should help other nations
who cannot afford solar power and other renewable sources, by
giving financial support. So that they can also contribute in saving
environment.
• Over the last ten years, western societies have seen close to a 20%
rise in the number of children who are overweight. There are several
reasons behind this trend; and it has caused various impacts. Both
the questions are answered in ensuing paragraphs.
• Discussing the causes, the prominent one is poor diet. From the past
few years, there has been a prolific increase in the number of fast
food restaurants: MacDonald’s, Burger king, Subway and Pizza hut.
The food in these places has been proven to be unhealthy, and
much of the advertising is targeted at children, thus ensuring that
they constitute the bulk of the customers of these establishments.
Another reason is ready-made meals. This sort of food are quick and
easy option for parents who are working and have not time to cook.
Furthermore, majority of children, nowadays, are following
sedentary lifestyle. They do not like to go out and play outdoor
games. Their physical inactivity makes them overweight.
• The effects of this have been and will continue to be very serious. To
begin with, there has been a large increase in health related
diseases such as diabetes, amongst children. This debilitating illness
means a child has to be injected with insulin for the rest of their life.
Not only this, very overweight children often experience bullying from
other children, which may affect their mental health. The negative
stigma of being overweight may also affect self
esteem.
• One important factor is the literacy rate. For example, a country like
Cuba has low GDP but less than 1% of its population is illiterate. As
a consequence, there is less crime and hence people enjoy a
peaceful existence. Another factor is primary health care. This can
be judged by the infant mortality rate, and the life expectancy at
birth. If people receive good healthcare at the primary level, they are
happier. Their productivity of work increases, and they lead a
comfortable life.
• In addition to this, it also cannot be denied that the young minds can
learn quicker and are ready to be moulded. This means that with a
large number of youth, the nation accelerates its progress and can
widen their prospects in many fields. An apt example is India. The
country has geared up its economy in almost every sector due to its
dynamic young workforce. Besides this, the young people are the
earning members in the family units on whom children and the
elderly are dependent.
• Discussing the merits, the first and the foremost one is that it can
decrease the office expenses such as electricity bills, water bills and
fuel costs. Furthermore, if employees would get some days off every
week, they would get more leisure time which can improve their
productivity. Besides this, commuting of office workers and
movement of office vehicles will be reduced. Consequently, air
pollution can be lessen at some extent as well as fuel costs can be
saved.
• To add to this, in this fast paced life, it has become very important to
spend some quality time with family and friends. Due to cutthroat
competition and materialistic desires, people have become
workaholics and are failing to draw a line between work and leisure.
These day-offs can give them time for themselves and their
families.
• However, this change in work life can affect the employees and
companies. Industries can lose some clients and have to face
some losses as there are many competitors in the market.
Moreover, shortened workweek can reduce the earnings of
employees, especially those who work on daily wages.
Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are
able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think
this is a positive or a negative development?
• However, there are a few detriments too. To begin with, it is also true
that the concept of globalization can have a setback for the
indigenous market. For instance, in many countries the international
food chains as KFCs and MacDonald’s take over the traditional
market. This happens for several other products too. Consequently,
the local market may get disturbed.
• In conclusion, it can be stated that indeed with globalization, people
can now buy the same products anywhere in the world. Although
there can be a few drawbacks, such a trend not only improves the
economy of a country, but also makes people happy buyers.
[ This essay is given 8 bands and that is why the candidate has
used “ to recapitulate” as a concluding linker.]
Adult youths are often called up for working for the development of
communities. Do you think they should work voluntarily or should
they get paid? Give your opinion. (100% writer’s stand)
• The most important reason for making the voluntary work being paid
is that today's youth need some pocket money to satiate their
material desires. As it is, the youngsters are lured by the glamour of
the consumerist society. This paid voluntary work would give them a
chance to earn some of those things, and needless to say it would
benefit the community. In other words, it would be a win-win situation
for both sides. Moreover , it would reduce petty crime, as some
youngsters resort to unethical ways to get those things. So, an
incentive is needed to increase their compliance for voluntary work.
[ You can use the same structure for “do you agree or disagree”
essay type. The structure of both argumentative essays is the
same when you take 50-50% stand.]
• One key reason for this move away from more traditional training
methods is the fact that e-learning offers businesses the opportunity
to reduce their expenditure significantly. Providing face-to-face
training can be exorbitantly expensive, particularly in terms of travel
costs and lost productivity, and online courses can greatly reduce the
expense of keeping employees well-informed and up-to-date.
Computer-based training renders geographical location irrelevant
and this eliminates the need to pay an instructor to travel to your
office or cover the cost of sending your employees to a training
centre. It also minimizes the amount of time wasted. From a purely
financial perspective, there is no doubt that this shift to digital
learning makes perfect sense.
Collocation
• What is collocation?
A combination of words in a language, that happens very often and
more frequently than would happen by chance.
1. Adverb+adjective
• Richly decorated
• Fully aware
• Utterly stupid
2. Adjective+noun
• Regular exercise
• Maiden voyage
• Excruciating pain
3. Noun+noun
• Round of applause
• Ceasefire agreement
• Bars of soap
4. Noun+verb
• Dog barking
• Plane took off
• Bomb went off
5. Verb+noun
• Committing murder
• making my bed
• give a presentation
LIST OF COLLOCATIONS
1. Boost confidence
2. Celebrate achievement
3. Maintain balance
4. Increase amount
5. Imitate accent
6. Improve appearance
7. Offer assistance
8. Place advertisement
9. Protect children
10. Prohibit smoking
11. Reduce chance
12. Set agenda
13. Strengthen ability
14. Decrease significantly
15. Exorbitantly expensive
16. Absorb information
17. Break contract
18. Allocate fund
19. Affect life
20. Adopt attitude
Adding information:
• In addition to this
• Furthermore
• Moreover
• Also
• Not only….but also
• As well as
Giving examples
• For example
• One clear example is
• For instance
• Such as
• Namely
• To illustrate
• In other words
• As a result
• Consequently
• Therefore
• Thus
• Hence
• So
• For this reason
Highlighting and stressing
• Particularly
• In particular
• Specifically
• Especially
• Obviously
• Of course
• Clearly
Concessions and contrast
• Admittedly
• However
• Nevertheless
• Even though
• Although
• Despite
• In spite of
• Still
• On the other hand
• By contrast
• In comparison
• Alternatively
• Another option could be
Reasons and causes
• Because
• Owing to
• Due to
• Since
• As
• In my opinion
• I think
• I believe
• I admit
• In my view
• I concur / I agree
• I disagree / I cannot accept
Concluding linkers
• In conclusion
• To conclude
• To recapitulate
KEEP PRACTICING :)
KRUPA DESAI