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Argument Essay 1
Argument Essay 1
Brooke Thompson
Micheal White
Safety is hard to obtain on the roads. Driving huge pieces of metal that weigh up to 3,000
pounds at almost 70 miles an hour, can be extremely dangerous. As we get older, our bodies
begin to break down. We become weaker and our reflexes become slower. These things all play
a huge role in the safety of driving a car. Your mental state and physical state need to be at a
certain mark before you should be able to operate a car. Retesting older drivers should be
As we get older, the first thing to go is muscle mass. Your muscle mass plays a huge role
in your everyday life. Losing muscle mass can decrease your mobility. Your mobility plays a
huge role in operating a vehicle. In a study done by Brian Tracy in the article “Mobility”, it was
found that “muscle strength can decrease by as much as 50% from 25-80 years of age and impair
the ability to move the body effectively and perform activities of daily living”. Driving would be
included as activities of daily living. Once you lose the ability to move freely, operating a vehicle
is going to be challenging. You need to be able to rotate your body to see passing cars and have
good mobility in your legs so that you can smoothly hit the gas and use the breaks safely. The
next main thing that starts to go is vision. Vision plays a huge role in the safety of yourself, and
others when driving a car. Aging also causes a normal loss of peripheral vision. A study done by
Gary Heiting in the article “How Your Vision Changes as You Age”, found that “our visual field
decreases by approximately one to three degrees per decade of life.” By the time you reach your
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70s and 80s, you may have a peripheral visual field loss of 20 to 30 degrees. Just these small
statistics show that your eyesight deteriorates as you age. This can make driving at night
especially hard on senior citizens. Eyesight is something that is tested when taking your first
drivers test but it should be mandated again once you reach a certain age. Retesting older drivers
to make sure that they reach these criteria standards, will keep everyone on the roads safer.
Brain productivity plays a huge role in the operation of a vehicle. As you age, your brain
ultimately slows down. You are not able to make quick decisions that are vital to being safe out
on the roads. The speed at which your brain can process stimuli is extremely important to safety
on the road. In the article “How Aging Brain Affects Thinking '' it was found that the effects of
an aging brain include: slower ability to find words and recall names, more problems with
multitasking, and could experience mild decreases in the ability to pay attention. All of these
changes in thinking will affect your ability to drive. Some of the changes can be more severe
than others which can be uncovered when retesting drivers at an older age. Things that go along
with reaction time are your reflexes. Your reflexes are one of the most important aspects of
driving. As you get older, your reflexes tend to slow down which can be very detrimental behind
the wheel. It's proven in the same study that, “Physical changes in nerve fibers slow the speed of
conduction and the parts of the brain involved in motor control lose cells over time.” which all
slow the speed of your reflexes. Your reaction speed and how fast you are able to respond to
events is huge when behind the wheel. Now that senior citizens are proven to live longer, these
While I agree that taking away someone's license can be seen as taking away someone's
freedom, the retesting of elderly drivers will keep the roads safer. Singling out this group of
people can be seen as unnecessary. Young drivers are also in question for safety on the roads.
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The article “Teen Driver Car Accident Statistics” points out that “Young drivers between 15- and
20-years-old accounted for 6.4% (13.2 million) of total drivers on the road. An average of nine
teens ages 16-19 were killed every day from motor vehicle injuries. 2,739 drivers ages 15-20
were killed and an additional 228,000 were injured in crashes.” It is easy to worry about younger
drivers taking the road, but we should be more worried about the diminished reaction times,
eyesight/hearing, and new technology and its effects on the senior citizen community. The
people that think they are in the right, when they are not, are the people that we should be
Medical conditions may also affect a person's driving ability. Early onset disease
symptoms start to become prominent. It is not easy to self diagnose these diseases and most
people will continue to operate a vehicle. Common conditions that are found to inhibit driving
are: Alzheimer's Disease, Cataracts, Muscle atrophy/Muscle degeneration, Epilepsy. All of these
conditions can be extremely dangerous when driving a vehicle. If you are diagnosed with one of
these conditions, you are already forced to renew your license with a test. The problem with
these conditions is that the symptoms can start to affect your brain at an early age. When you are
unable to diagnose these medical conditions, it can make it extremely dangerous behind the
wheel. With these conditions, medication is usually prescribed to try and lessen the symptoms.
The article “Drugged Driving”, Brown Hartman pointed out that “certain kinds of prescription
medicines, including benzodiazepines and opioids, can cause drowsiness, dizziness, and impair
cognitive functioning (thinking and judgment).” All of these effects can lead to vehicle crashes
Retesting older drivers is necessary for the safety of all. It is a way to ensure that
everyone is in the best condition to operate a vehicle. Crashes can happen at all ages but it is
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proven that our bodies become weaker, slower, and begin to deteriorate with time so retesting
would be a way to ensure safety after a certain age. The deterioration of our bodies is what puts
the safety of the driver and others on the road at risk. All of these factors play a huge role in the
way we are able to safely operate a car. Making sure that our physical, mental, and emotional
health reaches the standards of the state law, before renewing a person's license.
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Works Cited
Hartman, Brown. “Drugged Driving Drugfacts.” National Institute on Drug Abuse, 10 June
2021, https://www.drugabuse.gov/publications/drugfacts/drugged-
driving#:~:text=Drivers%20who%20have%20used%20cocaine,can%20lead%20to
%20vehicle%20crashes.
Heiting, Gary. “How Your Vision Changes as You Age (with Timeline).” All About Vision, All
“How the Aging Brain Affects Thinking.” National Institute on Aging, U.S. Department of
affects-thinking.
Redmond, Jodee. “Reasons for Retesting Elderly Drivers.” LoveToKnow, LoveToKnow Media,
https://seniors.lovetoknow.com/Retesting_Elderly_Drivers.
https://www.research.colostate.edu/healthyagingcenter/aging-basics/mobility/.
“Teen Driver Car Accident Statistics & Facts.” Edgarsnyder.com, 1 May 2020,
https://www.edgarsnyder.com/car-accident/who-was-injured/teen/teen-driving-
statistics.html.